Topic: Lily

Hi there--

Just new to the board, and hoping to get some quick feedback on a story that I'm trying to post to a contest. It's called Lily, and it's posted to the board. I appreciate any readers who want to throw out some advice. Thanks!

Re: Lily

Just finished a review for you.  Hope you find it helpful!  Welcome to the site!

Cheers,
MJ

Re: Lily

Welcome to the site, Ilsa. I've left a review as well. It's hard to follow a good review from MJ, but I tried.

Bill