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(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Kdot,
Corn is the worst feed of all for a horse because it's so high in starch (sugar) and can make them colic - which is comparable to the worst upset stomach you've ever had times 10.  Colic can and often does lead to death because horses cannot regurgitate or throw up like humans can.  With that said, when corn IS fed, it's usually not on the cob, but rather cracked, rolled, or steam flaked or pressed. 

Yes, there are still people who insist corn is okay to feed to horses.  Those folks will normally throw the entire corn cob in.  If a horse has, say 10 corn cobs to choose from, they will eat the corn part first, then go to the next ear of corn and eat that corn.  The cobs are left til last.  Whether or not a horse eats all of it depends on many things - the horse's metabolic make-up (some horses will eat anything anytime it's handed to them...those horses are called 'easy keepers,' but that's not always a good thing.  They over-indulge and gain weight, which leads to feet problems (founder) and fat deposits underneath their skin, plus they get lazy if not exercised regularly.)  Those easy keepers will plow through the cobs without hesitation. 

Another type of horse, referred to as a hard keeper, wouldn't touch a cob, and most likely won't eat all the corn off the cob.  They need a special diet to keep weight on them, but it's usually not corn. 

Then there's the regular horse who is unpredictable and normally more reserved.  They may leave the cob to dry out before eating, or may not eat it at all.  Think of the cob as the cereal we humans call Shredded Wheat - without the frosting on top.

I don't think this answered your question, but there are too many variables to say it's normal for a horse to eat the corn from the cob, then eat the cob itself.  Horses are finicky creatures and what they do today may not be what they do tomorrow.   

Did I thoroughly confuse you?  LOL!

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(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Kdot wrote:

Hey horse people... some questions that Google is doing poorly at answering for me...

1) Do ponies try to herd with horses? Or it is more of a "we're too good to hang out with you guys?" kinda thing?

2) As a riding animal, can the larger breeds generally carry a small adult as well as a horse? (Say 100lb / 45kg range). Google says they're more durable, but can't find good stats on endurance under weight conditions. I chanced across a page that mentions ponies are "adept at avoiding work" which implies they're not gonna carry an adult very far.

I have more, just haven't resolved them clearly in my head yet

Hi, Kdot,
I've got 60 years of horse experience.  I own an animal rescue, and we take in abused and neglected horses, donkeys, ponies, and mules.  Yes, ponies do well with horses.  They don't seem to notice they're smaller than a horse.  I currently have a 1200-pound horse (the one in my profile picture here) whose best friend is a 400-pound Shetland pony, even though there are other horses and ponies in my pasture for both of them to pal around with.  The only time a pony really needs another pony is at grooming time because horses groom each other. 

Yes, the larger breed of ponies, like the Welsh, can carry a smaller adult.  The page that says ponies are adept at avoiding work shows the writer has never been around ponies for extended periods.  Ponies are extremely smart, but I have never known one to try to get out of 'work' any more than any other equine.

Hope this helped. 

MJ

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(8 replies, posted in This is US!!)

Gosh, Nancy...how did you have enough wits about you to even write this post?  That's a day pulled straight from the pages of a movie set.  I'm so sorry you had to go through all that.  I hope your Dad is on the mend and that you and your sister are finally able to get some rest.  What an ordeal for you.  Keep us updated on his condition (and yours).

Prayers and positive wishes heading your way.
Hugs,
MJ

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

As a reviewer, I am more apt to do an in-line review for a short chapter than for a long one.  My idea of a short chapter is 1500-2000 words.  I will do a longer one if the story moves along.  But when I get into a really long chapter by accident, I tend to skip the middle of the chapter and jump to the end unless it's a story I just can't put down.  But that's just me.  Many times I review a story I'm not really interested in, but grammatical mistakes are the same in all genres.  But I hesitate to review a 6000-8000 word chapter in a genre I don't care for.  Unless I really love you!  smile

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(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

"Before you go, sir, I just want to make sure everything in your Will goes to me as you said last week.  Is that correct?"
"Sister Marie, you know he's too weak to talk," Sister Mary said. 
"Why do you keep pestering him?" Sister Katherine asked.  "Can't you see he's in obvious pain?"
"Yes, Sister Katherine.  I have a double-dose of his pain meds here," Sister Marie said as she administered a needle full of the yellowish liquid.
"You can give him mine, too, for halves," George said as he watched the old man's eyes close and his body go limp.  "Old man's loaded." 
"Sorry, George, but your meds were in the soup you just drank.  We don't need witnesses.  Good night."

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(23 replies, posted in This is US!!)

Norm d'Plume wrote:
Marilyn Johnson wrote:

I would eventually like to get to where I only post in this group.

If we all take that approach, there will be fewer experienced eyes reviewing the material of new authors (i.e., the stuff in Premium), and they will have less material from experienced authors (i.e., the stuff hidden here) to learn from. Could cause a slow death for the site.

Oh, I would still review the newbies like I do now.  I don't mind helping them and offering suggestions.  After all, we were all newbies once.

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(23 replies, posted in This is US!!)

I agree with Jack.  I would eventually like to get to where I only post in this group.  I like the years of writing experience of everyone in it, but I also know some of our chapters can get quite lengthy.  Some of us already have more points than we'll ever use, while others of us need those points to post our own work.  I personally have plenty, but I feel we can urge each other on and get and give better reviews if points are made available.  Just my opinion, FWIW.   

BTW, thanks for adding me! 

MJ

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(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Congratulations!  You're proof that hard work does pay off!    smile

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(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Wishing you all the best, Mike.  I hope your load will get lighter with time.  Prayers for peace as you struggle through this.  Message me if I can help with anything!

Peace to you,
MJ

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(18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'll be happy to help where I can, Mike.  Just let me know what you need.

Excited for you!

MJ

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(89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

Maybe Sol can stop these forums from being 'public' posts.  Maybe we should have forums that we have to join, like our groups here that we have to join.  That way, if you don't want to see the crap that's posted, don't join.

I've been thinking more and more of going towards that model. It may be that new members are not immediately put into the Premium group and can choose Groups to join that suit their tastes. In theory anyone can leave Premium, but when you're defaulted into it that doesn't seem to happen. Another idea may be to remove the forums from the homepage. Users will have to actually visit their Groups to participate. I've received too many complaints to think that something doesn't have to change.

I think removing them from the front page is the best bet.  Right now, they're front and center when you open the home page.  Premium forums are at the top.  It's hard not to click a topic because all of us are curious by nature.  I think moving them is a good idea.

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(89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Bevin Wallace wrote:

“I appreciate your defending the site, Bevin, but seems to me it’s  overrun by a handful of grumpy retirees who spend most of their time bitching about other members on the site, politics, and society in general.  I checked, and some of the most active people on that forum hardly write or review.  Why are they there?  Just lonely and have nothing else to do?  It’s pathetic.  They write more on the forum than they post as writers.  They’re cynical, jaded, and intolerant. Why would I want to engage with them?  You’ve got a few of them that seem to haunt the forum just looking for someone to attack or something to complain about or pontificate on.  If they were actually writing and reviewing and adding value, I could understand.  It screws with my writing karma, Bev. 

Food for thought.  And please don’t attack me. I am just providing feedback from a “leaver” in hopes it might generate some soul-searching.

I hate to say it, but for the most part your 'leaver' is correct.  We've all had our moments in the forums.  But lately it seems we're running off more people than helping anyone.

Maybe Sol can stop these forums from being 'public' posts.  Maybe we should have forums that we have to join, like our groups here that we have to join.  That way, if you don't want to see the crap that's posted, don't join.

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(89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

kraptonite wrote:

I'm an old/new member and at the moment also a Basic member on the same thin-ice as William. However, I do intend to go to a full writers membership at some point, but in the meantime, I am reviewing in order to rack up a few points to allow me to post my stories. If this is an insult to you, or baffles you please message me and I'll avoid reviewing your work. I've recently been politely informed within a review reply, that the author doesn’t need reviews. That is appreciated, but I’d rather know before I pen the review because I’m trying to make the review meaningful (in so much as I can).

It doesn't bother me in the least that you, or anyone else, is 'just' a reviewer.  Some of my best help has come from people who only review and never post their own work.  Whether you're a basic member or a full-fledged one makes no difference to me, NOT TO MENTION IT'S NONE OF MY BUSINESS.  As for the person saying they didn't need reviews, then why did they post their work to begin with?  Don't waste my time.  If a writer doesn't need or want reviews, please state that in the beginning in the chapter description because I certainly have more important things to do than waste my time where it's not wanted or needed.

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(89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

In case nobody has noticed, William Short has closed his account after having been here on this site before any of the rest of us.  What is wrong that we older members keep pissing people off so they leave?  These threads should be helpful, not harmful.  I think Sol had a good idea when he said he didn't want these forums at all.  Just my opinion.

Dunno, J P.  When I clicked on his name at the top of this page, it goes to his profile page, and his 'book' is listed there.  Clicked on it, and Chapter 1 came up.  Bunch of reviews he hasn't acknowledged.  So maybe you can't dust your hands just yet!

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

If it's a group, and you join it, the new post will show up on the right side of your screen just the same as any post in any of the groups you're a member of.  It just won't be at the top in the premium group.  Most of the other groups I'm a member of never have any posts, so if I unjoin the inactive ones, then the feed for the political one will be under the feed for premium. 

Having said that, I don't really know what else I wanted to say.  Just a passing thought.  It's hell getting old!  The only gold in my 'golden years' is the color of my urine.  Go figure.

Cheers,
MJ

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

"If you build it, they will come."   (Field of Dreams)

Just let us know when it's up, and I for one will join.  I am sure there are others.

j p lundstrom wrote:

p. s. Please, folks, don't let this degenerate into another discussion about reciprocation. We got the point last week!

It's not about reciprocation.  It's about this writer asking for help here in the forums, then getting that help, then disappearing.  Even asking for support for his desire to become a writer.  All lofty goals.  I like helping people, but not unappreciative people or people who have changed their minds and no longer want my help.  Wouldn't mind helping him in future endeavors, but not unless he at least responds and doesn't delete his Chapter 1 like he did his prologue.

So I guess he did save you some time, J.P.  Good for you!  LOL!

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

You can count me in.

PulakK wrote:

In order to solidify my transition into a writing career, I've also started a Patreon where I'm accepting commissions from interested people. I did this just a couple days ago, and I've gotten two friends to pledge to me, so I wonder if any of you have done the same, and if so, how did you grow your platform? If my Patreon really takes off, I could use it to finance a number of ambitious projects that go beyond the creative writing I'm currently doing.

Hey, PulaaK,
What has happened to you?  You posted a prologue.  I spent a lot of time reviewing it and offering suggestions.  It disappeared without so much as an acknowledgment from you that you'd received my review.  The whole prologue is gone.

Then you posted Chapter 1.  Giving you the benefit of the doubt, I reviewed that, too, and took a lot of my time doing so.  But... I have not received a response from you on that one either. 

For the record, many of us on here have more important things to do than to review the work of someone who won't even acknowledge they've received or read our suggestions.  You came on here specifically asking for help.  You got it, and now nothing from you.  You even mentioned transitioning into a writing career and that you'd started a Patreon accepting commissions from interested people.

My question:  How can anyone take you seriously?  No response indicates either you don't want our help, or you received it and don't like someone making suggestions.

Food for thought,
MJ

And one last thing:  When someone spends their time reading and reviewing, and they leave comments, always acknowledge that you've at least read their reviews, whether you agree with them or not.  I, for one, will read maybe two chapters of someone's work, and if they don't acknowledge with at least a 'thanks for your time,' I don't review them the 3rd time because it makes me think either they didn't want me to review their work, or they didn't like what they read.  Since you're new here and may not know how this works, there's a box below the review labeled 'Save Reply.'  That's how you acknowledge their time and effort.  And that's how you get your reviewers to continue reviewing.  Just wanted to throw that out to you FYI.

Cheers,
MJ

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

That's fabulous news, Jack!!  Kudos!!

Norm d'Plume wrote:

A tyrant named Donnell who wants to conquer the U.S.and set up a dictatorship? Does he hold military parades? :-)

ROFL! "And every knee shall bow..."

We wouldn't want you to post everything at once.  One chapter at a time is all we reviewers can handle.  So why don't you go ahead and work toward the goal of letting us see Chapter 1 and we'll take it from there?  Good luck.

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(89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Christine Dreier wrote:

Speaking from the perspective of a newbie, it's hard to review someone else's work and even harder when reviewing a more experienced writer. I've been giving plenty of reviews, but feel shy about doing so. We're talking here about reading and reviewing genres we maybe not so familiar with. It can be hard to fully appreciate a good story when it's not what you're used to reading, and so on. I'd figured that the point system, at least in quantitative terms has reciprocity built in. Lots of things to figure out as a newcomer.

Christine, you're one of the ones I was talking about whose writing has improved greatly since your first post!  I love seeing that.

Don't be afraid to jump in and offer your thoughts on anyone's writing, no matter how long we've been here.  That's how we learn.  I've read many genres that I wouldn't ordinarily read, like fantasy and sci-fi.  Those are not genres I would buy off a bookshelf, but all the genres share a common need for correct grammar, punctuation, and flow.  I also am not a reader of poetry in my normal world, but I do read it here.  I don't have what it takes to judge a poetic posting, wouldn't know a haiku from a hoo-doo, but I know if I like it after the first couple of lines.  I can't offer much in the poetic style department except letting the writer know how it affected me. 

The point system does have its rewards for reviewers, but there's nothing like seeing a new writer expand their base and read something they consider out of the realm of what they would normally read.  If the first paragraph catches my attention, I will read the whole thing.  I learn a lot from reading the work of others.  It gives me ideas of how to express myself. 

Keep writing! 

MJ