I haven't seen WW. I'll try Netflix. In my case, it's tricky, because he "may" be Jesus, hence the pilgrimage to jog his memory. He also goes to the Holy Land to get away from the Antichrist in Rome, who has begun to hunt him while simultaneously killing off cardinals and bishops at the Vatican. There is a possibility that he is not Jesus at all, but someone else entirely. His true identity is revealed at the end of book one. If he's not Jesus, I wonder how much of the original Christ he should see and hear. I'm leaning toward letting him experience all of it, aura and sound. Sound would include not just words, but also moments like the storms on the Sea of Galilee.
1,776 2018-08-24 02:08:31
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
1,777 2018-08-23 18:26:56
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It's actually an "imprint" that Jesus left in the places he visited during his ministry. Connor can see them and (possibly) experience what Jesus did 2000 years ago. I haven't decided yet if Connor can hear Jesus from back then (e.g. The Sermon on the Mount). It becomes somewhat unwieldy when you think about Nazareth since he grew up there and his aura should be all over that place at different ages. Still thinking about how this will work.
1,778 2018-08-22 20:22:16
Re: Can poverty take a life? (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
My parents lived in poverty. Poor diet and disease eventually claimed them.
1,779 2018-08-22 18:29:08
Re: strongest start (4 replies, posted in This is US!!)
Jeanne, if you look at the upper right of your home page, there's an area dedicated to the contest. Click on 'learn more' to go to the contest page. There you can click on 'Entries' to see everything that's been entered so far.
1,780 2018-08-21 19:35:49
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Following is from the dictionary: An invisible emanation or field of energy believed to radiate from a person or object. On second thought, that seems right. Yes?
1,781 2018-08-21 19:30:59
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
My main character, Connor, reports seeing the "aura" of Christ as they travel to places He visited in the Holy Land. After looking up the word, I'm not sure it's the correct term. What Connor sees is the residual energy of Christ's passing. Is that His aura or is there a better term? I suppose I could go with residual energy, although that's a long term.
Thanks
Dirk
1,782 2018-08-20 05:18:39
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. More books, although they're for reference. Pocket guides for Christians touring the Holy Land. Got the paper (non-Kindle) versions. I'm starting to pull together good descriptions of Christian sites. I'm halfway through my second of two Kindle pilgrimage books. I then have to convert both of those into table notes. Then...the first outline. Yay! I realized I don't need to outline books two and three to write book one, although I'm making lots of notes for all of them. Besides, it's highly unlikely I'll publish the first book without being close to finished with the third. There'll still be time for changes to book one.
Now if I could just get my sleeping pill regimen sorted out, I might have some energy during the day. Kdot, aren't you wiped out on three hours a night?
1,783 2018-08-17 03:30:33
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The first one looks like you falling asleep (or being pious) and the second one looks like you after too much coffee. It also looks like me with my Harry Potter glasses on (gold frame/black was too geeky). I look like a country doctor with old-fashioned spectacles. My mother can't stop laughing when she sees them. I guess that was the reason there was only pair of those frames among the entire store selection.
1,784 2018-08-17 03:03:20
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I finally looked up what x.x means. You use it so much I figured I should learn what it means. My favorite, though, is -.- Couldn't find it online.
1,785 2018-08-17 02:49:32
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nuts. I just changed Lo Bidda to Low Bidder in my Strongest Start entry. Back to the edit screen.
1,786 2018-08-17 00:11:13
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
And your suspect opinion is?
1,787 2018-08-17 00:08:20
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Is Lo Bidda Corporation an obvious variant of Low Bidder Corporation, or should I make it more obvious for the spoof-impaired?
1,788 2018-08-16 23:36:18
Topic: Hail the Almighty Amazon! (0 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
1,789 2018-08-16 10:47:38
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I plan to have a cab driver named Leonardo.
1,790 2018-08-13 19:14:36
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Why Apollo? I like Asteroid/Comet Omega.
1,791 2018-08-13 16:55:14
Re: Welcome (260 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome, G. You've done step one. :-) Now please introduce yourself and tell us a bit about the story you've written.
1,792 2018-08-13 06:24:42
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Okay two books. In the meantime, I need a good name for a doomsday asteroid or comet rapidly approaching Earth. It should be a name that combines a scientific designation with an obvious doomsday connection.
1,793 2018-08-13 03:04:26
Re: POV changes in a short stories (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Dune, the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time used omniscient/headhopping. The author and his son have written well over a dozen books in the Dune universe. Movie, two miniseries, another planned movie, etc.
Just saying...
1,794 2018-08-08 22:35:58
Re: Seeking Professional Editing (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Also check out Fiverr. They have some highly rated editors. If you're sure your manuscript is written the way you want it, then you probably need just a copy edit, which is cheaper. Personally, I plan to start with a line edit. The more reputable ones will do a sample edit, although you'll probably have to pay for it (e.g. $50 or $100 for 10,000 words).
1,795 2018-08-08 05:41:48
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Outlining to be begin before the end of this month. I have only one important book to reread before I start.
1,796 2018-08-08 01:26:21
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Lo Bidda Corporation. Done.
1,797 2018-08-07 03:13:35
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Turns out the Supreme Court ruled in 1983 that Parker Brothers no longer has a valid trademark on Monopoly. So LowBid Corporation or Monopoly Corporation? They are a technology monopoly.
1,798 2018-08-07 02:57:45
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nuts. Just when I thought ACME was the Bugs Bunny cartoon name, it turns out they are also referred to Acme. I had just changed all instances of Lowest Bidder to Acme. I guess LowBid Corporation wins by default.
1,799 2018-08-06 20:31:09
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm waffling between Lowest Bidder Corporation and Acme, Inc. The latter is less wordy, even if I drop Corporation and Inc. Anyone want to stop me before I change it back to Acme? Either way, it's intended to be silly. The former is my own creation whereas the latter is instantly recognizable as a variant of ACME Corporation. The name ACME dates back a century, so Bugs Bunny has no right to the name Acme, Inc. Also, although my Acme technology is always breaking down, ACME products always worked exactly according to specs. since ACME turned out to be a subsidiary of the Road Runner Corporation. I could consider LowBid Corporation, but it's not as funny as Acme. Or Lowbid?
Thoughts?
1,800 2018-08-06 03:46:07
Re: Formatting bugs in Content & Chapter Summaries (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The main reason I use the book summary is to attempt to draw the reader to my book, beyond just what the picture and book name can give. It's like the back cover of a physical book.
The main reason I use the chapter summary is to provide guidance about changes I'm making on the fly (e.g., I changed my characters' Imperial titles part-way into the book and didn't want to keep using the old titles for the rest of the draft; I also didn't want to go back and republish the early chapters with the title changes). Too expensive. So I say in the summary "Going forward, I've changed the the titles of my Imperial characters. From now on, the Emperor is referred to as Augustus, the Empress as Augusta, etc. I'll clean up the early chapters in the next draft."