Cool. What do you foresee people uploading?
327 2025-01-04 04:35:07
Topic: AI nonsense (0 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I asked Gemini to make up some absurd expressions for my demented space opera that some distant future British commentator might use while describing a martial arts fight in a mud pit (as if that wasn't absurd enough):
- "Not half bad, old bean! Though a bit like a walrus on roller skates."
- "Gadzooks, that was a barnstormer! Like a runaway wheelbarrow chasing a flock of pigeons!"
- "Well, I say! That was quite the carry-on! Like a tea party on a runaway rollercoaster!"
- "A right bobby dazzler, that was, like a giraffe tap-dancing in a teacup!"
- "A bit of a rum affair, if you ask me! A giraffe wrestling a penguin!"
328 2025-01-02 04:49:29
Re: Bugs & Maintenance Requests (149 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol, happy new year. We have a returning user (whatta) whose account was created in 2006. He can post chapters and short stories, and the posted works show on my home page, but when I look in his portfolio, the book (Tropical Cancer) doesn't show up. Any idea why this might be?
Thanks
Dirk
329 2025-01-01 23:14:26
Re: Permission to write a story on Facebook? (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Also, hit the escape key to attempt to bypass that popup.
330 2025-01-01 23:07:11
Re: Permission to write a story on Facebook? (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Do you mean you finished reviewing a story?
331 2025-01-01 05:04:02
Re: Links (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Too bad tnbw doesn't host pictures for inside forum posts (as far as I know).
332 2024-12-31 02:07:01
Re: Happy New Year! (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations, Randy. Terrific accomplishments.
333 2024-12-30 18:18:39
Re: Visible on the internet? (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If you post something with internet visibility, it will be included in search results returned by Google, assuming the right query/criteria are given. Anyone who clicks the link will then be able to read it or copy it without even being a member of this site. If you plan to publish something professionally, don't include internet visibility on the work when you post it here. I have no plans to sell my short stories, so I included internet visibility on those.
334 2024-12-30 12:51:22
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I just read up on it. The similarities are cool. I guess if you're going to invent an afterlife based on Revelation there will be similarities.
335 2024-12-30 02:45:32
Re: Humor me (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You're probably right about why it's not showing up. I suspect the site uses the original posted date to decide what gets shown on the home page. You can republish it, but that costs points. Or simply dive into those works shown on the home page and start reviewing. Almost all of the active folks on the site reciprocate, though some of us (e.g., me) are slower than others at reviewing. Best way to find active folks is to focus on the stories, chapters, and poems currently on your home page. For anyone else, check their profile to see when they were last online. Many accounts are inactive.
336 2024-12-30 02:05:08
Re: word limit (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yup, looks like it's accessible and posted in Premium. You're good to go. I'll try reviewing it shortly to make sure there are no glitches.
337 2024-12-30 00:18:59
Re: Humor me (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
We did a major group cleanup and eliminated the ones that were consistently unused. Folks on this site also had a chance to weigh in before we deleted anything. You'll probably find most of the groups that remain receive very little forum traffic, although they are used to post stories into. Best bet though is to post into Premium as well. It costs points but at least everyone will see it. Stuff posted only to non-Premium groups will only be seen by members of those groups. Besides, all the cool kids hang out in Premium. ![]()
If you want a group besides Premium with a semi-active forum, the Fantasy/Magic/Sci-fi group is an eclectic mix of characters beyond just those three genres. Think of it as Central Perk from Friends.
338 2024-12-29 22:31:20
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Goodness gracious! This is challenging.
1. You almost seem to describe purgatory (helping his mortal sinner flock get to heaven). Make it more like purgatory. You might even want to call it that or a variation.
2. Satan will be released from his prison in Revelation 20:7-10 after 1000 years (you mention the demons escaping). He will lead one last rebellion and then go to hell.
3. Reforming the AC is still a question for me.?
1. I prefer to continue calling it the lake of fire instead of purgatory, primarily to remain consistent with Revelation. I treat the lake as symbolic; mortal sinners go into the lake of fire, where there is some burning based on the number and gravity of your sins, after which you come out on some alien world elsewhere in our galaxy, which I consider to be part of (inside) the lake. The worse your sins, the worse the planet. The original mortal sinners (and their descendants?) will never be allowed to leave, but they will be allowed to die (once they become holy enough) and their souls can then rest, although they remain connected to their planets. The more holy souls a planet has, the more paradisical it becomes.
2. Your point number 2 is problematic from a Catholic perspective. As I've written before the 1000 years is not literal to them. It merely represents a really long time. And Christ is already present in the form of the Eucharist, so the 1000 years is the Church age and is well underway. Given that, Satan must already be chained and locked up in the Abyss, which is a bit weird considering he's still considered to be active in the world today. That's why I gave De Rosa stigmata every time he kills or orders the death of a clergyman. It's sufficiently painful that it limits his ability to do it.
3. Don't forget, this story takes place on a different timeline. God actually helped create the Antichrist, not just by providing a soul but also by helping Satan breed all of Connor's powers over two millennia. Otherwise it could never be done in that short amount of time. The reason God does this is that he needs Connor to rule the lake of fire (the planets) and guide all mortal sinners and their descendants to holiness. Thus, every power Connor has and every challenge Connor faces are all part of preparing him for that task.
The one fly in the ointment is that there is a big separation between humans who made it to heaven the first time around, and those who didn't, including the latter's descendants. Seems unfair that the descendants would be excluded from heaven. Perhaps the way I should do it is that the holy souls of the descendants who contributed to turning their planet into paradise will get to heaven when that task is done. And the holy souls of the original sinners remain connected to their planets and maintain it as a paradise for their descendants, which is no longer a punishment but a privilege. This means the mortal sinners never leave the lake of fire, which is also consistent with Revelation.
I think the above works while still conforming to Revelation, at least symbolically. Technically, then, Connor should never be allowed to leave the lake of fire, either, although I'm willing to bend Revelation in his case (remember, different timeline) so he can someday get to heaven. The alternative is that he doesn't get to heaven but becomes increasingly holy as the planets he rules become holy. Ultimately, he could turn into a Lesser God, although that would happen way beyond the end of book three, so it'll probably never happen, except perhaps in an epilogue.
339 2024-12-29 18:28:07
Re: word limit (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Quick question, are the prior submissions still visible in your portfolio? If so, then that shouldn't be a problem.
340 2024-12-29 05:31:47
Re: word limit (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
It shouldn't.
341 2024-12-28 05:20:51
Re: word limit (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
We tend to see folks post 1500 - 2500. The higher the word count, the more difficult it becomes to review a chapter or short story in one sitting. If I can review two 1500-word chapters VS one 3000-word chapter, the smaller ones often get priority because that allows me to reciprocate with two authors in the same time as it would to trade with the author of the longer piece. I eventually get around to the longer posts too, but it simply takes longer.
For the sanity of my regular reviewers, I split many of my chapters in two or even three to keep within the word count range I suggested above.
If anything you're trying to post costs more than 8 points, then your post is at least 2600 words. Most people go over that from time to time, although it helps both the writer and the reviewer to keep things short and easier/quicker to review.
342 2024-12-27 03:34:07
Re: paragraph question (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Joseph sailed over his mother's desk and cowered behind her, his head under her skirt. Alexander grabbed him by the scruff of the neck and scourged him senseless for being such a wuss. Joseph wailed, terrified and in pain. His mother grabbed the Royal Sledge Hammer and hit Alexander in the nuts before tearing out both of his eyes with her fingernails.
343 2024-12-27 00:29:37
Topic: paragraph question (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I currently have the three sentences below in one of my chapters. Joseph is the POV character. Alexander is his father.
Is it better to write it as one paragraph?
Joseph walked around the back of his mother’s desk and stood behind her. Alexander walked over and placed himself next to her, both shielding their son. He looked over their shoulders, ready for… what?
Or three?
Joseph walked around the back of his mother’s desk and stood behind her.
Alexander walked over and placed himself next to her, both shielding their son.
He looked over their shoulders, ready for… what?
I lean toward the former. Granted, Alexander is the subject in the middle sentence, but all three sentences are very closely related (they're preparing for intruders who are trying to break through the study's doors).
Thanks
Dirk
344 2024-12-26 20:06:58
Re: Robots, drones, and AI (2 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
When I was really young, my father took us to see his mother for the first time. I still remember looking up at her face and asking her why she had a moustache?
My cousin managed to top that one though. I won't repeat the actual words, but there's a rather offensive expression in German about Polish people, and I guess someone used it in front of my cousin when he was maybe 4 years old. One day, my aunt took him upstairs to see a neighbour, who happened to be... Polish.
My aunt said she almost died when he said it. Lucky for her, the woman barely spoke German.
From the mouths of babes. ![]()
345 2024-12-26 19:55:33
Re: Robots, drones, and AI (2 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You could do space battles that way. Automated ships fighting automated ships, and automated ships dropping bombs, with drones and perhaps physical robots to land and seize infrastructure.
By the way, Leonardo's taxi had an AI (MIND) named Stronza, which is Italian for bitch. It was his ex-wife's car, thus he renamed the MIND. Of course, it would be no fun if Stronza had done the craziest driving. My favorite moment was actually suggested by Kdot. As the taxi tries to shake several pursuing missiles, it buzzed a pizza delivery drone, which then exploded in a superheated ball of metal, plastic, and mozzarella.
I named his wife Donna Pelosa, which is Italian for hairy woman. I'll probably rename her to something slightly less offensive.
I wonder what the Italian word is for hermaphrodite? ![]()
Just looked it up: ermaphrodito. Admittedly, that word is no longer considered politically correct.
346 2024-12-26 14:59:47
Re: etc (68 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Will do. Can you please resend me the link and login details? For some reason they're not in my password manager.
347 2024-12-26 03:48:39
Re: Happy Holidays Everyone (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you, Bill. I second all that for the folks here. Although, I can't promise to consume eggnog in moderation. ![]()
348 2024-12-25 20:38:11
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Check out my last big post near the end of page 52 since my thinking on some of these issues have evolved. Also, I'm pretty sure the 1000 years is a symbolic number in Catholicism, meaning a "very long time", and the rule of Christ is already well underway through the institution of the Eucharist.
Coffee's on. I only have decaf, I'm afraid.
349 2024-12-25 06:22:20
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Njc, can you suggest examples of holy but not righteous and righteous but not holy? I think that might help more clearly distinguish them for me.
One (potential) example that comes to mind is that Moses, in trying to free the Israelites, definitely was righteous, but the deaths of the Egyptian firstborn would not have been a holy act in my opinion.
Thanks
Dirk
350 2024-12-25 04:34:07
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. Out of curiosity, I looked up the actual definition of righteous. Then compared it to virtuous and holy. Depending on which definition/website you read, you get different answers. My favorite was the two sites that had almost exactly the opposite definitions of each other for righteous and holy. A total mess. And Gemini was equally useless.
Basically, I'm trying to decide if the mortal sinners at the end of the trilogy should strive for righteousness or holiness in order to get to that next plane of existence and closer to God.
If someone is trying to live a sinless life, I tend to think of that more as the pursuit of holiness, which is probably the better choice.
Of course, just to keep it interesting, someone online asked is it possible to be holy but not righteous or righteous but not holy. Can anyone suggest examples of those?
Thanks
Dirk