3,601

(48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

You have a valid point, Linda, and if some of it has to be public, so be it. Buyer beware.

However, we still don't know how to set group access, display, and visibility settings to create a group that is as open as possible to members while keeping the forum private. Sol said the forums can be made private, but the solution he offered didn't work. Several of us have tried. I also couldn't find a definition of access, display, and visibility in the site's help section.

I hope he'll weigh in with a clearer explanation about this.

3,602

(48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

You also have to consider posting in any thread where you don't really have much control as to what others say in the same thread. I've been in a number of threads that went off the rails into ranting arguments. Most of us just quietly exit the thread. However, if it's public, your name is tied to its content, including whatever rude or inappropriate comments are being made. Just imagine, everything we've ever said or asked in Premium is public for the whole Internet.

Sol, can you please summarize for everyone what the difference is between group access, display, and visible settings, and how to set each of them so that our forum posts are not accessible to everyone on the Internet.

Right now, the Medieval Fantasy Magic group (run by Amy) is preparing to go completely dark to keep our forum posts private within the TNBW site. Unfortunately, that will mean anyone who likes to read forum posts within the group before joining and posting their work or forum comments there will no longer be able to do so. They won't even know it exists. We'll become even more siloed than we already are.

This is a big deal! Everything we've ever said in any thread on this site is being laid bare for the whole Internet to see. Fat chance ever getting a book publishing deal if every uncensored moment about our writing and participation in these groups is visible to the whole world, including book spoilers and casual messgaes in any of the forums we've used to date.

Book publishers won't touch us because of the potential PR disaster of even one of our comments being taken out of context.

How come a book publishing site that goes to great length to protect the written books, stories, poems, etc., allows everything else we say to be read by non-members of the site. The forum posts are part of the writing process and should be treated just like the written work.

Please let us know how to handle this because, right now, there are quite a few power users of your site scrambling to figure out how to handle this situation and yet still allow for as much collaboration with others on the site to continue.

Thanks.
Dirk

3,604

(0 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Accidentally put this in Premium. Probably belongs here.

The following site could be useful to anyone who thinks grammar rules is the same as grandma rules!
http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/

3,605

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Based on the discussion, I need to reduce my use of -ing. As Janet Reid has said, I think there's a place for them. Variety, spice of life, etc.

*gets ready to duck*

Thanks to all.
Dirk

3,606

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Janet, what makes the -ing verb preferable on this example?

3,607

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Charles_F_Bell wrote:
Norm d'Plume wrote:

Why?

The same reason an author will avoid passive verbs and useless, vague, or weak adverbs.  It weighs down the narration.

The very same reason an author actively will surely clearly avoid using passive verbs that come to his imagination when writing, weighing down the ongoing narration, making for his reading audience a boring lot of superfluous information, crunching out facts, and sweeping tidbits  of floating debris washing overboard a Titanic, sinking fast, and on and on, ad infinitum till one falls off into sleep under the hypnotic power of same-sounding  -ing words.

LOL. I can't tell if you like them or hate them. However, I freely acknowledge that the preceding sentence doesn't need the first instance of "them."

I can just feel the royalty checks rolling in.

3,608

(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

At a minimum, it couldn't hurt to do what Sol suggested, which is to rename the label to New Book Chapters.

3,609

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Why?

3,610

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Anyone?

3,611

(48 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Imagine the size of the snowplow. 8-)

3,612

(48 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

io Saturnalia, pagans!

3,613

(2 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Thank you, Janet. Have a happy holiday!

3,614

(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

While we're at it, can you change the number of displayed new works published by our connections from 7 to 10? Most of the other new listings are ten.

3,615

(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

How about New Book Chapters?

Good idea.

3,616

(1 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Then I better get back to reading it, otherwise I'll have to pay for a copy. :-)

I've been watching your posting rate, BTW. Mind-blowing. Very impressive.

During the Carter years, mortgage rates were so high, one couple was featured eating cat food just so they could make their payments. Of course, I don't remember those years personally. According to Amy, I'm much too young for that.

3,618

(26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

One of my reviewers has recommended that I avoid verb forms that end with -ing and write the sentence using -ed verb endings.

Here is an example with -ing verbs:

    As each remaining ship’s shields failed, it dove down at the palace at maximum thrust, plowing into the superstructure,
    and setting off enormous fireballs that shook the bunker.

Here it is with -ed:

    As each remaining ship’s shields failed, it dove down at the palace at maximum thrust, plowed into the superstructure,
    and set off enormous fireballs that shook the bunker.

Verb police, please weigh in.

3,619

(56 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

amy s wrote:

Maybe I'll just use the alphabet that K loves so dearly when naming characters.

I thought I was the only one who loves using the alphabet to name characters: Ensign Ecks (X), Dr. Ess (S), and Lady Kay (K).

3,620

(48 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

janet reid wrote:

Just had the first snow for the year. Well, what I call snow. I don't even think it was half an inch and it's already starting to melt, but it was AWESOME. I was a kid again today. I've touched snow twice in my 42 year existence before today. But I have never ever ever seen snow falling from the skies. It was AWESOME. At first, I thought, nah, it's slush. But then it became real snowflakes. And then it started to cover the roofs, lawns, streets, and everything. Everything is covered in white right now. Just in time for Christmas too!!! I'm super excited.

I also ate snow. It tastes like cold water! tongue

We're still planning to go snow hunting a couple of times over the next 2 weeks over the school holidays. Proper snow, measured in feet, not inches. With sleds, we're going snow hunting and then we're going to have fun. With sleds. whooo-hoooo! And build a snowman. We have to, right?! *high 5*

Have I mentioned how AWESOME it was?!!!!!!! It was. I'm enjoying the feeling while it lasts. smile

Ha' ye been drinkin' a wee barrel o' mead, lass?
Enjoy.

3,621

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

How about not knowing if the end of the book is going to blow up in my face? :-)

3,622

(8 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Join christianforums.com for research purposes. There many people there who ask/answer questions. It's beeb very helpful to me as I am writing a similar book. Also, post your questions in this group, and someone will probably help you. Also, the obvious source is the Bible. My story characters prefer the King James version, which is primarily due to my preference for that version. There are also good books for and against Christianity at Amazon that helped me a great deal in defining a conservative Christian world.

3,623

(69 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Although this thread has gone off the rails, I'm in the mood for fun. This may have already been suggested, but points could be proportional to the number of comments left. No minimums, no maximums. If you do a detailed review, whether regular or inline, you get more points than the lazy drive-by reviewers looking for a few quick points. That being said, I've only ever had one reviewer come in, leave five comments at the beginning, then bail saying that he had no helpful feedback to give. Had he left before leaving the fifth comment, I could have respected that. In my case, I've found reviewers who are very helpful to me and work hard to keep them. Since they do better reviews than I do (not for lack of trying), I reciprocate by reading more of their work than they do of mine.

Fire away.
Dirk

3,624

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Perhaps if you said book *signing* events, then it would be obvious. Better yet, include Kindle pricing somewhere on the page.

3,625

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'm looking at it from my cell phone (Moto G). Everything seems cramped. Also, I'm surprised at the high price of the books. That must be for the printed copies. I didn't notice an explanation of pricing on the page, although it may be buried in all that red ink which I didn't read fully. Back to have another look...