Welcome, lyricists! Beginners or experienced. this is the place to show off your flair with words. It's also a place to do something with those phrases that keep running though your brain, but aren't enough to build a book on. Let's see if it works.
652 2015-06-14 04:44:30
Re: Has anyone tried Kindle Scout (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol-just wanted to find out if the formatting option for Kindle you introduced a week or two ago was for Kindle Scout, or regular Kindle publication? JP
653 2015-06-12 20:24:03
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol, I'm not sure where you stand on this, but I think the list of posted threads down the right hand side of the home page could be easily improved for everyone's benefit. I commented on this in your forums thread, but thought it could use its own thread for people to comment on.
Currently, the group-related threads shown on the home page disappear before I've even had a chance to read them. Sometimes, they come and go without me even knowing that they even exist if I'm not on the site enough. Email notifications help, but there are only so many emails I'm willing to manage, which limits what I see to a handful of subscribed threads. Also, the emails (correctly) take us to the newest post in the thread, whereas the links from the home page take us to the top of the first page of the thread, requiring more clicking and scrolling.
Would it be possible to always show the most recently active five threads under each group listed on the home page, rather than the ones that come and go? There seems to be plenty of room down the right hand side of the screen. Could they also take us to the correct location in each thread? Finally, if you're going to show the top 5 from our group forums, it would be ideal to have some way to distinguish on the home page (by color?) if any of the five are new or have been updated since we last read them.
Perhaps there's a technical reason why this can't be implemented, but I'm not seeing it.
Thanks.
Dirk
I'd be willing to do without seeing the shelved items on my home page, in favor of the most recent forum posts, if it's space that's needed.
We need to be able to see recent posts and respond. I don't know how the forums highlighted are selected, but consider this: if we can't see a group's forum because it's inactive, we won't post on that forum and it will remain inactive, so we won't be able to see it, so it will remain inactive, etc., etc., etc.
Shelved items aren't things that need our response, and there are other routes to access them. We can make better use of the space.
654 2015-06-12 20:02:58
Re: Strongest Start 2015 Winners (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations! Ron, still waiting to read the rest of the story... JP
655 2015-06-12 19:22:48
Re: How long should a mystery novel be? (8 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Janet--The current trend is toward longer works, about 80,000 to 110,000 words. Only some romance novels are good at 50,000. YA is also acceptable at 50,000. Some people must have an awful lot to say! I, for one, get mad when Stephen King or some other author of a "thriller" puts me to sleep with long, poetic narrative. I say, get on with it! JP
656 2015-06-12 15:32:34
Re: How long should a mystery novel be? (8 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I found another one, Mike. Easy to read, and it covers what we need to know, for all genres. It also talks about exceptions to the rule. JP
http://www.literaryrejections.com/word-count/
657 2015-06-12 02:06:56
Topic: Roberta's quest is finished! (0 replies, posted in Young Adult & New Adult)
It took a little longer than expected, but I am really happy with the story "Adventures of a Young Girl." Now I need someone with some expertise to tell me where it needs polishing. If someone has the time, I can use the advice. I'll reciprocate. JP
658 2015-06-11 14:50:58
Re: Reviewers (8 replies, posted in Fight Club)
(It's been over a month and I'm still trying to figure out why somebody would think it okay to put pool chemicals in a blender. Did she have a special blender just for the pool? She couldn't have used it for food afterward. Never mind.)
I have a question about dealing with unresponsive writers. I've reviewed several works, trying to be helpful but not pushy, and never heard back from the authors. I do sometimes come off pedantic, I know--it comes from grading papers for thirty years.
So what do I do? Make an effort to communicate? Go on reviewing their work? Forget all about them, even if I really like their work?
I can't help nitpicking--it's a family trait.
JP
659 2015-06-09 16:08:50
Re: Checking Your Replies (9 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
The same thing happened to me yesterday, when I was trying to remember the song with the phrase "You fill up my senses." It occurred to me that not only was my character doing it to her boyfriend, it's what we do when we write. I looked it up, and lo and behold! it was John Denver's "Annie's Song." Never been much of a fan, but he hit the nail on the head, especially when I read the lyrics and found that it's practically all similes, the form my character uses a lot in her descriptions. Have a good one.
660 2015-06-09 03:52:30
Re: Checking Your Replies (9 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
I am too easily sidetracked. I have lost whole days--and nights; don't tell my kids, they think I'm getting my sleep--following magic buttons down their mystical trails. I've had a computer in the house since the eighties but never had to lift a finger (lots of computer geeks in my family). Anyway, if I get started exploring, I forget to do any writing. I can't afford to waste time these days. JP
661 2015-06-08 19:18:30
Re: Formatting, Ugh! (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hey, Preacher--I'm such a dummy I didn't even know there was such a book as "Word for Dummies!" I am completely self-taught, so far as my abilities go, but I do know one thing: when you want to submit something you've written, the editor will give you specific instructions or refer you to a site that gives such easy instructions, you'll know you got it right. The only thing you can do wrong is ignore the editor's requirements. But they'll tell you what happens when you do that, too--they throw it out. No brainer. JP
662 2015-06-06 14:00:28
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Love Jesse Stone! Of course, it's hard not to like Tom Selleck in any movie.
663 2015-06-06 09:49:50
Re: RESOURCES FOR CRIME WRITERS (13 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
The pitfalls of writing: https://susanwiggs.wordpress.com/2015/0 … -it-means/
664 2015-06-05 18:25:27
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I'll have to check it out--never thought about it. I never particularly liked the movie--it seems to me the actors were encouraged to overact. And the mom! Was she so stupid she couldn't see her little darling was off, somehow? Patty McCormick was a child, so she obviously did what she was told, but she was so unlovable and domineering! I think, in those days, any child who mouthed off like that would have been slapped silly. You must have worn long blond braids when you were a kid, to be able to empathize.
My earliest recollection of George Clooney was as the plant foreman on Roseanne. He was funny, and carried his weight alongside some big personalities. He was missed when he left the show. Who knew he had such big achievements in his future?
665 2015-06-05 13:15:44
Re: Featured by Author (2 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
Thanks, JL--do you feature the works you've completed, or new works that need attention/ help? Just asking your personal preference. JP
666 2015-06-05 13:13:09
Re: Okay, where's the real FAQ? (3 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
Yes, I see the site FAQ--and it's where I'll go when I need to navigate the site. Thanks, JL--JP
667 2015-06-05 13:08:11
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Facts of Life! He must have been a baby! Whose boyfriend was he? He must have grown up on screen, like Leonardo diCaprio.
668 2015-06-05 13:04:52
Re: Checking Your Replies (9 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
Thanks, JL --that's a good way to keep us on the straight and narrow. I don't experiment much--it surprises me that there are so many magic buttons that can transport us to new places. Beam me up! JP
669 2015-06-05 12:59:16
Re: What Chapter did I last review? (2 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
I don't understand.
That's how I do it--is it backward? Of course. if a thing can be done wrong, that's how I'll do it. JP
670 2015-06-05 12:55:30
Re: Welcome (2 replies, posted in FAQ for members)
JL--You started this group two months ago and I just now found it! I've been raising a stink in the Premium Group forum because our FAQ's get lost, and we can never find the information! This sounds great--if you can categorize the threads by topic, so we can look things up. For example, start a GENRE thread, so we can post discussions, and find them again later. Same with other general topics. What do you say? JP
671 2015-06-05 03:19:47
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I always forget that John Cusack was in Stand By Me. He's done so many crime movies, it's hard to choose a favorite--I had chosen Runaway Jury (it has the most star power) but I like Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil and The Ice Harvest, too. Being John Malkovich is a hoot, also. I just like quirky movies. I like Jeff Bridges, too. I first saw him in TRON, back in the dark ages, when my kids were still little and made me take them. I really liked The Fisher King, but I guess my current favorite is The Big Lebowski--no, scratch that--The Fabulous Baker Boys.
672 2015-06-04 04:55:43
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Hey, Janet! I did have Al Pacino on the list. In fact, he was number one, until I realized all my choices were in my age group, so I thought I'd better make room for a few younger actors. I'll use him later on. I didn't have space for any females, either. We have lots of time for discussion. No Humphrey Bogart, Fred MacMurray, or James Cagney, either--they're ancient history.
And if you like, you can talk about as many as you want. Discussion is what we want here. JP
673 2015-06-04 04:20:50
Re: Genre (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, dags--I understood what you meant. Then I realized I had wandered onto another topic--forums--and moved my discussion there. JP
674 2015-06-04 03:42:50
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Denzel Washington--I first saw him in the murder mystery "A Soldier's Story." It was a mystery, for those of you who haven't seen it, set in pre-WWII army base in the south, and it appears to be a cut-and-dried racist murder. The officer who is sent to investigate is black, a polarizing development, if ever there was one. Since then, Washington has appeared as a military man and in murder mysteries many times. I did enjoy "The Bone Collector," based on the book by Jeffery Deaver, but it isn't my favorite. That would have to be "Devil In a Blue Dress," based on the book by Walter Mosley. It is set in post-WWII Los Angeles, and besides being a truthful portrayal of the place and time (the clothes are something else!), it's a good mystery and funny, to boot. If you haven't seen either one, you ought to.
675 2015-06-04 03:27:07
Topic: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
COP SHOP TALK Let’s Get Personal
Here they are—iconic actors who’ve made some unforgettable mystery/crime movies. Pick an actor, tell the first movie you ever saw him in, and your favorite. If possible, discuss the actor's crime movies. THERE IS NO WRONG ANSWER.
Example: Dustin Hoffman—first: Marathon Man favorite: Tootsie
1. George Clooney
2. Denzel Washington
3. Jeff Bridges
4. Sean Penn
5. John Travolta
6. Clint Eastwood
7. Jack Nicholson
8. Brad Pitt
9. Leonardo DiCaprio
10. Tommy Lee Jones
Extra Credit
11. John Cusack