Re: Wishlist Cont.

I am so glad to be wrong about versioning!  His post DID generate a listing, and did offer points. I'm assuming the low point count was based on the small size of the test chapter.

Question, would this still work if he doesn't disable his original chapter?

Re: Wishlist Cont.

I sure hope nobody is screaming at this Janet. I think the new site is pretty dang awesome. It still needs a few tweaks, but nothing that would throw us back to the old way. My 2 issues are 1) Have the text box for inline reviews not cover the content your commenting on and 2) When going to a piece on your reading list, go directly to the last chapter read & reviewed rather than having to do the drop-down box to find the chapter. I still think these group forums should be for discussion of topics with the continuing feedback having its own forum or simply PMing the author.

Sol is addressing my first issue. Again, thanks. As for the second, well, I'm a big girl and can adjust.

103 (edited by Linda Lee 2015-02-26 19:41:30)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

This thread is for wish listing. If you don't want to take part in giving Sol food for thought, that is your choice, but please keep it classy by stepping back from the thread. There's absolutely no need to berate, or belittle those of us who wish to participate.

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Bravo, Linda!

Again, my 2 issues are 1) Have the text box for inline reviews not cover the content your commenting on and 2) When going to a piece on your reading list, go directly to the last chapter read & reviewed rather than having to do the drop-down box to find the chapter. These might not even be issues for others, but they would help me in my reviewing.

105 (edited by SolN 2015-02-26 21:03:24)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Okay, I got it all. Some we'll do, some we won't. Bickering in the forum isn't going to change things. Let's move on.

106

Re: Wishlist Cont.

I want a pony.


Wait! I got that. Nevermind. I don't need anything.

107

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Linda Lee wrote:

I am so glad to be wrong about versioning!  His post DID generate a listing, and did offer points. I'm assuming the low point count was based on the small size of the test chapter.

Question, would this still work if he doesn't disable his original chapter?

The new published version is independent from the original, just like a new chapter; whether the original is active or disabled doesn't effect the points for the new version - if that is what you are asking. Take care. Vern

108

Re: Wishlist Cont.

bimmy wrote:

I want a pony.


Wait! I got that. Nevermind. I don't need anything.

How about a new saddle or a puppy to keep the pony and/or you company? Everybody needs something, lol. Take care. Vern

109

Re: Wishlist Cont.

I really want a cow.

Make it happen Sol.

Lol!

Re: Wishlist Cont.

dagnee wrote:

And if someone should feel a suggestion or idea is not up to whatever the standard it is they hold, that they will give it a cursory glance and no more.

Sorry Janet Reid, to disagree with you but if I disagree with your suggestions for changes to the site, which if implemented I'll have to live with, then I and any other member has the right to object so that SolN knows not everyone agrees, no matter how the objections are stated. smile

Hey dags, we actually agree, so all good!

I was actually referring to sweeping general statements. So by all means if you don't want those buttons I want, just say so. Or agree if that's the case.  This way, Sol will have a much better indication of the ideas that have more support and those that don't. I do admit that my previous comment could've been better worded.

Cheers JR

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Linda Lee wrote:

This thread is for wish listing. If you don't want to take part in giving Sol food for thought, that is your choice, but please keep it classy by stepping back from the thread. There's absolutely no need to berate, or belittle those of us who wish to participate.

Point taken, and will do! J

Re: Wishlist Cont.

SolN wrote:

If authors really want more feedback, then pray tell why don't they offer some opinion on all the comments left in the inline review instead of only a few words in the final comment section. You can agree or disagree with what was said or even offer a totally different interpretation. You can question why the reviewer sees things that weren't intended at all or show why you chose to do something a particular way and start a conversation in which others could offer various points of view. In other words, you've got a forum built into the review process just as Sol envisioned and implemented.

This is the purpose of in-lines but I don't think we are fully there yet. The problem is that there is no notification when someone posts a comments so the author and others have no reason to go back to the in-line. We're working on a new version of the in-line review system that will address this and hopefully move more towards the vision I have for the tool. I do believe this is the place to focus the site's resources as opposed to building out the forum system.

I'm struggling to get my head around the practicality of using reviews, especially in-reviews, as discussion boards.

Reason for my concern is this:  A novel with 30 chapters, and an average of 5 in-line reviews per chapter, at an average of 10 in-line comments per review = 1500 in-line comments.  I'm not even considering if a writer has more than one novel active.  If only one comment every 2 chapters is discussed in more detail, that's 15 discussions spread over 30 chapters and 1500 in-line comments.  Not mentioning if two reviewers made the same suggestion, yet one group adds their views to review A and another group theirs to review B - and in the process, you now have two of the same conversations that don't follow each other.  From a writer's perspective, especially one that do not incorporate changes as they write on, this would be impossible to manage without going mad or without missing possibly some really good feedback.

So my question is, how would someone manage this?  Email alerts will drive me nuts (but that's just me) - traffic light patterns attached to in-line comments would probably work, but it doesn't negate the navigation require to get to this.  As already mentioned, having a feedback thread in more than one group is already problematic.  And I disagree that it takes the same effort to navigate in-line reviews compared to forums (1500 comments ...) - once you're on the forum page, you're going.  (I think the clicking involved with in-line reviews have been covered, so I'm not mentioning it).  How would this make it easier?

So although this functionality of in-line reviews specifically would be great, is it really what the intent is?  I have seen this many times over where something basic, but really effective morphs into a brilliant system that simply is too complicated and cumbersome to be used for its original purpose.  Fixing this would be even more painful.

KHip's proposal to have a "Facebook" kind of interface for each novel, that isn't part of the forums, seems less complex to me (from a user perspective, not necessarily a programmer's).

So, what am I missing here?  Sol, or is this what you're working on?

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Well reading through the forum has been very useful, I think I now know why I have had far fewer reviews on the new site.
I was just opening my Chapter selecting it all and pasting in the new edit, though I did change the title to reflect this.
So in fact I need to create a new Chapter 1 from scratch and delete the old?
But does this then mean that I have to pay again for the whole chapter even if I have only made a few tweaks in response to reviews?
Confused am I...

114

Re: Wishlist Cont.

janet reid wrote:
SolN wrote:

If authors really want more feedback, then pray tell why don't they offer some opinion on all the comments left in the inline review instead of only a few words in the final comment section. You can agree or disagree with what was said or even offer a totally different interpretation. You can question why the reviewer sees things that weren't intended at all or show why you chose to do something a particular way and start a conversation in which others could offer various points of view. In other words, you've got a forum built into the review process just as Sol envisioned and implemented.

This is the purpose of in-lines but I don't think we are fully there yet. The problem is that there is no notification when someone posts a comments so the author and others have no reason to go back to the in-line. We're working on a new version of the in-line review system that will address this and hopefully move more towards the vision I have for the tool. I do believe this is the place to focus the site's resources as opposed to building out the forum system.

I'm struggling to get my head around the practicality of using reviews, especially in-reviews, as discussion boards.

Reason for my concern is this:  A novel with 30 chapters, and an average of 5 in-line reviews per chapter, at an average of 10 in-line comments per review = 1500 in-line comments.  I'm not even considering if a writer has more than one novel active.  If only one comment every 2 chapters is discussed in more detail, that's 15 discussions spread over 30 chapters and 1500 in-line comments.  Not mentioning if two reviewers made the same suggestion, yet one group adds their views to review A and another group theirs to review B - and in the process, you now have two of the same conversations that don't follow each other.  From a writer's perspective, especially one that do not incorporate changes as they write on, this would be impossible to manage without going mad or without missing possibly some really good feedback.

So my question is, how would someone manage this?  Email alerts will drive me nuts (but that's just me) - traffic light patterns attached to in-line comments would probably work, but it doesn't negate the navigation require to get to this.  As already mentioned, having a feedback thread in more than one group is already problematic.  And I disagree that it takes the same effort to navigate in-line reviews compared to forums (1500 comments ...) - once you're on the forum page, you're going.  (I think the clicking involved with in-line reviews have been covered, so I'm not mentioning it).  How would this make it easier?

So although this functionality of in-line reviews specifically would be great, is it really what the intent is?  I have seen this many times over where something basic, but really effective morphs into a brilliant system that simply is too complicated and cumbersome to be used for its original purpose.  Fixing this would be even more painful.

KHip's proposal to have a "Facebook" kind of interface for each novel, that isn't part of the forums, seems less complex to me (from a user perspective, not necessarily a programmer's).

So, what am I missing here?  Sol, or is this what you're working on?

From my perspective, any author can start a forum on any piece of work they wish; you don't need anything special to do so. Now if said author can get reviewers to congregate at this forum, then said author could if they wish to do so get reviewers to leave comments on the inline review. They could even appoint their most prolific reviewer as the central review for others to comment on thus creating an inline forum. As far as thirty chapters go, I for one do edits one chapter at a time, so why would  want all those comments in a regular forum mixed up and spread over thirty chapters with no way to know which chapter a given comment was relating to. For instance a reviewer could enter comments on chapter 5 while others are entering comments on chapter 29, etc. I don't really want to wade through god knows how many pages of a forum to find who made what comment on each chapter so would most llikely do it as each chapter was being reviewed anyway if that were my only choice. However, with the inline, it is already divided into chapters so I can edit at my leisure without the ever repeating necessity to fish out those comments from a regular forum.

Now Sol has said he is working on improvements for the inline review process and if one such improvement already mentioned was to be able to scroll through the comments, then that would be wonderful and would diminish even further any need for any additional forum changes. I mean I don't care if forum upgrades are made, I just don't see any need as far as making a special effort for each author's work when they can do that already - I've even suggested that some authors do so for a particular work; still hasn't come about so I'm not sure what the broad appeal would be.

As is, you have a choice to do your own forum or to use the built in forum capability of the inline review (especially with potential upgrades) so I really don't understand the clamor for having a forum for every work posted. Doesn't make sense; the majority appear, get little attention and then are never heard of again, so what would be the purpose in creating all these thousands of feedback forums above what is already available.

But to each their own.  Take care. Vern

115 (edited by Norm d'Plume 2015-02-27 22:21:39)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Dunecan, you're generaly correct, with a few caveats.

If you edit over an existing chapter, then you don't need extra points to do so. Simply editing, however, will not cause your chapter to reappear at the top of the list of works displayed on the home page. It also won't notify your connections that changes were made. I usually use this approach when I'm just trying to incorporate my latest changes before *new* readers see my chapters. Reviewers who've already read the chapter won't receive points for reviewing it again, in spite of the new edits.

If, however, if you want everyone to be notified of the changes, then you need to re-publish using points. Simply specify the same chapter number as the old one, but increment the version number. You may not want to delete the old version of that chapter, since it includes all of the reviews you've already received. If you delete the old chapter, then the old reviews go with it. Instead, you can either leave the old version visible (if you want reviewers to see and compare both the old and new versions), or make it inactive, so that it is no longer visible to reviewers, but is still available for you to refer back to it. All reviewers will receive points for reading the new version.

I believe all of the above also applies to short stories, poems, etc.

Hope that helps.
Dirk

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Thanks Dirk, that does make it clear to me.
On a slightly differing note I think having the newly published list categorised by groups rather than as by order of submission of any genre is a bit self-defeating, if you want to only read things in your genre you probably would go that group listing and are quite likely to be told of postings anyway due to connections etc As it is now, one has to make a positive decision to go look at other genres rather than your own which makes it less likely for you to review outside that and vice versa thereby lessening the number of potential new reviewers reading one's work

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Back to the subject of improving the listing of new work from Connections on the Home Page: Perhaps remove the covers displayed next to each title. These take a lot of space, so removing them would allow for more titles in each category listing. I love creating a cover, and do it frequently, but I question whether it is necessary in the list. The cover appears appropriately when the title is selected and the piece appears for review.

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Yes, good idea.  Also couldn't we go back to new work posted of any genre perhaps the latest 10 or 15 and then by genre afterward. Probably get a wider pool of reviewers and review more widly.

119 (edited by Tom Oldman 2015-02-27 16:40:09)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

As this thread is 'wishlist', another wish from me:

I absolutely love being able to increase the font size and contrast of a story. My old and tired eyes thank you for it, but (there's always a but, isn't there), When I go down to view or add a review, the font is so very tiny.  I can (and do) increase the entire page using Crtl-plus (or Ctrl and mouse wheel), and this works well, but it also increases the ENTIRE page and doesn't change the contrast.  I found a script that removes all color information from a web page and that helps, because test in a blue only slightly darker than background is really a strain for me.

~Tom

120 (edited by Tom Oldman 2015-02-27 17:38:48)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

One workaround I use, Corra, is to highlight what you want to retain, copy it, and paste it into a 'working' text file on my desktop.  When I have all I want to retain, I print the text file. At the same time I copy the reviewer's entry, I make a reply comment to show I've seen it.  If the text file is full of really good ideas, I save it to the directory where I've stored the copy of the chapter/story so I can work on it off-line.

~Tom

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Well, I don't copy them all.  Just the ones I think will be useful.  But, you're right, it is a bit of work that hitting a "Print Comment" button would solve.

~Tom

Re: Wishlist Cont.

KHippolite wrote:

Add:

This could be accomplished without adding forums. What's needed is a way to signal to reviewers "Here is the forum thread discussing this body of work"

What's not needed is more forums -- we have plenty

We're missing among all these communication options a way to organize them

Edited to add:

I realize I could just mention the link to the forum at the bottom of each chapter, but that doesn't grant you posting rights in there. I'm still sending you to join the group, post, then leave.

A way to organize--that is a gigantic hit upon the nail head. Giving the UI organization tools would certainly go a long way to solving many of the issues that seem to be cropping up for most of us.

123

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Ok, so here is a wish that I'd like to see on the system. I hope it's something minor. We I go to view my regular reviews, click on the review itself, at the top of the review I still can see the 4-tabs: Regular Received, Regular Posted, Inline Received, & Inline Posted. However, when I go into read an Inline Review, the tabs are no longer there and I can't go back to the listing without hitting the back button or clicking the home to navigate back through.

Would it be possible to make sure the 4-tabs remain when we go into the Inline Reviews/Posted?

124

Re: Wishlist Cont.

Linda Lee wrote:
KHippolite wrote:

Add:
This could be accomplished without adding forums. What's needed is a way to signal to reviewers "Here is the forum thread discussing this body of work"

What's not needed is more forums -- we have plenty

We're missing among all these communication options a way to organize them

Edited to add:

I realize I could just mention the link to the forum at the bottom of each chapter, but that doesn't grant you posting rights in there. I'm still sending you to join the group, post, then leave.

A way to organize--that is a gigantic hit upon the nail head. Giving the UI organization tools would certainly go a long way to solving many of the issues that seem to be cropping up for most of us.

There is a very, very dusty maxim in Computer Science that there is no programming problem that cannot be solved by adding another layer of indirection.  But in this case the point about posting rights intrudes.

My question is: does the indirection appear where the user sees it, so that the user chases the link, or do the forums -appear- with the story, with the link-chasing done in the server tiers or the web machinery?  Both can work.  Which works better?  (I'm assuming that there's no practicably insurmountable obstacle to having a particular forum appear in multiple places.)

Re: Wishlist Cont.

KHippolite wrote:

really don't understand the clamor for having a forum for every work posted. Doesn't make sense; the majority appear, get little attention and then are never heard of again, so what would be the purpose in creating all these thousands of feedback forums above what is already available.

Yes... I see from this that my statement has been misunderstood so I'll rephrase it slightly.

What's needed is a way to attach a forum link to a particular work. For example:

[Body of Work]
[Inline Reviews]
[Reviews]
[Additional Feedback]

The additional feedback link would drop you into the forum thread associated with the work. You would be able to read & post in this forum thread without needing to join the group. You would not need to go hunt down the group / forum that was discussing this body of work. You would not need to randomly guess that there was a thread on it in the first place.

In general, I like this idea. Much better than people having to guess about an additional feedback thread, especially given the number of places where that thread could now exist (Additional Feedback group, Old Forums, Sci-fi group, etc.). If you post your work to multiple groups, as I believe most do, then there would be only one thread, not one per group.

However, such a capability would need to be able to associate the same thread with multiple chapters, otherwise there would be one per chapter, which would turn the group forums into a mess. Even one thread per work would probably be overload eventually. Everyone might create such a thread just in case and have it never get used. Then you have forums full of orphaned threads.

Another problem that would have to be addressed is what to do if an author has chosen not to create an additional feedback thread, but a reviewer wants to leave additional feedback. Then you get back to the current problem of not knowing where to put the thread and hoping the author sees it. If you allow reviewers to create that thread if there isn't already one, then you have to have to support notification to the author and, potentially, others about the newly created discussion.

On the other hand, using the existing chapter review mechanism as a means for discussion about a given chapter (as I think Sol is suggesting) also seems like a very logical thing to do, but it hides discussions from general visibility. If someone starts a discussion within a chapter that I've previously reviewed, how would I know about it unless I go back and check? There would need to be a way for the reviewer to subscribe to chapters in order to be notified about ongoing discussions about those chapters. Also, how would others who are not reading the book potentially participate in discussions if they have to search the bottom of each chapter for activity.

And, just to make everyone nuts, if there is a discussion going on inside an inline review, the only people who would know about it are the participants in the discussion. I don't read other's reviews in detail, clicking on each inline comment, so I'll never know about the discussion. Right now, even the author doesn't know if a third party is commenting inside an inline review left by someone else, although I presume that part will be addressed.

As I mentioned in an earlier post, the only ideal way to handle discussions would be to have a mechanism to browse/search/participate in discussions at the chapter level, work level, group level, or global level. That requires a very different architecture and a lot of work.

Dirk