Congratulations!
326 2018-04-09 16:43:44
Re: Passing on Some Good News (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
327 2018-04-09 16:27:29
Re: "Exile's End" is now published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats! What an accomplishment, right?
Oh, it is huge. I started out with a short story and now have five novels. The first three are published and people have even starting buying them. I'm making enough for coffee money! Yipee! Yahoo! I am stoked.
328 2018-04-09 16:26:07
Re: "Exile's End" is now published. (2 replies, posted in Close friends)
Congratulations! Putting them together was a huge amount of work, so you must be really proud to see the books for sale!
It was. And thank you! I keep on visiting the pages just because of that. You will have to tell me what you think when you read them. I'll be starting reviewing again after tax day and then when I'm caught up with that I'll start posting the 4th novel in the series. So everyone has a chance to binge read the first three while I do that. Hugs.
329 2018-04-09 15:52:52
Topic: "Exile's End" is now published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You can find it here. Now, the three books I've posted here are all down and all available through Kindle. There's a special promotional price, but they're all cheap, so you have no excuse. Let's see: "A cup of coffee or buying Rhia's book."
330 2018-04-09 15:51:23
Topic: "Exile's End" is now published. (2 replies, posted in Close friends)
You can find it here. Now, the three books I've posted here are all down and all available through Kindle. There's a special promotional price, but they're all cheap, so you have no excuse. Let's see: "A cup of coffee or buying Rhia's book."
331 2018-04-09 06:08:38
Re: "Out of Exile" and "Love in Exile" to be published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats!
Thank you, Don!
332 2018-04-08 04:33:59
Re: "Out of Exile" and "Love in Exile" to be published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations!
Thank you, Jack!
333 2018-04-07 23:39:45
Re: "Out of Exile" and "Love in Exile" to be published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Many congrats and hope you sell a bunch!
Thanks, Randy. As I to you.
334 2018-04-07 21:29:15
Re: "Love in Exile" to be published (4 replies, posted in Close friends)
Good luck!
I don't plan to get rich from my writing (although it would be nice). A few good readers like yourself is all I ask for. I hope you have Kindle Unlimited, so you can continue reading it for free; if not, $0.99 won't kill you. They don't seem to have author's copies at Kindle. I've had to use my Kindle Unlimited to get my e-copies. I hope you continue reading and enjoying.
I will be soon posting my next novel, "Time for Exile," starring Heather with strong supporting roles by Rhiannon, Barbara, Diane Witherspoon (who you meet later in "Love in Exile."), and Jeb Hardwick. The usual cast of characters is there--Rosalyn, Ioseff, Lido. It is very rough and will probably undergo revisions before I start posting. Like other, earlier, books, it needs stylistic revisions that reflect the progress of my writing. I strongly suggest reading "Love in Exile" and "Out of Exile" first, if you can. And "Exile's End," too, now posted on Inkitt and just 18 reads from being subjected to The Algorithm which determines what the crowd wisdom is on publishing it. The first four books is really one continuous story, starting at Rhiannon's exile, her return, the mystery surrounding her father's madness and her mother's death, and who the real culprit for the latter is, if not who everyone thinks it is. Of course, everyone could be right. After that, there is a murder mystery starring our heroes, but it will have to be revised after all the twists in turns of the tetralogy. Yes, I'm going to be one busy bee for the next few years.
335 2018-04-07 18:15:23
Topic: "Out of Exile" and "Love in Exile" to be published. (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In 72 hours, Kindle will be publishing "Love in Exile." It's Kindle price is $2.99, although I will probably have a promotion for $0.99 and it will be free on Kindle Unlimited. Once it's published, I'm taking it down. But you can still read it, for a price, and write glowing reviews of it. Wish me luck on the sales! Hugs, Rhia. ("Out of Exile," the second edition of the book, with a spiffy new cover and foreword, is already out.)
336 2018-04-07 18:13:40
Topic: "Love in Exile" to be published (4 replies, posted in Close friends)
In 72 hours, Kindle will be publishing "Love in Exile." It's Kindle price is $2.99, although I will probably have a promotion for $0.99 and it will be free on Kindle Unlimited. Once it's published, I'm taking it down. But you can still read it, for a price, and write glowing reviews of it. Wish me luck on the sales! Hugs, Rhia.
337 2018-04-06 23:12:34
Re: WIP Rhiannon the Nude, Vol 2: New Fairy by Rhiannon (123 replies, posted in Close friends)
As you may have noticed, my remaining novel on the site now is "Love in Exile: A Rhiannon the Nude Story." It has a new cover. Now, I am re-formatting it. Soon, I will be publishing it. The novel, "Out of Exile: A Rhiannon the Nude Story," will be published on Kindle in 72 hours, and my price for the ebook will be $2.99. This will also be the price of "Love in Exile." After all of this is done, I will publish the book now on Inkitt, "Exile's End," and will start posting the 4th book in this series on tNBW.
338 2018-03-24 01:52:16
Re: Thank you, TNBW! (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Start picking off imaginary spiders from her, then, when she asks, tell her what you're doing. Or whip out a switchblade and start cleaning your nails. Works for me. lol
339 2018-03-16 16:40:13
Re: WIP Rhiannon the Nude, Vol 2: New Fairy by Rhiannon (123 replies, posted in Close friends)
What's the current title of the book I read, aka R the Nude
Rhiannon the Nude: Out of Exile. When I release the 2nd edition (which is identical to the first but with acknowledgements, credits, introduction, etc.) it will be Out of Exile: Rhiannon the Nude Vol 2.
The next one in the series is "Exile's End"
And the Loves of Rhiannon will be "Love in Exile."
Sense a theme? lol
340 2018-03-13 21:15:09
Re: WIP Rhiannon the Nude, Vol 2: New Fairy by Rhiannon (123 replies, posted in Close friends)
Congratulations, Rhiannon. I'm doing my best to keep up with reviews. I would hate not to finish this one. How long do you think you'll leave it up while reformatting and editing?
At least until the end of March. May take longer. Don't want to rush things. And thank you!
341 2018-03-13 19:40:34
Topic: NOVELS TO BE TAKEN DOWN (0 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Progress, my friends. I have finished my re-write of "The Loves of Rhiannon." I will be reformatting it--starting chapters on separate pages--adding an acknowledgment page and an introduction. I will be looking for cover art. Any suggestions? There is a website where you can buy/subscribe to cover art, thus, getting around copyright restrictions, and of course, I can always hire an artist.
I will be re-issuing "Out of Exile." Yeah, I know it's a little early for that, but I didn't have an introduction or acknowledgement page, or give credit for references, and they won't let me add one, so a second edition ("new and improved" lol).
Soon, unless Inkitt decides to publish it, I will be taking my novel there down too and publishing it through Kindle.
So, in a few weeks (can't tell you when), all the present Rhiannon novels will be on their sites and only available through Kindle. So, please, if you want to read them here and offer suggestions, time is running out.
Also, I will be posting the third novel in the series, and there will be a spoiler in it. Can't help that. Originally, I was writing one novel, but now, it's three, as fifteen hundred plus pages is a bit much. (Of course, after I made that decision, I found a fantasy novel of that length at B&N. Do I regret my decision? Naw. It's cool being the author of a series.)
Then, of course, there is the fourth, which is set in the same universe, has the same characters, but is not part of the continuing storyline. After all the evolution of the first three novels, it will undergo major changes, as some characters should be replaced by the main ones. (I've stuck to the Star Trek seven: Rhiannon, Heather, Rosalyn, Jeb Hardwick, Barbara Carruthers, Diane Witherspoon, and Hevyedd.)
Oh, and this doesn't count the novel about the love affair between Rhiannon's son, Pryderi, and Callista, the New Prydain slave girl sent by Queen Branwen to seduce him. (It's now several stories combined by transitions into one.)
The third novel is multiple 3rd-person POV, for a change. So we will see thing from the perspective of each of the Magnificient Seven.
Onward and Upward!
342 2018-03-13 19:36:16
Re: WIP Rhiannon the Nude, Vol 2: New Fairy by Rhiannon (123 replies, posted in Close friends)
Progress, my friends. I have finished my re-write of "The Loves of Rhiannon." I will be reformatting it--starting chapters on separate pages--adding an acknowledgment page and an introduction. I will be looking for cover art. Any suggestions? There is a website where you can buy/subscribe to cover art, thus, getting around copyright restrictions, and of course, I can always hire an artist.
I will be re-issuing "Out of Exile." Yeah, I know it's a little early for that, but I didn't have an introduction or acknowledgement page, or give credit for references, and they won't let me add one, so a second edition ("new and improved" lol).
Soon, unless Inkitt decides to publish it, I will be taking my novel there down too and publishing it through Kindle.
So, in a few weeks (can't tell you when), all the present Rhiannon novels will be off their sites and only available through Kindle. So, please, if you want to read them here and offer suggestions, time is running out.
Also, I will be posting the third novel in the series, and there will be a spoiler in it. Can't help that. Originally, I was writing one novel, but now, it's three, as fifteen hundred plus pages is a bit much. (Of course, after I made that decision, I found a fantasy novel of that length at B&N. Do I regret my decision? Naw. It's cool being the author of a series.)
Then, of course, there is the fourth, which is set in the same universe, has the same characters, but is not part of the continuing story line. After all the evolution of the first three novels, it will undergo major changes, as some characters should be replaced by the main ones. (I've stuck to the Star Trek seven: Rhiannon, Heather, Rosalyn, Jeb Hardwick, Barbara Carruthers, Diane Witherspoon, and Hevyedd.)
Oh, and this doesn't count the novel about the love affair between Rhiannon's son, Pryderi, and Callista, the New Prydain slave girl sent by Queen Branwen to seduce him. (It's now several stories combined by transitions into one.)
The third novel is multiple 3rd-person POV, for a change. So we will see thing from the perspective of each of the Magnificient Seven.
Onward and Upward!
343 2018-03-13 19:13:26
Re: Opening stories with prologues and dreams (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
After reading Nora Roberts (writing as J.D. Robb), and noticing she makes all the "mistakes," that I've been accused of, I pretty much ignore the rules and write what feels good (or strikes my beloved beta readers--all of you--as good). Robb changes POV in the middle of a paragraph, switches between omniscient and 3rd-person, sometimes, is so sketchy in her setting that the characters could be on stools in an all-white room. All, no, no's. She has more bestsellers than there are stars in the galaxy. And there are others. You must write an engaging first ten pages to get the reader's attention. Yeah, tell that to Joseph Conrad, in "Heart of Darkness." The central conflict must occur in the first ten pages (or 750 words, in a short story), I read a mystery where it didn't occur until one hundred pages into it. And don't even get me started on Gormenghast. 1st person is for light and breezy. Well, "Just call me Ismael."
344 2018-03-13 19:06:30
Re: Temporary hiatus (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats, jack. Where can we find this masterpiece? And enjoy your rest.
345 2018-02-20 21:26:45
Re: Politics and Religion Fights Forum (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm of two minds. I contributed to the thread in the Premium group but only because I saw confusion and misinformation posted. Vern and I ended not as far apart as it seemed at first. I did see the issue degenerate into emotion, ad hominem and rhetoric. This makes me cautious about having a forum here about any hot-button topic. There are forums on FB that allow open discussion, but you have to be like a bird watcher ("Yes, I just spotted the deep reasoning throaty eagle of paradise, known for its logic. And it was widely thought to be extinct.") to get anything reasonable out of it. I'll join, and wait until I get to my disgust level before quitting, but I'm warning people, although I have only just recently started keeping my citations (due to online arguments in which my citations were demanded), I argue with logic, and not emotion (although I do have a sarcastic streak). And as Jubal Harshaw, in Stranger in a Strange Land said, "Logic--a most uncouth way to argue." I will point out your fallacies. Don't hate me because I'm brainy as well as beautiful.
346 2018-02-18 20:30:19
Re: SHOOTINGS AND THE SHIT THAT FOLLOWS... (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:I'll end by asking the question, to vern and anyone else--how does disarming me (or any victim) make you safer?
No one, especially me, is asking to disarm anyone of sensible defense. Let's be clear, if someone wishes to ambush you with an automatic (yes I use that term because that is what it is or becomes in the matter we're talking about) there is no defense. Even if every citizen were armed with an automatic weapon, they would never get the chance to use it in most cases before mass carnage had already happened. Sure you can kill people, several people, with typical guns of what could logically be called upon for self-defense or sport, but you could not cause the mass killings with bursts of hundreds of rounds by pulling the trigger for a few seconds and spraying everyone in sight. And to call using an automatic weapon for sport is ludicrous. I've stated I'm a gun owner and would never deny anyone that Second Amendment right, but that does not extend to basically military grade weapons designed for mass killing and not self-defense other than in theaters of war.
Take care. Vern
None of the mass murders since 1972 (maybe since the '30's) have involved automatic weapons. Yes, often, rifles that mimic, in style, automatic weapons. (In the Isla Vista case, a Glock and a knife. Half were killed by stabbing.) In all but one of the mass murders in that time frame, a handgun could have taken out the shooter. And there are plenty of defenses, even cowering in a bathroom, hoping the shooter won't notice you. (Worked really well at the Pulse, if I recall.) The scenario that most closely resembles yours was the Las Vegas shooting, in which, unless people had their own AR-15's slung over their shoulders, they really wasn't a defense (well, except for an alert security force and a call for an armed posse once the shooting started). That involved a bump stock, not an automatic weapon. And yes, I think there is a case for banning or at least restricting bump stocks, including them under the FFA, as long as there isn't a general ban on accessories. They harm the firing pin of your gun, reduce your accuracy to almost the limiting case, so would "have no rational relationship to the training of the militia," even under the Founders interpretation of 'militia' (like everybody). True automatic weapons are severely limited, banned by several states, and to get one, you have to pass a background check, submit two photo id's and register your weapon (not to mention shell out the $10,000 purchase price, which may be doing more to limit their use than a ban). You then need a 'love letter' from the local CLEO. ("Vern's a good old boy; he deserves a machine gun for varmint hunting.")
Although, in general, arguments that the 2nd Amendment doesn't apply to modern weapons are unsound (Yes, the 1st Amendment only applies to anything printed on a Gutenberg press--no. smh. I agree with Justice Gorsuch that, for instance, in the digital age, 4th Amendment rights should extend to electronic communication, how extensively for the whole Court to decide.), the Founders did make a distinction between weapons in common usage among the people ("the militia") and weapons used by the army. Cannons, for instance. You had no constitutional right to a cannon.
The AR-15 is the tomato of the issue. Under Heller v DC, weapons in "common usage" for self-defense, sports, and hunting were protected under Miller v the US, but "exotic" weapons, e.g., machine guns and assault weapons, weren't. (Miller, though, was about sawed off shotguns. Oh, well.) The trouble is, the AR-15 is both--20% of rile purchases are AR-15's and they are "assault," i.e., "scary," weapons. It's probably best to leave that up to legislatures, and ban the ones that are black but allow the ones that are pink (pink not being a scary color). That's what some States have decided to do, and SCOTUS has, so far, declined to speak about it. It is not w/o political peril, not because the NRA has a Kryptonian mind control device in Wayne's closet, but because "the people are the ultimate guardians of liberty," and I think most Americans understand, at a visceral level, the relationship between self-defense, defense of country, and the perrenial struggle against tyranny. Or maybe they don't won't benevolent and wise men like Trump and Sessons deciding what weapons they get to use. And let's be clear, that is what we are talking about with gun control at the federal level.
Be safe, Rachel
PS: Yes, there are people demanding to deprive ordinary citizens of self-defense.
347 2018-02-18 20:10:21
Re: SHOOTINGS AND THE SHIT THAT FOLLOWS... (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:I'll end by asking the question, to Vern and anyone else--how does disarming me (or any victim) make you safer?
Japan has very strict gun laws. Total deaths in Japan by guns in 2014: 6. Total deaths in the US by guns in 2014: 33,599.
Just saying.
Japanese commit suicide with swords. lol
348 2018-02-18 18:29:09
Re: SHOOTINGS AND THE SHIT THAT FOLLOWS... (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
jack the knife wrote:Why gun ownership should have no constraints, as opposed to any other aspect of our compact as a civilization, defies logic.
Unfortunately, for the majority of congress there is no logic beyond the support of the NRA for their reelection. Until we, as voters, kick the nitwits out and make it clear that in essence the buying of congress will no longer be tolerated, we shall remain a nation of mass killings by weapons the founding fathers never imagined. Just as there are logical restrictions on freedom of speech and all other rights, so too a rational electorate should demand the same for automatic weapons similar safeguards for the public as shouting "fire" in a crowded theater affords in limiting free speech. This from a gun owner's perspective. Take care. Vern
Let's do a substitution, keeping the form of the argument correct. "Unfortnately, for the majority of congress there is no logic beyond the support of the Sierra Club for their reelection. Until we, as voters, kick the nitwits out and make it clear that in essence the buying of congress will no longer be tolerated, we will be a nation of high unemployment, economic stagnation, and the inability to internationally compete..."
The fallacy should be clear. (The environmentalist lobby is the one that spends the most money and has had the most success in getting its agenda through.)
And it is the height of arrogance to think that those with different moral principles must be "bought" by corrupt and sinister forces.
And sure, "automatic" weapons, i.e., "scary weapons," should be subject to some restriction. Most States require a license to carry in public, and want them concealed, so as to not scare people. (Although, the common law right is one to open-carry defensive weapons. This would be the "historical protection," as defined by Courts applying Heller v DC, not the right to carry concealed.) I wouldn't personally carry a rifle slung over my shoulder anywhere but in Pennsylvania, where you can carry a loaded semi-automatic rifle, but not an unloaded handgun. But in general, anywhere that I go where I can be shot, I want the right to shoot back. (And even the CDC concluded that right to carry does not increase danger to the public.)
Some changes in the law will happen because of this latest shooting. But i found it interesting (citation supplied upon request--see comment about being lazy) that more States respond to mass shooting by making firearms more readily available to ordinary citizens (thus, allowing them greater ability to fight back) than do by increasing restrictions. (Those that do find unenforceable laws. The law in NY to register 'assault weapons' have met with 2% compliance; when Stockton passed a law banning 'high capacity' magazines and requring that they be turned in, they had 0% compliance. This was such a spactacular success that the people of California passed a similar law State wide. Even Australia's gun confiscation has only had a 5% to 20% success rate--depending on whom you talk to. It's touted success in dropping homicide rates--which were dropping down before--is thus not based on valid causal inferences.)
349 2018-02-18 17:50:58
Re: WIP Being Fifteen by Suin (25 replies, posted in Close friends)
I think I got confused because I first heard the distinction in Oscar Wilde, and he capitalized it.
Yes, reading all of those authors would make you seem a lot more mature. You are absorbing their wisdom.
350 2018-02-18 17:49:28
Re: WIP Where Heaven and Hell Meet by Mariana (63 replies, posted in Close friends)
gacela, rejmorgh yIDaQo' vIHtaHbogh ra' nov Hol. neH wa' fluent neH tlhIngan.
(Just kidding, used a translator for that. lol.)