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graymartin wrote:

As for the Ann/Marilyn news, I’m thrilled to hear it!

Thanks, Gray!  Me, too!  smile

MJ

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SolN wrote:

BTW - I agree that Ann and Marilyn should have honorary free membership and am going to make that happen.

I am flattered beyond being flattered.  Thank you, Sol.  What a nice gesture. 

MJ

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SolN wrote:

That problem has also been resolved. If a reviewer simply isn't able to provide considerate criticism then Premium isn't the right group for them and they are removed from it. Once that's done, they cannot review new members, unless new members elect to join the Shred Group.

God help a new member if they accidentally join the Shred Group, not knowing what it is.  Will you put up an explanation of what it means to be a member of that group?

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SolN wrote:

So that still leaves the problem of reviewers leaving hurtful remarks in the other groups.  That's the problem that needs to be addressed.

That problem has also been resolved. If a reviewer simply isn't able to provide considerate criticism then Premium isn't the right group for them and they are removed from it. Once that's done, they cannot review new members, unless new members elect to join the Shred Group.

Good deal!

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SolN wrote:

Yeah, some reviews have gone over to the dark side. I'm going to fix the problem.

Not sure how your new shred group will fix that problem, Sol.  A writer has to first be willing to post in that group, and I don't think most new writers have developed that thick a skin yet.  So that still leaves the problem of reviewers leaving hurtful remarks in the other groups.  That's the problem that needs to be addressed. 

Like Clark said in an upper comment, she wanted to leave because of it.  And she did for 3 months.  I think it's a missed opportunity for us to grow as a writing community.  Address the ones who are being so hurtful - and you know who they are - and ask them to tone it down a little.  Else a new person won't stick around for long.

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j p lundstrom wrote:

Words

Why am I late this day? I am no slugabed, nor was I philogrobilized, but here’s the truth of it, without twattling.

A pleasant winter’s night of grufeling under a pile of warm blankets was interrupted foully last night as I envisaged living in a kakistocracy. Shamelessly, the top snollygoster came before the people to deny the accusations leveled against him, not the least of which was putting his unwelcome hands on whatever callypigian peg puff crossed his path. He harangued us with his self-deluded history of imagined good works and, just to be on the safe side, cast the blame on his associates. Alas! When I awoke, I found it was all true.

I have never been one of those grumbletonians, but the uhtceare of this realization hung over me like a fog. In shivviness, I stewed over the Lanspresado’s abligurition for some time. The man is a fudgel, unable to control his cacoethes. He has always been a political groke, desirous only of prestige and power.

Suffering from extreme dysania, I decided to perendinate the day’s work and went back to bed. Living in this country has left me frobly-mobly.

Do not think me an ultracrepidarian when I say he must go!

They're still good words--very cathartic!  JP

ROFL!  Good one, J P!  Did your spell-check do junie-flips??

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This morning, feeling frobly-mobly, I was overwhelmed with dysania, but I knew I must get moving.  After my shower, I was overcome with shivviness, thanks to a gift to myself.  Though I want to write more on my new novel, I most likely will perendinate because I’m caught up with news of our kakistocracy and can’t unglue my eyes from the TV this morning.  So I presume I will be grufeling today since we have snow on the ground and I am reluctant to go outside.  I feel philogrobilized, but that can’t be, so I will watch the news and sympathize with the grumbletonians as they jeer the snollygosters and ultracrepidarians.  I hope my phone doesn’t ring because I am not into twattling today.

(OMG!  My spell-check is working overtime!)

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http://historyhustle.com/20-awesome-his … ring-back/

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Dill Carver wrote:

Fake News

And we're off!

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"Dang fool has severe pianotoliosis.  I told him to play by ear, not eye.  Thanks for coming, doctor."

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Well done!  That just about says it all, doesn't it?  I hate to see the end coming because it's been a place of higher education for me, a learning experience never to be forgotten.  Old friends and acquaintances linger, but every day I wonder for how much longer.  I hate to see the downhill slide, but I feel it in these old bones. We will survive for a few days longer, even with our leader no longer leading, our cheerleaders no longer cheering, our teachers teaching to empty classrooms. 

It's been a fun ride for me since 2008.  I wish something would come along to breathe new life into the mob!  My red pen has run out of ink, though I need a gallon of it now.

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Christine Dreier wrote:

Thanks Mark for sharing your experience! I was very nervous to post my first chapter fearing it would be torn apart and my fragile confidence as a writer shattered. Well, it did get critiqued. That was what I wanted, and my eyes got opened to see what I couldn't see. I should have done this much earlier in the process, but fear kept me away. I will sign up after my trial period runs out. Thank you all!

Christine, you did an excellent job on your first post!  Nobody here means any harm, though some of us may come off that way occasionally...we were all new once, so don't let any review get you down.  Take it with a grain of salt and always remember it's your story, not ours.  If you changed everything to something somebody else wanted, you would lose your voice and it would sound like your reviewer's work and not yours.  Keep your head up and you will meet your goal! 

Cheers,
MJ

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Mark, if you could have read some of my writing when I first joined in 2008, you would've laughed.  I came onboard thinking I knew everything.  That was back when this site was much larger and had ten times the reviewers it has now.  My first chapter went over like a lead balloon, with over forty reviews the first day.  I got slammed!  I quickly discovered just how little I knew.  All these years later, I'm still learning things on here.  I wouldn't take anything for my journey here and for all the friends and acquaintances I've made.  When I read some of the junk I posted back in '08, I cringe!  LOL! 

You'll get there.  Determination is the key!

MJ

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Hi, Christine, and welcome.  We're a friendly bunch, so post away.  You'll get lots of help here.  If you haven't joined the Premium Group, let me invite you to do so - it's free.  It pays points for reviews, which others use for posting their own work.  Just check the Premium group when you go to your publishing page. 

I look forward to reading your work.

MJ

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56 degrees today in Georgia!  I cut grass in short sleeves.

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Maybe it's just me, but I don't think we have a whole lot of members anymore.  In any of the groups.  I can't seem to get a rise out of anybody lately.  We have new members who join, get an earful of negatives, and then go by the wayside.  They keep joining, which is great, but don't seem to stick around for long.  I don't know if it's because of lack of reviews, or because the reviews they get don't live up to the expectations they've put on their work.  But I doubt any new folks will get any reviews if they don't post in something that pays points.  Sometimes I log on and get the feeling that I am the only person in the world on here.  It's a strange feeling.

How about that, J P?  I didn't bash the president (though he needs it!).  smile

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It's been too long for me to remember what happens when you join.  But I see so many new members coming onboard, posting their hard work, and receiving no reviews.  That's discouraging.  The main culprit for no reviews is their post doesn't pay points.  Though I personally don't need points because I have more than I will ever use, some of us do need them.  No need wasting a half hour doing an in-line review if you don't get rewarded for doing so.

Is there anything a newbie receives that lets them know how the point system works and why it's important to post in a group that pays points?

I'd like to get away from the groups anyway.  Not sure how effective they are.

Just my opinion.

To all new members:  Before you post your first piece, please join a group that pays points for reviews.  Like the Premium Group.  It's free to join.  Then on your posting page, make sure to check that group.

Most members on here review for points.  They need those points to post their own work. 

It's not too late if you've already posted something and didn't join a group that pays points.  Join the group, then repost.

You will get help with your writing this way.

MJ

YEAR:  2017
SEASON:  Winter
MONTH:  OCTOBER
STATE:  Georgia
COUNTY:  Macon
LOCATION DETAILS:  To be kept confidential
NEAREST ROAD:  Hwy. 96
OBSERVATION REPORTED BY TWO MEN:  We were cooking a hog mid-day on a smoker, and across the road in a big field about 300 yards away, there was a huge hairy creature standing beside a white oak and looking at us.  I grabbed my phone and took a picture, and then it disappeared.  My father-in-law and I walked up to examine the area after it was gone.  There were tracks, and judging by a mark on the tree, the creature was estimated at 8 feet tall.  The owner of the property says he sees it all the time.  He has nicknamed the creature ‘Sol.’

vern wrote:

with the absence of Sol for several months to date,

Has anybody heard from Sol?  Is he sick?  Out of the country?  Too busy for us?  Expired?  Exhausted? 

Why don't we have a contest to see who can write the best story of what has happened to Sol.  Is he on an exotic vacation?  Did he join the army and is fighting in some foreign country?  Did he run away from home?  Why?  Did he come down with a tropical disease?  Is he climbing the Matterhorn?  Spying on Russia? 

200 words.  Where is Sol? 

Grand prize:  Recognition and the thrill of victory.  Or maybe by that time Sol will have come back to life and let us know who the winner is.  Else we will have to decide for ourselves.

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Santa

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vern wrote:

Here (just bringing back up for MJ)

You are indeed a gentleman and a scholar.  Thanks for finding it for me! 

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Sewing

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vern wrote:

It comes down to "There are no concrete rules" for creative writing other than to use common sense. If something can be shown/explained/etc. without the use of a word which is often repetitious with most writers, then use a little "creativity" to rearrange the sentence into another way of saying the same thing (perhaps better) without making it shout out, "Look at me; I didn't use was here." And the debate goes on.... Good thing IS, we have a new addition to the country. Alabama just voted to rejoin the union. Take care. Vern

I agree about the concrete rules, and common sense should prevail.  So many better words can take the place of WAS, and I try to mix it up so I don't use 'to be' words frequently.  If my sentence will sound unnatural without one of those buggars, I use it and go on about my business.  Ain't got time for sich nonsense when the creative brain sets out to work.  Write it while the writing's good.

And for the record, nah, let's don't let Alabama back in until after the 2020 election and see if all of them can turn true-blue.

vern wrote:

I think we're swimming in quicksand. Take care. Vern

I hope not.  But you may be right,

Suin, I agree it has gotten very quiet around here lately.  What has happened??  Anyone???  Are we on automatic pilot? 

The strongest start contests have always been wonderful for building new members.  People join because they want to enter the contest, and many of them stick around.  I would love to see some new faces come in.  The few new ones we've gotten recently don't stick around for long for some reason.  Maybe a new contest with a deadline 4 or 5 months out would help. 

We need new blood.  In 2008 when I posted Dance in the Rain, on the first chapter I received 72 reviews.  72.  The book had 30 chapters, and I got a total of 964 reviews on it.  That's the kind of stuff that helps us build our writing skills because I received some excellent suggestions and ideas.  I learned from it.  Today, if a chapter I post gets 5 or 6 reviews, I feel fortunate.  It's discouraging to new writers when they post something and get 1 or 2 reviews.  I think the contests are the answer to building it back.

I also think a far-fetched contest won't really do it.  I vote for a simple one that anyone can enter.  Not a particular genre, but something like the strongest start. 

SOL ??? 

smile