Topic: Not new, but getting old fast!--No points for a regular review
I know more than one person has posted about this, and it's beginning to get old fast. When we take the time to read and do a regular review and don't have the whole review publish and don't get the points for it has become ANNOYING!
I just read "Pristine Universe" by Charles_F_Bell and gave a regular review since there was very little to nit. I got no points and it said I only had 22 words, when in truth it was 198. Below is the review.
2 in 1?
Mary had a little lamb whose fleas were white as snow and everywhere merry Mary went the lamb was sure to go.
Did you mean to say fleas? I think it might be sarcasm from you, but the actual word is fleece.
Call me absolutely nuts, but it seems there were two different stories here. The only connection is the name Joan. I suppose Mike & Misha might be the same person.
First, I thought we were going to have a story of a young man's grief and how he overcame and endured. The beginning is concrete and can be developed into a story of human survival.
Then we get the second part about a race bent on annihilating another and leave some invisible disease behind to do the job. I think that one deserves to be expanded and has a great amount of merit to make Misha a hero that finally restores his world to what it should be, even with its imperfections. This part is abstract, but it too can be developed into a story of human survival
The writing itself is poetic, but I'm a little lost as to the purpose of the story.
198 words