I only just discovered apricot brandy. Beats wine hands down in my book. Too bad it interacts with my medication, otherwise I could develop a serious addiction.

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As others have said, versioning is the way to "republish" work on the new site. I use it quite a bit. You can have many versions of the same chapter, usually as a way to hang onto old reviews associated with prior versions of the same chapter. For the most part, the workflow is similar to adding a new chapter, beginning with the Add Chapter step. When you reach the page where you specify the chapter number and chapter notes, choose the same chapter number as the one you want to replace, but increase the version number. As you follow the wizard, you'll have a chance to publish the new version, make it active, and make the older version inactive. If you want, you can keep older versions active as well, assuming you want feedback comparing the versions.

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njc wrote:

Actually, the question was for Amy.  Would HH Norton I, a generally peacable fellow, be CCFCCP or something else?

When someone issues currency in your name, it begs the question who was CCFCCP, him or those around him.

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Rindfleischetikettierungsueberwachungsaufgabenuebertragungsgesetz - meaning "law delegating beef label monitoring" - was introduced in 1999 in the state of Mecklenburg-Western Pomerania.

Brings Google Translate to its knees.

I now return this thread to its rightful owner, Professor Hinkley.

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If CTD is cumulative trauma disorder, then Google's "kumulative Traumastörung" looks right. If it's connective tissue disease, then Google has a really cool translation that also looks correct: Bindegewebserkrankungen. Don't you love the way we Krauts can keep making longer and longer words just by stringing them together? I'm sure there's a contest for that sort of thing.

I learned a cool new acronym today: CCFCCP. Given it's tie to the English commercial, it would almost certainly be used in it's English form, assuming they don't have their own independently developed equivalent.

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Not sure about CTD and CCFCCP, but I'm 95% sure Google Translate got this one right:
    Seine Hoheit , Kaiser Norton I. von den Vereinigten Staaten und Mexiko
or (slightly tweaked):
    Seine Hoheit , Kaiser Norton der Erste von den Vereinigten Staaten und Mexiko.

Common sense suggests that I, II, III, etc. are used after names in German as in English, although I never came across an instance in my Donald Duck comics. That said, I think "der Erste" sounds more cool, especially for a highborn.

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Upon reflection (I.e. I gave it thirty seconds of thought), ver does occur frequently in German words, but I can't think of any rule that would apply to all ver words.

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Since you insist, veruekt is roughly crazy or nuts. Scheisse is poop.  In the sentence above, possible translations for scheissveruekten would be bloody or damn (i.e. every bloody Saturday). I'm not aware of any special function for "ver", but my German is limited to basic conversations.

Dieser Scheisse schreibt sich einfach selbst is: this sh*t just writes itself.

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Google Translate is your friend. :-)

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I was just thinking today that I should make Joseph of German stock, so I can use German curse words for his ever-increasing potty mouth. I know a lot of the bad ones thanks to years of German school every scheissveruekten Saturday morning when kids should be home watching Bugs Bunny. Who wouldn't love to see Joseph's mother (speaking through Joseph) unload "Leck meine Eier!" at the guards outside the Imperial Palace after he's hit with the first stun blast? One wonders how they would react... tongue

Dieser Scheisse schreibt sich einfach selbst.

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Amy, if you like French, I can unload a bunch of words I learned in summer camp in Quebec. :-)

Je parle francais seulement pour vous, ma chere dame.
Pepe Le Pew

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It looks epic. I couldn't get your link to work, but found the trailer here: http://www.risen-movie.com/

Thanks for bringing it to our attention.

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AJ Reid wrote:

I'll shut up now and go and review someone else smile

Go check your reviews. Tag.

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AJ Reid wrote:

I don't read hieroglyphics either especially not in my spare time

Ooh! Hieroglyphics! New language. I wonder if it's possible to curse in hieroglyphics...

K. wrote:
Norm d'Plume wrote:

I just bought Lord of the Rings for Kindle. It's probably been two decades since I last read it. A chance to read it from the perspective of a writer.

Are you near the end of chapter 3 yet?

I haven't even finished your book yet. Nevertheless, I managed to begin rereading LOTR. The film version of The Fellowship of the Ring was better than the book. One of my initial complaints about the book has always been that Gandalf goes off for years (nine?), taking his sweet time when he must have at least considered the true nature of the Ring.

To be honest I've read almost nothing for weeks. Two weeks in Canada and I still don't have a driver's license or supplemental health insurance for meds. My car insurance is probably going to cost a fortune because I haven't driven in years, and in Calgary it's a must.

My boxes have separated in UPS transit. One was incorrectly marked as a gift and was hit with a customs/brokerage charge of over $100, which I refuse to pay. The rest were marked correctly but have been stuck in Winnipeg for Lord knows why. The UPS store where everything was shipped from is trying to sort it out.

The weather is great, though. I'm walking outside without even a coat on.

However, worst of all, they speak with a weird accent up here. The only thing worse would be Australian. :-)

Relatively safe for work, unless you have an old stick up your butt:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BRI-A3vakVg

Oh dear. I wrote my prologue as a roller coaster ride modeled after Raiders of the Lost Ark as a way to hook the reader.

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Sadly, Windows won the day. I want to work seamlessly between my desktop and a laptop, both of which are currently Windows-based and run Office 2007. I looked at Docs again, but it's still missing key features for me, although change tracking now exists. I ended up getting a refurbished lightweight Dell for $300, running Windows 7. Apparently they're going to have to pry Windows 7/Office 2007 out of my cold dead hands.

Thanks to all for your input.
Dirk

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Thank you, all. I keep finding reasons why Chrome OS won't do. It's unfortunate. I seem to be stuck with Windows.

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My ancient Windows laptop is finally uttering death rattles, and I'm looking for an inexpensive replacement. I've come to despise Windows with a passion, with its endless patches and lousy cpu/hard drive/memory management.

I'm looking at Google Chrome OS machines, since I pretty much live in my Chrome browser. However, I also need a word processor with change tracking and MS Word-style comments that is compatible with this site and book publishing file formats. Preferably free or inexpensive, although I'll pay a monthly fee if I have to just to avoid MS Bloatware.

Suggestions?

Thanks
Dirk

K. wrote:

Indeed... the loss of power to the group is somewhere on the scale between Deanna Troi and a Red-shirt.

What would STTNG be without her watery eyes and heaving breasts? It's the closest Star Trek ever came to porn, unless you count Klingon mating rituals.

I think you should build her up as the obvious baddie to the first story, where the duel is the climax to the story arch. The trick is how to tie her into the bigger story in a meaningful way. Include mystery and sleuthing about something BIG going on, preferably with Alina as the presumed focal point. When she dies, it serves as the trigger to smoke out the real villain in part two.

Are you still thinking of splitting Acts into two? If Alina is to be just a speed bump in Acts, it would be nice for her to still have some ties to the overarching mystery of Acts, rather than just the resident bitch. I came away with the impression that her character arch ran in parallel to the real story, which is why I didn't care when she died. Kind of like Emperor Augustus. He's meh in my story. Not sufficiently well set up to care when he dies.

KHippolite wrote:

Whoa... wait a second there, stop the press. Didn't Behira bring back Sil in the form of a human after Kha killed her as a dragon?

I begin to see this isn't quite the simple tale suggested by Acts. I hope I can follow all the threads...

Erndog wrote:

It would be so easy to plug her and her school into the larger picture of the endless search ancient mages and the story.

I agree. Perhaps that's why I never warmed up to her. To me she was meh. The second half of Acts is when things got interesting for me. However, I made the mistake of starting with the wrong book, so take that with a grain of salt.

You still haven't numbered your book titles, BTW. Hint.

Just getting caught up with this thread. Amy, Star Wars VII was not based on George Lucas's wishes. He offered Disney a three-part story treatment he had done, but they decided to do a reboot film instead. He has subsequently distanced himself from the film, complaining that it was just a rehash of old ideas. Like it or hate it, that film was all J. J. Abrams's work. Although I really like the diversity Abrams brought to the film, I'm generally not a fan of his work. I do plan to go see it anyway, even though I couldn't wait and read all the spoilers. tongue