Strange problem.

You may remember, I was toying with an alternate timeline (the story timeline) to explain why things aren't going as expected when reading Revelation in that timeline. I intended to explain it with the idea that our Bible is not only inerrant but is also the only true Bible, and because it's supernatural, it's also the only Bible out there in every timeline. So, the story's timeline has an inerrant, supernatural Bible from our timeline, yet events along the story's timeline don't match the Bible, nor should they since our Bible was written for our timeline, not the story's timeline.

The alternative, I realized, is to not even mention another timeline. Instead, John wrote Revelation based on his visions of how the future will unfold (without a challenge from Satan). However, the very act of writing that, which Satan read, led to the challenge, invalidating what John had written.

But! Had John foreseen the challenge and written about it, Satan would not have issued the challenge since the second version also predicts Satan will lose.

So, whatever John writes, causes it not to happen. Yet somehow, the Bible is supposed to be inerrant. Yikes!

I'll have to find some way to document the above crazy inter-dependency between the two versions. Perhaps I should write that, although the Bible contains only one version of Revelation, either version (both of which are inerrant!) could come to pass, and humans simply have to wait for the future to unfold to see what happens.

The confusing thing for the reader is that the fake version of Revelation, written by Satan, will be erroneously regarded as one of the two inerrant versions. And some of it (the existence of a challenge) will be true. It was issued and God accepted. Although predictions made in the fraudulent version come true, it's because Satan makes sure they come true (e.g., various wars and assassinations) to lend unquestionable credibility to his version. And his version also (falsely) predicts Christ returning as a child.

I could write a third version (which is the version, with the challenge, that actually unfolds in the story, with the Antichrist masquerading as Christ). That's one of the two inerrant versions noted above. However, three versions of Revelation is a lot for the reader to wrap their mind around. If I include a third version, it would only appear at the end of the book. Of course, if that version exists and is found, it would predict the end of my trilogy, where Satan loses, which spoils a key part of the ending. That clearly suggests, I shouldn't write a third version.

Are your heads spinning yet?

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(44 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Why is your em-dash so short? Mine (from MS Word) looks like so: —
Yours (copied from above) looks like so: –
Since your en-dash is likely shorter, I'd hate to see how short your hyphen is. smile

So, Sol, would there still be trial members who gain temporary access to premium membership? And would they be allowed to post anything at all before being required to pay?

Keep in mind, we've been having a lot of trouble getting trial members to convert to permanent membership for a long time, even with the ability to post during the trial.

Would it be worth offering a discount for the first three months of membership or even the whole first year?

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(44 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Is that a review site? A contest?

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

By the way, Sol, are you advertising the current newbie contest anywhere? I know I saw an ad about our site on Booksie a while ago. I'm just curious if you did anything specific for the contest.

Thanks
Dirk

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hi Sol.

I noticed/tested most of the fixes you made.
I'm pretty sure the timeout problem in the forums is gone too. I'm just doing a few more timeout test cases.

These changes rock!

Thank you very much.
Dirk

I think it's a great idea, Sol. Many of us have wasted oodles of time reviewing people who don't stay.

It would also be great, as Marilyn noted, if they had to reply to their reviews before they could post more.

Thanks
Dirk

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Treewoman61, below is a link to a site page of what you should be paying. If you think you're being charged $20/month, please contact SolN.

https://www.thenextbigwriter.com/guide/about-us

Thanks
Dirk

Thanks, Sol. Is there a link to a description of the contest? I'd be interested to know the details.
EDIT: Ignore; I found it.

Thanks
Dirk

Marilyn wrote:

I think we should not coddle contest entrants.

A little coddling may be reasonable in the short term since we're trying to add new users quickly. The contest ought to be just hard enough to keep out anyone who isn't even willing to do a few reviews. Without doing that, they won't really experience the site and its benefits (see my previous post). Since many of them will be doing a trial, they ought to be doing reviews anyway, so here's a chance for them to win something (membership) while doing something they should be doing anyway. Perhaps three reviews? Five? The total number ought to be commensurate with the value of the prize and the length of the contest (keep in mind, the trials only last two weeks at present).

Kdot wrote:

You join an Amazon contest for a gift card, but to earn the GiftCard you have to leave a review on (this list of) kindle stories

If Amazon were using the contest to flesh out its reviews of books, then it seems reasonable that if you want to win, you have to do N reviews from your library.

We want to encourage people to do reviews (i.e., try out the inline review system, which is one of the best out there; read the work of other writers on this site to see the caliber of the writers here; trade reviews with others to see the quality of the reviews they can get; and begin to interact with other writers on this site, most of whom are fairly experienced and knowledgeable).

If they're not willing to do even a few reviews, they won't experience the things noted above. Besides, they're going to be on the site anyway doing a trial; this just adds another incentive to really try us out.

I agree on both counts. smile Perhaps do it only on the contest for all members. And if you keep the requirement easy (2-3 reviews?), anyone serious would probably still enter, while anyone too lazy to even do that isn't going to succeed on our site.

Thanks, Sol. Will you include a requirement on one or both contests for entrants to do some reviewing on the site within the contest window?

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Folks I know who always recip: Jack, Marilyn, and Terry (tdp). Randy usually does, although he just moved to the US from overseas.

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Found it. I am blind (not for the first time). I don't regularly read romance, but now is a good time to read one again. smile. I'm just wrapping up a kitchen upgrade today, but will read chapter 1 by the end of the week, if not sooner.

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Found it. I am blind. I don't normally read romance, but now is a good time to read one again. smile. I'm just wrapping up a kitchen upgrade today, but will read chapter 1 by the end of the week, if not sooner.

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hi Treewoman61. We did indeed experience a major slowdown in critiques due to a loss of members, especially after the server crash. Sol has just made some policy changes that should bring in new users (easier to gather points, more points for new users, and a longer up front trial), including more contests. Strange thing is, I haven't seen your user name on my home page in a long time. Are you posting to Premium? If so, I must be blind.

Check out a post (thread) In the Premium forum with tips on maximizing the number of reviews you receive (it's posted near the top of the forum).

Also, what's the name of your posted work?

We don't want to lose anyone, so hopefully you can give us a little more time once we find it. Posting here and asking for reviews is exactly the right thing to do.

Why are you paying $20 per month? Is that the cost of the monthly plan? I'm on the yearly plan, which costs way less per month. Perhaps someone else on the site can weigh in with the actual yearly cost.

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(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I'm just finalizing a few things in act one of Archangel + I have to apply plenty of minor edits I've already received, then I'll stop working on it except for an expected trickle of further feedback from a few new reviewers.

I'm pretty sure you read fairly recent versions of everything in act one of Archangel except the final 3-part chapter. I haven't put all of act one back up yet post-crash to slow the influx of reviews (I'm falling too far behind my reviewers).

I also have plenty of recent suggested edits to add to Connor v1.

Doing all of the above will probably take until the end of August. After that, almost all my time will go toward Connor v2.

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thank you, Sol. That's great news.

Just so there's no confusion, the original list of bugs is higher up in the thread. There are six in total. Marilyn only quoted the two most famous ones.

Thanks
Dirk

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Longest undefended border in the world. My favorite was a border crossing in either Manitoba or Ontario, where there was no permanent customs and immigration officer. They had an office, but it was unmanned. You were supposed to stop in voluntarily and call someone via a phone located in the office. I kid you not. We take being friendly and welcoming to a whole other level of stupid. smile

I think they subsequently had to add someone once the location made the news.

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(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I'm looking to finalize the name of the global church on New Bethlehem. I've been using the Libertarian Church, which is ok if I wanted to be totally serious. But why on Earth would I want to start now? smile  The Libertarian Church was founded a few centuries from now based on the Mammonists for Christ Movement of the 21st century, which was begun by the stinking rich for the stinking rich (a tax dodge).

Now, since later supporters of the Mammonist Movement truly came to believe you could serve both mammon and Christ, I figure they would push strongly for that to also be the name of the church: Mammonists for Christ Church. While that may seem ridiculous to outsiders, the members of that denomination believe fervently in their church and its views.

Stranger things have happened, especially in American politics. smile

Thus, I'm inclined to name it the way its followers would: Mammonists for Christ Church.

Thoughts?
Dirk

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

For those who haven't had a chance to look at it, there's a (sticky) post in Premium called


"How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing"


based on one we had up before the Great Hiccup of 2023. An identical copy also exists in Writing Tips & Site Help.


Please point all trial/new users to it to help them maximize what they get out of the site.


Also, feel free to post replies to either copy of that thread with additional suggestions.

Thanks
Dirk

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Randy, your plane took a wrong turn. Surely you intended to come to western Canada? Home of endless forest fires, broken healthcare, brutal winters, and a major political party overrun by (western) separatists. Still, I have to admit, the political entertainment is better where you are.

Enjoy your new home.
Dirk

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(260 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Short post to push this thread higher in the forum.