"Your destiny is to create Neo Eden."
Zzzz. :-)
"Your destiny is to create Neo Eden."
Zzzz. :-)
Huh?
Michael said, "Your destiny is to create a new ultraliberal paradise across the stars called the Garden of Eden — Take Two."
Joseph scrunched up his nose. "Sounds like a movie set. How about ... the Garden of Eden — Sans Pommes or maybe just the Garden Sans Pommes? The Ancient French adds a certain elegance, don't you think?"
"The garden without apples?" Michael considered. "I like it."
I'm on the prowl for potential alternatives for Josephi-La.
Since the religion is called the Josephian Heresy, I'd prefer something that doesn't use his name for paradise. Shangri-La is still under copyright. And Eden is the name of the capital of New Bethlehem, so that precludes Eden, Eden II, Eden 2.0, etc. That leaves words like Paradise, Garden, Oasis, Utopia, Nirvana, etc., and their numbered variants. Most are probably overused in fiction. I'm leaning toward the following at present, although I can probably come up with ludicrous names using many of the aforementioned words as acronyms:
Michael said, "Your destiny is to create a new ultraliberal paradise across the stars called the Galactic Advanced Refuge & Designated Ecological Nursery."
Joseph frowned. "What a crazy name."
Michael shrugged. "I was going for the acronym GARDEN."
"Ick to the name. Why don't you just called it the Garden 2.0? No acronym."
Michael considered that. "Very well. But you won’t just prevent the apocalypse. You will end all suffering everywhere."
Joseph’s mouth fell open. "Huh? How?"
Dirk
Interesting. MS Edge has the same timeout problem in the forums. On a hunch, though, I went through all of my Google Chrome settings to see if any of my choices might be interfering with the operation of the site/forums. Mostly it involved carving out exceptions for TNBW in a number of my strict settings (e.g., tracking, advertising, popups, etc.).
The problem appears to have gone away; I left my cursor in one of the forum posts for much of the evening, and wasn't logged out (yet). It usually logs me out in under an hour. Let's hope it stays gone. I'll update this if it reappears.
EDIT: Cool. Well over 12 hours sitting in this forum/thread, and I still haven't been kicked off the site. I can die happy now. ![]()
Another really nice ballad sung by a member from Celtic Thunder. It's about the first immigrant who went through Ellis Island. A fifteen-year-old girl from Ireland named Annie Moore. The song got her age wrong, though; she was actually seventeen.
And I also still get kicked off if I stay too long in the forums. Fyi, I don't believe this problem existed years ago because I've written long brainstorming posts since we cut over to this site. Back then it never happened. Not sure when it first started. I believe Kdot looked at some of the site cookies at one time and found some that may contribute to the timeouts. My memory is fuzzy on that, though. I'll try using Edge for a while to see if the problem is just with Chrome, then post an update here.
Thanks.
Dirk
Bill,
Deck 1 and Deck 3 both point at the same image.
Dirk
You both had me digging through my reviews to be sure it wasn't me. :-) My account still has a bug such that it doesn't show me all my past reviews without me jumping through hoops, but it looks like I'm caught up. Please let me know if that's not the case.
Harry who? :-)
Hi Alan.
I'm very sorry to hear that Diana's life is coming to a close. Still, it's fair to say, we'd all kill for a caretaker like you when our time comes. I suspect she knows that too.
I'm sure everyone understands if your recips are a little slower than usual. Mine have been sluggish at best for some time.
Welcome back.
Dirk
No worries. I've never been mistaken for pretty. And welcome back.
If I wind up with 70-year-old memories, that'll mean I outlived most of my nearest male relatives. At that point, I'll throw myself a big going away party. Carpe diem! ![]()
Amazing Irish folksong about WW1 sung by Celtic Thunder: The Green Fields of France
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zNkKrEN … nder-Topic
I still remember having to memorize the Canadian poem "In Flanders Fields" over fifty years ago for school.
You know you're older than dirt when you have memories over fifty years old. ![]()
Welcome to the site, Ironwolf. I had a quick look at your chapter. Please have a look at an article I posted in the Premium forum with tips on how to maximize the number of reviews you can receive. It's pinned near the top of the forum, so you can't miss it. One key piece of advice from that post is to always include the Premium group when posting any stories to the site. Most of the best reviewers aren't members of many other groups, if any, so they won't even see your chapter being posted unless you include Premium. Although posting to Premium requires you to use points, that means your reviewers will receive points for reviewing your chapter. Your reviewers need points to post their own work to Premium.
If you really want to fast track getting reviews, start reviewing the works of others. Begin with the works you see scrolling down your home page. Those writers are guaranteed to be active on the site at present. We have a lot of members who are only here part-time or come and go as life dictates, so not all are active. Since you write sci-fi, join the Fantasy/Magic/Sci-Fi group, if you haven't already. If you look at the stories/chapters posted to that group, the most recently posted are likely to be from active authors too. Check the date of their posts.
I'm drowning in Canadian income taxes this weekend but will try to have a look at your story as soon as you post it to Premium. I don't need points (I have a huge stash), but unless you start reviewing and posting with points (in Premium), you'd be wasting your time here during your trial period. Points are fairly easy to accumulate, made even easier with a recent change to the points system. Generally, for every 1000 words you want to post, you need to review 3000 words (or 3 x 1000, if you prefer) to get enough points to post your work. To get the maximum benefit from this site long term, you'll need reciprocal relationships with other writers with whom you can trade reviews. In general, if you regularly trade reviews with three other writers, you'll probably earn enough points to keep posting. Most of us have at least five such relationships, so gathering points is easy.
The best writers, including some regularly published authors, tend to be the best reviewers too, but they usually stick to Premium. By reviewing their work (they need feedback too), you learn from them how they write, and when they reciprocate, you'll get the most experienced feedback available on this site. Try to use inline reviews instead of regular ones; they usually require a little more time to do, but are more useful to most writers than regular reviews. Giving and receiving reviews usually leads to those long-term relationships with other writers that you need to benefit from this site.
Feel free to post here with any questions you may have. You can also send me a connection request if you like, so we can use private messages. I do volunteer user support on the site to help get new members up to speed as quickly as possible, so I'm happy to answer whatever questions I can.
Have fun!
Dirk
Naturally, there was no casual Friday back then. Goldman Sachs, being the uptight bunch they are, had a seasonal casual Friday only. Not a year-round thing while I was still working there. I was never more happy to get laid off from a company. Management's favorite mantra was "Our people are our strength," which oddly, they never used amid rounds of layoffs. Can't imagine why. :-)
This "memo" is quoted in numerous places online and in at least one book on humor. It's seems so absurd (and hilarious) that it "could" be true. Because you just can't make this [censored] up, folks. :-)
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This is an actual alert to IBM Field Engineers that went out to all IBM Branch Offices.
Abstract: Mouse Balls Available as FRU (Field Replacement Unit)
Mouse balls are now available as FRU. Therefore, if a mouse fails to operate or should it perform erratically, it may need a ball replacement. Because of the delicate nature of this procedure, replacement of mouse balls should only be attempted by properly trained personnel.
Before proceeding, determine the type of mouse balls by examining the underside of the mouse. Domestic balls will be larger and harder than foreign balls. Ball removal procedures differ depending upon manufacturer of the mouse. Foreign balls can be replaced using the pop-off method. Domestic balls are replaced using the twist-off method. Mouse balls are not usually static sensitive. However, excessive handling can result in sudden discharge. Upon completion of ball replacement, the mouse may be used immediately.
It is recommended that each replacer have a pair of spare balls for maintaining optimum customer satisfaction, and that any customer missing his balls should suspect local personnel of removing these necessary items.
To re-order, specify one of the following:
P/N 33F8462 - Domestic Mouse Balls
P/N 33F8461 - Foreign Mouse Balls
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You're right, Vern. That works beautifully. :-)
Thanks, Sol
Well, it kicks me out too, but Bill and I are both "moderators", so not a standard account anymore. I've also been kicked out of the site many times for spending too much time in a forum, either writing a long post or simply leaving my screen open in a forum and walking away from my computer for a while. If you get a chance, perhaps try to reproduce the forum timeout. Perhaps you can figure out the exact bug and a fix. Ours is the only forum site I know of that does this.
Bill, does it happen with deleting the account too? I've been kicked out before as well, although I can't recall which operation I was trying to perform.
I had been suspending accounts because it looked from the list of accounts that that's what you were doing, but after you and I discussed it, I thought you were deleting them, which isn't what I saw, but I rolled with it, and resumed deleting accounts.
You usually get to them before I do, so I don't encounter this bug much, but it does get annoying.
You bet.
You bet. :-)
I think you need to ask Sol that question. It's never come up (publicly) for word-limited contests I was in. Do you have a connection with Sol? If not, his user id is SolN (find him using the white search field at the top of screens on this site). You can also try emailing contact@thenextbigwriter.com. I don't know which one he checks most often (he checks this forum too at times).
Have you posted it yet? I had to get real good at trimming words for previous contests, so I may be able to spot a few things to tweak/remove.
Not sure how Facebook comments tie into/relate to the site, but I don't think they're intended for support.
Well done, Randy. Congrats.