Thursday, 3:15 p.m, Longwood Medical Area
Jake
I keep checking my iPhone, willing Harley to text me that the lab results are ready. I’m waiting in a Starbucks, nursing my third cup of coffee and trying not to freak out. The caffeine’s not helping.
Josh steps out of line to join me. “Almost five friggin’ bucks for a frackafuckachino, or whatever the hell this is,” he grumbles, holding up a coffee slush. “Can you believe that shit?”
I shrug, finding it hard to make small talk. What’s taking Harley so long?
Carp slurps his drink for a long minute, looking like he wants to say something but can’t find the words.
“Just tell me!” I finally snap.
“I, um…” He rocks back in his seat, avoiding eye contact. “I sort of called Jess this morning when you were asleep.”
My eyes must almost pop out of their sockets. “You what?”
“Jesus, Jake, she needed to know what’s going on, and if you weren’t gonna tell her –”
“What the hell, Carp,” I cut in, fists balling under the table. “You had no right to do that.”
“Yeah, well, I’m glad I did ‘cause get this: She texted me a few minutes ago to say she’s following a lead on Caulder.”
I jump up from my seat, so pissed off I feel like screaming. How could he be so stupid? The last thing I want is to drag Jess into this nightmare. “I don’t want her involved!” I hiss through clenched teeth. “Caulder is dangerous, goddamn it! Don’t you get that by now?”
“What I get,” Carp answers defiantly, “is that you need her help. She’s still your wife, for Chissakes! Okay, so you fucked up, big time. She’s so pissed she almost hung up on me. But when I told her what’s going on… hey, I’m not saying she’s forgiven you, but she understands you’re a victim here.”
“But after what I did…” I wipe my eyes with the back of my hand. “Why would she help me?”
“Because you’re in trouble. You need her, and she gets that now.”
“She does?” I sit down, feeling the anger seep out of me. Exhaustion rushes in to take its place. “But, how…?”
“That’s the thing. She did a web search and pulled up a photo of Caulder posted on a British gossip website. Turns out Roy-boy was hanging with some billionaire Arab Sheik last week, right in New York City. Sheik's the wealthiest dude in the UAE, and guess what? Jess’s dad does some work in that part of the world, so she’s gonna give him a call, maybe dig up some dirt. I mean, this can’t be a coincidence, right?”
When I give him a blank stare, he slams his cup down on the table. “Didn't you listen to the news? Pulsar’s just been bought by a UAE-based pharmaceutical no one even heard of until today.”
“Yeah, I know,” I say. “I was watching CNN with you this morning.”
“And you don’t see the connection with Caulder?”
I bite down on the edges of my tongue, not wanting to go there. Because if Caulder’s involved with Saber Life Sciences…
Can’t be. That would be too big. Too terrifying.
Carp whistles before putting words to my thoughts. “I’ve got a bad feeling this aint just about you fucking his wife, Jake.”
*
We don’t say much on our walk over to Harley’s lab. Josh must realize I need time to collect my thoughts. Unfortunately, they aren't getting any clearer. If Caulder sabotaged the REST study, then why did Jean Clark die from an allergic reaction to latex? Caused by gloves I swear I never wore? It doesn't make any sense.
As soon as we step into her lab, Harley echoes my confusion. “I just don't understand this result,” she announces, fingers raking through color-streaked hair.
When I ask what’s wrong, she explains that early this morning, when she looked up the standard molecular weight of IgG, she discovered our antibody was heavier than expected.
Carpstein shrugs. “So what? How accurate is that SDS-PAGE thing anyway?”
“When I run it?” Harley’s nostrils flare. “You’d better believe it’s accurate. Anyway, I already ran the peptide fragments of each unknown through the mass spectrometer. I’m comparing the peak lists with the Swiss-Prot and Genbank databases as we speak.”
“Then we’ll know soon?” I ask.
“Depends on how long it takes to get a few good hits. Who knows? It might only take a few more minutes. Here…” She walks over to her desktop computer, turning the screen to show us the streaming data.
“Sweet!” She points to a window where the data has frozen. “Looks like we already have one likely ID.” She touches her fingertip to the screen, enlarging the result. “Hmm. Keratin 9. That must be from you, Jake.”
“One of my skin cells?”
“Hey, you’re the dermatologist, but if I’m not mistaken, that’s a structural protein in the stratum corneum, right?”
I nod. “So then it’s a contaminant.”
“Looks that way.”
“Which leaves us with only two more bands,” Josh notes.
Harley slowly shakes her head. “Some of the proteins may have been denatured during the extraction process. Let’s just see what else we get.”
Time slows to a painful crawl as we wait for the computer algorithm to identify the last two unknowns. When the results from the heaviest band finally come through, Harley points triumphantly to the screen.
“Huh! What did I tell you?” she announces, doing a little dance. “It’s IgE, not IgG. That makes perfect sense! Of course IgE is heavier, because it contains an extra constant-region domain.”
Carpstein turns to me and pulls a face. “Hey, can’t argue with that geek-speak.”
Harley whacks his arm. “There’s an extra component, bonehead! That’s all I’m saying. Think of a choo-choo train with one more caboose.”
“But that doesn’t make any sense,” I say. “According to the Pulsar specs, the neutralizing antibody should be IgG.”
“Yeah,” Carpstein chimes in. “Doesn’t IgE cause allergies? You know… like in asthma.”
As soon as the words leave his mouth, the room goes silent as we’re all struck with the same mind-blowing thought.
“Jake,” Carpstein finally says, sounding uncharacteristically subdued. “Didn’t that ME say they found elevated levels of anti-latex IgE in your patient’s blood?”
I nod numbly. Can’t be. Impossible.
Carp puts his hand on my shoulder and squeezes. Hard. “Son-of-a-bitch. That’s how he made it look like anaphylaxis. He switched syringes. Instead of injecting the reversal agent, you were shooting the fake evidence right into your patient’s bloodstream.”
Harley warns us not to jump to any conclusions. The analysis may be flawed, and besides, we still have one more unknown protein to identify.
But when that final ID comes through, less than five minutes later, there can be no doubt.
“Tryptase,” Harley whispers in disbelief. “With a 95% probability.”
IgE and tryptase: the same two markers of anaphylaxis that Roberts found in Jean Clark’s blood.
And just like that, the shocking truth crystallizes right in front of me.
Jean Clark was indeed murdered.
Roy Caulder is responsible.
He framed me for her death, using mind-blowing sophistication and ingenuity.
My friends and I just discovered his secret.
And finally, most chillingly…
The last person to possess this knowledge may have already paid for it with her life.
***
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Good morning, Gray.
Well, you have a terrific ending to this chapter...very thrilling! So, Caulder got his wife to sleep with Jake to....what....cloud his judgment? OR did that affair have nothing to do with this whole thing? How will they get Dr. Roberts to make the same discovery they have? Will Jess discover something that puts her life in danger? Oh, so many questions!!
I got nothing for you. It all made sense to me and sets the ground work for more tense chapters to come.
~Ann
Morning Gray "Crichton":) I'm a big Michael Crichton fan because he entertains me while he teaches me a thing or two. Coincidentally, I'm reading The Andromeda Strain for the second time. I was in high school the first time I read it, and it still holds up.
This medical thriller just went international. I bet the Arabs got a good price on Pulsar Labs. Now I wondering why they recruited Roy to be their saboteur. I'm also remembering the shiek with a underaged girl at the restaurant, so now you have me trying to connect human trafficking to this plot. Thanks for turning my wheels this morning.
Think of it as a choo-choo train with one more caboose/with an extra caboose.
..you were shooting the fake evidence right into your patient's arm. *fake evidence thru me.
take care,
nathan
Oh great stuff!
Now, we have all the answers, but still so many questions!!
1. (How) will Jake/Josh/Harley/(Jess?) be able to make their case?
2. Will Erin survive? Even if she does, will be too vegetative to be able to help. I hope she survives (but that will be tricky for you to do without it being too sacchariny). She's one of the good guys.
3. Why the Bree/Kristy setup? (other than for great reading material). Was it to commit character assassination) once the whole torrid story comes pouring out? Much more likely for the public to disdain a privileged married Harvard education doctor who sleeps with his patients (in a boutique medical practice) than to cheer for a poor shmuck who has been framed. Great set up.
This is all so good. I love Josh. Best line, the frapofuckinlicious (or whatever you called it). Have you ever read the Jackie Mason shtick on Starbucks?
Keep em coming. Please!
Simi
Hi gray,
I read this last night, right after you posted it, but didn't do a review.
The writing, well you know it's a smooth read... : )
For some reason, the chapter left me a bit cold. I think it's because of the buyout subplot... If you swap the Alice listens to the radio scene to Jake reads the Wall Street Journal and sees the buyout story, and sees that Royboy has an Arab connection? He seems so naive. I'm ahead of him on this one, so I'd like him to catch up - sooner rather than later.
Also, Jesse is tossed in here but she's not important in a big scene like this. I kept waiting for her to matter, but she doesn't seem relevant except re the Arab connection that Jake should have caught himself. I'd like to see him far more engaged and less passive in solving the mystery, since he's our hero... Maybe it's his passivity that's really bugging me here.
The second part of the chapter - really good! : ) I suggest smoothing out the dialog a bit to make t even more natural.
shooting the fake evidence right>> I suggest swapping 'allergy inducing compounds' or whatever for fake evidence, to ram home your point,which could get buried by the jargon if the reader isn't careful
Is it clear that Royboy had access to his syringes and swapped them himself? I wonder if he had a knife to that poor nurse's throat...
Great job!
: )
Terri
Hey Gray,
Definitely building the suspense...! Okay, so maybe a little bit I like Jess, since she seems to be helping in a roundabout way... Still, the jury is out on her standing by her man; in the greater scheme of things....
I love this new drink: frackafuckachino...! Good invent...! I just hope when I order my next sugar free caramel mocha frappuccino w/no whip I don't say the other...!! LOL...
Have a great day Gray... Happy Writing & Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Good dialogue as always and real excitement at the end. I was not overwhelmed by the science, having Carp play the fool and aid the explanations worked well. Now all they have to do is convince Dr. Roberts.
At the end I'm still not convinced Caulder can be directly responsible, it would need a doctor knowledgeable on the details of this drug to pull it off so my vote is still for Jake's boss (or his wife if she has more medical knowledge than you've been letting on). Maybe Caulder is pulling their strings.
< Caused by gloves I swear I never wore?> This statement doesn't make sense to me. It is Jake thinking and he would know he didn't wear gloves, so I think his thought would be '...gloves I know I....'.
Hey, Gray - Okay! It wasn't the antidote, but an anaphylaxis inducer! But my question as to how this was managed still baffles me. Caulder - or somebody - had to arrange (somehow) for Jake to grab the syringe containing not the Replacidin reversal, but the bad stuff. And somehow, Jean Clark had to be made to look like she was having an untoward reaction to Replacidin to begin with. Erin's role appears to have come in after the fact, so I don't see how that was orchestrated. Either I'm missing something huge, or your subsequent reveal will dazzle me with its brilliant simplicity. :)
- Caused by gloves [I swear] I never wore?
Take care,
Jack
Gray….First I want to say sorry for being away for so long. Life and all that…Anyway this chapter rocks. so much good old fashion suspense. As one of the reviewers said it is very similar to medical suspense. I think they sited Michael Crighton, but I am seeing more Robin Cook. Don't know if you are familiar with his work, but he is one of the good ones. Anyway you held my attention from beginning to end and will definitely be going forward….Denise
Another good chapter. I have no complaints and didn't stumble at all. I enjoy the medical angle to this and the twist with the evidence on the lab coat was good. I know you thought it was a stretch but I didn't find it that way at all. That's why we read, to see the improbable happen and I think this opens the book up and provides Jake with a way out. Nice job.
Glad to hear this didn't come across as too contrived or implausible for you. Someone pointed out that this wouldn't be useable as evidence for the cops because there's no proof it wasn't tampered with, but right now, my thought was that Jake's just grasping at straws and looking for anything to help him figure out what happened. Thanks! Gray
Another great chapter! Very exciting and tense waiting for the results and then the 'realization' at the end was awesome. I didn't mind the med speak so much in this one, it led to a great conclusion.
So this guy had to have had help because he couldn't possibly have known Clark's allergies or how to cause her death. That had to be the other doctor or maybe even the ME. Hmm...the pure as the driven snow ME. Huh. ;)
Your thoughts here are exactly what I hoped they would be. Glad you found the reveal in the end suspenseful. I spend some time in the lab (as most premed students do), so I remember running those DNA gels. It's really cool at the end when you see the bands fluorescing, and quite suspenseful since if you get any of the steps wrong, the bands won't appear.
Gray
Ann Everett