Hi, MJ, Congrats. You deserve the accolades and perhaps the faux author will give you credit in the future. Great job. Take care. Vern
1 2026-01-03 00:00:39
Re: “Ghostwriters in the Sky” (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
2 2025-12-26 16:42:24
Re: Merry Christmas & HAPPY NEW YEAR! (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
And a belated Merry Christmas to all
Twas too busy eating to talk to y'all
Maybe next year you'll make my list
But if not, don't get your bloomers in a twist
Just keep writing and mind me not
I'll keep posting short of a lot
I'm always lurking to see what shows
But where and when, only The Shadow knows.
Take care. Vern
3 2025-12-10 20:17:02
Re: Spammer has joined - Please delete them (76 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I've got to admit they are industrious for finding and reviewing (solicitation) four of my stories in one day, none of which have been published in several years. Credit where credit is due, lol. Take care. Vern
4 2025-11-12 21:33:55
Re: Where Is Everyone? (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I've been away for almost five months., but I plan to return in several days. As most of the folks here know, my wife passed away in late May. There have been significant legal issues to resolve plus the natural grieving process. I've been to St. Louis; Denver, Colorado twice; Bakersfield, California; and San Antonio, Texas - all issues to do with Diana's passing, most of which could not be resolved on-line or by phone in a timely matter. The legal issues are resolved now. The grieving is running its course and I'm doing much better on that journey.
I'm going to pause or take down most of what I have posted on the site in a few days. This site has been good to me. I owe it, and the people here, more respect and support. I'll work hard at that. So ,,,
I'm starting a new writing adventure - new genre and writing style - Global Espionage Thriller. I've spent the past several weeks researching and reading novels in the genre. Randall Krzak, here on the site, is an excellent writer and his novels are meticulously written. He doesn't know it yet, but he's been a big inspiration for me.
So, I'm kind of starting from scratch. I promise timely reviews of other writers' works and equally timely replies to reviews of my posted works from here out. Before Diana passed, much of my time was reserved for her care as she was totally dependent on me for everything. She was always my first priority. Also, as the long-tenured members of the site know, I'm a professional songwriter and guitarist. I've completed all my existing contracts, and I am not accepting any more. That took large blocks of my time. That significant time commitment, caring for Diana and writing and recording the musical stuff, is now available to me to do with as I choose. I have chosen to write better and to be more diligent on the site.
Looking forward to this new adventure. See ya soon.
Alan
Glad things are getting a bit better. Not to alarm you or anything, but your picture looks almost exactly like my younger brother. I've noticed it before but just figured my eyes were blurry. Crazy world. Take care. Vern
5 2025-09-28 14:29:37
Re: Just curious (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Just makes me wonder if I'm the only one this has ever happened to... strange... anyway, onward we go!
MJ
I must say it has never happened to me. Of course I had so much trouble getting that first one up, I would never dare trying to change it, lol. You are my hero. Take care. Vern
6 2025-09-25 15:28:13
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
vern wrote:When AI starts telling all supporters of Trump how and why they should get rid of Trump in no uncertain terms any time he is mentioned, I might start believing it has merit in any type of communication. Take care. Vern
Wow... President Trump lives rent free in your head.
LOL, hardly rent free; he pays a substantial price to tone me down. Take care. Vern
7 2025-09-12 20:20:35
Re: Prologues are not Chapter 1 (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Oh,
Sometimes things just need to be communicated.
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Just tell me you don't sell pillows, lol. Take care. Vern
8 2025-09-11 20:25:59
Re: Prologues are not Chapter 1 (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Just so you know because it might ease the frustration just a tad, or maybe not, but anyway, once upon a time in the land that was this original site, you could not just call it a prologue and be done with it; it would be chapter one or nothing at all. Not that there is a huge number of such entities running around these days, but just in case there is, it might be easier to accept such things than taking an aspirin or Tylenol or whatever the heck might help alleviate the post traumatic indigestion. Just trying to help. Take care. Vern
9 2025-09-07 00:13:15
Re: Do Over Contest Winners Posted (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats to all who won and all who entered. I do wonder if the grand prize winner is still on site. I wonder this since my review done in July still has no response from the writer. Am I the only one left in the dark? Curious minds want to know. Take care. Vern
10 2025-09-02 21:26:44
Re: Probably a stupid question (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If you want/need points, all you have to do is review enough writing to earn those points. For instance, when I first joined, I reviewed for months gaining points before starting to publish chapters of my novel. Never fell behind from that point on by simply reciprocating those who reviewed me and additional works that caught my fancy. Reviewed some entire books without getting "paid" back. No problem. Works for me and I still have more points than I will probably ever use. Take care. Vern
PS: I also had people review my entire novel without expecting or receiving reciprocation. Just let them know up front of your expectations and/or time restraints as they did me and vice versa.
11 2025-08-31 13:45:25
Re: Probably a stupid question (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yes, it's possible to do that, but it would be rather pointless. Here's why: The points system used to be a lot more onerous. You had to read roughly 5 words for every 1 that you wanted to post. The new ratio is only 3 to 1. That means you only need to trade reviews with three other people on a regular basis (assuming everyone's posts are generally of similar length) in order to keep posting your own material.
Since most people try to have many more regular reviewers than that (often six or more) in order to get the most value out of the site, points are quickly irrelevant. Their main value at this point is to keep people off the site who just want free feedback without bothering to do any work at all. You could post War & Peace here, but if you don't maintain regular reviewers, you'll be hard pressed to get more than a handful of reviews before interest in your posts fizzles.
Also everyone is too honorable to ever try anything that devious. ;-) But bless your devious heart for having figured that out as quickly as you did. :-)
I recognized that loophole ages ago, but what isn't pointed out is that there would be practically no point value for the reviewer and I suspect that the vast, vast majority of readers would see that and shake their head while moving on to something a bit more fruitful. Of course, you could also go in the opposite direction should you wish to provide your reviewer with a bonanza of points for no work -- keep it secret of course, lol. Take care. Vern
12 2025-08-27 19:45:55
Re: The Life & Times of Gandalf the Beige (72 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Feline -- that says it all. Good luck. Take care. Vern
13 2025-08-26 22:02:53
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
When AI starts telling all supporters of Trump how and why they should get rid of Trump in no uncertain terms any time he is mentioned, I might start believing it has merit in any type of communication. Take care. Vern
14 2025-08-25 14:35:33
Re: Time Challenged (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
“Thanks all,” said one sad little Vienna sausage.
“See ya soon,” another one blabbed.
Bernice the cat walked across the laptopppppppppppppuuutrdcewsw.mj
I LOVE Vienna sausages. I eat a whole can when I allow myself the luxury of all that decadence. Either make a sandwich using all of them with mustard or eat them with crackers straight from the can -- both ways delicious kind of like your phrases. Take care. Vern
15 2025-08-24 23:23:37
Re: Time Challenged (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Fortunately for all of us, the accident didn't curtail your sense of humor. Wait, maybe it was that fall which knocked on your funny bone and you didn't realize it, so now you just do it naturally. Of course that doesn't take into account your previous funny stories, but we'll let that slide while you recover and can defend yourself against man or beast without having to hen peck around the keyboard. Anyway, wishing you a speedy recovery before this frown freezes on my face. Take care. Vern
16 2025-08-23 19:16:22
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I support having a TNBW-based "AI Reviewer" available. Obviously I don't know how difficult it would be to implement, so I can accept it if it isn't. I use Grok to aid my research, and also as an alpha-reader. And I am fully aware of the weaknesses of it in many regards. I do not use it to create. I may bounce ideas off of it, ask if my characters are consistent, or if my hypothetical consequences make sense, but I don't have it rewrite my stuff (and often curse at it when it tries).
I'd think that hunting down people using AI to review would be nigh impossible anyway. I looked at a couple of "AI detectors" recently and one of the biggest complaints was that they were too inconsistent. It is what it is. If someone is burning through a bunch of reviews too quickly, then maybe? I don't know. All I know is I do my reviews by hand, and I'd hope others would do the same for me. I can't control what anyone else does, nor do I wish to. Too "Big Brother" for my taste. (1984, not the TV show. And yes, I've had to make that clarification more than once in RL.)
If anything is too Big Brother, then one must ask, "How can you have Big Brother?" without AI? Just saying. Take care. Vern
17 2025-08-23 19:10:30
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
vern wrote:SolN wrote:So, I think we have two separate questions.
1. Can AI reviews be helpful? I think the answer is yes. As I've seen on Booksie, AI is good at spotting grammatical problems and can also provide feedback on plot, character development, setting, etc. It has "read" all of the best-selling work out there so knows the formula of what works and what doesn't.
2. Should reviewers use AI to leave reviews on TNBW? I believe the answer is no. When you leave a review, you are representing that you have read the work and are providing "your" opinion, not the opinion and feedback of someone else or a machine.
I've also thought about whether AI will replace human writers. I believe the answer is yes for technical work and potentially some non-fiction. For fiction, I think it might become its own genre - AI Written. I like to use clothing as an analogy. Much of the clothing we wear is made by machines in modern times. But the really valuable clothing is still hand made. Why? Because there is something human in the creation, the stitching, the fabrication and people who wear it find appealing. It's original and unique in a way machine created clothing is not.
This all leads me to two thoughts.
1. Perhaps we need to add some AI feedback to TNBW like what we have with Booksie. I think authors might find it helpful.
2. Reviewers should be be substituting AI for their own feedback. I believe a site where everyone simply pasts AI feedback is a diminished one that one that has no more reason to exist.Happy to hear all of your thoughts.
Sol
I see nothing wrong or right about AI checking grammar/punctuation since it is simply based on preestablished "rules" and if you use Word, it pretty much does that automatically as you type, but as far as getting into plot, etc., it may have "read" all the bestselling works but I doubt it knows what will be a best seller and simply mimicking best sellers of the past is only giving the reader a regurgitation of what someone else has produced. Creativity, at least for now, is in the realm of humans, not machines. Any use of AI for reviews on this site should be banned in my humble opinion along with the person who submitted it as their own. My opinion outside the machine looking for a wrench to toss in the gears. Take care. Vern
How would such banning work? Would we need an AI program to detect AI? And then what? Have it eliminate one of its “own”? AI programs have shown remarkable abilities in self-preservation, including one instance where a program blackmailed its engineer to prevent him from dismantling it. An advantage of advanced AI is its ability to “learn.” Scary stuff.
Kind of like any ban would work; if it is detected then the user is banned. If a substance is banned, you obviously can't punish the dealer unless they are caught, but that doesn't eliminate the ban and its usefulness as a deterrent or punishment. Take care. Vern
18 2025-08-13 21:36:49
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I experimented with ChatGPT and found it did a very good job summarizing a 340,000 word trilogy into 500 words—which I used for a query letter.
Did you query the trilogy as an entity or three separate works? Sounds like an interesting concept if the former. Take care. Vern
19 2025-08-07 23:18:53
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
So, I think we have two separate questions.
1. Can AI reviews be helpful? I think the answer is yes. As I've seen on Booksie, AI is good at spotting grammatical problems and can also provide feedback on plot, character development, setting, etc. It has "read" all of the best-selling work out there so knows the formula of what works and what doesn't.
2. Should reviewers use AI to leave reviews on TNBW? I believe the answer is no. When you leave a review, you are representing that you have read the work and are providing "your" opinion, not the opinion and feedback of someone else or a machine.
I've also thought about whether AI will replace human writers. I believe the answer is yes for technical work and potentially some non-fiction. For fiction, I think it might become its own genre - AI Written. I like to use clothing as an analogy. Much of the clothing we wear is made by machines in modern times. But the really valuable clothing is still hand made. Why? Because there is something human in the creation, the stitching, the fabrication and people who wear it find appealing. It's original and unique in a way machine created clothing is not.
This all leads me to two thoughts.
1. Perhaps we need to add some AI feedback to TNBW like what we have with Booksie. I think authors might find it helpful.
2. Reviewers should be be substituting AI for their own feedback. I believe a site where everyone simply pasts AI feedback is a diminished one that one that has no more reason to exist.Happy to hear all of your thoughts.
Sol
I see nothing wrong or right about AI checking grammar/punctuation since it is simply based on preestablished "rules" and if you use Word, it pretty much does that automatically as you type, but as far as getting into plot, etc., it may have "read" all the bestselling works but I doubt it knows what will be a best seller and simply mimicking best sellers of the past is only giving the reader a regurgitation of what someone else has produced. Creativity, at least for now, is in the realm of humans, not machines. Any use of AI for reviews on this site should be banned in my humble opinion along with the person who submitted it as their own. My opinion outside the machine looking for a wrench to toss in the gears. Take care. Vern
20 2025-08-05 23:26:11
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
>>Will AI read one chapter of a book and advise me helpfully about arc, plot or character development?
Based on my experience using Gemini for a variety of detailed conversations, I think it might surprise you. :-)
You have surprises and then you have surprises. Take care. Vern
21 2025-08-03 13:52:37
Re: Using AI to do reviews? Please don't. (81 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If you do a review and claim it as your own whether implied or directly, then use AI to do that review, you are lying through your teeth plain and simple. It is no different than giving credit to any source material used in a school paper, etc. If caught, you would probably get an F as well as a scolding, no excuses. Look up plagiarism. Take care. Vern
22 2025-07-29 22:59:23
Re: Temps (30 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The various Milankovich cycles run over longer periods than human memory, and they provide a good match to earth's long-term climate changes. In summary, second- and third-order effects of other bodies in the solar system cause small (but very measurable) changes to earth's orbit, which alter the balance between solar energy absorbed, planetary temperature, and solar energy radiated into outer space.
You're talking apples and oranges kind of like Trump and his Epstein red herring.
The different components of the Milankovitch cycle run from tens of thousands to millions of years. Today's climate change theory/fact is happening in our lifetimes. Yes, we had an ice age 10,000 or so years ago and we'll probably have another at some point, but that has nothing to do with the rapidity of the changes happening due to industrialization. No, we don't know all the variables at present, but considering the rate of warming compared to the rate in the previous hundred years or so, I'd say we would be prudent to pay attention and determine how best to remedy the situation. Take care. Vern
23 2025-07-28 20:47:17
Re: Temps (30 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I dunno. We had a nasty spell--over100°F at Newark Airport--back around 1990 or so.
Remember, we measure temperature in 100s of thousands of places, but most of them have had measurements for less than 80 years, and very few places had reliable measurents before 150 years ago. Just on that basis, we'd expect a few record temperatures on any given day somewhere.
So many of the alarmist predictions have failed to happen. The seas did not boil away in 1988. Deserts are shrinking, not increasing, because plants can get more CO2 while losing less water. C3 food plant yields are up worldwide. (C4 plants cannot benefit as much.)
And look at what governments are trying to do. The Netherlands is shutting down farmers. The UK is planning to. Ignorant people think that grazing land can support crops instead. If it could, crops would already be planted there. Grazing land is suitable for grass, though after decades of fertilization by cattle waste, it may be able to support wheat.
Most famines today are the result of war or government mismanagement. (Most. Not all.) Most droughts could have been managed with planning; ditto most floods, including those you don't hear about because they were managed. Some projects were stopped by Greens who consider every acre sacred, and care less for human life, or the measures that raise human life above "nasty, brutish, and short."
I dunno, either. Perhaps if you simply look at the number of record temperatures over the last few years, you might get at least a little interested in why. Temperatures fluctuate and you'll get hotter or cooler days compared to the average, but if you consistently get record temperatures, then it just might deserve a bit of attention regardless of what the temperature is on a given day. It is certainly not rational to dismiss studying the situation if you suddenly have some days cooler than average and start yelling, "What global warming?" It's called climate change (not global warming) for a reason and not the daily weather report. Take care. Vern
24 2025-07-28 15:19:57
Re: Temps (30 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
It's all the Democrats fault. They're making this weather worse so they can weaponize it against Republicans. If Trump says it, it must be true. Take care. Vern
25 2025-07-04 23:09:19
Re: Mission: Yemen Now Live (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats! Take care. Vern