9:30 p.m., Chatham, MA
Jess
Jessica's heels clicked on marble as she crossed the entrance foyer. She expected company, but the sound of the doorbell still set her on edge. Given what she’d learned today, nothing felt safe anymore.
She peered through the peephole, puffing out a sigh of relief when she recognized the visitor.
"Hi, Jim!” she called out, opening the door to greet him. “Come on in.”
Jim Rollins, the newest trustee of the ‘Save the Sound’ Coalition, smiled and thanked her for agreeing to see him on such short notice. He’d called a few hours ago to request this emergency meeting. Apparently, the Cape Energy Consortium had just released a new environmental impact statement that promised to be a real game changer. ‘Save the Sound’ needed to move fast, maybe even file a response by tomorrow morning.
Talk about shitty timing. With her personal life unraveling, Jess had all but forgotten she still had professional obligations.
Which is why she’d agreed to this last-minute meeting. She owed her client the truth. ‘Save the Sound’ needed new legal representation, since there was no way she could give them the attention they deserved. It wouldn’t be an easy topic to broach, but Jim seemed like the kind of person who would understand.
Rollins strolled into the foyer, head tilted back to appreciate the architecture. This wing of her parents’ summer home had been built to impress, with a soaring ceiling capped by a Moorish dome, skylights and a Baccarat crystal chandelier to illuminate the gallery of artwork below. Leading her guest through the atrium now, Jess glanced up at the familiar paintings and sculptures, prominent local artists mingling with a stray Picasso or Matisse. “The Museum,” as she and her friends used to call it.
Her guest whistled, the sharp sound echoing off the colorfully tiled dome. “Wow. Quite a place you have here.”
“Oh, I don’t live here,” Jess corrected. “This is my parents’ home.”
“Well, please tell them it’s stunning.”
She thanked Rollins for the compliment, leading him into the even grander living room.
“We can go over that new impact statement in here,” she suggested, pointing to a couple of Barcelona chairs. “Could I get you something to drink before we get started?”
Rollins took his seat, declining her offer with a polite smile. “Are you sure I’m not intruding? I don’t want to interrupt your family time.”
Jess shook her head. “Oh, don’t worry about that. The kids went to sleep an hour ago and my parents are out as usual. Some social function at the club.”
Rollins scanned the room. “And your husband?”
“He’s, um… still at work.” She gave him a tight-lipped smile, not wanting to get too personal. Jim Rollins certainly seemed like a decent guy: a ruggedly handsome, wealthy Bostonian with a trust fund and enough social conscience to put it to good use. From what she’d gathered during their initial meeting last weekend, Jim made philanthropy his full-time career. Still, she didn’t exactly know the guy. And what was with those wandering eyes? Had he just checked out her legs?
She shifted forward in her seat, smoothing the skirt over her knees.
“Listen,” Rollins said, seeming to sense her unease. “I really don’t want to take up much of your time, so…” He reached into his satchel to pull out a clipped stack of papers. “Here it is: the CEC’s environmental impact statement, in all its bullshitting glory.”
She accepted the bulky document, wondering how best to break the news she’d be leaving the case. Her mind was already elsewhere, feverishly trying to piece together the Caulder jigsaw puzzle. Even if her suspicions turned out to be true, who apart from Jake would believe her?
“Jess? You still with me?”
“Hmm?” She looked up to give her guest a distracted smile. “Yeah… hey, sorry I’m spacing out. It’s been a really long week.”
“I sure know what that’s like.” Rollins leaned toward her, his gaze sharpening. “Anything you’d like to talk about?”
“Oh… it’s nothing, really. I probably just need to get some rest.”
“Not a problem. Listen…” He stood to retrieve his satchel, apparently getting the hint. “You look exhausted. You’re a real trooper for agreeing to meet me like this, but maybe we should continue some other time?”
“Maybe,” she agreed, taking the impact statement from his hands with a weary smile. “But since you came all this way, the least I could do is look over what you brought me.”
Two pages into the document though, she realized he’d made a mistake.
“Hey, Jim? I think you gave me the wrong papers. This looks like the old impact statement. You know, the one I gave you last week.”
Rollins slapped his forehead. “God, I’m such an idiot! Sorry about that. I know it’s in here.”
“No worries, Jim. You can always e-mail me the file when you get home.”
“But I know I’ve got it, right… here.”
He rooted through the satchel, eyes lighting up when he finally found what he wanted.
It wasn't a document.
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Hi Gray,
So glad to see new chapters! So..you left us with Jake entering a room with a loaded gun and drop us into this opulence, with Jess meeting some sexy rich perceptive altruistic new guy...but I was relieved to read that she's safe. And, she hasn't disengaged from their case yet...best intentions and all...
Gotta see where you are taking this. And why did he hand her the wrong documents? Is he so dazzled by her, or am I reading too much into this.
Guess I'll have to read on to find out.
Simi
Hi Gray,
Okay, big switch here. We went from Jake's problem into a new dilemma with Jess. I'm sure you're going to tie this all together at the end, so I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
Couldn't find a thing wrong with the chapter. As always, written well. I'm moving on.
~Ann
Morning Gray,
Rollins kinda creeped me out from the get-go, as soon as Jess saw him through the peephole. Not sure why, perhaps it had to do with the story coming to a head, and suspecting that Caulder's ring of influence is widespread. How can anyone not read the next chapter right away, to see what he pulled out of the briefcase? sooner than later, nathan
Hi Gray,
Okay, so the way the chapter ends, could the non document be a gun or a magic concoction in a syringe...? Hmmmmm.... Me thinks something may be coming that isn't so good for Jess...
With this chapter dedicated to Jess, the reader gets a little more insight into her, albeit not a lot, but a little is good; makes her not so mechanical or unfeeling... So, I'm anxious to read on...
Happy Writing & Keep Smilin'... Jax
Hi, another good chapter with another twist in the story and a great ending line. You're hinting here with Jess's reaction to the non-business attention Jim is paying to her that she's still committed in some subconscious way to Jake. Is that what you want? Because if it isn't, I think you are being a little dishonest to use Jess's thoughts to lead us astray.
But, this chapter (and the last one) do a great job of leaving us in suspense, who is Jake going to discover in the bedroom, and what is in Jim's satchel? I'll have to keep reading.
Hey, Gray - From one cliffhanger to another! And no resolution yet to either. Jake and Jess in trouble at the same time? Yikes! Got no nits, no suggestions. I'll have to read on to determine if this ping-pong arrangement works, but so far it does - because I'm reading on immediately!
Take care,
Jack
Gray….So I got to another chapter and altho it was short it was packed with tension. Had a feeling something was going to happen when Jim came to the door, but didn't see the big cliffhanger coming. Liked your descriptions of the house and you played her distraction very well. I felt tired with her. Good job on that and on the entire chapter. Reading forward…..Denise
Jim Rollins. I wonder if that is a pseudonym for Roy Caulder? So they have got his wife now. Now he can't go to the police so that ties up that loose plot end from this point on.
Anyway, I sense more if about to be revealed. Good pacing and plot development. Still hooked and looking forward to finding out how this all sorts out.
Hello, Gray. I saw that coming, too. The Leviathan and it's scary long reach... And maybe Rollins is also the creep in the club and the jogger? Makes sense, pretty much. The jogger was able present himself as friendly and harmless in an earlier chapter, and that is apparently one of Rollins's talents...
Dialing it up nicely, Gray:-)
Peace,
Mike
Another POV shift, with some of my readers saying I shouldn't bring in Jess here. Still, I couldn't figure out how to show this scene any other way. I could have Rollins just turn up later with Jess, but that would be confusing. Glad to hear this worked for you, at least :)
Great chapter again. High tension and another cliffhanger. I cheated and read other reviews, but I wouldn't have put Caulder and Rollins together. Well, as you know by now, I'm not a fan of the split POVs but I reserve judgment on this one too for now. Not sure what's going to happen with this situation, but moving on to find out.
Lauren
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