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bimmy wrote:

I hurt my back unloading twenty, 700lb round bales by hand on Saturday. My medication wore off and I keep dreaming I'm writing and trying to incorporate back pain into my MC and it's not working. So I'm writing and erasing, writing and erasing until I wake up in frustration and pain...find a semi comfortable position, go to sleep and repeat. 

Fun night.

Bimmy

Don't erase or delete.  Just keep writing

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Mariana Reuter wrote:

Sol:

I've just received this quickee from the user kine. It stinks of spam a mile away:

"Good day. It’s my pleasure meeting you, and that you enjoying your day? Can you allowed me to introduce my self to you. My name is Kine Gaye . I will like to get acquainted with you. please I'll be glad if you write to me or send your email address direct at my private email address (kinegaye00@hotmail.com) because i have some important thing i will like to discuss with you privately.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kine"

Is there anyway to check it and delete the account if it's not a legitimate one?

Kiss,

Gacela

Yep I received it as well.  Reminded me of spam...I did not reply.

corra wrote:

I'll be looking for Toni Morrison, thanks for that.

I had expected her work to be difficult to get into because most people I know try her novel Beloved first, and have trouble processing it. People seem to either find that book incredible, or frustrating. I'm not sure if that's because of the content or if it's just densely written, like stream of consciousness.

The style in Sula is very approachable. It is told almost orally, it seems. There's an interesting moment where the writing suddenly goes into first person for one of the characters. It's so subtly done you have to reread to notice, yet that single moment within the novel is underlined because of the momentary style change.

Sula is set just after World War I and begins with a veteran returning from the front. The story is about his attempt to cope with the realization that human life is finite and unpredictable and cannot be tidily categorized, but it is mostly told through the perspectives of two women in the town who come to the same realization and have very little to do with him. From early in the novel:

"It was not death or dying that frightened him, but the unexpectedness of both. In sorting it all out, he hit on the notion that if one day a year were devoted to it, everybody could get it out of the way and the rest of the year would be safe and free. In this manner he instituted National Suicide Day.”

There aren't final answers or resolutions in the novel. It's just raw, uncompromising bewilderment, and the desire to find oneself within that. Sula  asks what exactly "good" is. What "love" is. What "peace" is, and some of it is incredibly difficult to read. Not because it's stylistically difficult, but because some of what happens is gruesome and incomprehensible, and Morrison doesn't make it easy to take it in. She doesn't make it pretty. I feel that the novel is like poetry because of that. She shows it to you, but she doesn't tell you how to feel about it.

I think I'll try Beloved soon. I think it's supposed to be her masterpiece:

“She is a friend of my mind. She gather me, man. The pieces I am, she gather them and give them back to me in all the right order.”

“There is a loneliness that can be rocked. Arms crossed, knees drawn up, holding, holding on, this motion, unlike a ship's, smoothes and contains the rocker. It's an inside kind -- wrapped tight like skin. Then there is the loneliness that roams. No rocking can hold it down. It is alive. On its own. A dry and spreading thing that makes the sound of one's own feet going seem to come from a far-off place.”

“Sweet," she thought. "He must think I can't bear to hear him say it. That after all I have told him and after telling me how many feet I have, 'goodbye' would break me to pieces. Ain't that sweet."

This is Morrison talking about Beloved:

“In trying to make the slave experience intimate, I hoped the sense of things being both under control and out of control would be persuasive throughout; that the order and quietude of everyday life would be violently disrupted by the chaos of the needy dead; that the herculean effort to forget would be threatened by memory desperate to stay alive. To render enslavement as a personal experience, language must first get out of the way.”

My library has a copy of Child 44. It's on the way. x

Beloved is a novel where the past, present and future all blend together.  It's not linear. It's has stream of consciousness in it.  It has a ghost.  It gets you all tangled up.  If you want to read Toni Morrison, do not start with that book or you'll be in a lot of pain.  Although the book has moments of beauty and terror, ghosts and love---it's for a reader who wants be consumed with a book.  Being consumed by it is the only way to read it.   Most need a softer intro to the author.  This is not a book for a casual reader.

smile You have to live in that book, wear it like a second skin --bleed a little.  I think you will like it Corra, as you would be one who would be willing to make the commitment it requires.  It does have beautiful pockets through it.

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I find Texas is often it's own entity in all things.   Even the company I work for publishes Texas specific editions of things...as things are always different in Texas. smile  And California.

I'm stuck in Kentucky myself.  As I do not care for Appalachian stories, mountain stories or related items...I usually steer clear of anything with the word Kentucky on it.

But I wish you luck.

smile

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Welcome.

I'm more of a:
http://dailypicksandflicks.com/wp-conte … ng-dog.jpg
Tirzah


I see Cora as more of an active go sort of dog.
http://www.50-best.com/images/cute_dog_ … zy_dog.jpg
Pretty but full of bounce. smile Cora

And Dill...your pick misses you 'style'.

https://images.search.yahoo.com/yhs/sea … tion=click  DILL

smile))

The best conversation I had all week was with the dog.  That he is both deaf and nearly blind helped tremendously.  I felt he understood my point completely.  And is that we all want?  To be understood.  And chocolate. I do want chocolate...and air conditioning.

smile

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bimmy wrote:

I have a friend thinking about joining but she writes erotica mainly. I don't see much here and I can't remember that there ever was much in the past. Would anyone even review it?

Bimmy

I've written erotica and read it.  It depends on the type.  There are huge variations.
Some I like. Some I hate.

T

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MrsPiddles wrote:

I need the name of a well known cartoon character - one that young children will know - that has spiky hair, like a hedge hog. I decided to write a picture book for my granddaughter, 4 y/o who grew her first sunflower this year. The bugger topped out at 9.5 feet tall and the center (where the seeds are) is almost a foot across! I'm using the photos my daughter in law has posted to Facebook. I'll make this book a Christmas present or something. This name will be something she says when she first discovers the new bud. A sunflower bud is really spiky, like our old hedge hog cartoon characters. I'm so far out of touch with what kids are watching these days I don't even know where to start!

Thanks tons

Fuzz
Wilding
Speck
Leaf--which can sound like Lief...:)
Thistle

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MrsPiddles wrote:
TirzahLaughs wrote:
MrsPiddles wrote:

So good to know. But I had to learn the hard way to get a sample before paying any money. Not many young people or adult horse people like the cover for my first book, The Black Pony. The poor horse looks like he's about to fall over - to say nothing of the ridiculous expression on his face. And the artist refused to make any changes without more money. This cost nearly $300, and it's all clip art.
https://www.amazon.com/Black-Pony-Adven … 00DD8NKQM/

I have a free how-to guide on how to make your own ebook cover without photoshop.  If you want the instructions, I'm happy to share them.

Tirazh, I'd love to see that guide. I'm trying to figure out how to format some photos for a picture book as well. It will be a little gift for my granddaughter who is just 5. She finally got her way this year and got to grow sunflowers. They reached 9 feet tall. The book will be "Layla's Big Big Flower"

For photos, I've had the best luck converting them into PDFS and then inserting them into the WORD DOCUMENT...but I'm sure there are easier ways.  If you have something like IN DESIGN it's easier. 

But I'm happy to help you if you want---free.

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Ann Everett wrote:

Tirzah,
That would be wonderful! Thanks so much. ~Ann

http://hubpages.com/literature/Create-Y … -Photoshop

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Ann Everett wrote:

Tirzah,
That would be wonderful! Thanks so much. ~Ann

It's really only good for ebook covers but it works.

Let me pull it for you.

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MrsPiddles wrote:
Ann Everett wrote:

but book covers need someone with a graphic design program.

So good to know. But I had to learn the hard way to get a sample before paying any money. Not many young people or adult horse people like the cover for my first book, The Black Pony. The poor horse looks like he's about to fall over - to say nothing of the ridiculous expression on his face. And the artist refused to make any changes without more money. This cost nearly $300, and it's all clip art.
https://www.amazon.com/Black-Pony-Adven … 00DD8NKQM/

I have a free how-to guide on how to make your own ebook cover without photoshop.  If you want the instructions, I'm happy to share them.

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Be careful of Fiverr as some of the designers on there do not clear the rights of their images.  Always insist upon that if you choose them. Non-exclusive is fine or public domain.

Many writers on the site create covers too. 
It depends on your project.   A. Friscoe does great woman power covers with a supernatural bent.
I've done a few for smaller projects but I don't do non-fiction or historical. 

It's all about what you need and your budget.

smile

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Free allows you to read and review...but you get limited groups and you can't upload.  If I remember correctly.

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Welcome! smile

Steiner

Doorbell. Cat. Trip. Wrong address.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

Just finished my first draft of Skin Deep!

Good for you!

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Norm d'Plume wrote:
TirzahLaughs wrote:

Until you get your Word 365 fixed, you can download free Apache Open Office.   The Apache Writer part of it will allow you to save and open Word Documents.
https://www.openoffice.org/product/writer.html

Have you tried testing the compatibility between Open Office and Word? No doubt they say they can produce Word docs, but so does Google Docs. The conversion from Google was so bad (not a single conversion option worked), causing all kinds of formatting errors. I manually copied what I had written in Docs and created styles in the resulting Word doc. Google is way behind on styles, which is the source of most of the conversion problems. I would have bought a Google Chrome laptop some months back, but I'm very dependent on styles, among a few other key features.

 
So far it's working for me.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

My computer is having a meltdown. I did a system restore & now it's at leas running. But now, the restore deleted Office 365 & I can't get it to reinstall!!!!

All my Word documents.

I have Word starter 2010 on this hunk of junk, but it doesn't have all the options I have with 2016.


I am screaming.

Until you get your Word 365 fixed, you can download free Apache Open Office.   The Apache Writer part of it will allow you to save and open Word Documents.

https://www.openoffice.org/product/writer.html

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Iris Pearl wrote:

Hello smile Brand squeaky new here. I'm writing as Iris Pearl, who was my maverick Irish grandmother. I've been writing for as long I've been holding a pen, but primarily for an audience of one. Hoping to overcome the fear of vulnerability as I get used to sharing my writings with strangers - but it would be nice to eventually feel at home in a community where not everyone is a stranger. I've started reading some of your pieces and that is fun.

Welcome Earthling!

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Thriller or horror?  There is lap over.

People mean different things by thriller I think.  I don't really think of Patterson as a thriller at all.  More of suspense with action.

I liked many of Koontz's books but they are only thrillers in a broad sense.
I like Harlen Coben's books but they are more 'thriller-lite'.

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If they are names, you can capitalize them.  If they are talking about mothers in general, you don't.   

Or at least that is what I remember from elementary school.

Charles_F_Bell wrote:
njc wrote:
Charles_F_Bell wrote:

"To hold third parties responsible who have no involvement in the speech" -- but they do, and in a far broader way than the assumption they are just photocopiers.

If you bring dough to a baker, and pay him to bake it, and then sell the resulting bread or pastry, and if that bread or pastry turns out to be harmful, is the baker to be held responsible when what he contributed was not harmful?

Yes.  It can be a hard case to make, but it can be done. Just as matter of right and wrong, why would/should a baker just take your word on its contents? Moreover, a more accurate analogy is -- like Amazon/KDP facilitates the purchase (in every way) and essentially puts its name on it, the baker holds and sells your cake in his store with a sign: Created by John Smith but baked right here by expert hands. They must therefore share responsibility.

Its more like you rented the kitchen from the professional baker. You made cookies.  Your cookies gave people belly aches because you put cabbage in them.   The baker is not responsible that a cookie eater got a belly ache for eating cabbage cookies.  He rented the kitchen.  HE's not tasting the cookies or even giving a recipe.  He just has minimum use requirements for his kitchen.

In the same way Amazon is giving a writer a platform with minimum usage instructions.  You can make cabbage cookies or chocolate chip...but Amazon has nothing do with the quality of the product...only the format.