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426 2024-07-22 01:25:47
Re: How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing - Updated 3/8/25 (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
427 2024-07-22 01:24:31
Re: Premium forum rules (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Short post to push this thread higher in the forum.
428 2024-07-21 23:51:45
Re: Proposed Ideas for Contests Moving Forward (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This is a really good idea.
dags:)
Thanks. I've been known to have a few.
429 2024-07-21 23:31:28
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Dagny, when you have a few moments, could I ask you to have a look at the sticky thread I'm maintaining in Premium and in Writing Tips/Site Help entitled "How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing"? Is there anything you'd like to see added or changed as it relates to poetry?
430 2024-07-21 23:26:04
Topic: How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing - Updated 3/8/25 (0 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
This article has been moved to the Premium forum for maximum visibility. Please look for it pinned there near the top. All new members should read it, preferably before you post your first written work. It'll save you from common mistakes that might prevent your writing from being seen by others here. It may also prevent you from wasting points on posting something incorrectly.
431 2024-07-21 23:19:51
Topic: How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing - Updated 3/8/25 (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Existing members, please point all new members to this thread, in case they haven’t already found it.
Below are tips to maximize the number of reviews you receive on the site. Everything here is voluntary, but it’s what works for many people, especially those who are new to the site and have yet to build a network of fellow writers here (using “connections”) with whom to trade reviews.
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Review, review, review. It's the best way to find long-term partners with whom to trade reviews. You’ll want a network of them to give you feedback on an ongoing basis. Building relationships here also regularly leads to new friendships.
The best place to find active members is on your home page, which contains the writing of everyone currently actively posting new work.
There are many casual users of the site (e.g., folks who don't write/post/review here year round), so be sure to check out the writer's personal profile for when they were last online on this site. If it's more than about two months, they may not respond/reciprocate in a timely manner. They may even have left the site for an extended period, which could be months, sometimes years.
Respond to reviews in a timely manner, otherwise reviewers may just move on. It only takes a few minutes to respond to most reviews. However, understand that the turnaround time to actually do so varies from a few hours to a few days because real life often intrudes (e.g., illness, deaths, other crises).
Read stories in your own genre, many of which you may find in the individual groups or by searching for new works by genre. You may get more reciprocal reviewers if they share your interests. But! This is a small site focused on serious writers, so we often review outside of our usual genres to help each other and to get the best reciprocal reviewers for our own work. Feedback from other genres writers is another great way to learn. Many folks here regularly write in several genres.
Post your work in the Premium group. When you do, your work will be visible to all members. Also, reviewers of Premium works are rewarded with points with which to post their own work, which leads to more reviews for you. If you're serious about becoming a writer, Premium is where you need to be. Note that the Premium group contains the Premium forum.
While gathering points to post your own work can seem like a pain, you would have to read the work of other writers anyway to keep them as long-term reviewers (they need feedback too). The points system on this site is much less onerous than on other professional workshop sites. It's main purpose is to keep out folks who just want to post, get feedback, and give nothing back. And it automatically leads you to network with other writers here. If you regularly trade reviews with others here, you will almost always have more points than you actually need.
If you don't review the work of others, you can't expect to get reviewed in return. Most members here are experienced writers and, in many cases, published authors. They don't have the time to review the work of every new trial member, of whom there are many. You may get a free review or two, but the best way to get reviews is to give reviews. It shows you're serious. You are serious, right? :-)
You're not expected to be a great writer or reviewer if all this is new for you. But you are expected to try. That's how everyone else here got started. We all suck at writing and reviewing initially. Trust me! But if you're not willing or able to do even that, then this site isn't for you.
Reviewing the work of others also allows you to study how they write. There are experienced writers on this site to learn from, including published authors. And reviewing makes you a better reviewer, which should allow you to build relationships with the best writers, who generally are among the best reviewers.
Post clean chapters to the extent you know how. That means proper punctuation, grammar, and proofreading. If you're still new to writing, ask for help in the Writing Tips & Site Help or Premium forums. Google for articles on punctuation and grammar, or buy a good book on the subject. You want your reviewers focused on your story, not your writing mechanics.
Use a picture as a cover page in lieu of the default red cover. If default covers worked, there would be no need for real covers on Amazon either. When you look at the home page, it's the pictures that stand out first/most. Free pictures are available online from multiple sites, including pixabay.com.
Have a content summary for your book so people know what it's about. This seems like common sense, but we still see books without a summary posted on the site. Who buys books when they don't know what it's about?
Try to come up with an interesting book title.
Keep a clean portfolio that is easy to peruse. That means inactivating (hiding) or deleting obsolete versions of stories you no longer want reviewed. Or simply rename any obsolete versions (e.g., stick the word OBSOLETE at the end of the title (this is the easiest solution)). Note that deleting chapters also deletes any reviews you received for those chapters, so be sure it’s what you really want.
Don't post massive chapters that take six to eight times as long to review as a regular post. If a member has to choose between reviewing the chapters of six people they regularly review vs. reviewing one massive chapter, the former will usually win out since we're trying to maintain as many reciprocal relationships as possible with only a limited amount of time.
A good chapter length for the site is perhaps 1500 - 2500 words (costs about 5 to 8 points to post).If you have a much longer chapter, break it up and post it in parts, and clearly identify in the chapter names and chapter notes that it is a multi-part chapter, otherwise you'll get repeated comments about how a chapter seems to end abruptly or has a lousy hook. Short chapters generally get the most reviews.
Be patient while waiting for reciprocal reviews. Expect to wait a few days up to a few weeks for people to reciprocate. Most writers do so part-time, which may include writing a chapter or story every few weeks, posting it, and then catching up on reviews owed to others. Many reviewers do it this way. If someone has never reviewed you before, try to reciprocate with them more quickly, since it's a chance to acquire a new permanent reviewer.
If you're not going to reciprocate because the other writer’s book doesn't interest you, please thank them and tell them that it's not something you normally read and/or probably can't be of much help with. The other writer can then move on. And don't be offended if someone doesn't want to read your current work. It happens. With any luck, they’ll read your next one.
Read the work of new members. There's a points bonus, they'll probably be grateful to you and may read your stuff, and they'll be more likely to join the site permanently if they see they're getting helpful reviews. A thriving site helps everyone.
Ask other members about who else might be good to ask for a review, then check out the latest posted work from those writers. Keep in mind that the people you ask may be too busy on any given day or week, so it may take some time for them to provide a review. If someone doesn't reciprocate after two or three attempts, move on. On the flip side, when you review someone new, suggest who else the new member should review to increase their chance of gaining more reciprocal reviewers.
If you’ve tried most or all of the above tips and still have trouble finding enough reviewers, post a message in the Premium forum about that, and ask for reviewers. Give the name of the posted work, a summary of what it’s about (quote some or all of your story’s content summary if you like), and the type of feedback you’re looking for. Since this is a small workshop site, you may find that the best feedback comes from members outside your own genre, so don’t restrict yourself. And be prepared to recip.
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If you don't know how to do some of the things mentioned in this thread, don't hesitate to ask in the Writing Tips & Site Help forum or even in Premium. Note that the Premium forum is where you’ll get the most number of eyeballs on your post and, most likely, the fastest and most number of responses, so don’t be shy about using it. Site members are generally happy to help.
Feel free to reply directly to this thread with any feedback you may have about reviewing and this writeup. Going forward, this article will reside only in the Premium forum to avoid having to maintain two copies (the other was in the Writing Tips & Site Help forum), which can get out of sync. An article by the same name still exists in the latter forum, but it merely directs people here.
432 2024-07-21 21:48:53
Re: Proposed Ideas for Contests Moving Forward (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
One more idea that came to mind might be contests that are open only to trial/new members, with the rest of us focused on reviewing their entries before the contest deadline.
433 2024-07-21 21:38:52
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
How are you going to revive this site if you don't accept new reviewers?
I have plenty of newer works that people can review, including Archangel Syndrome, but I'll never get v2 of Connor going if I keep getting pulled back to v1. And I hope to begin posting v2 by late August.
The emphasis going forward is indeed on new members (can't revive a site without them). Everything from the policy changes Sol is making (20 points instead of 10 for trial users, increasing the length of the trial to two weeks, up from one, and easing the ratio of how many points the site pays per review vs. how many points the site charges to post); specific bug fixes that new users keep running into; and proposed contest changes (see the separate sticky thread on that here in Premium, which Sol is still thinking about).
Giving plenty of high-quality reviews to trial/new members is also part of it.
434 2024-07-21 15:45:33
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi Elysse.
If you see draft in red on a previously started inline review, the way to access it is from the Inline Posted tab of the My Reviews screen. Go to your home page and, below your picture, click on New Inline Review Replies. You should see it listed there, marked as draft. From there, you can open it and resume reviewing. It's a goofy place to have to look for it. The question comes up a lot. I'll add it to the list of issues for Sol.
The best way to prevent new reviewers from reading your story is to put a BIG NOTE in the content summary for your book and/or right at the top of your initial chapter. I just did the same for "The Rise of Connor v1". I replaced the prologue with a big note that asked people not to review it as it will soon be replaced with v2. I also made all the early chapters (1-15) inactive, to further reduce the chance of anyone new accidentally reviewing it.
Please let me know if you need any help with the latter. It involves some of the lesser used functionality of the Edit wizard but is fairly straightforward to do. I'll post your suggestions to the ongoing maintenance and minor enhancement threads in the Premium forum.
Thanks
Dirk
435 2024-07-18 23:51:56
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Following are the bugs extracted from our Bugs & Maintenance Requests thread that ought to be fixed before the next influx of trial users (preferably before the start of the contests):
1. Label changes on the Quickee interface to prevent new users from leaving themselves quickees that then, naturally, never get answered. See bottom of page 1 of the Bugs & Maintenance Requests thread for details/solution.
2. Label changes needed to prevent users from accidentally creating new books when they intended to add a chapter to an existing book; see my post timestamped 2024-05-19 03:24:56 on page 2 of the Bugs & Maintenance thread for details and the suggested solution (ignore the discussion about this problem that followed the post)
3. Security certificate complaints from my security software (Bitdefender) when clicking the links in TNBW-generated emails. This problem applies to every type of email notification I've received recently (received a TNBW message from another member, received an inline review from another member, and so-and-so has published a new posting); see my post timestamped 2024-04-13 04:15:10 on page 2 of the Bugs & Maintenance Requests thread, as well as the post right after it for details
4. Frequent timeouts while using the forums will log the user out of the site; if the user was writing a new forum post, that one will be lost (even the back button on the Chrome browser won't take you back to it); if the user was replying to an existing forum thread, the reply will be appended to the intended thread, after which the site kicks you out; this doesn't just happen to me; one new user mentioned it to me a while ago, so it probably affects anyone who writes long forum threads (I use the forums for brainstorming related to my books, so those can be quite lengthy)
5. Leaving a closing comment on an inline review with no inline comments in the body of the review confuses the site; the only way to see and access that review is via the usual email sent out by the system to the recipient of the review; once that email gets deleted, access to the review is lost for good; it's unlikely to be happening a lot, although it can be prevented entirely by the site not allowing the user to save an inline review with no inline comments
EDITs:
6. Would it be possible to change the red "draft" label that members see if they have a draft review already in progress for someone else's chapter/story to a button? I've yet to encounter a new user who knows how to find their draft review(s) as it's simply not obvious. Even long-term members sometimes forget where to look. Elysse ran into this most recently. Either that, or add a tooltip to the red "draft" label of where to find it (Home Page->New Inline Review Replies).
436 2024-07-18 02:50:20
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Okay, last one:
- psychiatrists will be brain-masters
- a psychiatric ward will be either a brainial ward or a brain-mastering ward; I lean toward the latter; makes the terminology more consistent
EDIT: Brain-mastering ward is way too long (I use it a lot), so brain-masters and brainial ward win.
My thanks to all.
Dirk
437 2024-07-17 23:13:10
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I googled for famous psychiatrists and there was virtually no one in the list that most people would recognize, certainly not more so than Freud. Barring some inspired term better than brainial, I'm going to go with the latter. Kind of plain but needs little to no explanation.
I'm curious, why do you suggest brainial ward instead of brainial unit?
438 2024-07-17 12:24:59
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Kdot, how do you feel about shrinkers and master-shrink? I tried both (and brainial) but found they were too bland. Hence the reason I'm looking for something sexier. Unlike other sci-fi stories, mine is a demented space opera with no need to remain 100% serious. In fact, going against norms is a hallmark of this story.
Admittedly calling them tsantsas requires a little setup, but all of the setup I've done for other names I've toyed with was indirect: the shrinks are addressed as doctors, Joseph is at the hospital because his parents fear a mental health problem, he's taken to a "branial" unit and is asked whether he considers himself mentally ill, he's placed in a rubber room, his clothes are taken away because someone suicidal could commit suicide using just clothes, and he's at the hospital to evaluate whether he has Archangel Syndrome.
Now, Joseph is not suicidal, but the head shrink takes away the clothes of all new patients to pressure them to cooperate with whatever tests and treatments are deemed appropriate. Joseph has been promised that he'll be given something to wear "soon" as long as he continues to cooperate. Also, he'll be allowed to contact his parents "in a few days" if he continues to cooperate.
In theory, that could allow me to use any of the terms discussed in my previous post (I realized that after posting), but tsantsas are a cool Easter egg in that they are, literally, shrunken heads. Admittedly, it requires a few brain cells to connect the shrunken heads of head hunters with shrinks, but once you've got it, it becomes obvious why this crazy story would use such an odd term for its psychiatrists.
A bit of trivia: There were two real-life cases in the not too distant past where patients hung themselves with just their underwear.
439 2024-07-17 08:48:43
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The main reason for Freudian was simply name recognition. It doesn't mean that in 4017 they'll agree with his beliefs and methods.
I previously considered shrinker, master-shrink, pill-shrinks, and talk-shrinks but didn't like any of them.
I reread some of the internet writings about Kafka. My favorite is this: ''Kafkaesque'' means ''having a nightmarishly complex, bizarre, or illogical quality." Not sure how I would explain how his name became the future term for psychiatrist. Interestingly, Kafka died of tuberculosis at a fairly young age.
This one looks good, but virtually no one will have heard of him: Philippe Pinel is often considered the "father of modern psychiatry." He is most famous for his humane treatment of the mentally ill, as well as his contributions to the diagnosis and treatment of mental disorders. Among other things, he advocated not using chains on the mentally ill. Apparently shrinks of the past needed to be told this? Wow! His work paved the way for modern psychotherapy.
Given how kooky my book is, including a number of its memorable characters, I'd like to find a way to get Pinel's name in the book in some meaningful way. Having psychiatrists called Pinels (or something similar) would probably cause nothing but confusion, though. I could perhaps change the Brainial Unit to the Pinel Unit and leave it to readers to google. Meh.
An article on Bettelheim by one of his former patients/students pretty much paints him as an idiotic dick. He's worse than the head shrink of the Brainial Unit where Joseph is trapped.
I didn't read anything that would suggest why some variant of Sacks would be the word for shrink in the far future. Clearly a smart man and a significant contributor to the field, but if readers of my book were to google his name, they'd be scratching their heads as to why I chose his name. Still, future psychiatrists could then be called Sacksons.
Tzan-Tzas is a strong contender. I'd have to get across that these doctors are shrinks, but the reader would have to google the rest. That's the term for the shrunken heads produced by natives of the Amazon region who once practiced head hunting.
Brainial remains the boring fallback term.
440 2024-07-16 15:56:06
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Quick survey for anyone who cares to vote:
- psychiatric wards in the year 4017 are referred to as brainial units, and psychiatrists are referred to as Freudians, which is also the name of the above noted chapter
- the other option is to call the psychiatrists brainials
- brainials would be a reasonable choice if all of this were to be taken seriously; Freudians seems a little odd, so it may be a better choice in this case
Any preferences?
441 2024-07-16 15:34:31
Re: Spammer has joined - Please delete them (61 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Bill. They're gone.
442 2024-07-16 08:02:54
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You mean live to the end of the book or to the end of this nonstop chapter ("The Freudians")? No one dies in the chapter as it's more of a character development chapter for Joseph. I also introduced a young nurse named Catherine in it who is now among my favorite characters. She becomes somewhat like an older sister to Joseph. I'm considering punting other characters, so I can make room for her in the rest of the book. She's much more real than either Princess Stephanie (doormat) or Eve (Joseph's ex-doormat). As written, though, the chapter belongs at the end of act one, not the beginning of act two.
I have a similar problem brewing with Apollo's first chapter in act two, although not with regard to length but rather the fact that it doesn't really belong in act two either. It's an assassination attempt against the Imperial Family, staged by Nero to rally the support of the ruling elite, who are beginning to sour on his rule. The assassination attempt is where Caligula loses half his face. That's a great chapter to close out Apollo's first act, not to open the second ("The Young Leaders' Conference").
I think if I choose a moment of maximum danger to both Apollo and Joseph in their respective chapters above, then I could end act one on a cliffhanger for each of them. At that point, it seems more reasonable to wrap up those two chapters as the first pair of act two.
I'm still wondering if "The Freudians" is too weird compared to the rest of the book, though. Joseph is pretty much naked the whole chapter, and it gets stranger from there, although I think it all makes sense given the circumstances, some of which you don't realize until near the end of the chapter, when a few secrets are revealed. Terry seemed to like it; he said he hopes Catherine and Joseph will eventually get together, although it won't be that simple since Joseph is supposed to be coming to terms with being gay, and there is Christian, his intended love interest, to deal with. I could shift it, though, and make him bisexual if need be.
443 2024-07-16 04:28:53
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
One possibility is to make half of it wrap up act 1 and the other half the second chapter of act 2 (Apollo is up first in act 2 since Joseph closed act 1).
444 2024-07-16 04:26:03
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Yikes. My first act's final chapter, which was "in excess of 30 pages", has mushroomed even further to 38 pages. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with this bad boy. I'm not going to change it now, but I clearly have to do something with it eventually to hack it down to size (e.g., 20 pages or less is reasonable for this book's chapter lengths). That's a lot to cut!
I suppose I could treat it like a tie-in for the book, and use the tie-in to give a detailed version of the trimmed version in the book.
445 2024-07-13 00:32:43
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi Marilyn,
As ornery and sassy as you are, you'll probably outlive me - Ha!
And me! LOL
446 2024-07-13 00:29:04
Re: Proposed Ideas for Contests Moving Forward (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I learned how important it is to moderate feedback to new/newer members until you know if they have a thick enough skin. I scared off someone once with 100+ comments. My bad. For most new members these days, when I find a lot to comment on, my first comment is usually words to the effect that some/many/most comments are just suggestions. The other thing I've also done at times is to highlight the most important stuff and offer to do another review if they want even more detail.
447 2024-07-12 21:36:35
Topic: Proposed Ideas for Contests Moving Forward (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Marilyn and I have been going back and forth for a couple of days trying to figure out how to improve retention of new members who may be attracted to the site by contests.
All of what follows is open to discussion, but it also depends on what Sol believes is both wise and possible for him to do. We've tried to focus contest entry requirements to things that can be checked manually in the system to avoid the need for software development for contests.
Strongest Start: Although we discussed Strongest Start (SS), we need to attract members more quickly than that in the short term. We also discussed scaling back future SS contests so they could be done more often (e.g., limit entries to one per member, which focuses the contest on members submitting what they think is their highest quality entry, rather than on the number of entries per entrant; this also seems more fair). The upper word count should be limited to something sane, both for the sake of the judges and to encourage entrants to say more with less.
Contest-Related Suggestions
- more (regularly occurring) contests, especially in the short term; shorter contests with criteria that are easy on the judges (e.g., shorter word count, one entry per member, shorter contest window)
- contest entrants should be premium members at least on the day the contest closes (requires checking every entrant's membership status on the day the contest closes; this can be done manually); this requirement may limit how many outsiders are willing to enter contests, so it may not be a good idea; perhaps the membership requirement should be limited to Strongest Start, which has bigger prizes
- every prize for every contest should include free premium membership of some length for the winners and runners up; that reduces the actual cash cost of prizes for Sol and focuses the prizes on membership (one hopes people will stick around longer once having been a member); some (many?) contests might only offer membership, no cash, to keep costs down even more
- the contests should be advertised outside of TNBW (even if only on Booksie) so we get plenty of outside entries
- a key rule of the contests (ideally any contest going forward) should be that entrants have to do a certain number of "legitimate" reviews (5? 10? more?) of posted works on the site within the contest window; this forces those who are entering to do more than submit an entry; since reviewing styles differ, we could simply define legitimate as any review that meet's the site's basic requirements to pay points (i.e., 5 inline comments+closing comment OR a 50-word regular review)
- it seems like it would make sense to only check the posted reviews of potential winners to ensure they met the contest criteria and that their comments are real (as opposed to someone who enters bogus comments to pad their reviews); if one or more of the potential winners are disqualified, whoever is judging the contest would have to select additional potential winners to replace those who were disqualified; checking reviews can be done manually, so no software development is required
- we could also have somewhat harder contests requiring more reviews and more inline comments/longer regular reviews; this ought to encourage members entering the contest to improve their reviewing skills
EDITs:
- One more idea that came to mind might be contests that are open only to trial/new members, with the rest of us focused on reviewing their entries before the contest deadline.
Questions (for Sol):
- how do we avoid getting hit by large numbers of spam entries? Or is that something we even have to worry about?
- how do we avoid getting flooded with outside entries? Should the contest be limited to the first N entries?
- is it possible for Basic members to give and receive inline reviews? if they can, I'd suggest let them enter at least some of the contests since it would require them to use the review system here (regardless of how many points they have!) and have at least some interactions with existing members and the writing on this site as part of the contests
Marilyn, did I forget anything?
Thanks
Dirk
448 2024-07-12 00:56:07
Re: VQF (44 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nice, although Linear is kind of boring, but for all I know, it could be important to include it in the name.
449 2024-07-11 16:51:20
Re: Migrating from TNBW to Booksie - closed for now; see inside (50 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This topic is closed for the time being while we focus on trying to revive TNBW, the discussions for which will be documented in the Reviving TNBW thread.
450 2024-07-11 16:23:34
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Copied from the Migrating to Booksie thread:
Keep in mind, 10 points yields many fewer reviews for trial users these days than it used to. If, instead, they get to post three chapters or stories, they may get more reviewers overall or the same reviewers multiple times. Either would help.
I think those of us sufficiently motivated to keep the site alive will simply have to do more reviewing of new users, at least until there are many more reviewers to share the load. With a 30-day trial, we can, hopefully, work them into our workloads.Also, we all should point trial/new users at a forum post entitled "How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing" that we put together a couple of years ago about things users can do to increase the number of reviews they receive. I put it back up after the crash (thank goodness for the Way Back Machine!). I made it sticky in both Premium and in Writing Tips & Site Help in case anyone wants to have a look and give me additional feedback.