Oops. I justed cross posted this from your Premium thread. Ah well. Can never have enough links to a resource that good.
Thanks.
Dirk
Oops. I justed cross posted this from your Premium thread. Ah well. Can never have enough links to a resource that good.
Thanks.
Dirk
Following is from a link that Janet Taylor-Perry posted at the end of an unrelated Premium thread. I didn't want this to get lost, so here it is:
http://www.writersdigest.com/online-edi … ou-in-2015
Dirk
As a way to encourage people to use forums, it would be useful if they could automatically post to forums associated with public groups without having to join the actual group. That might go a long way toward getting more people using the new forums without running into the max group limit of ten and without the extra step of joining the group.
Thanks.
Dirk
As long as I'm busy telling Sol what to do, I'll add this. :-)
On the forums screen that I hope you implement, you could have a filter called Classic, which would show just the old TNBW forums, leaving out the rest of the groups from that particular filter. It would require adding a field to each group's database record to flag if it is a classic forum or not. You could populate that field automatically once, indicating which groups/forums are part of the classic list of groups. There then should be no need to provide an interface to all users to flag a group as classic. We already know which groups are classic. It would require creating groups for all of the old TNBW forums. so tha the classic filtered list showed all of the group forums we want from the old site. If you won't want to mess with the database records to add a Classic flag, there are other ways to implement the classic list (e.g., a manual hard-coded query for all groups that correspond to the old forums).
I really hope you don't create separate forums when the new forums are so close to what's needed for backward compatibility and a simpler implementation.
Hope that makes sense.
Dirk
Writing Tips & Advice is probably the group/forum to use for Writing 101 type of information. I believe that's how the old site used that forum. Sol is working on bringing back the old forums, although he and I are debating how best to implement it in the Premium group. Feel free too join us there and give your feedback.
Regards,
Dirk
I didn't spend a lot of time in the old forums so I'm not familiar with everything it could do, but there's nothing stopping someone here from reading your post if it's in a public group, like Writing Tips. The limitation is they have to join to post, and they may not both browsing to Writing Tips very often if they're not an actual member. Sol and I are busy trading posts in Premium about how the "new" forums view should work. Please join us. I'm sure you can be of help.
Dirk
I was actually referring to whether my forum posts should be posted to Premium, Free, or both. If non-paying members can't see what's in Premium, then they won't know what they're missing. A lot of my recent posts in Premium and elsewhere have been to try to help the new site get off the ground. I want to include free members in that too. If they can't see Premium, then I need to post in both.
Dirk
From the looks of the web page/link, that will duplicate functionality that already exists in the new system. There would be two places to put Writing Tips & Advice conversations, for example. Ditto for other groups/forums.
Although I understand that it's not possible to give everyone a view of all that is private/invisible, presumably you could do a query based on what's public and what isn't? It would have to include all public groups + all groups a member is already part of. If that list is too large, split it over several pages, and add search/filters to allow members to find those groups/forums their most interested in. Ideally, the most recently active groups would be at the top by default.
Otherwise, how are you going to combine the proposed view's front end with the corresponding groups/forums in the back end? Will the new front end link to the new groups with the same purpose, like Writing Tips & Advice or Additional Feedback, or will these be two separate repositories of similar information? I hope it's not going to duplicate functionality. That'll make the new site even more complicated, especially for those unfamiliar with the old site. They'll see two nearly identical places to post and not know which to use.
There must be something about the implementation complexity that I'm missing if you're planning on simply duplicating the old functionality side-by-side with the new group forums that already do most of what people are asking for. They just need a filtered view of all forums available to them, minus the big graphic icons that eat up valuable screen space.
And, when we're in a specific forum that we're not already part of and want to post to, an Apply button would be needed that duplicates the current Apply button function in the group view. If the group settings allow a user to immediately join the group, a single click on Apply would be all that is needed before a user could post, all without leaving the forum. If Apply requires permission, then user has to follow those steps and return later to post to the group forum once they're a member.
It seems like that would give you one back end with just two different front ends.
Thanks.
Dirk
Sol, can you please clarify the difference between Premium and Free? Is the Premium forum only available for paying members to read and post to?
I'm wondering if I should be posting my threads in both groups to include non-paying members as well.
Thanks.
Dirk
I can't recall if I posted this announcement yet, so apologies if this is a duplicate.
After some back & forth with Sol, we've decided to keep the Writing Tips & Advice group permanently as a replacement for the old site's similarly named forum. The new group's forum is open to anyone to read and you can post simply by joining (a single mouse click).
I found the old equivalent forum invaluable to me when I first started writing and would love to see it resurrected here. So far, activity has been very limited and not all original users of the old forum have signed up to the new group.
Perhaps this post will drum up a few extra members and some activity.
Sol has posted a tutorial book to the Writing Tips group, and I've commented, but it could use other's input.
Thanks.
Dirk
Or post it to the Writing Tips & Advice group that's already here on the site.
Dirk
Kenny, what about creating a Writing Craft group and start your conversation there?
For those creating new groups, if you want members to join, please announce your groups here in the TNBW Premium and Free groups. Otherwise, you'll be waiting for people to browse through all available groups (four pages so far) before finding your new group. I don't remember to look there very often. Also, it will help cut down on some of the duplication that is already starting to creep into the total list of groups.
I'm also going to go out on a limb here and suggest that there probably shouldn't be a separate group per novel or other piece of writing. The number of groups would skyrocket and no one will find your group. Also, with a limit of ten groups per premium member, there are only so many groups we can join. If you want additional feedback about your work, you could post it to a genre-specific group (e.g., science fiction, fantasy, horror, etc.) and start a discussion there, or post to the catch-all Additional Feedback group that was created here to replicate the old Additional Feedback forum on the old site. I suspect the new one will eventually fall out of use given the genre groups now available.
If you want the widest visibility, regardless of genre, post it to Premium and/or Free and explicitly ask for feedback by starting a thread in these two groups. I would guess that most people are monitoring the Premium group for new posts, so, if they're interested, you should get some reviews.
Regards,
Dirk
Sol, I thought I would post this as a separate thread so it doesn't get buried in the many conversations going on in different groups.
I was wondering if you can elaborate yet as to whether/how/when the old-style forums will work on the new site.
To other TNBW members, please add to this thread with any additions or corrections to what I'm posting.
From discussions with others here, they'd like access to all forums on one page (or as few pages as possible), with a single click to see all of the discussions in each forum, preferably with the newest at the top. If there is a way to sort the list of forums, so much the better, especially sorting by name or by most recent activity.
The trickier part probably has to do with posting. Currently, you have to be a member of a group in order to post to its forum. I understand the reason for that limitation, but I assume it means we'll need to join the group related to each forum in which we want to post. Hopefully, there will be a way to apply to join a group right from within the forum page itself. In that way, those groups that are public to all members will require at most a single click on a "join group" button before being allowed to post. That would mean two clicks max to post.
Naturally, if the group's creator has placed a restriction on who can join, then the workflow will presumably require an interaction with the group's creator before being allowed to post. That requirement will probably discourage some people from posting in the restricted group's forum, which is something the creator of the group will have to live with and/or think about when creating the group. Most of the groups I've seen so far are immediately open for joining.
Please let ue know more about this, as we're chomping at the bit to read/post on the new site. Things are amazingly silent at present, at least in the groups I'm part of.
I was wondering the same in a post earlier today. Things have seemed quiet since joining the new site, either because of the holidays or because people are still figuring out how best to use the system.
Some of the old forums have been created on this site as groups. The best way to get easy access to the group forums is to join the corresponding groups. That way the groups show up on the right hand side of your home page, with a forum link under each one. All you have to do, is click that link. Also, if you join a group you can also post to its forum.
The other way to get to the forums is a little more cumbersome, but doesn't require you to join. Go to the menu at the top of the screen called Groups, click on it and select All Groups to see a list of all groups (there are four pages worth so far). Find a group you might be interested in, click on it, and click the Forums tab to take you where you want to go. I'm afraid you have to repeat this step for each group you're interested in. That's why I find joining groups is the easier workflow. You can, however, read the content of most groups without joining. Some are made explicitly private by the creator/moderator for their own reasons.
I've also read that Sol is going to resurrect some form of the old groups on the new site. I'm not sure how he'll pull that off without further complicating the group forum concept already in place. Will that mean there will be two places to go to post/read? Not sure yet, and it will probably take some time, although he is very responsive.
As a workaround for the old forums, Linda Lee created a group here called Old Forums, with one thread for each of the old forums (e.g., shred thread, strongest start, member announcements, etc.). Unfortunately, with only one discussion thread for each of the old forums, you really can't have multiple separate conversations going on in the same thread (e.g., discussions about two different pieces of work being shredded, or multiple conversations about writing tips & advice, and so on).
Since we're allowed to be a member of ten groups at a time, joining the groups of interest to you is probably the best bet. Have a look through all of the available groups so far and join those you like, or create new ones. You can announce any new groups you created here in the Premium forum. If there are particular people you want to explicitly invite into a group, make a connection with them and then send them a private message.
Hope that helps.
Dirk
Sol, the following would be a "nice to have" when time allows.
Currently on the home page, it lists all new content (books, essays, poems, etc.) followed by a Read More New Content button. Scrolling all the way down to find that button is tedious, nor is it obvious to a new user. Ideally, that button should appear below each section of new content (i.e., after new books, new poems, etc.).
If you really want to make it cool, make the buttons different for each type of work: Read More New Books, Read More New Poems, etc. Obviously, that would require you to take the user to the Content screen and pre-filter on content type. I think a lot of users would find that useful.
Thanks.
Dirk
Hi Pamela. Many things have changed, most for the better, I think. Start by clicking on the The Next Big Writer logo on the upper left of your screen. That will take you to your home page, which has lots of useful information as you begin to use the site regularly. On the upper right of the home page is an orange button labelled Conversion Assistance. That should answer many of your questions.
At the very top of the screen are icons for searching (the magnifying glass), reading content, reading group forums, and a menu button with your userid on it. That menu is important, as it gives you access to many of the features you would most want about the site. The Portfolio menu item is where you'll find your own work (books, poems, etc.). Click on the various items in the menu to see where they take you and explore a bit. It isn't too hard to get used to.
A couple of new concepts to be aware of inline reviews and groups. Most people love the inline reviews. You can select a piece of text in someone's story and drop a comment right there. No more constant scrolling up and down to copy/comment on specific items in someone else's story. Your inline reviews can be saved if you can't finish in one session, or submitted to make them visible to everyone else, including the author. Note that your feedback and the author's replies are now visible to everyone. Previously, the author's reply was private to just the reviewer.
Note that there are two kinds of reviews: regular and inline. You can leave either type of review for someone. Regular reviews are just like those on the old site. Inline reviews are as described above.
Groups are a new concept on the new site. As the name implies, they are for grouping related information together. For example, there is a Sci-fi group where you can publish and/or discuss science fiction work. There are also groups for fantasy, detective/crime, young adult, etc. You've already found your way to the Old Forums group, so you know how to navigate to groups. From a group's main page, you can get to the forum for that group, see content posted to that group, and see members of the group. Joining a group is easy. There's a button for it on each group's page. Most groups are wide open, and anyone can join by simply clicking on the button. Other groups are restricted, so I assume a moderator will have to approve your request to join. As far as I can tell, you can see the content of each group, including the forums, but you need to be a member to post. You can join up to 10 groups, which seems to be enough for everyone at present.
The TNBW Premium and TNBW Free groups are important. Everyone should probably join both groups. I'm not sure if non-paying users can join TNBW Premium. Premium is where we do most of our communicating with Sol and each other about the new site (bugs, enhancement requests, etc.). I don't use the Free group, so I'm not quite sure how it differs. I know that there are both free and paying members on the site, but I'm not sure how those two groups differ and how best to use them. I use Premium and Science Fiction exclusively. However, when you publish chapters, you can choose which groups to publish to (Premium, Free, YA, etc.). If you publish to the Free group, non-paying members can read your work if they so choose. I believe there's also a way to publish chapters/your work to be accessible to the whole the Internet. I don't use that, since I prefer not to expose my work for someone to copy/steal.
There is currently no place on the site like the old forums on the old site, where you could go into a specific forum and start a discussion about a particular topic. Each forum could have multiple different discussions going on at the same time. In order to do the equivalent here, you go to the group you think is best for your discussion, join the group so you can post to the group-specific forum, and post/read. Right now the site is rather quiet, hopefully just due to the holidays or people finding their way around. There is some overlap among groups, so you may have to join several to cover all your bases (e.g., several variations of young adult material, a separate fantasy group from science fiction, etc.). Like I said above, you can join ten groups, which seems to be enough for most.
I've read that Sol is going to bring back the old style forums to this new site, but that'll probably take time. In the meantime, Linda Lee created this group, Old Forums, to which you posted. It's a limited workaround. Read some of the other posts to this group to see what the limitations are. Although I'm a member of this group just to keep up to date on what people are posting, I don't use it for discussion threads. This group will probably go away once Sol implements the real old-style forums.
Some people have taken to creating groups for their specific pieces of work (e.g., a group for a specific book so they can get additional feedback). That's probably not a great idea, since we can only join ten groups each. One group per book would probably make the site a mess. The old site had a forum called Additional Feedback and there is a corresponding group in the new site for that that anyone can use for further discussions of someone's work. You can also get additional feedback about your work in the groups to which you post it. For example, if you post your work to the Science Fiction group, the forum there can be used to discuss your work (beyond the basic regular/inline reviews). In that group, you would get posts from people especially interested in science fiction.
There is also a Writing Tips & Advice group that I created intended to replicate the similarly named forum on the old site. Not much activity there yet. In that group you can find a how-to-write tutorial from Sol, and my discussion thread related to it.
I'm sure I've forgotten some things, so feel free to ask.
Happy New Year!
Dirk
Minor bug: when I click on the menu button on the upper right of my computer screen, it displays the menu of choices (portfolio, profile, etc.), but as I move my mouse down to select an item, the menu often disappears. It seems to be due to the tiny horizontal gap between the menu button and the actual menu itself. If my Windows OS/Chrome Browser decide I hovered too long over that gap, the menu goes away. This is a relatively frequent occurence, at least 10-20% of the time. The workaround is to go back up and click on the menu button again and then quickly haul the mouse down, skipping over the gap. It's annoying. I've noticed it on at least one other drop down menu that uses the same style (with the gap), but I can't remember which one it was.
Edit: This problem seems to have been fixed, or I'm going insane, or both. :-) Thanks, Sol.
After playing with the new versioning system, I found it works best if you're posting changes to the same chapter as before, and want reviews of the new version, while keeping reviews of the previous version of the same chapter in the system for your own reference. So you repost the same chapter with a newer version number and hide the old. If you keep both versions visible, you could ask for reviews of both to tell you if your new chapter is really much better than the old.
If, on the other hand, your chapter numbers begin to change (e.g., you add or delete chapters in the new version), the TNBW versioning doesn't really address that as well. If your reader can't read all of the new v2 chapters and then drop down to v1 and pick up the story from there (e.g., from v2 of ch. 2 down to v1 of ch. 3, they would become confused).
In my case, v3 of my book will soon be substantially different than v2 since I'll be adding/deleting chapters in v3 as I get further along. It will be increasingly difficult to read the first few chapters of v3 and then pick up the story in v2 without continuity problems. My v2 is meant to be read sequentially from ch. 1 onward, and my v3 is also meant to be read sequentially from ch. 1 onward, but you're not meant to read the early part of v3 and then continue with the rest of v2. For this reason, I created two separate books, Into the Mind of God v2 and Into the Mind of God v3.
To further minimize confusion between my v2 and v3, I explicitly set all of the chapters in my v2 to TNBW v2, and all of the chapters in my v3 to TNBW v3. This is because, by default, TNBW labels all of my chapters as v1 unless I choose otherwise. I don't want a reader to be in v2 or v3 of my book seeing TNBW v1 on every chapter they read.
I hope that makes sense. Hopefully, Sol can add to this if I've made some incorrect assumptions.
Regards,
Dirk
Hi NJC,
I was curious about your chapter issues, so I looked at what you have. I noticed your renumbered chapters are missing 5-7, and you have two chapter 3s, one of which is numbered v1 with a manually added "(v2.2)" in parentheses. The other chapter 3 is numbered v2.
Did you intend for two chapter 3s? If not, which is correct: v2 or "(v2.2)"?
Regards,
Dirk
Sol, thanks for automatically expanding Chapter Notes and making them available on the inline review page. Both very helpful.
Regards,
Dirk
This thread is in response to Sol's posted chapters in this group about writing a novel. I thought I would add my two cents here in case anyone wants to have a discussion about the writing process. Hopefully, members of this group can improve on my process.
Aside from the outlining suggestions made by Sol, following are some of the other steps I use to write. All of the following are "living" documents that I do my best to keep up to date. Some are based on what I've learned from writing guides, others based on trial and error, and the rest from other writers here on the site.
For the outline, I try to include an estimated page count for each scene/chapter. That gives me a rough idea as to whether or not I can add more to the story or should strip some out. I'm not fixated on the page count, but I find it a useful addition to the process to compare my manuscript's length to other stories in the same genre. You can also get a rough estimate of word count based on page count. I write about 250-300 words per double-spaced page using Times New Roman 12-point font, which I'm told is the standard way to format your manuscript.
I keep my outline up to date, throwing in more scene- or chapter-specific ideas as they pop into my head while I'm writing, or removing ones that are no long relevant.
I also maintain a "names" bible, usually referred to as a character bible. For anything as long as a novel, it's almost a must to keep track of names of characters, what they look like, their backgrounds, what motivates them, etc. In my case, I prefer a spreadsheet, so I can easily scan the information (e.g., all eye colors to make sure certain children look like their parents, or to avoid having too many characters that are too similar).
In the same spreadsheet, I also maintain other named objects in the universe I'm building (e.g., ship names, ship types, ship tech, weapon types, military titles/ranks, stars, planets, cities, societies, etc.). Anything that can be named/described I keep together in the same spreadsheet as the character bible. It even includes expressions (e.g., military mantras) used by my characters, such as "For the Realm!" or forms of address such as My Lord, Your Highness, Your Majesty, etc. Anything I might want to reuse elsewhere in the story. Personally, I can't keep that much information in my head, so I put it all in a spreadsheet. I'll probably end up with 400-500 named entities by the time I'm done, each with multiple characteristics. Some of it I may never use, but I have it if I want it, and it helps me create more three dimensional characters and places.
I keep a big Notes file of every idea/change I might want to include in the book but am too busy to do at any given moment (e.g., I'm writing one chapter, but think of something I should do to others to keep things consistent). I peruse the Notes file regularly and keep it up to date. I divide the Notes file into several sections, especially ideas that are still percolating and ideas I've rejected or completed. I don't want to lose the latter in case I want to revisit them later for reuse or new/changed ideas.
I also took a crack at writing a short one to two sentence theme for my book: Those who struggle at the intersection of religion, mental illness, and homosexuality have the greatest capacity for empathy and are willing to endure the greatest hardship for the benefit of mankind. Too over-the-top? Try the short version: You're too pious, you're crazy, and you're gay, so lighten up! :-) I also wrote out who the primary target audience is for the book (e.g., sci-fi fans, late teens and up, with an interest in adult-oriented themes, primarily for North America, Europe, and other Westernized cultures). I don't, for example, think the book is appropriate for YA given the violence, cursing, and crude humor, nor would it go over well in non-democratic societies (I pick on China, North Korea, Russia, and Apple Inc., among others), nor in the Arab-speaking Islamic world. It helps publishers figure out if a book fits their typical market. The theme and target audience also help me keep the story on track, although I'm perfectly willing to change either if that's where the story takes me.
Not too long ago, I wrote a one-page, single-spaced synopsis of the book, including a complete summary of the book and how it ends. This too is used by publishers and for writing contests and is another great exercise in helping craft the story. Obviously, in a single page, you only highlight key characters and the most important plot points. Writing it forced me to really figure out my ending for the first time.
I use MS Word change-tracking when exchanging documents with my editor. She marks it up, and I can decide what to keep or reject. We both use the MS Word commenting feature (the little balloons tied to a piece of text, accessible via the Reviews tab on newer versions of Word). As the name implies, the comments can be about anything related to a chapter, scene, paragraph, word choices, grammar, etc. that are not words that actually belong in the story itself. It's equivalent to inline comments on TNBW, except you can see them all on the page at once as balloons off to the right of the story text.
I also use the comments to help me manage TNBW reviews. When I'm processing a review, I make the small edits (e.g., typos, grammar, etc.) in the manuscript, and I add MS Word comments for any major feedback that will require more effort, such as a chapter rewrite or changes to overall plot/character arcs, or simply things I need to think about. If it's feedback about something that spans multiple chapters or the whole story, I usually place an entry in my Notes file instead of in a Word comment.
Since TNBW inline feedback cannot currently be displayed without clicking on each individual item of feedback, I try to incorporate all inline changes right away so that I don't need to come back into the review and click through all of them again later. I maintain a Word comment at the top of each chapter of my manuscript that lists all of the reviews I've completed processing so that I don't accidentally reread the same reviews over and over later, looking for which reviews I still need to work through.
One important note about Word comments: I can't figure out a way to copy the manuscript chapters from Word into TNBW without also bringing over the Word comments. I then have to manually strip them out each time I post, which limits the number of comments I'm willing to attach to any given chapter. On the other hand, if one of my chapters is in such rough shape that it's still full of comments, then it's probably too soon to post.
I keep lots of backups of everything. Every Word/Excel document is backed up regularly, both on my computer and on two backup drives, especially before I make significant changes to chapters, such as incorporating all TNBW feedback. I sometimes need to go back and fetch something I wrote and then discarded, wanting to add it back in after all. My backup of last resort is the material I published on the TNBW. Now that we have version control, I can even go back to earlier versions of chapters. So far, I haven't had to use TNBW to recover something, but it's nice to know it's there if I need it (e.g., if North Korea infects all of my hardware).
That's all I can think of for now. I'm sure others have a better/more mature process and will hopefully add their feedback.
Regards,
Dirk
I have areas like that too (conference briefings, team exercises, etc.). They're my slowest chapters, especially since they run back-to-back. I've been trying to improve them. I added background rioting (nothing actually shown) in my fictional galaxy as a way to punch up the urgency of the peace conference and what they were supposed to accomplish (people sick of a galactic cold war that leaves them in constant poverty, so they riot). Other things I did were a drunken fight between the two opposing main characters, one of whom may be recalled because his behavior was all recorded. Another way to consider it is if the chapters are actually needed to tell the overall story. I try to use humor as a break as well, although I do it within the context of character building that is needed to set the stage for something bigger later, or sometimes just to develop realistic human beings.
Dirk
Most writing books agree with Kenny about the tension. Things are supposed to remain dire for our heroes. Although I look for that in other people's writing and try to do it in mine, both Kenny and Don produce really nice chapters that just happen to end on an upbeat note. I just read Kenny's chapter 18 of The Self-Destruction of Mrs Blue, which ends with the heroine smiling with satisfaction, planning to kick butt. An easing of the tension, but a nice hurrah moment for the reader. It's a perfectly good hook to keep me going.
Dirk
Kenny, you're probably already aware at this point that we're now allowed ten groups.
Cheers.
Dirk