Just go with it. I read an R.D. Robb that shifted POV from paragraph to paragraph; James Patterson had multiple 1st person POV's from chapter to chapter. If the writing is flowing well, it happens and spontaneously. As far as the commentator who said he couldn't think of any examples from fantasy--uh, Game of Thrones, anyone? What I do is what Martin does, when it's about an MC, it's from his or her point of view.
776 2016-03-26 18:22:44
Re: You again? Yes! Looking for a sample. (10 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)
777 2016-03-26 06:18:08
Re: New to Romance Writing (4 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Thanks Janice, both for the reply and the welcome to the group. I have been toying with the idea of entering the romance genre. I read them and get an Edgar Rice Burrough's moment. He started writing when he read the popular fiction of the day and thought, "I can write as bad as that." lol What happened is that a couple of reviewers thought that they came in at the middle of a story, and I've always followed the rule that you should always start your book at the middle of the story. But I thought a prequel would be in order. There was a core incident, first described in my story, "The Gorgon," that had to be in the story, but as it evolved, a love triangle, actually two intersecting triangles, seemed to be the lead in to the Incident. That took over the story, but it was forbidden love, so not quite romance by your two rules. Although well, romance in that sense does happen, but between the MC's; and it does happen between the MC's in the "Rhiannon the Nude" boo, but as one of the events of the story. Still, several people have noticed that my writing might, if made more PG, appeal to young adults, so I might end up eventually in YA Romance. Writing is a long strange trip, as between now and 5 years ago I wrote a number of mini-essays in philosophy which have a ready made audience ripe for self-publication.
778 2016-03-26 06:01:00
Re: My book published!!! (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)
Congrats!
779 2016-03-19 01:48:03
Re: To John Hamler On Antogony (6 replies, posted in Additional Writing Feedback)
Now guys, stop fighting over me. Lol
780 2016-03-16 23:45:53
Re: How Little We Know (27 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations
781 2016-03-12 22:28:09
Re: Romance writers... (3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)
Just now writing about hunky heroes, I haven't done romance in the past, but when I have romance in a story, it's usually gay or lesbian. But one reader has described Jeb Hardwick as having "statuesque virility." An help in describing hunks and how they function would be appreciated.
782 2016-03-12 17:38:00
Topic: To John Hamler On Antogony (6 replies, posted in Additional Writing Feedback)
Hello there, Rhiannon! You're still reading despite the bombastic prose, the surreal violence and vulgarity, the unapologetic racist misogyny..
John: I can tell it’s all in fun. When reading Thomas Wolfe, whose style is reminiscent of yours, I tend to put it down and read something trashy, like Edgar Rice Burroughs’ Mars series. Lol You have the elegance of the former, and the trash of the latter. Makes for a fun read. You do have a great vocabulary, why not flaunt it?
. My regards and apologies. Writing all this radicalized masculine indecency is my way of being a noble radical leftist, you see. If that makes any sense. It probably doesn't.
Jung talked about the Shadow; sometimes our writing expresses the Shadow. Just don’t have the Shadow come alive, like in that Stephen King novel that used an idea that he swears he didn’t get from an old DC comic. lol
Politics aside, this pabulum is foremost meant to be entertaining. What I really need is a plot. The one I got in my head right now is (like my head) so full of holes it won't hold water.
Read Tobias’ “20 Master Plots.” There are really only 1 (Don Webb of Bewildering Stories), 2 (Aristotle), 7 (or is it 9?) (Christopher), 20 (Tobias), 36, (forget who), 69 (Kipling), millions and millions (the naive reader),. And one English professor with two much time on his hands, did a computer analysis of 40,000 stories, concluded there are only two plots: “Man in a hole; (Ahab)” “Man rising.” (Portrait of the Artist) Aristotle’s two were: “resolve conflict by physical force;” “resolve conflict by mental force.”
I don’t generally have a plot in mind. I didn’t realize what the plot of “Rhiannon the Nude” was until I looked at my reversals and recognition (Aristotle’s terms), and realized they fit the structure of The Quest (Tobias). Went back and did some topiary. “The Jeb & Rhia Love Story” may be Forbidden Love, started out that way, but it could be Ascension. Or it could be Forbidden Love, subplot Ascension, or Ascension, subplot Forbidden Love. The point is, just write.
. Be my literary crony?
Absolutely.
783 2016-03-11 23:38:11
Re: I need to rant (16 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Janet:
Feel free to rant; a wedding is totally stressful, won't even go into what happened at mine. And not to capitalize on your stress, but my character goes through a wedding disaster of all wedding disasters toward the end of my first book, and now you have given me grist for how to make it even worse. lol Sorry, but that's what happens when you rant on a writer's forum, instead of Facebook. lol
784 2016-03-11 23:29:44
Re: New to Romance Writing (4 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Let the story take you. Just write the story and see where it goes. Don't over think it.
Thanks, Janet. That is the kind of style I have anyway. I may have mentioned I didn't realize that Book I was a quest until I went back, reviewed the reversals, and went, 'Oh, this is the Quest Master Plot.' So then I did some topiary to fit that. I can't even be sure this will be a forbidden love story; that is at the center of it, but it does show an awakening and a kind of ascendance at the end (not to give anything away). I'm always surprised at what happens in my stories; the narrator of the story is actually writing it; I'm just the first reader. lol
785 2016-03-11 18:26:50
Topic: New to Romance Writing (4 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I didn't even mean to write one. It started out as a prequel to another book. Heh. I don't have any particular theme in mind when I write; I didn't even know that "Rhiannon the Nude" was a quest story until I reflected on the reversals. So the prequel turned into a Forbidden Love story. Any suggestions on writing that? (You know, aside from the usual, the heroine throws herself in front of a train, or the hero thinks the heroine is dead, so he kills himself, that sort of thing. lol)
786 2016-02-25 17:24:14
Re: A great loss (172 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Harper Lee RIP You inspired us all.
787 2016-02-13 04:30:48
Re: World Building (13 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)
I am mostly in the Stephen King camp. I let the story write itself, or more precisely, the main character. I tried 3rd person, but an outsiders' perspective made the environment scarier than I intended. Now im doing a combination where the 3rd person narrator is the 1st person narrator. I also subscribe to the John Campbell dictate and write for readers in the time and place of the story. This keeps me from over explaining. Anything the real audience wouldn't understand but tube fictional audience would I try to make clear from the audience or from the perspective of a character who might share the rl audience's lack of knowledge.
788 2016-02-13 01:13:41
Re: Hello (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi Terry: Welcome back; I find myself also feeling my way through the new website, having been away for a while. Not nearly as productive, writing wise, as you've been. Sounds like you are really on top of things. Congrats on all your success and again, good to see you again.
789 2016-02-07 08:48:58
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Azaroth Banana Fruit. (Yes, I know I'm weird. lol)
790 2016-02-04 02:01:46
Re: Am back. (Waves) (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You can check out any time you want, but you can never leave?
791 2016-02-03 20:41:58
Topic: Am back. (Waves) (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm back, writing merrily away. This new format is a little challenging. Like I just published, for your consideration, Ch. 2 of my new book, and it just says 'Chapter 1.' Need a little help obviously. lol How have you all been? I've missed you and hope you like my new stuff; I look forward to reading yours. Rhiannon.