Friday, June 18, 12:50 a.m., Greenwich, CT
Rollins
The man who sometimes called himself Jim Rollins pulled into the parking garage of Greenbeck Dermatology, a full forty minutes ahead of schedule. As expected, traffic along I-95 had been light, and his passenger had been cooperative for the entire trip.
Maybe too cooperative, he thought as he popped open the trunk.
Jessica Goodwin lay pretty much where he’d left her three hours ago, curled into a fetal position and taped securely around the ankles and wrists.
He reached in to shake her. “Time to wake up, sweetheart!”
Nothing. Not even a twitch.
“Shit,” he muttered, pulling the tape off her mouth. That was the problem right there. Hard to judge the right sodium pentothal dose. That, combined with the tape, probably caused her to suffocate during the trip.
Not that it mattered. She would’ve wound up this way in a few hours anyway, but that hadn’t been the plan.
Her husband was supposed to watch.
Oh well, life was friggin’ unpredictable that way. He shrugged, then hooked an arm around her slender waist and hoisted her out of the trunk and over his shoulder in one fluid motion.
Jesus, she was light. Like a ballerina. And drop-dead gorgeous, too. At least she had been. So different from Bree, but every bit as beautiful in her own way.
Hey, you had to give Doctor Faggot credit. The dude had good taste. Not like he’d know what to do with a woman like this.
Rollins buried his nose in her long dark hair and inhaled deeply, enjoying the strawberry scent of her shampoo, the feeling of her limp body draped against him. He ran his fingertips along the warm curve of her thigh, thinking he really should’ve been more careful. This would’ve been so much more fun if she were still alive.
He carried Jessica Goodwin’s body through the parking garage, setting her down by the employees’ entrance. The door to Greenbeck Derm clicked open as soon as he entered the five-digit pass code. No alarm, as planned. He kicked the heavy door open, eager to get started. So much work to be done before his guests arrived. Everything needed to be perfect.
Especially for Bree.
Just the thought of her, now so close he could almost smell her in the wind, made him shiver with anticipation.
He closed his eyes, imagining the warmth of her skin beneath his fingertips, then realized with a sudden jolt that it wasn’t the feel of her skin he was remembering.
This tactile memory was fresh, and it brought with it a startling realization.
Corpses weren’t supposed to have warm skin.
Rollins heard the rustling, seconds before he turned around to find Jessica, in the process of ripping the last piece of tape from her ankles. Her hands were already free, probably had been all along.
Playing possum. Such a huge turn on.
Her reaction to being discovered was even hotter. She backed up against the door like a cornered animal, wild eyes glaring up at him in defiance.
“Welcome back, Jessie,” he taunted. “I always knew you were a fighter.”
She answered him with a piercing scream.
Rollins pounced, knowing he only had seconds to shut her up. A cry for help would carry far in the silence of night, maybe even far enough to reach some random cop on night patrol.
He threw his whole body into the attack, but she was ready.
Bringing her knees up under her chin, she kicked out like a friggin’ mule. The blow caught him just above the groin, close enough to hurt like a motherfucker. He rolled onto his side, pushing back the pain before leaping to his feet.
The bitch bolted past him, screaming like a car alarm as she ran through the parking garage. Damn, that voice would carry if she got out into the open.
Not like that was gonna happen.
Closing the distance between them, Rollins leaped up onto the hood of a car. Reached into his jacket pocket to pull out the weapon.
“Jessie! Don’t make me shoot!”
She didn’t even look back as he pulled the trigger.
The taser wires shot forward with a loud pop, scoring a direct hit on her back. She crumpled to the ground, where her body twitched for a few seconds before going still.
“Nailed her!” Rollins strutted toward his victim, like a proud hunter retrieving his game. “Now was that really necessary?”
He knelt beside her to pull off the taser wires, then reached down to grab a fistful of hair and yanked upward. The violent motion exposed her swan neck.
Why not just finish her here, right in the parking lot? Aroused by the thought, he reached into his pocket to palm the switchblade, then thought better of it.
She needed to die inside. Besides, she’d already put him behind schedule. The fun would have to come later.
He reached under her arms to lift her, then threw her over his shoulder and carried her into the medical building.
One problem neutralized. And if everything went as planned, her husband would be joining her soon enough.
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Excellent chapter, Gray!! The action was fabulous and I thought the creepy was just right!! Gee, I'm gonna have to read something of James Patterson's other than that stupid Sunday's at Tiffany's which he co-wrote with someone...she must have slept with him to get him to put his name on it...because it was lame.
Well done.
~Ann
wow. He's one sick mofo. But that makes for great reading.
I am absolutely loving this and I'm totally engaged. If I have any questions, I guess it's only WHY is he doing all this, since he's already got what he needs in terms of the company purchase. (yeah, Jake did find evidence against him, but given the dubious way it was detected it probably wouldn't be admissible, I'm guessing) So, at this point, I guess its personal and this guy is sick with an extreme case of blood lust.
It's a great story, and its really well written. I even like that he's spiraling out of control. All along we hated him for messing up Jake's life, and now we know that its not just driven by greed, by by sickness and that sickness (I think) is what is gonna trip him up. At least we can hope so.
Anyway, I'm hanging on by my fingertips here...
Simi
Oh...but why The Jogger?
Hey, I'm glad I had all these chapters to read back-to-back, cause it would've bugged me to be left hanging, having to wait to see what happened next. and you, sir, are one sneaky bugger, making me think Jess was dead. Your writing is so good it almost goes unnoticed, and the action is stellar.
That was the problem right there. Hard to judge the right (dose) of sodium pentothal [dose]. *the first sentence sounds a tad off. after pulling the tape off her mouth, I thought he was referring to her suffocation from the tape, but then he mentioned the dose of sodium pentothal.
later, nathan
OMG....!!
Your channeling is right on, Gray.... Not too much at all.... I mean you had me going thinking Jess was really dead...
I surely am glad I'm not having to wait for you to post chapters, cuz this is intense; definite thriller suspense to be sure...
Next page please.... Happy Writing & Keep Smilin'... Jax
Hey, Gray - So I'm guessing "Jim" is the jogger, not Caulder, though he doesn't seem smart enough to have impersonated a co-worker of Jesse. Anywhoo, a top-flight chapter of action and suspense! And Jake is on the way.
- {Jake's office has a parking garage? That's impressive! :) }
- Such a huge turn(-)on.
Take care,
Jack
Hello Gray, Good action chapter, not too creepy. For some reason as I was reading this I realized that Rollins was going to be the guy from the park in Boston in a very early chapter and the one who was stalking Jake and Briana. But I had the impression this guy was a thug, not the sort of sophisticated person who could masquerade as an environmental activist and fool Jess. Or am I missing something here or maybe got it wrong and Rollins is going to be someone else? Anyway, that, for what it's worth, is what I thought as I read it.
Hey Gray…Well done….You hit the perfect blend of creepy…Not easy to do. And you certainly did channel James Patterson. As a matter of fact, I think you went above and beyond. His latest books have been less than perfect…Like how she came back to life and tried to fight. Also liked being in Rollins head. good voice and POV there. Will be reading more frequently as I am trying to get back on track myself….Thanks for sharing….Denise
Hello, Gray. Put nothing past JR, I guess. And VERY likely he's also RC. But...I wouldn't bank on it. Much earlier, you hinted at TWO crazies... And if Caulder, famous as he is, is the man calling himself Rollins, wouldn't Jess have recognized him much earlier? She's a bright, on-top-of-things kind of lady. Surely, she'd seen RC on the tube a number of times...the man calling himself Rollins might be the jogger...or might he be(this ain't TOO crazy, I'd say)Al Greenbeck(Jess hadn't seen HIM before, I'm guessing)? Greenbeck and RC go together nicely as partners in crime, I'd say... And I love the irony if my speculation is right: Al GB working with Jake and Jess!! Actually...screwing both...
Running like a nuclear-powered freight train, Gray!!
Peace,
Mike
LOL. I wanted my readers to wonder, as long as possible, whether or not Rollins and Caulder are the same person. Not saying anything yet, but I'd be surprised if you didn't figure it out before my reveal. Never considered trying to make you think that Greenbeck is Rollins, but it's quite amusing the possibility crossed your mind! Gray
Another good chapter! Not sure you should keep it, BUT I don't read Patterson, so it might just be the POV switches that are taking me out of the story. Maybe if Jake were third person as well and omniscient POV I'd say keep all the chapters. They're all well-written and add to the story, but it feels like Jake's story and these chapters are intrusions. You wouldn't have to change a thing except his POV. Just a thought.
Moving on!
Lauren
Agreed. Rollins has a really twisted voice, which adds some variety, but it also makes the story quite choppy. I agree that the easiest fix may be to make every chapter -- even Jake's -- third person past tense, and cut anything that isn't essential.
Gray
Ann Everett