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876 2016-07-12 22:52:54
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
877 2016-07-12 11:54:21
Re: Strongest Start 2016 Finalists (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats to the finalists and all who entered. Take care. Vern
878 2016-07-10 04:06:12
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
no winner
879 2016-07-09 12:20:27
Re: Question for the community: Male writers writing F/F books (31 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I probably wouldn't even look at the author until I finished the story and might want to buy something else by said author, but then I rarely brose through book stores any more. And only on a few occasions have I bought a book (more accurately had my wife buy it for me) because of the author; most in my opinion don't repeat the excellent experience I received from the first one. I'm just too damn picky, lol. Sometimes I will pick up a book my wife is reading and just start reading wherever she has it marked and if I find it interesting will ask to read it when she finishes, or perhaps before if she gets busy on something else. I may not be typical in that regard. Take care. Vern
880 2016-07-08 12:15:05
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
881 2016-07-08 02:14:06
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
upper lip
882 2016-07-07 22:40:54
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
gorilla feet
883 2016-07-07 02:31:32
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You have style, lady. Take care. Vern
884 2016-07-06 23:30:18
Re: What Happened To Hamler (46 replies, posted in HodgePodge)
I think he's still sulking about the Seahawks losing to the Panthers. Or maybe he's hitchhiking your way to surprise you with a finished copy of Antagony and had to leave his computer home. No telling with John. Good to see you pop in once and a while anyway; hey, maybe that's what he's doing...trying to spur you on with his absence. Take care. Vern
885 2016-07-06 23:17:33
Re: My space shuttle sprung an air leak - What happens? (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In my story, my characters are flying in a shuttle that's been hit by another ship, causing the leak. They're racing to reach a flagship before their air runs out. I want to knock them out with them realizing they may not be rescued in time and may never wake up. I can't have their blood/tissues boil/explode while they're unconscious.
Charles, thanks for the links. I read through it quickly and it looks useful. I'll read it in detail later today.
It seems to me you're over complicating the situation. They either pass out from lack of oxygen and/or decompression or they don't. You then save them or you don't. They will not know one way or the other unless you indeed do save them. Any added detail is not going to change anything or make it more dramatic unless you want to go into the theatrics of a Total Recall or such other unrealistic depiction. Good luck with whatever you decide. Take care. Vern
886 2016-07-06 12:11:23
Re: My space shuttle sprung an air leak - What happens? (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I would think the loss of pressure would similar to that of SCUBA divers who ascend too rapidly and get the bends due to Nitrogen "boiling" from the blood. In such a case, your early rescue could place the victims in a hyperbaric chamber to slowly equalize the pressure to normal status. You might wish to check out more details on the effect of bends in such a case. Take care. Vern
887 2016-07-05 22:44:07
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Test
Of what? Take care. Vern
888 2016-07-05 02:18:45
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
vern wrote:Charles_F_Bell wrote:"Swine" I wouldn't choose for you, but as to the sentiment of the "horrific world" Douglass spoke against is that but a shallow contribution on the 4th I can speak of here against those who despise the U.S.A. not from its human limitations but because of its enormous superiority to anywhere else.
When "anywhere else" leaves a lot to be desired, then "enormous superiority" still has lots of room for improvement. To blindly deny that is to become part of the problem. But I'm sure your highness already knows that, right? Take care. Vern
And certainly, as you see the U.S.A. in 2016, words from a bitter man in the 1850's, probably more appreciated as a young slave in the South than a mature Negro in the "tolerant" North, is the way to put things in perspective.
Alas, the "tolerant" North is/was only a façade. Take care. Vern
889 2016-07-04 23:00:48
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
ambrosia
890 2016-07-04 22:58:40
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
corra wrote:"Swine" then.
Your shallow contribution here throws integrity into relief, serving as a living reminder of the horrific world this man spoke against. Your voice is small, your words hollow, your contribution like the scurrying of a rat too arrogant to realize he is insignificant.
Please, do go on. You serve as illustration.
"Swine" I wouldn't choose for you, but as to the sentiment of the "horrific world" Douglass spoke against is that but a shallow contribution on the 4th I can speak of here against those who despise the U.S.A. not from its human limitations but because of its enormous superiority to anywhere else.
When "anywhere else" leaves a lot to be desired, then "enormous superiority" still has lots of room for improvement. To blindly deny that is to become part of the problem. But I'm sure your highness already knows that, right? Take care. Vern
891 2016-07-04 14:28:04
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Traitor or swine, like beauty, is often in the eyes of the beholder (along with the accompanying bias.) According to the relatively recently discovered Gospel of Judas, he was actually the most trusted of the disciples. Judas was given advanced teachings and thus was secretly given the task of helping Jesus fulfill his mission by "betraying" him as planned. Of course this version was not included in the canonized Bible for obvious reasons. Take care. Vern
892 2016-07-03 22:52:20
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
last picture show
893 2016-07-03 22:50:33
Re: Independence Day - the 1852 Address by Frederick Douglass. (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
A similar speech might be made today regarding "religious" intolerance and hypocrisy. Take care. Vern
Edited to add omitted word.
894 2016-07-03 15:20:39
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
paint job
895 2016-06-30 01:58:57
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
stool pigeons
896 2016-06-29 22:44:18
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Roy Rogers
897 2016-06-28 22:54:05
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
obi wan kanobi (oops, one too many k's corrected)
898 2016-06-28 22:52:14
Re: Welcome (262 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome, John, never been to WritersCafe, but you should enjoy the vittles here just as well. Take care. Vern
899 2016-06-26 13:15:38
Re: Don't try this at home... (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Why go to all that trouble. There will be too much DNA evidence in the "fall off." With Snoqualmie Pass in the winter, the body can be disposed of without all the gore. Or, Lake Washington serves as a lovely resting place. A paint bucket filled with cement, a length of chain and the body will remain beneath the 55 degree waters for longer than the murderer will live. I was going to suggest trying the lumber splitter on a spare wife to test it, but that would be the Alfred Hitchcock in me speaking.
I don't know, sounds like a lot of work getting to those places and carrying all that cement and all. And if somebody is going to leisurely sift through all that "stuff" for DNA, they've probably already sniffed out more than enough evidence to convict. BTW, Lake Washington and probably most any other is at times chock full of scuba divers looking for treasures or artifacts, prone to find that body sticking up like a Lady in the Lake (think movie with Robert Montgomery)before the murderer's demise. Take care. Vern
Edited to add R. Montgomery info)
900 2016-06-26 03:06:36
Re: Don't try this at home... (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
njc wrote:Some Golden-age writer, perhaps Futrelle, gave us a murder in which the corpse was deep-frozen in liquid CO2 and pulverized in that state. What was left could easily be washed down the sewers, and with no DNA testing available, there was no proof he'd ever been there.
I'm discovering that vermin, birds, squirrels, coyotes etc., in my stretch of forest will consume everything if it is their specific bite-sized morsel.
Save yourself the trouble of all that butchering and just keep a well stocked pig pen; pigs will eat the body, bones and all -- perhaps a new slant on going to the pigs. Take care. Vern