corra wrote:

I just finished The Waste Land by T. S. Eliot and a biography on Zora Neale Hurston. Before that I read Long Day's Journey Into Night by Eugene O'Neill. So incredible. I love the crashing in on itself feel of that one. Probably the best play I've ever read. I also read Ariel by Sylvia Plath very recently. Brutal imagery. I think she's my favorite poet.

I'm about to start A Room of One's Own by Virginia Woolf. It's lying open behind me. smile

Large parts of the Wasteland have great word usage...even if the subject matter is sad.

www.gutenberg.org  has O'Neill's The Hairy Ape if you want to read another of his.

Trifles is done both as a story and a play.  The Yellow Wallpaper is one of my favorites.  Is she mad or is he trying to drive her mad. Is John her husband or her doctor.  Fun.
Then you have all the history--of people being told when they had issues to remain calm and rest when now we know exercise helps depression.

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This group never notifies me when you post things....so unless I look I never know there are discussions in any group. sad  So if i miss anything, I'm sorry.

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Dill Carver wrote:

My question is about cans/tins. I’m from the UK but writing some lines featuring a North American male, from Boston.

In terms of tinned (or canned) food or drink would he say;

‘A can of Coke.’ or ‘A tin of Coke.’  ‘Tinned food.’ or ‘Canned food.’ ‘can-opener’ or ‘tin-opener’ or would it even matter i.e. are the two expressions completely interchangeable, neither sounding alien to the American ear?

Thanks in advance, Dill.

In the US?  I have never heard any one use the word tin to refer to cans.

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Neither site is bad.  Both have their pluses and minuses.   I never found the forums on the old site to be an issue.  There were two or three people who could be a pill but I just ignored them until they went away or SOLN made them go away.

I think there are many positives to this new site including the new review options (which took me some time to get use to). 
As for the forums on the new site---well there aren't that many writing discussions going on here or at least that's how it seems.

No worries.  Nothing stays the same forever.
I miss the sense of community but I can survive without it.

smile

T

dagnee wrote:

I think the old site focused too much on what went on in the forums. People got banned from the site simply because they had the poor judgement to post something disagreeable about another member.

I think it would be a mistake to return the focus of this site back to a centralized forum. This is not a social site, it is a writing site whose main purpose is to improve members writing through feedback.

Sol has provided group forums in which you may duplicate the subjects in the old forums, plus a main group forum if you want to post something that reaches every member in the community. If you develop relationships with other writers he has provided several ways besides forums for you to communicate.

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I feel like the new site has no feel of community at all.  I find myself using it less and less as I don't feel connected to anyone anymore.   I miss the forum writing discussions.  Even if I didn't always join into the discussions, I loved reading them whether it was on the oxford comma or a discussion of dialogue.

The new site has many nice features...but a sense of community? No.

Some reviews don't get you points at all.
Others get you a limited amount of points.   I find I have to review 6 to 10 pieces to post a chapter...which I do find annoying but I figured I might just be doing it wrong.

Try writing their dialogue to music that matches their voice.   YOu'll find the 'voice' of the writing adapts to the music.
It's a good way to get dialogue to sound more natural.

So for character 1, I might use a fast jazzy piece because they are a fast talker but still rhythmic.
For character 2, I might use something slower, sweeter---maybe a flute solo.

You can also read the lines outloud in the speed and manner of your character.  Reading aloud can show you when it doesn't work.  But read what you wrote, not what you think you wrote.

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max keanu wrote:

such a tragic event happened in my life, my dear wife of 25 years passed away. i am so devastated, so destroyed... well, even typing this brings me to tears. the light of my life has gone out.

i know that when my senses return to me I will be a new man, I will write again, I will survive, I will dig so much deeper into the writing craft to try to move the emotions of other people.

five years on this site... oh, my friends it has been a lifetime of learning how to write better, understanding how to look deeper into the souls of myself and all the good people here who pour their hearts and souls out.

i am so destroyed. i know that when i find the strength to return to writing you people here will be my collective anchors... because oh my GOD, the tempest is upon me!

I'm so sorry.  Try to remember the things you loved about her because those are the pieces you should hold close.
I really am very sorry for your loss.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

Writer friends, I have a question. My books are for sale on Amazon. Tonight I found out they are also for sale on B & N and AbeBooks.com (Out of the UK). Question--I have not submitted my books to these two entities. How do I ensure I am getting royalties?????

Did you put them on Amazon or your publisher? 
Amazon has an international and other channel options.  These distribute them in a lot of odd places. smile

If it was a publisher, they then probably applied to all major sales groups.

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Nicholas Andrews wrote:

Here's my setup for printing through Createspace, assuming you're asking about self-publishing and not submitting an MSS to an agent/publisher. Some of these things you will want to tweak depending on how many pages you want your book to be. The longer it is, the higher the cost-of-production per paperback will be. My personal goal was to make my paperbacks identical to one you might pull off a shelf at a bookstore.

Page Setup
     Margins
          Top: 0.65''
          Bottom: 0.5" (leaves a little extra space for a page number beneath)
          Inside:  0.65"
          Outside: 0.35"
          Gutter: 0.18" (assures the edge of the page is not lost to the book's inner binding)
              Pages
                 Multiple Pages: Mirror Margins
      Paper
           Paper Size: Custom
                Width: 5.25"
                Height: 8"
(Many use 6x9, but I prefer a smaller size since I find larger books awkward to carry/read)

Paragraph
      Indents and Spacing
            General
                 Alignment: Justified
                 Outline Level: Body Text
            Indentation
                  Left: 0
                  Right: 0
                  Special:  First Line
                  By: 0.25"
            Spacing
                  Before: 0
                  After: 0
                  Line Spacing: Multiple
                  At: 1.05 (gives a little extra space between lines so the text isn't so cramped and is easier to read)

These are just basic text settings. My chosen font was Palatino Linotype, 9.5. You'll also want to learn about page/section breaks and headers/footers (I alternate every other page with author name/title on the top, with the page number on the bottom). I also imitate other standard publishing things like beginning each chapter halfway down a new page, using drop caps, etc. The file I used as reference to this post was 104,000 words and came out to 332 pages in the final product, after inserting title page/dedication/maps and other front and back matter. Like I said, you may wish to play with margins and font size to make your book more cost effective, or to lengthen it if you want it to have more thickness.

THis works for most...however if your book is over 400 pages, you may need to adjust.  Just FYI.

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SolN wrote:

What makes you think you didn't receive your points?

I checked and it looks like you first did an in-line review and received .63 points for it. You then did two reviews withthe following text.

"Mary had a little lamb whose fleas were white as snow and everywhere merry Mary went the lamb was sure to go."

This only has 22 words but even if it was longer you wouldn't receive points again; you already received them for the in-line review. Once  you review a piece, whether in-line or regular you don't receive points again if you do another review. There is no double points for leaving an in-line and regular review.

http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … erse-20080

Is this not the correct scenario? Am I missing something here?

Sol


I believe she only did one regular review...and did not do an in-line review.   She also did more than 22 words on her regular review.

sad

Truth is relative.  You can't write what you don't understand. 
Writers are great researchers,  great at putting ourselves in other people's shoes.   We can take our own experience, our own research and describe events we may not have experience.

I don't know what it's like to shoot someone, freak out and then bury the body in the middle of the night.

But I do know that terrifying feeling of being alone and having someone rattle your door locks.  I have experienced a freak out.   I've snuck out late at night to do things I shouldn't (just not body burying). smile    So I research shooting a gun.  I pace off the logistics in my living room.  I might even take a target shooting lesson. 

I so I combine the things I've experienced personally with what I've researched to create a unique experience.  I'll then run that writing by someone who is familiar with the set of circumstances in real life...and take their feedback and edit the scene again for 'realism'.

So I don't know that specific event...but baby I can fake it with the things I do know combined with what I'm willing to learn.

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Lesley C. Weston wrote:

I posted a short story Turtle Soup and no matter what I try can't get the font to be consistent. What would you suggest? The original doc was consistent.

Go to your start menu.
Open up Notepad.
Copy story into it.
It'll remove all formatting.
Copy again from Notepad.
Paste it to Word.
Highlight all
pick your font

Copy again.
paste into tNBW.

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Spargo Postle wrote:

Hello Bunny, I have missed your writing. So I have come back for more...

Love ya,
Spargo Postle


That's so nice of you!  My poetry is still a little raw but it is getting there.  Closer every year.
smile

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max keanu wrote:
TirzahLaughs wrote:

Nope the worst one was the one I had to make for a person who will remain un-named that involved a male appendage, a smiley face sticker and a piece of bologna wearing a blonde wig.

Did you build this from the double hernia scars picture I posted three years ago? You known, the one with the bunny.

No this was someone who had a guy who was in love with a turtle and a slice of bologna.  I didn't write it...lol...I just made a cover for it.

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Nope the worst one was the one I had to make for a person who will remain un-named that involved a male appendage, a smiley face sticker and a piece of bologna wearing a blonde wig.

As a good friend once said, "Anyone can write but few can write well." 

Welcome bunnY!

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https://www.freelancer.com/hire/Find-a- … id=3200025

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You can work that out with the artists.  A lot of student artists will ask to use it for their portfolio but you'd own it.

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Congrats everyone!

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Well if you are looking for inexpensive, check out students in art school,  hobby illustrators and sometimes you can find affordable people on deviant art.

Love the eyes now.  And better title recognition.

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Hello Bunny,

smile  I love a good thriller.
Like some horror.

WRite whatever.

WELCOME!

T

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I can enhance the amber in the eyes if you want.

T

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