The Crystal and the Flame: Sifters 1

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The Crystal and the Flame: Sifters 1

Status: 2nd Draft

The Crystal and the Flame: Sifters 1

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Genre: Young Adult

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BORN A COMMON SETTLER, Wil shouldn’t be able to sift, but he can. He sees emotions in bursts of color and hears thoughts as if they were whispered into his ear. This gift has transformed his life,
lifting him from the squalor of a Settler’s camp to the Guardian Academy – an elite school where young Sifters train to use their power. But Wil soon learns he will never be accepted by his High
Founder classmates. No matter what his accomplishments, they’ll always see him as an outsider. A ‘Camp Rat’ with inferior blood, not worthy of the Guardian name.



UNLESS HE CAN PROVE THEM WRONG. Now sixteen and on the verge of graduation, Wil finally has that chance. Somewhere in the frozen Settlement of York, a dangerous mind is on the run. If he can track
them down before his classmates do, he’ll win more than bragging rights. He might finally earn some respect, maybe even a grudging nod from Astrid Blake – the beautiful but frosty daughter of the
most powerful man in Neoden.



THE FOX HUNT IS ON. As Wil chases his quarry through the ruins of York, he still believes what he’s been taught: that a Guardian’s sacred duty is to keep the citizens of Neoden free from evil
thoughts. But when he and his classmates are targeted in a deadly terrorist attack, those beliefs start to crumble. Why would the Settlers he's been sent to protect try to kill him? When a voice
from the past reaches out to him with an answer, he's forced to face a terrifying possibility: maybe powerful evil still exists in the world. And maybe he's been training to serve it.

Content Summary


BORN A COMMON SETTLER, Wil shouldn’t be able to sift, but he can. He sees emotions in bursts of color and hears thoughts as if they were whispered into his ear. This gift has transformed his life,
lifting him from the squalor of a Settler’s camp to the Guardian Academy – an elite school where young Sifters train to use their power. But Wil soon learns he will never be accepted by his High
Founder classmates. No matter what his accomplishments, they’ll always see him as an outsider. A ‘Camp Rat’ with inferior blood, not worthy of the Guardian name.



UNLESS HE CAN PROVE THEM WRONG. Now sixteen and on the verge of graduation, Wil finally has that chance. Somewhere in the frozen Settlement of York, a dangerous mind is on the run. If he can track
them down before his classmates do, he’ll win more than bragging rights. He might finally earn some respect, maybe even a grudging nod from Astrid Blake – the beautiful but frosty daughter of the
most powerful man in Neoden.



THE FOX HUNT IS ON. As Wil chases his quarry through the ruins of York, he still believes what he’s been taught: that a Guardian’s sacred duty is to keep the citizens of Neoden free from evil
thoughts. But when he and his classmates are targeted in a deadly terrorist attack, those beliefs start to crumble. Why would the Settlers he's been sent to protect try to kill him? When a voice
from the past reaches out to him with an answer, he's forced to face a terrifying possibility: maybe powerful evil still exists in the world. And maybe he's been training to serve it.

Author Chapter Note


Astrid presents her case to the Core, with Perrin's help, but the discussion is cut short...



Interested in the usual: pacing, dialogue, and whether or not the action in the end reads as realistic or contrived.

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When we burst into the comm room, we find Astrid, Ferro, Thea and Cael huddled around a central console.  Thea raises her hand to warn us not to interrupt, but Lily barrels forward.

“Are you out of your flipping minds?” she shouts. “Why did we surface?”

“Thea?” A male voice crackles through the console speaker. “Is there a problem?”

“Who is that?” a woman adds.

The disembodied voices must belong to the Core. I see no vid feed, which means they’re communicating via longwave transmission. Thea apologizes for the interruption, shooing us away, but Lily stands her ground.

“If there’s a destroyer nearby –!”

Thea puts a finger to her lips. “We’re aware of that risk, which is why we don’t have time to argue.”

Lily bites her lower lip but doesn’t say another word. When she crosses her arms in silent protest, I mirror the gesture.  Backing her up feels right for some reason, like an old instinct that’s just returned. I wait by her side as the conversation with the Core resumes.

“Why should we commit our fighters to this suicide mission?” the female voice argues. “What you’re asking… it’s just too much to risk.”

“Think of what you’ll risk if you don’t act!” Astrid counters. “Gant’s still weak, but he won’t be for long. He’ll start by purging all rivals, starting with my father. Then he’ll come after you.”

“She’s right,” Cael adds in his calm, measured way. Doesn’t this guy ever emote? “If there’s a chance to return Augustin Blake to power, we should take it. Free the enemy of our enemy.”

After a long stretch of silence, someone new asks Thea if she agrees with Cael’s assessment. The four members of the Core are supposed to be equals, but something deep and commanding in this man’s voice tells me his vote carries more weight than the others. Maybe even more than Thea’s.

“One hundred percent,” she answers without hesitation. “We need to strike Gant now, aiming right for his heart. You said it yourself, Dillan. As commander of the Eastern Territory, you’re the one who must decide if we have the capability, but at least this gives us a concrete target.”

Voices murmur in the background as the Aletheians debate their options. When Dillan finally speaks again, he sounds like a father warning his children. “Don’t fool yourselves. This attack will mean all-out war. Now that the Sinovoss are all but defeated, Gant will shift his focus to us. The bloodshed won’t stop until one side has been completely wiped out.”

Thea thins her lips into a determined line. “Then let it be war on our terms. We pick the first battleground. We pick the time to strike. Dillan, Sera, Eli?” She pauses to take a breath, acknowledging the importance of this moment. “Do we have your support?”

Her challenge hangs in the air, unanswered for so long that I wonder if the transmission’s been broken. But then Dillan’s voice cuts through the silence like a rumble of thunder. “You’re right. By Aletheia’s grace, we’re already in position. The timing may not be ideal, but I see no other choice.”

The other man quickly agrees, while the woman says she’s not convinced but won’t stand in our way.

“Then it’s decided,” Thea concludes, giving Astrid a nod. “Dillan? Will you draw up the battle plans?”

“Give me twenty-four hours,” the Aletheian replies. Now that the decision’s been made, his voice rings with confidence. “Gant won’t know what hit him.”

As Cael and Dillan discuss the diversionary attack, I catch movement out of the corner of my eye. Kobari, striding toward us with Dax on his heels.

“We’re at ten minutes plus,” the Captain warns, jabbing his time stamp with an index finger.

Thea looks up to ask when we’ll make landfall.

Kobari holds up ten fingers, then adds gruffly, “Assuming Gant’s satellites don’t blast us out of the water first.”

Thea leans into the comm. “We’ll reach the rendez-vous point in ten hours.”

“We’ll be waiting,” Dillan says. “May Aletheia guide and protect you until then.”

“As she guides and protects you,” Thea replies before the transmission breaks up into static.

Kobari orders his crew to dive fast and deep. As they run through a rapid-fire checklist, Dax nudges Lily’s shoulder to get her attention. Now that he’s cleanly shaven, I remember why so many Academy girls used to swoon over him. Then again, Lily’s no Academy girl.

“What do you want?” she snaps, hands dropping to her hips.

“Hey now,” Dax shoots back. “Don’t bite my head off, Tiger Lily. Just wanted to say I’m on your side here.” He rolls his eyes toward Thea and Cael. “They wouldn’t listen to me either.”  

She ignores the comment, blowing past him to confront her boyfriend. When he tries to take her hand, she jerks away. “You do realize what kind of risk you just took?”

Cael puffs out a sigh. “We had no choice, Lil.”

“Yes you did! You could’ve waited ‘til after we handed off these–” She thrusts her chin at Astrid. “Stalkers.”

“Lily!” Thea warns, but it’s too late to take back the words. She’s just let the truth slip out.

They’re not taking us with them.

I’m not the only one who noticed. Astrid jumps up from her seat. “Handed off?” she challenges. “Not happening. We’re coming with you.” Her eyes find mine, looking for support.

Finally. Something we can agree on.

I turn to Thea, stinging from the betrayal. When was she planning on breaking this news? Obviously not before we reached our final destination. “Is that true?” I ask. “Is your plan to dump us somewhere?”

“No,” she answers evenly. “We promised to take you to safety, and that’s what we’re doing.”

“But the raid on Scilla!” Astrid cuts in angrily. “I know how to find my father’s aura. You need my help!”

Cael eyes her with sympathy. “Not on this mission, Miss Blake. I’m sorry, but you’ll just be a liability in combat. Surely you realize this.”

When Astrid opens her mouth to challenge him, he shakes her off. “We have friends beyond Neoden’s borders who will offer you sanctuary. You’ll be safe there. That’s what your father would want.”

“How in flames do you know what he’d want?”

“Because…” Cael frowns, like the answer should be obvious. “He’s already risked everything to protect you.”

“That’s right!” Astrid fires back. “And now it’s my turn to save him. You said we’re not prisoners. That we’re free to go wherever we want. Or was that a lie too?”

Thea’s response is cut short by the piercing whoop of a siren.

“Dive alarm!” Kobari shouts, his words muffled by the sound of rushing water. The rumble builds to a thunderous roar, coming at us from all sides, but Kobari’s expression remains reassuringly calm.

Was it like this when we escaped from York? Can’t remember.

The sub noses down smoothly at first, but then bucks from side to side, like a Silver Wing caught in hard turbulence.

Ssssss-crack!

When Kobari jerks his head toward the harsh sound, I know something’s wrong.

The deck shakes violently, then drops out beneath my feet. I fumble for something to break my fall, hands catching a loop of pipe. Someone grunts behind me and I tilt my head to see Vin, grasping Brenne with one hand and a seatback with the other.

He’s about to lose his grip when the sub levels out, as suddenly as it dropped. I survey the cabin, relieved to see no one looks seriously injured. All eyes dart to Kobari, trying to figure out what’s happening. His grim expression isn’t reassuring.

“Status!” he shouts into the comm.

The frantic response comes a split second later. “Incoming!”

We’re under attack.

This time, I hear the hit – an earsplitting sizzle and thunderclap, followed by a hard jolt. The sub twists and heaves starboard, like a toy boat that’s just been sideswiped by a tidal wave. My feet lose traction and I’m airborne, tumbling through space. I curl into a protective ball. Take the impact with my shoulder, then carom onto the deck.

Pain knifes down my back, but I’m still conscious. Able to move all my limbs. Groans rise up around me, drowned out by the wailing alarm. Through my blast-shocked eardrums, I hear Kobari’s muffled shouts – “Dive! Dive! Dive!” – seconds before the next crackling explosion.

The deck lurches beneath me, but this time I keep my footing. To my right, Vin struggles to his knees. Blood coats his forehead but his eyes look clear. Alert. Where are the others?

Ssssss-crack!

Another sizzling impact, but this one sounds weaker – a rumble and vibration, chasing us from above.

We’re diving again. Escaping.

I exhale deeply, but the relief is short-lived. Pain swells through my ears and sinuses, drawing my attention to a new problem.

We’re sinking too fast. Plummeting like we’re out of control.

Like the hull’s been breached.

I pivot toward the bulkhead hatch, expecting to see a crushing wall of water.

Instead, I see Kobari, hands braced on the console. “Blow the tanks!” he screams into the comm, fighting to regain control of his ship. “Level! Level! Le-”

His words are drowned out by the hiss and roar of compressed air expelling water from the ballast tanks.

Miraculously, the sub eases out of its nose dive and slows into a gentle descent.

“Countermeasures!” Kobari barks into the comm. “Evasive pattern Oribi!”

We bank hard to starboard, then port a few seconds later, then starboard again and I picture us zig-zagging through the darkness like a fish trying to evade the jaws of a shark. Is the enemy lurking above or chasing us through the water, torpedoes locked on and ready to fire?

As if reading my thoughts, Kobari raises his eyes to the ceiling and mutters, “Satellites. Told you they’d get a lock on our position.”

“Impossible,” Cael counters. “We must’ve been spotted by a destroyer.”

Kobari shakes his head. “Surface scans showed nothing. That attack came from the satellites, and they never miss. We’re only alive because they targeted our propulsion and steering.”

“Trying to capture, not kill,” Thea notes, eyes locking with Cael’s. They don’t have to say the words for me to know what they’re thinking: Gant still wants Astrid alive, but only for one reason. So he can make a public spectacle of her trial and execution.

“Are we out of attack range?” Thea asks.

Kobari frowns. “For now, but I can’t guarantee we’ll make it to Scilla. Not until I get the full damage report.” He leans into the comm after we make another starboard turn. “She feels sluggish. What’s the status on propulsion?”

The answer crackles back moments later. “Upper rudder and aft diving plane are damaged.”

Kobari’s frown deepens. “How bad?”

“Impossible to say without surfacing for inspection.”

“And hull integrity?”

“Aft torpedo room’s flooded but the bulkhead’s holding.”

Guess this is good news because Kobari lets out a sigh of relief, then turns to Thea with what could almost pass for a smile. “Looks like we dodged a bullet.”

“I thought you said the satellites never miss,” I say.

Kobari’s smile vanishes. “They didn’t. We installed attenuation panels last week in preparation for this mission, concentrating on our most vulnerable points.” He turns to Thea. “Like propulsion and sonar.”

When Thea and Cael exchange looks, I suddenly realize the significance of what Kobari just said. If Gant didn’t know about these defensive upgrades, Kobari’s crew must be loyal. None of his men leaked the information.

But then how did the satellites find us so quickly?

“Did our transmission give away our position?” Thea asks.

“Unlikely,” Cael answers, looking at Kobari. “You were right to be concerned, but we shifted bandwidths throughout the transmission. Unless the algorithm’s been compromised, there’s no way they could’ve fixed onto our signal.” He turns to Lily. “That’s why we risked going to the surface.”

“But why didn’t you tell us –?” Kobari starts to ask, but then his eyes narrow with understanding. He and his crew are new to the Resistance. Still not entrusted with every secret, even though Thea had no choice but to rely on them for our escape. Which begs the question: who exactly are the Aletheians, and what if the Resistance isn’t as unified as Thea would like us to believe? Add that to my growing list of nagging doubts.

“I need to inspect the damage to my ship,” Kobari says, excusing himself with a nod. “I’ll give you an update as soon as possible.”

Once he’s gone, I ask the question on all our minds.

“How did Gant find us?”

That’s when I notice Cael, Lily and Dax are backing away. Even Thea retreats to join them. They’re all staring at us. At the collars around our necks

They must suspect one of us tampered with our device. That we’re still transmitting. “No!” I say with a gasp. “You can’t possibly think…”

Dax shrugs, looking at Cael. “Only one way to find out, Wilmington.”

Before I can ask what that means, Cael pulls a metal cylinder out of his pocket. It looks like the RTC scanner he gave me in the ice tunnel beneath York. Without saying a word, he moves toward Vin and Brenne.

The device beeps twice as he scans their necks. Two green blinks. Not transmitting. Safe.

Then he approaches me. “Sorry, Wil. There’s no other way to be sure.”

“I know.” I step forward to close the distance between us, tilting my chin up to give him easier access to my collar.

Another soft beep. Green. Even though I’m not surprised, I let out a sigh of relief.

Cael moves on to scan and clear a scowling Astrid, then turns to the last person remaining.

“I don’t have a blasted chip,” Ferro spits out defiantly. “I’m a High Founder, not some filthy Camp Rat.”

Cael ignores his protests, reaching forward to trace the scanner around his neck. The device beeps once. Then twice – a new, shrill sound that sets the hairs of my neck on edge.

I don’t need to look to know Fahrenheit’s color.

Red.

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