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Sol, any idea why this bug keeps coming back?

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Dirk

Found it. You actually have to open one of your posted works to see it.
My user id is Dirk B. same as on TNBW.

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Dirk

Yeah, I'm coming around to that conclusion too. I already have a hard enough time finding stuff for Antonio to do. Add a dog, and the chapters will either grow longer or everyone else gets less screen time. As is, I already have to add a few paragraphs in later Holy Land chapters to incorporate Connor's groupies, who chase after him from place to place to see him perform miracles and post the videos/pics online.

The battle between good and evil animals will definitely be included, though. I'm almost certainly going to add an extra murder in Rome, which allows for a few extra chapters in the Holy Land to visit areas where Jesus went but Connor didn't. The all out Watership Down-like battle will go into one of the new chapters near the end of the trip.

I thought of a great addition to the Holy Land chapters. Since Connor is frequently attacked by and/or saved by animals, I figure it should build to an all-out battle between dark animals, who bow to Satan, and light animals, who defend "Christ".

The dark animals are easy since they can each be possessed by a demon who know how to drive the animals into an attack. They do that with the hyenas at Capernaum. The light animals is trickier since Connor is the AC, not Christ. He can definitely make himself liked by animals, which he did a few times in the first draft. In fact, the whites doves even came to his rescue when he was attacked by the wild cat at the baptism site. Ditto for when the pratincoles saved the group from the demonic locusts.

It does beg the question how is Connor able to steer an entire army of animals to defend him? Obviously, he can't be in all their heads at once. The best way, which I think is already implied by the pratincoles and doves, is for him to be able to give off some "good" vibe that brings the unpossessed animals to his defense. I can also use some of the animals in the final battle of book 3.

I'm also thinking of giving Connor a dog throughout the trip in book 1. But I need to figure out what major contribution it can make to the story beyond merely giving a sick kid a dog, although it could reinforce the image of Connor as a sweet kid if his dog adores him. I doubt pets are allowed at the Western Wall in Jerusalem, though, not to mention at other tourist attractions, and in all the churches they visit.

Very cool.

Sol, I retested the points calculation the site does and the ratio is still 5-to-1.

I posted a new book called Points Calc Testing which is 1760 words long according to MS-Word. It cost 5.38 points to post and pays 1.08 for each review. That's still a 5 to 1 ratio, meaning you have to review five 1760-word chapters in order to earn enough points to post 1760 words.

It was supposed to be changed to 3 to 1 to be much easier to encourage trial members to collect points and post. It should also be easier to do than most similar sites to this one, which don't offer an inline review system as good as ours, yet are thriving.

What really matters in the long run is of course the review-trading relationships among authors, not so much the points. If someone is unwilling to do even a few reviews at 3-to-1 to collect points and begin to develop those relationships, then this is not the site for them.

PRIORITY: High. Until this is fixed, we have the same big hurdle in place when trial members are trying to get a feel for the site. This ratio doesn't affect most long-term members since we've accumulated more points than God.

No, the portals and the other worlds are for mortal sinners. They get there via the lake of fire, which is not the case for sinners going to purgatory. Granted, I could just wave my magical fiction wand and make it so, but it seems very clean at present in terms of a reader wrapping their minds around the story, especially a Catholic reader. The more I deviate, the harder it gets for them, and the less they're likely to like the story, imo.

Technically, one doesn't get a glorified body until after the Second Coming, so I guess you're just a disembodied soul waiting in Heaven for the Second Coming. Eve, if you recall, does get her glorified body, so she could be at the center of events to keep an eye on Adam/Connor, although that part of her mission doesn't begin until book 2.

Antonio will be the example of what purgatory is like in this story. It's not truly Catholic, but then not much is known about purgatory. I figure if you want absolution from a priest, you usually need to do some penance. If Antonio wants out of purgatory, he needs to make things right with Romano, which includes telling Romano the truth (that Antonio had already gone to confession prior to being hit by the truck, but he allowed Romano to think he died in a state of mortal sin). I'll treat what he did to Romano as a venial sin.

Antonio will continue to travel with the group like in the first draft, but he also needs to do some good works before he gets out of purgatory. If you recall, he "cured" Connor of the spiritual poison by figuring out the solution and dunking Connor in the Sea of Galilee. Naturally, Connor wasn't actually sick, but Antonio didn't know that. Still, I'll probably make that the last thing he needs to do to complete purgatory, even though Antonio won't know it right away.

So, for some reason, he remains with the group throughout the entire trip. Eventually, he'll get a chance to ask Phanuel what else to do to complete purgatory. He's told he already did complete it, and he may go to Heaven whenever he wishes. But he decides to do a few more good works by staying with Romano to oppose the efforts of the Unholy Trinity. My other option is to simply keep Antonio in the story, while he thinks he's still in purgatory, whereas in reality he cares too much about Romano and Connor that God knew he'd rather stay in purgatory long enough to finish his life's work. He would then find out at the end of book 3 that that's the real reason he's still on Earth.

One thing I'd like to include, though, is the idea that Antonio becomes more and more holy as he does more good works. It's a transformation that would happen automatically. It slowly purges him of sin, so he can go to Heaven, which definitely is Catholic. I just have to be careful that his holiness doesn't ruin him as an interesting character. I figure he can still say sarcastic things without them being sins.

Did I answer your question? :-)

As I try to think through some of the elements of the book that I included in the first draft, I'm having a bit of a problem explaining why the Unholy Trinity (or anyone for that matter, especially the reader) would believe a spiritual poisoning of Christ (from the dagger) is even remotely possible.

In the story it's quite clear in several places that Connor/Christ seems to interact with the Holy Spirit even though Connor has yet to realize who he really is (and for some reason, the HS doesn't tell him). Naturally, all that is made up by Satan & Connor since Connor has never been baptized (not yet, anyway). I could have left that whole element out of the story, but given that other people far less pious than Connor have interacted with the HS in the past (true of both Romano and Campagna), it wouldn't make sense for Connor of all people not to have access to the HS, even though he's faking it.

I suppose I could have it be one of the details of the (fake) wager/challenge. Namely, the fake HS can't tell Connor who he really is (Christ) until the fake Father says so, which happens at the Church of the Holy Sepulcher. Also, it's the reason Christ, an all powerful spirit, doesn't seem able to enter Connor's mind to fully awaken the Christ within him until the climax. In other words, the Father told them both to wait.

Another issue is that the HS withdrew from Romano as part of the rules for the wager. Satan didn't trust the HS not to reveal something to Romano. Similarly, though, shouldn't the HS withdraw from Connor (Christ) for the same reason? As above, Connor fakes the presence of the HS within him, but then shouldn't he pretend that the HS withdrew from him too?

Just to clarify one item, there are actually two wagers in this story: a real one and a fake one. The real one is the decision Connor eventually has to make about whom to destroy (Christ's human half or Satan's De Rosa zombie). The fake wager is that if Christ comes back as a child and is raised by the Catholic Church, Christ will eventually become so disgusted with it, that he will destroy it. Only the fake wager appears throughout most of the book. At the end, Connor reveals the real wager to Campagna, which Connor himself didn't even know until that day.

Sol, I managed to find my inline reviews by looking at the bottom of the chapters. I then went back into the Reviews screen and futzed around with the search/filter control at the top of the inline received tab. No change until I hit the black Reset button. That brings them all back, but they disappear again as soon as I leave/reenter the tab.

I tried deleting my tnbw cookies, but that didn't help. Logged out of the site, closed the tnbw tab, closed the browser, and rebooted the machine. No luck.

One thing I noticed, though, is that, after I hit the Reset button (and all my reviews display again), I can hit the browser's refresh button and that doesn't cause a problem. But, if, after hitting Reset, I click on the inline received tab (the one I'm on), the refresh of that tab causes the reviews to disappear again.

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

PRIORITY: Medium, since this seems to affect only me, and there's a workaround.

Thanks
Dirk

Interesting. I went to look for the missing reviews at the bottom of my chapters, and they're visible from there. Just not from the reviews tab.