One other idea that seems more workable in the short term is to create a kickstarter-like site dedicated to raising money for book writing/publishing/marketing. The best proposals would hopefully get the most funding.

Sol, start coding. :-)

Dirk

I always wanted to program a story generator, but time and skills were lacking. For better or worse, I'll probably be dead before I'm obsolete. Would make for an interesting Kickstarter campaign, though. You could reduce it to bite-size chunks (e.g., start with a sci-fi short story generator).

Dirk

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Thanks, all. My "two" Gods are intended to have somewhat different personalities, just enough to keep the reader guessing, although not enough that you would notice in the span of one chapter (God only has a few lines of dialogue most of the time). I toyed with giving the two Gods different names (e.g., Dieu and Dios, from French and Spanish), but that made it seem like they were definitely two different entities, which is not an impression I want to give.

I'll probably keep with one POV and one God at a time. I have a number of dual-MC chapters still to come, so more opportunities to experiment.

Thanks.
Dirk

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Hi. I was wondering what other authors suggest for the following POV scenario. I have two MCs, each of whom hears a voice in his head claiming to be God. I alternate between the two MCs, chapter by chapter. As long as there is only one MC in a chapter, the voice of God is obviously talking with that MC. The God heard by these two MCs is giving potentially conflicting advice, which is part of the mystery in the book. In other words, is it the same God talking to both, or are the two MCs simply mentally ill?

The problem with the above comes up when the two MCs are finally together in the same chapter. Since I'm using third person limited, the POV is only ever with one of the two MCs at a time, even when they're together. The "God" speaking to the MC in those chapters is always the one associated with the POV character. I currently use that to toy with the reader, leaving him/her wondering what God is saying to the other MC at the same time as when He is speaking to the POV MC.

I'm told that limiting God's dialogue to just the POV MC is sometimes confusing. The argument is that since God is in the scene, the reader should hear everything God says in those scenes, regardless of which MC he is talking to. I should add that most of my reviewers didn't have a problem with limiting God's dialogue to just the POV MC.

If you followed all of that, the question is: should I write those chapters from the POV of both MCs (i.e., switch to omniscient POV for those chapters) and show what God is telling both MCs at the same time?

Thanks,
Dirk

Good article.

I think there will always be some market for printed books, probably for those that don't fit the e-book model. For example, I have a large book about the Roman Empire, 8.5" x 11" and one inch thick, weighing over 2 lbs, and filled with hundreds of large images and maps. While it may be possible to format that for a large tablet, it will never fit on a smartphone. I only bought it because I need it for my research. Everything else, I would much rather read on my phone while lying down to relax. I'm reminded of Captain Picard, who loves reading physical books in the 24th century, where printed books are collectors' items.

However, the shakeout in the publishing industry is far from over. Their monopoly over what gets published or doesn't is gone. Aside from self-published books, there are already online businesses that an author can use to help publish AND market books. Full service publishing "packages" paid for by book authors will be an increasingly viable alternative to traditional publishers who take on most of the publishing risk at their expense. The latter are too few in number given how many people are trying to publish books.

One area that has yet to develop fully is successful authors lending their name to new authors, just like real estate agents who work for other real estate agents (a business within a business) in return for a small cut of all homes sold under the leading agent's "brand."

Dirk

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Sol, what's the latest with regard to how membership works? I think I read that all new members get a free week of Premium. Is that right?

I ask mainly because I just spent an hour doing a detailed inline review for a new member and want to be sure he/she actually gets to see it.

Do you disable the Leave Inline Review button for work by members who can't read inline? If not, that would be really useful.

Thanks
Dirk

Thank you, Mike. Very helpful.

Dirk

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Thanks, Mike. This is terrific. You're exactly who I wanted to hear from. I've had enough spiritual experiences in my life to believe in a hereafter, although we probably differ on some of the details. Makes for more interesting discussions that way. :-)

In answer to your question about the character, there are actually two main characters in my book, both of whom hear a voice in their heads claiming to be God, starting from childhood on. One MC grows up on a fundamentalist world, but eventually grows to doubt the reality of this God he has been talking to most of his life. The other is an atheist who increasingly finds reason to believe the voice may really be the Christian God. It's a three-book story that will span about ten years. The last book will reveal whether or not the voice is that of God, and how the boys come to terms with the answer. Either way, the fate of the galaxy rests on their shoulders.

Karen (or anyone), please don't hesitate to weigh in.

Thanks again.
Dirk

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Thank you, Mike.

What happens to those who don't turn to/believe in Christ? The majority of the world doesn't believe in Him, including an increasing number of atheists. It seems like the more right-wing the Christian, the more convinced they are that the rest of humanity is going to Hell. Personally, I don't believe in a God that would allow that. That's reflected in my character's struggle. He's a fundamentalist Christian who comes to question all of his beliefs.

And what about those who suffer at the hands of evil. Plenty of children, even babies, suffer greatly in this world (e.g., from diseases and starvation). Technically, they may be sinners by virtue of the simple fact that they are human, but why are they made to suffer in this life?

Thanks
Dirk

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No rush. Thanks.

As with my previous post, my MC is asking the following additional questions.

And what exactly is sin? Should sin require atonement? Since God is omnipotent, then wasn’t He ultimately responsible for creating the ability to sin in the first place? And since God is omniscient, then he knows who will sin and when. Doesn’t that mean those sinners are on a deterministic path, making their sins unavoidable? Are we just puppets in God’s play?

Any faith-based answers would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks.
Dirk

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One of my characters is struggling to find a logical reason why God would allow evil in the world (e.g., WWII, for example, with 60M people dead). Below is a series of questions the teen is asking himself.

Can murderers ever be forgiven their sins? Can mass murderers? Should their spirits be destroyed? Why does God not prevent great evil in the first place? Is it because the outcome of evil deeds prevents even greater suffering? When God steps into human affairs through prophets like Moses and Abraham, is He doing so to save mankind from itself? Is it simply an extension of God’s original covenant with Noah never to destroy humans?

How does a person of faith respond to the question: Why does God allow evil in the world?

Thanks.
Dirk

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Hi Max. I was looking through works here on TNBW but can't find a sci-fi story. My story starts in the year 3994 A.D., so I was hoping to compare our respective universes.

Thanks
Dirk

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Here's a good article on this: http://smallbusiness.chron.com/fair-use-logos-2152.html

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It's pretty much a given VW won't give its permission, if asked. At best they'd want final say over the book in which it is used. Google use of corporate logos in fiction/art, or something similar. If you don't ask and VW finds out, they may just ignore it, as long as it doesn't have a negative impact on VW.

If it's parody, then it's protected as free speech, as long as you don't mind dealing with lawyers. Some companies strictly defend their brands, otherwise the courts could eventually rule against them if everyone started doing the same thing.

In the 2001: A Space Odyssey movie, they featured Pan Am for ships that travelled into space, but that was a very different era, and it may have been a product placement. I don't know if Arthur C. Clarke used their name in his book. You might be able to google that too.

Originally, Lucasfilm tried to shut down many sites of fan work derived from Star Wars, even those that made no profit off their work. Fortunately for SW fans, George eventually caved and now the presence of SW on the Internet is everywhere, mostly positive.

Mikira could consider something like Vee UU, but parody may not be what she wants.

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Ingrid Lilleland wrote:

Hi I`m new here and I hope to find this site as promising as it looks so far.

Welcome, Ingrid. See my previous post for some tips that may help you.

Dirk

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Tom, on Google Chrome, when I've accidentally clicked the back button, I can hit the forward button and it takes me forward again, with the draft review still there (except for the latest comment box I was typing in). I'm not sure what kind of device/browser you're using, but I would expect other browsers would have a similar ability. Regardless, TNBW saves a draft of the review every time you add an inline comment.

It's a pain, but the only thing you lose is the current comment you were typing.

Dirk

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Hi Amcii, check out the WELCOME NEWCOMERS thread started by Linda Lee in the TNBW Basic group. Also, click that new ? button near the upper right of your screen for FAQs, videos, etc. And try to make connections, especially with writers you intend to review long term. That way you'll be notified via email every time one of them posts a new piece of work. Don't hesitate to post questions, either in genre-specific groups, the Writing Tips & Advice group, or in Premium (for the widest possible exposure).

Welcome to the site.
Dirk

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

For a novice, unpublished author, writing to formula and outline may mean writing to someone else's formula. I think an author, not a TV/movie hack, to make his mark ought to allow as much "organic" growing of his work as possible. Certainly,  the advantage of putting things down in notes and very rough drafts  is to enhance retention in memory those great ideas that can flash before him in a moment of inspiration but then as easily flash out of existence.

Looking back, my first draft was absolute garbage. I bought several books on writing, from which I learned a lot of what a typical book entails (story arcs, character arcs, hero's journey, outlining, etc.). I tossed v1 without ever finishing it, although I still borrow from it. I'm treating v2 as my figure-out-how-to-write draft, including some significant, unplanned detours that weren't in my outline. I'm overdue to reorganize the outline to ensure I haven't written myself into a corner.

It's a balancing act between the amount of structure a new writer needs vs. the ability to write based on inspiration. There are good authors on both ends of the spectrum.

Dirk

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mikira (AKA KLSundstrom) wrote:

Oh my gosh Janet, you made me remember a time when I had been blocked in one of the stories I was writing, due to not being able to find a good way to describe a castle I wanted to describe, so I put the story away and started writing something else. Then one night while I was trying to fall asleep the ideas for that castle came to me and it wouldn't allow me to fall asleep until I got up and wrote a long note about it. The next day I sat down and wrote two more chapters in the novel I had put aside because of that creative blockage.

The lesson I learned from that experience is: Sometimes starting a different writing project can loosen your worry about what your trying to write, so the creative juices can start flowing again for the story you had put aside.

I had a months-long writer's block last year. I used the time to read a dozen or so books, researching topics relevant to my story. Naturally, my reviewers had trouble picking up the story where I left off, it had been so long. I have the same problem writing most new chapters right now; each one is a daunting effort, so I take a break and just read other people's work. I'm starting to run out material to read, though. 500+ points and counting. :-)

Dirk

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

Sci-fi/action/thriller is generally written in the safe way and not in an elaborate way because boys and men are literal-minded, rather than laterally-thinking, for the most part, and thus simple is better.

I resemble that remark. :-)

Thanks, Charles.
Dirk

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njc, do you get a status message of the form "waiting for site to respond"? I get that with Chrome and TNBW, where the site appears to hang for as much as a minute. During that time period, opening additional tabs to the site all hang as well, although all my other tabs/sites work fine during that peiod.

This is probably unrelated, but I had Chase hang on me today (first time) and I tracked it down to a web traffic tracking service that Chase or Chrome or a Chrome extension apparently uses. I disabled all extensions and wiped all my cached Chrome data and managed to get past it. I'm not sure if it will clear the recurring problem I get with TNBW, though.

Dirk

The series opener with Q/Picard was painful to watch. Q was largely consistent throughout the series, but thankfully Picard became less of a wide-eyed explorer and more of a solid leader for the Federation.

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I just read a terrific poem by a new member, Natural Giggler, called The God I Serve.

Highly recommended.

Dirk

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Thanks, Sol. Speedy, as always.