3,976

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

LOL. Actually, any goo that dissolve cars whole can probably clean up our landfills too.

Dagnee, that quote your responded to wasn't mine, but I will say that according to your definition, all science fiction can be viewed as fantasy, it's just a question of degrees. Are Star Trek transporters sci-fi or fantasy? I lost count of the number of times Commander Data used technobabble to justify the solution to whatever emergency they were facing. What about "aerial" dogfights in the gravityless vacuum of space as pictured in Star Wars? With sound! Those two franchises are generally considered space opera (a subgenre of sci-fi), same place where I put mine.

Besides, the science says that the strongest superacids (nasty stuff) can dissolve anything pretty much instantaneously, so it's doable, albeit complicated. Mine is a simplified variant of that. As Gene Roddenberry is quoted as saying, when a cop pulls out a gun, he doesn't stop to explain it.

Thanks to all.
Dirk

EDIT: In case anyone is curious, the strongest acid is fluoroantimonic acid (20 quintillion times stronger than sulphuric acid). Apparently, the only thing capable of containing it is, oddly enough, teflon.

3,977

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks to everyone for their ideas. Based on the science, a superacid is more complicated than is appropriate for my book, which is more about entertainment (space opera) than it is Asimovian science.

I chose a vat of some of kind of goo (yet to be named) that liquifies whatever you put in it without the frothing and killer fumes that would come from a superacid. It bubbles a little, just to make it look good. As many of you pointed out, it's two thousand years in the future, so who knows what they'll come up with in their chemistry labs.

Thanks
Dirk

3,978

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

It is the far future, but I need an excuse for a very large vat of uncovered acid, big enough to pitch something in about the size of loaf of bread and have it instantly destroyed by the acid. Superacids can do that. I can come up with other reasons for a vat of acid, but there's a particular vehicle I was hoping to dissolve first. The latter isn't critical, but a nice to have.

Either way, it's been decades since I took chemistry, and I need at least a basic understanding of the process. As Charles suggested, I could strip the car first, but modern recycling techniques simply crush and melt the metal frame. I can't use heat in this case. It has to be an acid.


Dirk

3,979

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'm writing a scene where I use a superacid to dissolve vehicles (e.g., aerial cars) into their constituent elements, which are then separated and reused to create new vehicles.

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm assuming that lowering your average Volkswagen into such an acid would cause the acid to churn like crazy and release a ton of noxious fumes into the air.

But what happens to the elements? Are some of them completely vaporized? Does the acid bind with some of them forming other compounds? What might be a way of separating the elements/compounds from the acid?

Thanks.
Dirk

3,980

(15 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Thank you both very much. I got my questions answered.

Dirk

3,981

(15 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

JL Mo wrote:

If you're not going to be clear who/what is guiding these children, what difference does it make if it's faith based?

A faith-based argument matters because one of the possibilities throughout this book is that these two teens are really hearing God. Based on your beliefs, what explains or justifies the killing of all life on Earth?

Thanks
Dirk

3,982

(15 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

I'm familiar with Job, and have read many books for and against the existence of God, including some extreme views on both ends of the spectrum.

There are two "versions" of God in the book, one in each of the two characters' heads, telling them different, even conflicting things. The intent is to keep open throughout the book whether this is the real God doing these things for a purpose, or simply mental illness on the part of the two teens. God doesn't really "toy" with them, except for some light humor.

Joseph, the fundamentalist, is the character who is beginning to ask questions. He's been tasked by God to create a revolution in faith for the 41st century, to save mankind from a self-inflicted Apocalypse. Joseph's been told to write a new Bible, new commandments, etc. Everything is on the table.

As part of Joseph's struggle, I want to include faith-based arguments for some of the more troubling aspects of the Bible, including God's wrath. The arguments I've read are usually either 1.) the Bible was written a long time ago and not everything in it is true, or 2.) every word in the Bible is the Word of God, and if you question it, you're going to Hell.

I'm wondering if those of a Christian faith have come across other answers.

Thanks.
Dirk

3,983

(15 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Wikipedia documents a flood "myth" in many ancient religions, dating back 5000+ years, so they either borrowed from each other, or perhaps there was at least a major, limited flood somewhere in what was then the developing world. Some scientists believe the Black Sea was once a freshwater lake that was flooded by the Mediterranean Sea, with seawater rushing in at a rate ten times that of Niagara Falls.. There is some evidence of a former shoreline as much as 400 feet deep under the Black Sea.

3,984

(10 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Fair enough.

3,985

(15 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

My two main characters in my sci-fi story, Into the Mind of God, both begin to hear God's voice in their heads at a young age. One, Joseph, a funadamentalist Christian, believes he was chosen by God for a special purpose. Though a believer, he eventually questions God about Noah's Ark. Did God really commit genocide with the Great Flood, killing everyone including children and babies? Based on my research online, there were an estimated 20 million people on Earth by the time of Noah's Ark. If the estimate is correct, that would make the flood the greatest mass killing in history.

What is a faith-based answer to this?

Thanks.
Dirk

3,986

(10 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

I agree being a little put off by Brave, unless of course the members here feel themselves under attack.

The majority of people in the West still consider themselves Christians, even if they don't actively practice their faith.

Dirk

Can someone please explain what the difference is between the two Christian writing groups - this one and the new one created in the last day or two?

It is so hard to get traction/members/active posts/dialogues in even the more "mainstream" groups (e.g., sci-fi, fantasy, young adult, ...), that dividing the Christian camp in two seems to increase the hurdle for what is often seen as an alternative media, albeit a potentially powerful one.

With only ten groups that I can join, I prefer not to have to post all my questions in two whenever I have a question to ask or something to share, yet would love the widest possible exposure and opinions. This just made it twice as hard to do that. Some groups on the site are so obscure that writers have taken to posting their questions in Premium for maximum exposure, thereby defeating the purpose of groups entirely and making an unorganized mess out of the Premium forum.

Full disclosure: Although spiritual, I am not Christian, but my sci-fi book has an heretical Christian theme, among others. I would love insight into the Christian community's thoughts about the questions my main characters raise about the reality of God. One MC is a Fundamentalist Christian, and the other, an avowed atheist. Each MC follows a character arc that causes each to question their beliefs.

Hopefully, it's not too late to settle on one of these two groups so that we can all focus on a shared community of like-minded individuals. I'll cross-post this to the other group as well, but I don't see myself doing so on an ongoing basis. It's simply too much effort given too little free time.

Thanks.
Dirk

Can someone please explain what the difference is between the two Christian writing groups - the original and now this one?

It is so hard to get traction/members/active posts/dialogues in even the more "mainstream" groups (e.g., sci-fi, fantasy, young adult, ...), that dividing the Christian camp in two seems to increase the hurdle for what is often seen as an alternative media, albeit a potentially powerful one.

With only ten groups that I can join, I prefer not to have to post all my questions in two whenever I have a question to ask or something to share, yet would love the widest possible exposure and opinions. This just made it twice as hard to do that. Some groups on the site are so obscure that writers have taken to posting their questions in Premium for maximum exposure, thereby defeating the purpose of groups entirely and making an unorganized mess out of the Premium forum.

Full disclosure: Although spiritual, I am not Christian, but my sci-fi book has an heretical Christian theme, among others. I would love insight into the Christian community's thoughts about the questions my main characters raise about the reality of God. One MC is a Fundamentalist Christian, and the other, an avowed atheist. Each MC follows a character arc that causes each to question their beliefs.

Hopefully, it's not too late to settle on one of these two groups so that we can all focus on a shared community of like-minded individuals. I'll cross-post this to the other group as well, but I don't see myself doing so on an ongoing basis. It's simply too much effort given too little free time.

Thanks.
Dirk

3,989

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Minor request. Can we have Reading List as one of the options on the READ menu on the home page. I know it's on the main menu on the right, but I frequently look for it under the READ menu. Not a big deal. Just a nice to have, especially for people still getting used to the site.

Thanks
Dirk

3,990

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

This may have already been reported, but my home page shows that I have two new inline review replies. When I click to view the actual reply I get a page not found error for both chapters because the author has since taken them down. My home page still says I have two new inline review replies, even after I try to view them. It's for Don Chamber's book, Frozen Tide. He removed chapters 16 and up.

Thanks.
Dirk

3,991

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Jemma, are you a premium (paying) member? The reason I ask is because I'm not sure if the process is the same for free members. You can try it.

For premium members, go to your home page and click on the large Post Your Writing button at the top of the screen. That takes you to your portfolio view. If the chapter is the first in a new book, click on the big red Add New Content button and it will walk you through the steps to post new writing.

If the chapter is for a book you already have up on the site, you should see the book listed at the bottom of the portfolio view. Click on the Action Menu next to the particular book you want to add to, and select Add Chapter. That takes you to a screen to add your chapter. You can publish to any group that you're a member of (e.g., Premium). You'll need points to publish, which you can earn by reading and reviewing the chapters of other authors on the site.

If you're trying to *replace* an existing chapter with an updated version of the same chapter, follow the Add Chapter workflow. Select the chapter number you want to replace and increment the version number. You'll need points for this process as well. Once the new chapter is published, you can decide if you want to hide the previous version of that chapter, or leave it visible so reviewers can compare the old and new, if they want to. Don't delete the old chapter until you're done with the reviews, since any chapter you delete also deletes the reviews associated with it.

There is also a way to edit existing chapters and replace the content without points. For that, go to your portfolio view as described above, and click on the aforementioned Action Menu. Select Edit instead of Add Chapter, and it will allow you to edit the existing content. That won't cost additional points, but it also won't pay additional points to anyone who has already read the chapter you're editing. It will pay points to anyone who has not yet read the chapter.

I hope that helps.
Dirk

3,992

(8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

One of my book characters still uses paper in the year 4017. Same reasons. :-)

On the other hand, some call centers that deal with confidential information (e.g., SSN) don't allow pen/paper on the desks, so the information can't be easily stolen.

Dirk

3,993

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Actually, dagnee, I think we're talking about the same bug. On the Send a Message tab, there is a scrollable list that cuts off too soon and you can't see all of your connections. When you click on the list to see the names, right above the first name, a text field appears that you can type into. If you type in the first few letters of the connection name, it automatically filters the list as you type. It's a workaround, but it should make it manageable.

Dirk

Globally-deployed, driverless, solar-powered transportation. Seems inevitable.
Genetically-engineered humans. Some cultures smother girls, so the principle is already in place.
Organ regrowth technology. Some progress.
Technology to find life elsewhere in our solar system. Kind of close on this one.
Technology to detect life's signature in other star systems. Getting there.
Global-scale planetary cooling technology. We're kind of in a hurry for that one.
Global-scale desalination technology.
Global-scale rapid topsoil formation. Also in a hurry.
Near-100% waste recycling. Empty out those landfills.
Non-addictive, easily-tolerated, severe-pain medication. How much longer do I have to wait for this?!
A cure for baldness. The Dune movie had a bald emperor in the year 10,191 A.D. Not a good sign.
McSoy burgers people would actually be willing to eat (Earth could support about 10B vegetarians, billions more than with an omnivore diet).
World peace or new ways to kill each other. Kind of an either-or on this one. My money's on the latter.
Asteroid detection and deflection. The rest of the items on this list don't matter if we screw this one up.
Apple Pay. Check that one off.

3,995

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Greg, your book is currently posted to groups and connections, but the group(s) you published to don't seem to include Premium. Whatever the cause, I can't open your book. Most people publish to Premium in addition to appropriate genre groups (e.g., sci-fi, thrillers, etc.), which gives them the widest possible exposure on the site without explicitly exposing it to the Internet. If you add it to Premium and then read/recip with others, you'll probably get a lot of the feedback you're looking for (from big picture down to individual nits). If you haven't already published your work to a points group, it will cost you points to add it to Premium. Publishing on the site with points also means site readers will earn points for reading it.

You can also connect with Janet Taylor-Perry here on the site. She's an English teacher, self-published author, mother of five, and still finds free time to work as an editor. She's been invaluable to me.

Welcome back.
Dirk

3,996

(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

mikira (AKA KLSundstrom) wrote:

Hi Christina - you're posting your novel the correct way. The first chapter of a novel usually gets more reviews then the rest of the chapters. And since you have your novel only available to connections and group members you are lowering the amount of people that will see your novel and  therefore potential reviewers.

Be careful about posting your work to be visible on the Internet. It could lead someone to take and post your work elsewhere without your knowledge, perhaps just for mischief. Some publishers won't accept work that's already available on the net.

Dirk

3,997

(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

It looks like everything is published correctly, and you have one regular review already on chapter two. I suggest you start a conversation thread in one or more appropriate group forums (e.g. the genre group for your work and/or Premium) introducing yourself, the novel, and asking for reviews. You can then either wait a few more days to see if anyone reads more, or begin reading other people's work so that they will, hopefully, reciprocate on an ongoing basis. You'll almost certainly need to begin reading other people's work to get them to read three of your chapters. It's very time consuming to review three chapters, espercially if there's no reciprocal relationship.

Dirk

3,998

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

What about it makes it a "tour"? Does the book's author visit multiple sites while the tour is active? In other words, what's the author's role during the days that the tour is ongoing?

Thanks
Dirk

3,999

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

SquarePeg, this is the first I've ever heard of virtual book tours, although it sounds great. Besides the advertising and blogger reviews, are there live Q&A chat sessions or some kind of forum like this one where we pop in and out? I followed your link and looked around, but I wasn't sure about that aspect.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,000

(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

max keanu wrote:

But sweetheart and great poet lady, from your bio pic/painting I'm intrigued enough to wonder and feel fascination at the depth of being that is you, at the person (or persons) inside you that pickled that beautiful painting that represents you.
... And, any bit of information about a person may bring the mind meld and meshing moment  of being and nothingness closer to the reading edge we all cautiously walk upon, as time is always fleeting and of the essence.

Max, this is a well-written bit of prose. So much so, I went to read your bio. It's a bit thin. :-)

Dirk