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in formal releases, what book do you currently see emerging first?

Don't forget US rules differ slightly from Can/UK

It really made hell seem like a place you wouldn't want to go

Yep!

Inspectors C and R drove in R's A R to X di Y  to see A and B.

That's a very dense sentence. Lots of data packed in a short space. It's not "bad" per se because it gets all the actors on stage, but it catches my eye

Forgot that part like I forgot it states Connor lives

What was the book for your most recent essay?

The bus contention is my fault. As a reader, I invested into a bus trip only to find they got off like two paragraphs later which foiled my investment.

For me a simple "X & Y got off the bus..." is sufficient. Or even "X & Y walked into the Sistine Chapel" which implies they got there somehow.

And yes, Star Wars has been a large bucket of suckery for the past 20 years

Given that I don't remember them and you plan to ditch them, are they needed?

Still fear tho

Ya... you could totes swap chapters 82 and 0. Not joking-- Opening with "This is where we got" closing with "This is how we started". It's not done oftern

My experience, having posted book 4 of 12 is that readers love longer series as long as each release carries weight. One of the biggest complaints about [G u i l d C o d e x] is NOT that there are 3 "added" books (and a spinoff series) but that book 5 of all that didn't have as much development. It means book 5 would be considered as great if it move things along farther/

Therefore, all the part 5... but keep swinging for the fences