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Other possibilities for the trilogy title:
Satan's Last Stand - granted, it implies he will lose, but a Christian audience expects that anyway.
The Last Challenge - meh
Satan's War - nice and short, kind of boring though
The Millennia War - a possibility since the Last Challenge unfolds over two millennia
Kingdom of Fire & Faith - still in the running, albeit long
A title similar to Burn it all Down, which I like, but has been used too often
The End - simple, but impossible to find given the number of books with The End as part of the title.
Great Deeds Await
Great Deeds Await You
Killing the Messiah

Hmm. Per my previous post, I was hoping to shorten the title of the series from "The Lord of the Earth" because, when combined with the title of each novel, it strikes me as very long to have on a book cover. All three of those I was considering (The Lesser King, The Immortal Sinner, and The Unholy Shepherd) are too suggestive of the fact that Connor is not Christ, which is the big twist of book one. The Lesser King and The Unholy Shepherd are great titles for book three, though.

I really like Google AI's suggestion of Kingdom of Fire & Faith, but that's even longer than the current series title. The abbreviated title of Fire & Faith hasn't been used too much, but I find it too bland. I may just say to heck with it and use the full title (Kingdom of ...).

Not a fan of End War. Not lofty enough.
Needless to say, The Day of the Lord is taken.

I could also see giving Connor a different title than king, like The Shepherd or The Caretaker. The book could then be called the Unholy Shepherd or the Holy Caretaker.
Great Deeds Await, with or without You at the end.
The Antichrist Burns or The Burning of the Antichrist, which, technically, he does.
Burned Alive!  possibly with The Destruction of the Antichrist as the subtitle, although the subtitle is a little misleading; he is burned alive and destroyed, but he is brought back to life by God, who declares the Antichrist part of him to no longer exist/been burned to nothing)
The Immortal Sinner - since Connor will become immortal at the end.
The Antichrist Triumphant.

EDIT: Oddly, the Unholy Shepherd has been used before too, although only once, released in 2019 or 2021, for a murder-mystery. 4.8 stars on Amazon, although only from 9 reviewers (friends & family?). So, I consider that title usable.
EDIT: A Kingdom of Fire and Faith. -- Google's AI suggested this one.

From the looks of the two lists (including my previous post), it will almost certainly be one of the titles in blue. Right now, "The Lesser King" and "The Unholy Shepherd" are in the lead.

Well, crap! An end times novel was just released called "The War for Souls", which was to be the title of my second book. It's from the line Nnamani speaks as he and Campagna flee the Vatican at the end of book one.

Satan will indeed be thrown (sucked) into the lake of fire, which, as you may recall, is an interstellar portal, but it can also send you elsewhere on Earth. God decides who goes where. Satan will end up on a small moon being sucked into the black hole at the center of our galaxy. Haven't figured out if I plan to send all demons there as well, or elsewhere. Some hellish world, perhaps, with instructions from God that no one ever go there. But will humans obey him this time?

I have two options (or both together) for someone going into the lake of fire. One is that time in the lake of fire is much slower than real time, so before you pass through the portal you will be punished by the lake for the unabsolved misdeeds of your life. However I make it, it can't be forever since I want to get all mortal sinners to other worlds. Which brings me to option 2, which is to state that they are, figuratively, in the lake of fire forever since they'll be on other worlds forever (they can never get back to Earth). I'll probably combine them, so you get some burning, then get transported.

Connor/Adam burn to nothing except for one thought: Agony! That's because Adam agreed before returning to Earth to personally accept everyone else's punishment. But he's too afraid to jump into the lake when the time comes, so Connor does it (one of the great deeds that awaits him). Then they get transported back to Megiddo, to the other waiting characters.

One issue to resolve is that I want the portals to be able to take you between worlds, so Connor, Campagna, and Romano, among others, can travel everywhere in the future since Connor, who is now immortal, has to rule all of it. Connor's throne will be on a renewed Earth.

Satan will, of course, burn worse than anyone else. And he'll never get away from the black hole.

Just to clarify my previous comments, many Catholics consider Revelation heavily figurative, but since there's 1.3 billion of them, I'm guessing a huge number of them don't know much about it. Even if they've read it, much of Revelation seems bizarre, so you probably need help understanding it, and if you go to the internet for your info, there are tons of Protestant websites that give their interpretation, but I don't recall any saying that they're a Protestant website and that interpretations differ.

The Catholic-specific study guides can vary quite a bit too. If you like, I'll send you the name/author of what I thought was the best one. When I first read Revelation, I thought John was off his meds. But, the aforementioned book was terrific at explaining things, and by the time I was done, I thought John was brilliant.

The bet was made shortly after Satan read Revelation, so early in the second century.

With respect to your previous comments, God knows everything, God will win.

Here's the logic I've tentatively settled on (unless someone blows this up on me):

Like everything in the Bible, the version of Revelation we have has to be interpreted correctly. So, when God shows it to us, common sense says that the correct interpretation of the future currently in the Bible is: Satan and sinning humans, change your ways or Revelation is what will happen to you. It's God's final warning.

As a result, Satan knows he must do something else, otherwise his butt will burn. Rather than stop sinning and return to worshipping and serving God, Satan cooks up the challenge, which, if he succeeds, offers him a different way to escape the fire while simultaneously forcing God and the angels to leave Earth, so Satan can rule it. Since God has a greater purpose for the challenge, he accepts.

The prophets, too, realize that Revelation is a warning (as are many Bible stories), not to be read literally (e.g., prove your obedience to God by killing your son, unless an angel stays your hand), so they have no problem writing it the way they did, which was done under the guidance of the Holy Spirit.

Humans, being smart too, have enough intelligence that they can figure this out as well (hell, I did, and my brain's not exactly firing on all thrusters, lol). It's just that most humans suck at interpreting the Bible correctly (45,000 denominations and counting), so most Christians think Revelation is literally what will happen.

Many Catholics have begun to realize what God intended, and have changed their interpretation, including the fact that much of the wording in Revelation is figurative, not literal. They too realize God is saying: Satan and sinning humans, change your ways, or Revelation is what will happen to you.

One might ask why God didn't simply come right out and say the above words. Sometimes he does, sometimes he doesn't. He didn't, for example, include an explicit statement prior to the story of the Flood (sinning humans, changes your ways, or I'll drown you all). Similarly, in Genesis, in the story of Adam & Eve, he didn't say, sinning humans, don't disobey me (i.e., don't eat the fruit), or I'll punish you severely, although he does say that elsewhere. Tons of examples where God has decided to show, not tell.

Here, too, dual timelines are no longer needed.

Satan (De Rosa) can't, but Connor can. He's descended from both De Rosa (a recently killed member of the breeding program) and Campagna (unknowingly descended from an escaped member of the breeding program from centuries past), so he's actually more powerful than Satan, although I haven't figured out when the best time is to use that. His brawl with De Rosa inside St. Peter's Basilica in the middle of book two is interrupted when Connor collapses (Adam is trying to break through). Connor doesn't like reading the minds of people he cares about because he gets flooded with a lot of their private thoughts.

EDIT: I just figured out when to use it. During the aforementioned brawl, Connor allows his father to belt him in the face a few times before grabbing De Rosa's thrown fist midair with one hand and beginning to crush it. Surprises the hell out of Satan, after which Connor really lets him have it, right before Connor collapses.

Are you referring to the loop I mentioned earlier but didn't explain? If so, it goes like this:

Assume John always knows and writes about what really will happen in the future. Since the challenge doesn't appear in Revelation, Satan will issue one. But, John should have foreseen that and mentioned it in Revelation, including the fact that Satan loses. Of course, as soon as Satan reads that, he knows not to issue the challenge, at least not that one. But if he doesn't issue it, then John would have written Revelation as we know it. And again, Satan would issue the challenge.

To prevent this loop, God prevents Satan from knowing his final fate. So, Satan would have issued the challenge and spent 2000 years preparing for it (breeding humans to produce superhuman Connor). Even though Satan no longer knows his fate, he has no choice but to proceed since winning is the only way he can escape the lake of fire.

He also no longer knows the fate of the Antichrist, the False Prophet, any of the demons, and all mortal sinners. If he did, that would give him too much information, from which he could probably guess his fate, and the loop would exist yet again.

So, God has to prevent Satan and us from knowing our fates. God is also more than willing to let Satan sweat over his ultimate fate.

Naturally, the fact that there are two possible futures, both equally valid, though only God knows which will come to pass, is really two timelines but without me having to even mention the word or describe the concept.

The only issue is whether Christians/Catholics will view God's actions as "lying" to the prophets. I say no because both timelines are equally valid, and either could come to pass based solely on Satan's decision about the challenge (naturally God knows in advance what Satan will decide, but that doesn't remove Satan's free will).

And God chooses to show the prophets the future that does not result in a causality loop, which also serves God's purpose with regard to the future rescue mission undertaken by Connor/Adam.

I'm doing this from memory, which is never a good thing, but for Catholics, the 1000 year period has been underway since shortly after Christ's death, when they developed the concept of the Eucharist. That is, to Catholics, the real presence of Christ on Earth.

It therefore follows that Satan is already in the bottomless pit, locked away. Naturally, that's not a physical pit, nor is there a physical chain around him. Since, figuratively speaking, his power is diminished in this period, what we see in the real world is his remaining influence.

I included the aforementioned chain in the first draft: the Christian cross around De Rosa's neck. It was secured around his neck by St. Michael at a moment when Satan was distracted. It's what causes his painful stigmata every time he kills a clergyman. That's what keeps him from killing more of them. The chain also prevents him from leaving his current (De Rosa) body.

I tell my doctor his pills make me stupid.

I understand what you're saying, Terry, but the whole premise of the challenge is that things will not end the same way as originally prophesied by John and others. Since I insist that the Bible in my story remain inerrant, the question becomes, what's the best way to explain how that is possible? The alternate timeline is okay, but there is a lot of complexity to the concept if you think about it. The write-up for it is fairly straightforward for those who want to read at most a few paragraphs about how it works and move on.

But many readers these days are very savvy, and I don't want to publish something that is fatally flawed the moment you peek under the hood. If you do focus on it, then you have to think about things like: How many instances of me are there in the multiverse? Are we each distinct individuals, no more alike than twins, or are we connected on a deeper level? If the latter, how many souls are there for me? Is it just one that is somehow shared by all of us? I'd be okay with raising all those issues if that was the focus of the novels, but it's not. And there are many more issues beyond those above.

The other alternative I also considered right from the beginning was to sidestep multiple timelines (2 in this case) and have God give the prophets a vision of the future that is identical to our future. The latter would come true only if there was no challenge, which is the real world we live in. So, the Bible prophesies tell our future.

But the challenge changed that, which is a future God chose not to reveal in full. In part, it's to keep Satan from knowing his future. But mostly it's to prevent a crazy time loop. I'll skip the details for now.

As noted in my earlier posts, God wants Satan to issue the challenge, which is exactly what he eventually does. God's role in steering Satan to that chosen path amounted to having the prophets write the prophesies we see in the Bible, knowing that Satan would read and act on them in an attempt to prevent them from coming to pass. But the prophets and Satan are intelligent and have free will. They should have at least considered what will happen when Satan reads Revelation. The fact that they didn't doesn't change the fact that the outcome still required conscious decisions on their part. God knew what their decisions would be, but they made the choices.

While it's true that Satan really had no choice (lake of fire or mystery prize behind door #2), he made it far worse for himself. As mentioned in the ancient letter (written by Satan), demons and glorified humans have the ability to tolerate the Lake of Fire, although it still involves great suffering, but not so much that the punished beings can no longer contemplate their eternal punishment. After all, what's the point of a punishment if the condemned are in such searing agony that they are nothing more than tortured animals without even the ability to think anymore. Their whole existence would be reduced to one endless thought: agony!

Instead, Satan foolishly upped the ante by suggesting that if Satan won the challenge, God and the angels should return to the spirit realm and abandon Earth forever, leaving it to Satan to rule. God said okay, but if Satan loses, the temperature in the lake of fire will rise a thousandfold (oops). Since the challenge remained Satan's only escape from the lake, he had to accept.

And God has no need to fog Satan's mind.

I could ramble on, but I'm tired.

That reminds me, in addition to the Bunny Divine news broadcast, which only lasts for a few paragraphs, I could write a real short story about the killing of Mama and many other mobsters, with Kay as the protagonist/assassin.