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(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

When I click on Find More Books from the home page, it takes me to the My Groups Content page where I see all available books. There are Summary and Chapters buttons for each book that expand to show the book content summary and chapter listing, respectively.

I noticed that the Summary button only shows the first four lines of my summary, then trails off with .... The chapter listing works as expected, showing as many chapters as exist in the book. People who keep their summaries short won't be affected but, as I'm sure you know, I'm rather long-winded and can't squeeze everything into four lines.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,027

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Fair enough, Sol. May the Force be with you.

4,028

(2 replies, posted in Science Fiction, Steampunk, and Space Opera)

The original series was my favorite TV show when I was growing up. There was no cable then, so I had to take my little RCA TV into my mother's bedroom, point the antenna out the window at Vermont and hope for the best. Some days all I got was the staticky audio and shadows on the screen. Still watched it.

I'm sorry he passed. Another major milestone for me.
Dirk

4,029

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

KHippolite wrote:

really don't understand the clamor for having a forum for every work posted. Doesn't make sense; the majority appear, get little attention and then are never heard of again, so what would be the purpose in creating all these thousands of feedback forums above what is already available.

Yes... I see from this that my statement has been misunderstood so I'll rephrase it slightly.

What's needed is a way to attach a forum link to a particular work. For example:

[Body of Work]
[Inline Reviews]
[Reviews]
[Additional Feedback]

The additional feedback link would drop you into the forum thread associated with the work. You would be able to read & post in this forum thread without needing to join the group. You would not need to go hunt down the group / forum that was discussing this body of work. You would not need to randomly guess that there was a thread on it in the first place.

In general, I like this idea. Much better than people having to guess about an additional feedback thread, especially given the number of places where that thread could now exist (Additional Feedback group, Old Forums, Sci-fi group, etc.). If you post your work to multiple groups, as I believe most do, then there would be only one thread, not one per group.

However, such a capability would need to be able to associate the same thread with multiple chapters, otherwise there would be one per chapter, which would turn the group forums into a mess. Even one thread per work would probably be overload eventually. Everyone might create such a thread just in case and have it never get used. Then you have forums full of orphaned threads.

Another problem that would have to be addressed is what to do if an author has chosen not to create an additional feedback thread, but a reviewer wants to leave additional feedback. Then you get back to the current problem of not knowing where to put the thread and hoping the author sees it. If you allow reviewers to create that thread if there isn't already one, then you have to have to support notification to the author and, potentially, others about the newly created discussion.

On the other hand, using the existing chapter review mechanism as a means for discussion about a given chapter (as I think Sol is suggesting) also seems like a very logical thing to do, but it hides discussions from general visibility. If someone starts a discussion within a chapter that I've previously reviewed, how would I know about it unless I go back and check? There would need to be a way for the reviewer to subscribe to chapters in order to be notified about ongoing discussions about those chapters. Also, how would others who are not reading the book potentially participate in discussions if they have to search the bottom of each chapter for activity.

And, just to make everyone nuts, if there is a discussion going on inside an inline review, the only people who would know about it are the participants in the discussion. I don't read other's reviews in detail, clicking on each inline comment, so I'll never know about the discussion. Right now, even the author doesn't know if a third party is commenting inside an inline review left by someone else, although I presume that part will be addressed.

As I mentioned in an earlier post, the only ideal way to handle discussions would be to have a mechanism to browse/search/participate in discussions at the chapter level, work level, group level, or global level. That requires a very different architecture and a lot of work.

Dirk

4,030

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I was trying to use my android phone with the default browser to respond to someone else's entry on the Wish List thread. I was able to read their part of the thread, but when I was typing my reply in the Write Message box at the bottom of the screen, after a few paragraphs, the view kept jumping up to display what I was responding to, rather than where I had been typing. I had to abandon the reply. This may be because my reply was too long for the android screen and things got confused. That's just a guess though.

Dirk

4,031

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Dunecan, you're generaly correct, with a few caveats.

If you edit over an existing chapter, then you don't need extra points to do so. Simply editing, however, will not cause your chapter to reappear at the top of the list of works displayed on the home page. It also won't notify your connections that changes were made. I usually use this approach when I'm just trying to incorporate my latest changes before *new* readers see my chapters. Reviewers who've already read the chapter won't receive points for reviewing it again, in spite of the new edits.

If, however, if you want everyone to be notified of the changes, then you need to re-publish using points. Simply specify the same chapter number as the old one, but increment the version number. You may not want to delete the old version of that chapter, since it includes all of the reviews you've already received. If you delete the old chapter, then the old reviews go with it. Instead, you can either leave the old version visible (if you want reviewers to see and compare both the old and new versions), or make it inactive, so that it is no longer visible to reviewers, but is still available for you to refer back to it. All reviewers will receive points for reading the new version.

I believe all of the above also applies to short stories, poems, etc.

Hope that helps.
Dirk

4,032

(1 replies, posted in Old forums)

I suggest pop-tent, bubble-shelter, or pop-shelter. Pop-bubbles is too ambiguous.

Do you think I could fit one into a personal AI?

Dirk

4,033

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Rosie Zander wrote:

I'm new here but I find this conversation interesting. While everyone is making a wish list, here is mine.
I'd like a rocket  that can travel at light speed and transport me to the Andromeda galaxy. Some type of portable oxygen system would be nice. Throw in a recombinatator for food production and a holodeck for entertainment. And while you're at it, can you create a new version of the site that automatically writes my book for me and then distributes alerts and emails whenever someone access my prose? But I want to make sure I only receive alerts from left-handed people and those with three nipples. And I definitely don't want to see any writing from people who have brown eyes.
Please also create a new forum every time I utter the phrase that begins with the letter S so that discussion can be had on these types of words.
Oh, and while you're at it, do you think the site can dispense kale smoothies?
One more thing. Do you think you can rig up some type of cold fusion project so that I don't have to purchase electricity for all of this.

Thank you for your efforts.
Rosie

Welcome, Rosie.

Sarcasm is prohibited for everyone except KHippolite. This is a thread for wishlist requests, hence the topics of discussion. Sometimes we're just trying to understand how the new site works and is intended to be used.

Dirk

4,034

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

vern wrote:

Well, when I first read all the talk about creating a new forum for every piece of work, I really couldn't understand the need so thought I'd just sit out this particular debate , but then I kept reading different posts about how good it would be and all so I decided to go ahead and jump in. But alas it looks like Sol must've read my mind because he pretty much said everything I was going to say. But I'm gonna go ahead and regurgitate some of it anyway so as to put my vote out there should one be taken.

The problem is not that there is no forum for all this feedback bandied about; the problem is that virtually no one uses the built in forum of the inline review. Not only do most folks not respond to any of the highlighted areas within the text of the piece being reviewed, virtually no other reviewers make additional comments to the ones already made. I've made a few attempts to get some response, but so far nothing has happened so I simply quit leaving additional comments for the most part.

If authors really want more feedback, then pray tell why don't they offer some opinion on all the comments left in the inline review instead of only a few words in the final comment section. You can agree or disagree with what was said or even offer a totally different interpretation. You can question why the reviewer sees things that weren't intended at all or show why you chose to do something a particular way and start a conversation in which others could offer various points of view. In other words, you've got a forum built into the review process just as Sol envisioned and implemented.

I really don't see why Sol would entertain making any changes to the existing forum parameters when the potential for the obvious feedback choice is almost totally ignored.

That's my vote on the long ballot. Take care. Vern

Vern, I know about the feature you mention and use it, but I'll bet not everyone even knows that a third party can add their two cents to an inline comment. I discovered it by accident while re-reading a review I received. I do respond to inline comments and then usually leave a note at the bottom that I've done so, otherwise a reviewer would never know which of their many suggestions I've replied to inline. That little hindrance could be resolved by having some sort of indicator (a different color?) on the inline comments when there is more than one comment. The solution would also require some form of notification (at least to the author) that there is more discussion taking place in an existing inline review, and some way to find it, besides hunt and peck.

The inline capability is great for individual nits. The posting (chapter) view is great for chatting at the chapter level (if I don't have to scroll endlessly). And the group forum is great for whatever anyone cares to use it for (chapters, books, general discussions, etc.).

Dirk

4,035

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

1. Another wish list item (drooling on this one) would be to have a bottom button at the top of each forum page, and a top button at the bottom of each such page. That would allow us to easily click to get to a page (e.g., I clicked 4 to go to the last page of Wishlist Cont.), and then one more click to go to the opposite end of the page. I suggest putting the buttons immediately to the right of the page numbers. That way, you simply click on a page and, with the slightest mouse movement, can skip to the top/bottom. This would be really handy for those of us with joints as old as dirt. Ideally, you could add similarly named buttons on the posting view page to do the same thing, and anywhere else where pages grow long with time.

2. On a related note, I'll restate my wish for a button at the top of the posting view page to dive directly into a regular review as you can with an inline review, without having to first scroll to the end of the chapter. I rarely use regular reviews anymore, but I know many still do. I think it would be a very nice shortcut and would address at least one of the click/scrolling complaints you're getting.

3. And as long as I'm redesigning your posting view (grin), we also need a button at the top to jump directly over a chapter to the beginning of that chapter's reviews. I've noticed that many of my reviewers like to read the reviews of others before diving in. I do it too.

I'm sure you have screen real-estate issues, especially with tablets and phones to support. You could accomplish 2 and 3 combined if you change the Leave Inline Review button to Goto Reviews. Have the Goto Reviews button take me to the start of the reviews just below the chapter, where you then already have two side-by-side buttons to leave Regular vs Inline reviews. I think it would streamline the posting view a lot and add a touch of extra simplicity for new users trying to find their way around. Admittedly, you may hear some initial grumbles if you change Leave Inline Reviews to Goto Reviews, requiring an extra mouse mouvement and click to get to those much loved inlines.

Thanks as always.
Dirk

4,036

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, this may be a new bug. I reviewed Janet Taylor-Perry's Abyss, chapter two, this evening between 9-10 PM ET. I had numerous problems getting the inline comments to submit. It may just have been a performance issue with the site. However, I discovered that a little impatient duplicate clicking eventually made the inlines submit. I subsequently saw that I had left 55 comments, which is way more than I actually had left.

Google Chrome on Windows 7.

Dirk

4,037

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Linda Lee wrote:

After a little time on the site, here are some of the things that I feel could still use adjustment:
5. A way to flag something as edited and up for new review--within the same project. We shouldn't have to be creating entirely new projects for edits of existing projects. And I really don't want to be forced to scan through these multiple versions of the same project to ensure I'm seeing/saving/using all the valuable feedback.

Linda, I don't understand the above about item 5. Why not simply increment the version number on the chapter in question, within the same project? You can then either hide the old version(s) of the same chapter, or leave several of them up for others to compare them, assuming they want to read the old and the new content. I assume the versioning capability applies to short stories, poems, etc. although I haven't tried that.

I must be missing something.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,038

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

Why does it involve more clicking and scrolling then going to another forum, finding the thread, going to the end of it and leaving a comment? I don't really  understand the logic of this workflow.

In terms of being notified, this is something we can add in the future and seems like a much better solution than creating a new forum for every piece of posted content. Assuming the author wants others to be notified.

I'm just trying to wrap my head around your proposed workflow, Sol.

I assume you're suggesting we use regular reviews for discussions, since I can't picture how inline reviews would work for back-and-forth discussions, especially among numerous individuals. If you really prefer that regular reviews serve as discussion threads, I think the following would be needed:
- A button at the top of the chapter to jump to the bottom of the page. It saves having to scroll repeatedly through the entire chapter and lots of old reviews/discussion, to get to the latest ones. Some people have countless reviews, making for *very* long pages. Reduces carpel tunnel syndrome.
- The ability for anyone to subscribe to the discussion, just as we can to forums/topics, so that we're notified when someone adds to a discussion that we're interested in.
- Eventually, you'll probably have to break the reviews into pages, like you do the forums, since a single page will probably become too unwieldy.

All of that sounds an awful lot like the group forums you already provide. The group forums are simple. If someone wants to discuss a work, they can throw a thread into the group forum. A major advantage of using the group forums for work-specific discussions is that anyone can pop into a group, quickly scan through the forum topics to see if there's anything interesting being discussed about any work in the group, add their two cents, and maybe even decide to sample the works in question. If an author really wants to keep third parties out of the discussion, let them create their own group.

I currently can go to a single thread in Sci-fi to read what's being discussed about KHippolite's Mrs. Blue book. It's organized into pages, so I can browse through the pages to see past discussions if I want to, and I go to the end to see the latest discussions. In my book's case, I sometimes have chapter-specific discussions in the group forums, since I want as many eyes as possible to see certain specific discussions.

If active discussions move away from the group forum, using regular reviews per chapter to try and do the same thing, no one else will see what's actively being discussed without manually searching the reviews at the end of each chapter. I doubt anyone would do that.

Recommending two very different ways (forums vs. regular reviews) to do the same thing means that some will use one way and others will use another, creating confusion. (It gets even more complicated when you consider that we also have the Additional Feedback group, Linda's Old Forums group, and your plan to potentially resurrect the old site's forums, which also had an Additional Feedback forum. Some of these will hopefully fall out of use and be discontinued as the new site matures.)

The only way to fix all this would be to allow discussions at the chapter level, work level, group level, and global level, and a way to search/wade through them. That would be a huge undertaking.

Hope I'm making sense.
Dirk

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

I don't understand the purpose of this. Right now, you can leave as many comments as you want on a piece of writing. You can have conversations and within in-line reviews you can even have multiple threads where you can discuss items right in the document. We'll be expanding this functionality soon.  Why would you want to take these discussions back to a forum which is just loosely attached to the work in question? This seems like a massive step backward. The most logical way forward to me is that comments on the work should be on the work, not on an associated forum.

Sol, I think most of us agree that the best place for a discussion about a work is with the work itself, although some people used to gain exposure to other people's work by first encountering it in the Additional Feedback forum on the old site.

That said, are you suggesting we use a series of regular or inline feedback reviews to have a discussion? I suppose reviews could be used for that (the complete set of reviews appears right after the chapter), although that workflow right now would involve an awful lot of clicking and scrolling. And how would we be notified if someone has added another review to someone else's work? Are the coming enhancements going to address all of that?

Or am I not understanding you correctly?

Thanks.
Dirk

4,040

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Another wishlist goodie would be to put a little more information into the emails we get notifying us that someone has reviewed one of our chapters. It would be great if it could identify which chapter was reviewed (number & title).

Thanks.
Dirk

4,041

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

I'm the opposite of PByrd. I need to drown out other noises because they distract me, so I put on headphones and listen to Celine Dion blast out my favorite tunes. For those who've never heard her sing O Holy Night, I couldn't recommend it more highly. I keep expecting my computer monitor to explode when she hits those high notes.

4,042

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'll add my voice to this request as well. I've been surprised many times by my browser doing god-knows-what when I start typing while still outside the inline text box. Would love to see it fixed soon.

Thanks.
Dirk

4,043

(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I placed a copy of this post in Writing Tips & Advice for future reference. It's less likely to get lost than among all the Premium posts.

Dirk

4,044

(1 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Following is from a thread in the Premium forum started by TirzahLaughs. I thought I would copy it here for future reference.
Dirk

TirzahLaughs
Honestly creating Mobi Kindle files will give me a stroke. If you want to create your MOBI (kINDLE EBOOK) FILE yourself,  you can.  There are a couple of free programs to convert it...but honestly none of them are 'super clear' on how to use the programs.  I find tech people rarely write 'clear' instructions.
But depending on how complicated your manuscript is, you can use Calibre to convert your file to MOBI.
I recommend following the directions below...as it is the easiest version I've found.   
CALIBRE
http://www.guidingtech.com/6601/how-to- … i-or-html/
DIRECTIONS.
Some tips:
Edit your metadata (book title/author name) in Calibre
Remove page numbers for E-books.
Make sure you've include a front page or Dedication Info
Your formatting will change in the e-book.  No indents in ebooks.  Just FYI.
When you convert the file, the TOC option will pop up (but not until that page).  If you want a TOC, you can click the auto version here.  If it doesn't work, there is a work-around.

SolN
Would it be helpful if we converted them for you? It's something we are playing with.

Mariana Reuter
The following is a link to a complete fool- and author-proof guide to MOBI formatting for Amazon. You don't need to be computer savvy to follow it because it explains the process step by step. You only need to download two programmes (Calibre and another one), both for free and virus-free, and invest from three to four hours to convert a 70000 words novel.
Yes, three to four hours. Nobody said it was a fast process if you want to end up with a professional product. However, the time is worth the result. Of course, there's people who will gladly do it for you for a fee. It all depends on your budget. Prob is that, after spending on the proof-reading, the cover artwork, etc, you may wanna save a coupla pence on the MOBI file creation, which is something you can do yourself.
http://guidohenkel.com/2010/12/take-pri … ormatting/
Kiss,
Gacela

TirzahLaughs
SolN wrote:
Would it be helpful if we converted them for you? It's something we are playing with.
I think most authors would appreciate.  Many of the less techy ones pay companies to do it for them. The more techny google and do trial/error.
T

TirzahLaughs
Mariana Reuter wrote:
The following is a link to a complete fool- and author-proof guide to MOBI formatting for Amazon. You don't need to be computer savvy to follow it because it explains the process step by step. You only need to download two programmes (Calibre and another one), both for free and virus-free, and invest from three to four hours to convert a 70000 words novel.
Yes, three to four hours. Nobody said it was a fast process if you want to end up with a professional product. However, the time is worth the result. Of course, there's people who will gladly do it for you for a fee. It all depends on your budget. Prob is that, after spending on the proof-reading, the cover artwork, etc, you may wanna save a coupla pence on the MOBI file creation, which is something you can do yourself.
http://guidohenkel.com/2010/12/take-pri … ormatting/
Kiss,
Gacela

That's why I loaded the Calibre Quick Guide to Mobi above.  For those who want something simple, the PDF I attached will allow them to do a simple MOBI conversion in Calibre.   It took ten minutes.
The more complicated your manuscript layout, the more you may have to go the long route with HTML. But if you just need a simple Mobi file with basic chapters and no weird formatting...the Quick Guide will do it for you.
FYI...I found my hyperlinked word chapters flowed through to the TOC in Calibre!  Yeah me!
T

Norm d'Plume
Sol, I think it would a great additional offering, as long as people know it's available (needs a little promotion now and then to remind us) and doesn't cost too much. I would definitely use it, although there are now several self-help options described above.

4,045

(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I think it would a great additional offering, as long as people know it's available (needs a little promotion now and then to remind us) and doesn't cost too much. I would definitely use it, although there are now several self-help options described above.

4,046

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Actually, I use the edit feature (posting without points) very frequently. As I receive reviews, I make changes to my chapters and edit over the old content before other reviewers drop by to read the chapter as well.

If I were making big changes, I would re-publish (with points) and ask/hope the same people to re-review it. I don't do this since I'm saving all major changes for my next draft.

Dirk

4,047

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

dagnee, you're not being dense. Either that, or I'm dense too. :-)

Everybody is trying to figure out the best way to handle post-review feedback now that there are so many groups. I currently post chapters to Premium, Basic, and Science Fiction. My reviewers and I have been using the sci-fi group for additional feedback on my work. Just in case, though, I'm also a member of the existing Additional Feedback group and the Old Forums group. Both of those groups get virtually no traffic.

Dirk

4,048

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

While we're adding to the wish list, the Visit Your Groups area on the right side of the home page shows the one most recent forum post for each of my groups, but they often disappear before I even know they were there. I'm not sure what the algorithm is for when they appear/disappear. It would be ideal if the most recent post to each group's forum remained visible in the Visit Your Groups area. The link should then take you to the latest page in that group's forum, not the first page. Ideally, take me right to the bottom of the latest page, where the new post is located.

Thanks.
Dirrk

4,049

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

One of the writers I review created a group specifically for his own book. Since I read a lot of books, I wouldn't be able to join them all. We used to use the Additional Feedback forum, which I guess is now obsolete. I'm still a member of the Additional Feedback group here on the new site, not to mention the Old Forums group, which also has a Writing Feedback thread.

Kenny has it right. A forum attached to each story seems ideal. Not sure what the technical hurdles would be, especially since we now have group forums and, if memory serves, some resurrected version of the old site's style of forums coming in the future. The complexity is growing, especially if you're new to the site.

Dirk

4,050

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

NJC and Tom, wouldn't creating empty threads generate a lot of useless emails for group members? Especially if it's just one checkbox that generates a thread in every group a writer is posting to. I'm worried people will generate the threads "just in case", when there's really no need because no one will use the threads. Right now, for the most part, there's no thread until either the reviewer or the author has something more to say. Technically, it's possible to suppress automatic emails for newly created empty threads, but then no one will be notified when someone does add to the thread.

Dirk