I'm closing this thread for the time being in favor of another I posted called Reviving TNBW.

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

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Sol wrote:

Hi Dirk,

Thanks to you and everyone else for those suggestions. I'm open to keeping TNBW going in its current form but agree there need to be some changes. I can make all of the changes you suggested. They are all relatively easy to implement. I do wonder if 30 days is too long but let's see. I also wonder if 30 points might be too much for the community to handle. Members will be posting but not receiving as much feedback. Especially if the ration is also decreased. The net effect of this will be to suck reviews out of the system. But maybe we need to get more people posting first and then we can dial back the points.

Let's also plan to launch a contest. If anyone has thoughts, let me know. Maybe a short story contest based on an image? Those have always been popular.

Sol

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

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Dirk wrote:

Thanks, Sol. As I mentioned in my first post, it was my understanding that you didn't feel you could keep running both sites indefinitely.

Combine that with the fact that the New Books (new chapters) scroll is virtually at a standstill, and that we keep losing long-term members without converting new ones to permanent membership, something has to change. Add in the lack of bug fixes (not many needed), minor enhancements (even fewer needed), and quick turnaround time for user support, and there's no obvious way to hang on to trial users. Contests may help, but to the best of my knowledge, we've kept almost no one who joined following the last one. Naturally the crash cost us users as well, but the trickle out has continued since then. And the more experienced users (among the best reviewers / mentors) we lose, the less value-add we have to offer over bigger sites, including Booksie.

I don't know yet which extra support functions you're going to transition to me, but I hoped we'd find a way to transition user support (or at least make me a first contact for the easy stuff, and I could escalate to you if I don't have the ability to help them).

The rest is out of my control, although I've been discussing with other members what we could change to gain and keep more users. In addition to the things above, it includes policy changes you didn't want to make in the past (e.g., a 30-day trial so people really get to know us and the site before being asked to pay money, 30 points up front so trial users can post roughly 3 chapters and get reviews (to assess the quality of them and compare themselves to those reviewers) before they're forced to do them too (which can be quite intimidating), and making it easier for everyone to gain points or spend fewer points). Those of us who have been around a long time (not many left) have enough points to post War & Peace several times over, so it would most help new/newer users to make it easier to gain points to post.

As we all know, the real way to succeed on this site is to develop and maintain a network of reciprocal reviewers, and you can't do that unless you get to know people here and consistently trade reviews with them (something trial users need to understand going in). To do those things, you don't *really* need points. As a result, they're largely irrelevant, so why not make it easier for everyone who needs them to get them?

EDIT: I just checked the ratio of how much it costs to post a work vs. how much that work pays. It's currently 5:1, and Alan some months ago mentioned that it seemed like it took more effort (points) to post after the crash. Sol once told us in the forums (some years back) that he thought it was 4:1. Since the feed of new work is at a standstill and most people have left, why don't we overcompensate and make it 3:1?

Marilyn and I were just talking about a system yesterday that has a ratio of roughly 3:1 (3 points to post a piece of writing of any size, 1-2 points paid to each reviewer depending on length of review, although, I believe, full points are only paid for a short time (maybe a week?) while the posted piece is in an active queue; after that it pays less. But their "inline" comment system is a joke/painful compared to ours. Still, they claim that 85 users were on the site when I checked (no clue if they count those who are always logged in) and 650 the day before.


Why not lure some of that traffic this way, with a great up front trial, faster support, timely fixes/minor tweaks, a terrific inline comment system, and a points system that is less onerous than others? Add some advertising from Sol and a few contests, and if the site still doesn't pick up, then we can at least say we did everything we could. I'd be very surprised if the above changes didn't have a strong positive impact on permanent membership.

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(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

This thread is to capture posts and discussions related to steps needed to revive the site. I may close the Migrating thread for the time being. Below are a few posts copied over from the Migrating thread, including some of the things Sol has indicated can be done relatively easily. Naturally, time is of the essence.


EDIT: This is the old reviving thread. I renamed it to reflect where we are in this process. Also, I added a post for Sol at the end of this thread today (Saturday, August 31).

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(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Awesome idea: I can replace Princess Stephanie (a doormat) with Nurse Catherine in the second act (the young leaders conference), and replace Paul Highlander, Joseph's 2nd cousin and best friend, who travels with him to Earth, in the third act. It's too bad about Paul since that reduces him to a short appearance in act 1 (he's present at the parade square massacre). But I can make Catherine be his older sister. That allows me to bring her into the story several times, and tie her to Paul, who is otherwise this unrelated character. Paul can come back for the dogfights in the final battle, while Catherine would accompany Joseph and Christian onboard Lupus's flagship to capture it from within. She could have training as a military medic, who accompany each raider's combat team when they board enemy vessels.

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(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

The final chapter(s) of act one are done. Technically it's one huge chapter, but I posted it in three parts. Now that I've cleaned it up, the dialogue and scenes are much more appropriate to the story of Joseph in a psych ward. Still has him naked, but the focus is on the relationship between him and the nurse. Terry liked their dynamic enough, he wants to see them get together as lovers at some point in the future. I feel the same way, but book one of this trilogy really has no good way way to slip her in given where the story is going. It also blows up the whole arc of Joseph coming to terms with his homosexuality, although I could have him conclude he's probably gay in book 1, then bring Catherine (the nurse) back in book 2, where he realizes he's actually bisexual.

The odds of finishing book 1? Slim.
The odds of writing book 2? Not a hope in hell if I want to finish the Connor trilogy.
Still, act 1 is now complete. I think I'll celebrate with a high fiber brownie. tongue
On to Connor v2...

I'll scroll back through maintenance and minor enhancement requests and pull out the easy wins for review in this thread before finalizing it for Sol.

Keep in mind, 10 points yields many fewer reviews for trial users these days than it used to. If, instead, they get to post three chapters or stories, they may get more reviewers overall or the same reviewers multiple times. Either would help.


I think those of us sufficiently motivated to keep the site alive will simply have to do more reviewing of new users, at least until there are many more reviewers to share the load.
With a 30-day trial, we can, hopefully, work them into our workloads.


Also, we all should point trial/new users at a forum post entitled "How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing" that we put together a couple of years ago about things users can do to increase the number of reviews they receive. I put it back up after the crash (thank goodness for the Way Back Machine!). I made it sticky in both Premium and in Writing Tips & Site Help in case anyone wants to have a look and give me additional feedback.

Dirk

Thanks, Sol. As I mentioned in my first post, it was my understanding that you didn't feel you could keep running both sites indefinitely.

Combine that with the fact that the New Books (new chapters) scroll is virtually at a standstill, and that we keep losing long-term members without converting new ones to permanent membership, something has to change. Add in the lack of bug fixes (not many needed), minor enhancements (even fewer needed), and quick turnaround time for user support, and there's no obvious way to hang on to trial users. Contests may help, but to the best of my knowledge, we've kept almost no one who joined following the last one. Naturally the crash cost us users as well, but the trickle out has continued since then. And the more experienced users (among the best reviewers / mentors) we lose, the less value-add we have to offer over bigger sites, including Booksie.

I don't know yet which extra support functions you're going to transition to me, but I hoped we'd find a way to transition user support (or at least make me a first contact for the easy stuff, and I could escalate to you if I don't have the ability to help them).

The rest is out of my control, although I've been discussing with other members what we could change to gain and keep more users. In addition to the things above, it includes policy changes you didn't want to make in the past (e.g., a 30-day trial so people really get to know us and the site before being asked to pay money, 30 points up front so trial users can post roughly 3 chapters and get reviews (to assess the quality of them and compare themselves to those reviewers) before they're forced to do them too (which can be quite intimidating), and making it easier for everyone to gain points or spend fewer points). Those of us who have been around a long time (not many left) have enough points to post War & Peace several times over, so it would most help new/newer users to make it easier to gain points to post.

As we all know, the real way to succeed on this site is to develop and maintain a network of reciprocal reviewers, and you can't do that unless you get to know people here and consistently trade reviews with them (something trial users need to understand going in). To do those things, you don't *really* need points. As a result, they're largely irrelevant, so why not make it easier for everyone who needs them to get them?

EDIT: I just checked the ratio of how much it costs to post a work vs. how much that work pays. It's currently 5:1, and Alan some months ago mentioned that it seemed like it took more effort (points) to post after the crash. Sol once told us in the forums (some years back) that he thought it was 4:1. Since the feed of new work is at a standstill and most people have left, why don't we overcompensate and make it 3:1?

Marilyn and I were just talking about a system yesterday that has a ratio of roughly 3:1 (3 points to post a piece of writing of any size, 1-2 points paid to each reviewer depending on length of review, although, I believe, full points are only paid for a short time (maybe a week?) while the posted piece is in an active queue; after that it pays less. But their "inline" comment system is a joke/painful compared to ours. Still, they claim that 85 users were on the site when I checked (no clue if they count those who are always logged in) and 650 the day before.


Why not lure some of that traffic this way, with a great up front trial, faster support, timely fixes/minor tweaks, a terrific inline comment system, and a points system that is less onerous than others? Add some advertising from Sol and a few contests, and if the site still doesn't pick up, then we can at least say we did everything we could. I'd be very surprised if the above changes didn't have a strong positive impact on permanent membership.

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(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I don't know how much effort it would take to keep it running in pure maintenance mode, and I don't have the required skills for development of bug fixes and minor enhancements for this site's technology. We would probably need a small number of minor changes to make the site more likely to attract and keep new users. And those would have to be done quickly, before we lose any more members.

Plus, I'd rather write. smile

yup, he's gone

Gone and gone. Thanks

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(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Quite a bit of fizzling, and then a lot of people didn't come back after the crash, so we're on life support. I'm looking at Booksie (our sister site, also run by Sol) to see if it could be a viable alternative for us since the New Books (chapters) section on the home page here has come to a virtual standstill. Booksie is very similar to TNBW, but is actively maintained with new/more features, minor enhancements, bug fixes, etc. And more users! TNBW, while still a great site (I prefer the look and feel of TNBW over Booksie), has been mostly in maintenance mode for a couple of years. Sol simply doesn't have the time to keep both sites going indefinitely. I'm going to be taking over some of the easy admin/support tasks later this month from him to give him a break. I'd love to revive this site, but it would remain in maintenance mode since Sol simply doesn't have the time to build features for both sites.

Got 'em. Thanks, Bill.

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(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hi Suin.

Welcome back. Yes, we did a group cleanup after the servers were restored following the crash in October 2023. One of the steps we did was to request input from everyone on the site as to which groups members were still using and wanted retained. The final list of groups to be deleted, merged, and retained was then announced repeatedly well before any changes were made. The groups you see in the system right now are those that survived, give or take any one offs anyone may have created in the meantime ("The custom Military velcro Patches Group" is probably spam and will be removed; the creator was a trial member who never became permanent).

Dirk

Thanks, Bill. What do you do in response to the fluff reviewers. Do you review their work anyway?

Bill, a few more questions for you, if I may: Do you primarily post to the main house on Booksie? Roughly what kind of response do you get in terms of actionable reviews vs fluff? How do you deal with the fluff reviewers? Do they generally expect you to read their stories in return for a "Good job!" from them? I'm curious how you deal with them, and how many you generally encounter for a given piece of posted writing (e.g., a new chapter or new short story). Do the fluff reviews tend to number in the single digits, low double digits, or higher? And have you built up a fan base with whom you regularly trade helpful reviews?

Thanks
Dirk

Booksie doesn't require points to post your writings, Dagny. Yes, we're all going to lose a lot of points if we go elsewhere, but they're not needed if we're able to make the transition to Booksie work, which at this point, seems likely, with a few issues (one of them huge) that I need to speak to Sol about.

Have a look at my last post right above yours (ignore the first sentence). It surprised me at first that Booksie has no points system, but the longer I thought about it, the more I realized that, at least for us, a points system is irrelevant. We trade reviews with one another and would surely continue to do so even if the points system on TNBW disappeared tomorrow. I have a lifetime supply of points, so I don't need to collect them anymore, but the real reason I read the writing of the folks left here is because I know they'll do the same for me and because I've known you all so long and enjoy helping you get your work published.

Have a look at my post at the top of this page. I really don't think we need points. If we're in a group of advanced (serious) writers, we just trade reviews as we would anyway with a points system. It's not going to change how often I review Jack or MJ or you.

A points system might encourage beginners to do a certain minimum amount of commenting, which could help them learn how to do it well, but they won't be in the Advanced Writers group.

If members of Advanced Writers also want feedback from non-group members (not a bad way to find others to invite into the group, by the way), you can post your work in the main group. Members of Advanced Writers would still find your work as long as you're fans of each other.

That's probably how I'm going to do it because I want to find more readers for Connor v2, especially Catholic/Christian folks, provided I can find some who are conscientious about giving helpful reviews.

Personally, I don't think it'll be too hard to find other reviewers to give or at least try to give helpful reviews. There will be people who aren't interested in doing the extra work, which is fine.

My own past experience on TNBW, though, is that if they're interested in receiving ongoing helpful feedback from me, they'll realize (or I'll simply tell them) I'm looking for reciprocal reviewers who at least "try" to provide helpful reviews similar to those I try to leave for them.

The barter system; no currency (points) required. smile

Hi Dagny. Wow!  200 is impressive.

That kind of information is very helpful. Who knows? Maybe there's something Sol can do to automate a transfer of works like yours. Do you have an offline backup? Please say yes. smile

By the way, Sol's been on vacation, which is probably why he hasn't commented.

Your don't have to worry about banking information. There are too few of us left to make an automated account transfer worth doing. It would take much longer to code and test than it would for the rest of us to simply go to Booksie, open an account, and repost our work. Yours appears to be one of the exceptions because 200 is a lot.

Have you ever been able to back up your poems en masse onto a thumb drive? Just curious.

As noted in my original post, Sol hasn't made a decision as to an end date for TNBW, but he doesn't have the time to keep running both indefinitely. Unfortunately, we're not converting enough (any?) new users to replace the folks who've left, and as a result, the site is at a virtual standstill, at least as far as book chapters is concerned.

Are new poems still being posted in any significant numbers by others besides yourself?

I'll be taking over some of the admin and maintenance tasks from him in the coming weeks, but I have neither the full skills nor time to take care of the whole system. And as you may have noticed, we're not getting bug fixes or minor enhancements, to say nothing of the implementation of new features like those he's built/building for Booksie.

Right now, this is fact gathering mode. Given how similar the two systems are, the obvious place for us to go is Booksie, but there are issues that need to be addressed as discussed in this thread. Hopefully, it's just a matter of getting questions answered re how best to do things on Booksie (eg how to prevent exposure of our work to the internet since that would be a show stopper).

There is a TNBW group on Booksie that we should all join so we can find each other over there (user ids may be different). Sol's most recent post on this site (the reminder about the free year on Booksie) includes a link at the top of the thread to that group on Booksie. Be sure to add yourself as a member, otherwise you'll never find it again (it's private).

The most obvious workflow for us on Booksie is an Advanced Writers group of our own as discussed in this thread. I'm trying to work out the details of how and whether that will work, and a list of issues/questions I can take to Sol.

Please keep your feedback coming.

Gone and gone. Thanks, Bill.

Yikes! I have a note in to Sol about this.

Marilyn Johnson wrote:

Sorry, I can't help... it's all Greek to me. I tried to leave a review for someone over there, and their chapter was quite long, so I wanted to copy and paste it into a Word document so I could make the type larger (bad vision and old age go together, but since I'm neither...), but the system wouldn't let me copy it.


Use your browser's zoom capability. I just tested zooming on a Booksie chapter and it worked very well. The only thing you might find from time to time is that clicking to open an inline comment box sometimes puts the box a little too far to the right, so the far right of the box appears cut off, but if you type beyond the end of what's visible in the comment box, the (Chrome) browser scrolls to the right, and you'll see the whole text box.


Maybe if they had to write a minimum of 50 words like we do here.


Awesome idea.



Maybe if they ... worked on a point system like we do here...


I thought so too initially, but after thinking about it for a while, I realized it shouldn't be needed.

The inline reviews of people who just want to pat each other on the back are unlikely to improve much by forcing them to leave 5 comments. We've all had reviews over the years where someone was clearly just making 5 (relatively useless) comments to get the points.

The inline reviews of conscientious people will be conscientious regardless of points. I would include under conscientious those new members who are honestly trying but don't have a lot of experience doing actionable reviews. Also folks who are generally great reviewers but can't find anything helpful to say once in a while.

The best inline reviews are those we trade with other experienced writers/reviewers who'll read our stories through to the end. All that's required for that to work is connections (or fans), to establish a network of reciprocal reviewers.

And that eliminates the need to constantly scrounge for points! I'll bet Terry would love that!

I messaged him this morning. No answer yet. I have his email address, so I'll try that next.

Gone! Thanks