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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

It looks like everything is published correctly, and you have one regular review already on chapter two. I suggest you start a conversation thread in one or more appropriate group forums (e.g. the genre group for your work and/or Premium) introducing yourself, the novel, and asking for reviews. You can then either wait a few more days to see if anyone reads more, or begin reading other people's work so that they will, hopefully, reciprocate on an ongoing basis. You'll almost certainly need to begin reading other people's work to get them to read three of your chapters. It's very time consuming to review three chapters, espercially if there's no reciprocal relationship.

Dirk

4,027

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

What about it makes it a "tour"? Does the book's author visit multiple sites while the tour is active? In other words, what's the author's role during the days that the tour is ongoing?

Thanks
Dirk

4,028

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

SquarePeg, this is the first I've ever heard of virtual book tours, although it sounds great. Besides the advertising and blogger reviews, are there live Q&A chat sessions or some kind of forum like this one where we pop in and out? I followed your link and looked around, but I wasn't sure about that aspect.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,029

(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

max keanu wrote:

But sweetheart and great poet lady, from your bio pic/painting I'm intrigued enough to wonder and feel fascination at the depth of being that is you, at the person (or persons) inside you that pickled that beautiful painting that represents you.
... And, any bit of information about a person may bring the mind meld and meshing moment  of being and nothingness closer to the reading edge we all cautiously walk upon, as time is always fleeting and of the essence.

Max, this is a well-written bit of prose. So much so, I went to read your bio. It's a bit thin. :-)

Dirk

For anyone looking for a really good sci-fi story to add to your reading list, check out Jericho Down by Derek Atkins here on the site.

Highly recommended. Now if I can just get him to write faster. :-)

Dirk

I don't think you'll get many volunteers to read ten chapters for no points, before they review the 11th. They can already do that now: read each chapter, skip reviewing, and then finally start reviewing from chapter 11 on. If you want to try that, you could put a request in the Chapter Notes of what you really would like. Since I read more than I write (I need to reverse that), I have plenty of points whenever I want to publish. Other authors are far more prolific and are usually pressed for time, mostly reading chapters for points.

Although I no longer want reviews of my earliest chapters because they're so stale, I nevertheless reciprocate as my latest reviewers work through the book to catch up to where I want them to be. I picked up a great reviewer that way only recently. I look forward to her getting to the better chapters.

As for an offline e-reader version of your book, you could create the appropriate file(s) as you would if it was your finished work. I believe that starts with a Word document. You can then distribute the files to potential readers. Again, the chapter notes could be used to direct people accordingly. By the time you get to the final draft of your book, you would be an expert at the publishing steps.

Dirk

Hi Dunecan. I don't understand item 1. Are you saying that longer chapters aren't broken up into as many paragraphs as short ones? I must be interpreting that wrong, since the way you break up a story into paragraphs shouldn't really be related to chapter length.

Long chapters do make for a more difficult read. It requires setting aside larger chunks of time to do a single review, whereas short chapters can usually be reviewed in perhaps fifteen minutes. I like short breaks from other parts of my life, so I'm glad the site encourages short chapters. I would think that's true for eventual readers of the complete book as well.

For item 2, are you talking about putting the whole book up on the site for beta readers? I've seen other published authors here take down their content once the book is published, leaving only a few chapters behind to whet someone's appetite. If you don't want to review all of the chapters of someone's book starting with chapter 1, you could simply read 1-10 without leaving reviews, then start reviewing chapter 11.

For 2a, why would you want to deactivate chapters from receiving reviews. It gives you more feedback and encourages readers to review your stuff so they can get points to publish their own work.

My biggest problem with the second draft of my book is that I consider the first half of that draft to be of very poor quality, and I'm getting repetitive feedback about those chapters while I work on finishing the second draft. However, I keep it up, because I occasionally pick up a new long-term reviewer, which I couldn't get if I made them read ten chapters before they could start earning points.

Apologies if I'm misunderstanding your questions.

Dirk

Sol, at the upper right of the posting view you now show whether or not I've reviewed someone's chapter, and whether it was inline or regular. Immediately to the left of that, right below the stack of coins, is a little icon that looks like a message. When I hover over it, the tooltip says "your review bookmarks only for this chapter".

What is that for/does it mean?

Thanks.
Dirk

4,034

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Stephen, I really like your story. You have an almost poetic writing style.

As others have suggested, earn some points and post it and you'll probably get a lot of useful feedback. There are some terrific reviewers on the site. If you don't get enough feedback after you post, feel free to join some of the genre-specific groups and drop a thread there introducing yourself and asking for reviewers. However, you'll probably pick up most of your reviewers by reading their stuff first, and they then reciprocate. In addition to the feedback they give, you can also learn a lot about writing from reading their stuff. Since writing time is precious, I whittled my list down to about eight great reviewers, and I learn as much by reading their work as I do from them reading mine.

Also, read the reviews left by others for stories that you yourself also review. It will make you a better reviewer and give you great writing tips about any weaknesses that may apply to your own stories. Reading the reviews left by others may also help you identify which authors on the site make a real effort and leave the best reviews. You can then read their stuff and, hopefully, pick up excellent reviewers that way too.

Welcome to the site.
Dirk

4,035

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

dagnee, if you click on the list of names, there is a text field at the top of the list where you can type in the names of the people you are trying to message. It automatically filters the list even as you begin to type the names.

Dirk

4,036

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

dagnee wrote:
Norm d'Plume wrote:

I would recommend using the Writing Tips & Advice group for such a discussion. If we keep putting all threads in Premium, we'll soon have all kinds of unrelated conversations here that were intended to belong in other groups. Otherwise, why have them?

Either way, let's take this out of the Wish list thread.

Dirk

So, Norm, what exactly is the main group for? Just to discuss the site? I still think that a discussion on writing would best be served if the widest possible audience was exposed to the thread. Also, there are people that might want to contribute but won't because it involves joining another group. smile

I'm wondering if the best way to handle this would be to have a "global" page of all topics/threads, grouped by group name. In other words, one place to go to see all threads in the system, grouped by Sci-fi, Fantasy, Premium, Writing Tips, etc. The content for the global page would be the topics/threads from those actual groups, simply presented as a global page. Posting a new topic on the global page under a certain group would automatically place the new topic in the appropriate group's forum, as well as show it on the global page. This would be a nice way to show all threads for the whole site in a single place where we could quickly scan/scroll through the lists of topics. in one place. Obviously, it would need search and filter capabilities to narrow the result set.

The global page would have to have a function that allows a user to join "open" groups immediately, without leaving the global page. Groups with restricted membership would probably need limits on what can done from the global view (read-only, read-write, or completely unavailable to others outside the group).

This approach could also eliminate the need for resurrecting the old forums, since all posts would remain attached to a group, but shown in a way that the old site's users are used to. It's just a different view of the same database.

Dirk

4,037

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

In the posting view for my own book, when I click on the chapter pick list, some of the chapters are highlighted with the word "regular". Not all of my chapters have this (even though most have regular reviews), and none have the word "inline" next to them. It's no big deal, since I primarily use the pick list to navigate other people's chapters, not so much my own.

As long as it's not corrupting anything...
Dirk

4,038

(1 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Any time you "publish" to Premium it will cost points. That can be if you publish a chapter for the first time, or if you decide to publish a different version of the same chapter for people to review again.

You can also "edit" existing chapters, without it costing points.

Click on the menu at the top right of the home page and select Portfolio. It will provide a list of your works on the site. On the right hand side, click the Action menu for the work you want to update. You can choose Add Chapter or Edit, depending on what you want to do. Either choice takes you to a 5-step workflow to add or change your work.

Editing work allows you to incorporate changes for future reviewers to see, and they'll get points for the reviews. Those who have already reviewed the work will not get points for reviewing it again, unless you publish it as a new chapter, using the Add Chapter workflow. Add Chapter will cost you points.

If you want to publish a chapter to replace an existing one, follow the Add Chapter workflow, but give the new chapter a different version number (e.g., chapter 2, v2 instead of chapter 2, v1). You can then decide whether you want to leave the old version of the chapter visible for readers to compare before/after, or simply hide the old one. Be careful about deleting old chapters, since I believe the reviews on the old chapter disappear with it.

Hope that helps.
Dirk

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(3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, can you please let us know the current rules you're using on the right hand side of the home page to decide how long to leave new forum posts showing under the groups displayed there. I'm not sure if I'm seeing all of the new posts there or not before they disappear from that part of the screen.

On a related note, I think the default "Subscribe to this topic." checkbox should always default to checked for the initial creator of a post.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,040

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

We're allowed ten groups now. We have an existing group called Writing Tips & Advice that may be appropriate.

Dirk

4,041

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

This is great, Sol.

Would it be possible to also default the chapter shown in the posting view in a book to the next unread chapter? By defaulting to chapter one, we still have to scroll through the pick list to get to the next uread chapter. With 40-50 chapters per book, that's a lot to scroll through.

Nice work so far.
Dirk

4,042

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, my billing screen says that my renewal date is tomorrow, but there is no functionality yet for renewal.

Can I assume we're good until that feature is enabled?

Thanks.
Dirk

I'm in the same boat. I plan for a major climax at the end of book one, followed by a cliffhanger for at least one of my two main characters that leaves the door wide open for a book two. I suggest resolving many of your threads, even if only temporarily. A sci-fi book I read recently just cut off the story at the end of book one, with the author simply expecting me to buy two more books without even a temporary resolution to any of the threads. I was so unimpressed by that, I didn't bother buying the other books. That was an example for me of what not to do.

Star Wars IV, for all its perceived plot holes, did it well. They blew up the Death Star, resolving the key threat in that story, but allowed Darth Vader to escape. Had the movie flopped at the box office, Lucas could have ended it right there. The other unresolved threads where minor until the second story (who gets the girl, and does Luke become a Jedi). The Empire Strikes Back, however, ended with some big unresolved threads, followed by a three year wait for answers. Ugh.

Dirk

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I would recommend using the Writing Tips & Advice group for such a discussion. If we keep putting all threads in Premium, we'll soon have all kinds of unrelated conversations here that were intended to belong in other groups. Otherwise, why have them?

Either way, let's take this out of the Wish list thread.

Dirk

Like everything else in the world today, there's a google search for that: "words that differ from british and american english".

4,046

(8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

That is too cool. I didn't even know that was possible. I can see!

Thanks, Tom.
Dirk

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I particularly like to read the reviews left by other reviewers I know, or the reviews of my reviewers' own works. It's to get their perspective and to avoid repeating nits. Sometimes I'll reinforce an opinion given by someone else. I vary as to whether I read other reviews before or after I've left my own.

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I was wondering what the ETA is for being able to jump to the next unread chapter of someone's book. Ideally, any time we click on someone's book, it should default the chapter in the posting view to the one we should read next. If you also make it possible to jump directly from the Regular Reviews Posted and Inline Reviews Posted tabs, that would cut down significantly on clicks/scrolls.

I'm not sure about anyone else, but I rely on those two tabs to tell me where I left off reviewing someone else's work. Currently I go to the two tabs, find where I left off, click on the author's name, find the book, click on it, then use the chapter selector to go to the next chapter, and then I'm ready to review. All that could be reduced to one click.

If there's currently a better way to do this, please let me know.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,049

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Karin, use the "add chapter" workflow to add the new chapter to your book with the desired chapter number and version number. When you get to Publish step, there will be a green Publish button next to the new chapter in the list. Use that button to publish and make it visible; reviewers will receive points for reviewing the new chapter. FYI, you can make the old chapter inactive if you want to so that it won't appear to your reviewers. Making it inactive (rather than deleting) will still allow you to access the reviews associated with the old chapter. Or, you can leave them both up if you want people to compare both versions.

As far as I can tell, there's no way to publish the same chapter with identical chapter and version numbers as an existing chapter. Assuming you want to use the same chapter number as an old chapter, simply increment the version number for the new chapter. That works.

I don't know if there is a way to publish a new chapter with identical chapter/version numbers as an existing chapter unless you delete the old. Sol would have to weigh in one that.

Hope that makes sense.
Dirk

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

Now there's another possibility: a field for the author's requests to reviewers, which will appear over the review buttons and at the top of the review page.

That's what the chapter notes are for. If people aren't even reading those, another text field isn't likely to help much.

In general, I hope we don't keep adding review-related buttons to the top. There are already five buttons up there. Sol has to support tablets and handhelds too, so space is at a premium. He expanded chapter notes specifically so people wouldn't skip it. If they do, you can ask the reviewers in your replies to start reading them. That's what I did and the problem went away.

If we do need more review-related buttons, I suggested changing the existing Leave Inline Review button to a Go to Reviews button at the top, and have that jump to the start of the reviews further down the page. From there, it's just one more click on the existing buttons to leave either an inline or regular review. It's more consistent and we can then group any new review-related buttons directly above the reviews.

Full disclosure: I'm hoping for a Bottom button at the top of that page to jump to the tail end of the reviews. Then I don't have to keep scrolling all the way down to see the latest reviews. I can scroll up. Any long page, like forum threads, should also have that. My joints are too old to constantly scroll from the top of long pages when I really want to be at the bottom.

Thanks
Dirk