Michael Connelly is my favorite author, but I wouldn't consider him a "thriller" author. I consider a thriller to be a story with a lot of running and chasing, menacing bad guys in high places, and intelligent, misunderstood main characters whom nobody believes. With that definition in mind, I nominate Grisham for stories like the Pelican Brief and Runaway Jury. Of course, there's stuff like Jurassic Park, where the menace is Mother Nature in the hands of a crazy scientist, which takes us back to The Island of Doctor Moreau.
901 2014-11-24 18:59:21
Re: Favorite current thriller writers (30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
902 2014-11-24 03:49:24
Re: New Swap Requests (6 replies, posted in Swap Club)
I'm still trying to figure out what you mean by using points to swap reviews. I thought we just reviewed, as usual, with the only difference being that we agree to do a complete review of the other writer's work (as opposed to falling off after a few chapters). Was I wrong about this? JP
Linda and JP, we have been swapping reviews. I am not sure if our reviews stem from this group or TNBW premium group. I'm not sure how to check. I was not aware that we have to use points in this group to swap reviews. We can do that on TNBW group. So I have pretty much decided to join only NO-points groups, keeping TNBW the only group where points are required, until we can add more than 5 groups. It's not that I mind using points - I have over 800 banked - it's more the 5 group thing because there are more of my reviewers in nonpoints groups. If you still wish to swap reviews, please catch my work there. I hope you will. Message me if you have issues with this.
903 2014-11-24 03:16:14
Re: What is a criminal case that holds a lot of interest and why? (3 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I recently researched the Black Dahlia murder. I found it very strange, mainly because of the victim's lifestyle, which was, apparently, a common one. But the most troubling to me is the story of the Manson Family, in part because a lot of the ground the group covered was territory I had traversed. Also, at the time of the Tate murders, I was almost nine months pregnant. But the worst part of a group like that is the ability of an individual to bend the will of many people to do his bidding, which puts Manson in the same category as Jim Jones, even Hitler. It's as if the members of the group surrender their individual wills. Similar groups will always be a threat. JP
904 2014-11-21 05:08:37
Re: New Swap Requests (6 replies, posted in Swap Club)
Hello--I've just finished the first drsft of my first novel, and rewrites are coming out now. It's called The Fruit of the Poisonous Tree, and I would like someone with a fastidious eye to spot the things I still need to tweak, add, change in the rewrite as it come out. I'm taking it pretty slowly, because I started at ground zero with the first draft, and I want to do a good job. I don't want to waste anyone's time.
It's the story of a mixed-up dame and a cop who's out to catch her for murder, set in the year 1950. There's confusion, conniving, confidence games and confederates in crime. I need a reader who will point a something and say, "Why did you put that there?".so I can get it right. JP
905 2014-11-19 01:27:16
Re: J P Lundstrom - ideas (6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Amy--you (and your husband) are too much! You did all that for me? What kindness. I remember a lot about those days, so everyday life is pretty well-filled-in for me, but the technical, medical and police information is what I lack. I was there, but I was a kid, and nobody talks to kids. You are very generous to contribute so much! Thanks. JP
906 2014-11-18 04:21:44
Topic: IMO: What's the best cop movie you ever saw? Was it realistic? (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I'm going to have to think about this one. For this question, I think I'll include just theatrical-release movies, not tv series or mini-series. Most of the time, the movies focus on the bad guys, or on a private detective. But when it comes to cops, I liked "No Country for Old Men," just because the narrator, Tommy Lee Jones, seemed so down-to-earth. (Doesn't he always?) That's what I say today, but tomorrow I may come up with a better one. Or maybe you will. Maybe I should have asked, "Who's your favorite movie cop?" JP
907 2014-11-18 01:44:58
Re: New feature idea (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Do I understand you?
you want to 1) Go back to the way it was on the old site, 2) Make the new site even more ungainly by adding features to a list formerly not needed, nor even desired, 3) Go back to the way it was on the old site? I said once before, I thought things were getting top-heavy (well, maybe not in those exact words), but not because things are new. It's because everybody wants to do things their own way! Let's give the new site a chance--we've just gone from fourth grade to Middle School. It's a whole new world out there! With pictures! I love the pictures! JP
P.S. If anyone has a real serious problem that must be solved in order for them to use the site, let them send you a private email so everybody else doesn't start getting wishful ideas.
908 2014-11-17 23:34:06
Re: points for posting in groups (5 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
I'm conducting an experiment. My stuff carried over from the old site to the premium group, so I posted a chapter to Cop Shop and a short story to Thriller, just to see which got the most response. So far, the story in Thriller has had the most immediate feedback. But that's just me. JP
P.S. I forgot to say: the group that's shown the least response is the Premium Group. I was thinking it was because there's such a lot of stuff to choose from, people are still finding their way. What has been your experience?
909 2014-11-17 18:16:05
Re: New change in point allocation/cost (6 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
I vote for points. Yesterday I finished a review in another group, and then found out I didn't get any points for it. It takes time and effort to read and review thoughtfully, and it just feels good to be rewarded with points. And I don't mind spending points to add to my work when I'm editing, if it keeps us all honest (not that any of us did that cheating thing). As a matter of fact, I wondered why I didn't get charged when I added a paragraph or two. I like having dollars to spend, and I like having points to spend, too. JP
910 2014-11-17 18:03:41
Re: How did it start? (8 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
What a brave soul you are! Thanks for sharing. JP.
I had an incident while I was walking home from high school. A stranger stopped on the 45 mph street and offered me a ride home. I said no, but he repeated the offer. I stepped away since he was creepy and then hid behind a set of pine trees in case he turned around and started following me.
I never told my parents. In retrospect, I have to wonder why. My plan at the time was to tell them if I ever saw the guy again. My gut has always served me well, and I distinctly remember the feeling of malice coming from that car. Could he have been a serial killer or molester? Did I come close to being a missing person? Why didn't I tell anyone and give his description to the police? If I had seen his license plate, could I have saved someone else?
Lots of unanswered questions, but this made me think. This is the first time I've put this in print, JP. Thanks.
A
911 2014-11-17 13:31:20
Topic: How did it start? (8 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
We're all fascinated with crime/ investigation stories. I guess I got interested when ten-year-old Patty Jean Hull vanished from the Grand Theater in Buena Park, California. I was eight years old at the time, and the newspaper headlines scared me. I had to ask what "berserk" meant. I was never allowed to go to the movies without an adult escort. I knew it was because there were kidnappers lurking around every corner. Funny how impressions we get as kids lead to things we do later. I have been fascinated by crime stories all my life. Now I get to write them. What's your story? JP
912 2014-11-16 21:32:03
Re: Still stumbling around (28 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks to all who reviewed my short story "Devoutly to Be Wished." I'm working on replying but am still stumbling around on how to do it exactly. Hopefully I'll get it in the next few days.
One feature I miss from the old site is the ability to see new postings in all categories (novel, short story, poetry) on one page, like the old home page. I feel like I'm doing more hunting and pecking here and feel I'm going to overlook postings of those not on my contact list.
Maybe this will resolve itself as I get used to the new features or perhaps I'm simply overlooking something.
Paul
I, too, agree. I haven't even been able to find all my group members' and connections' new postings, much less find, and be captivated by, new authors. It just makes me dizzy, and then my feet go to sleep. I'm doing more hunting than reading and reviewing! I do remember stumbling over a button somewhere that said "see all," but I haven't found it again. Ommm...ommm... JP
913 2014-11-15 22:01:08
Re: Member Annoucment (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yippeee! Can't wait to finish reading the whole story. It's been a trip, so far. JP
914 2014-11-15 21:56:42
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Is anyone writing about law enforcement in the old west? How about the FBI? What other aspects of law enforcement have you delved into? Post a question, opinion, or answer. Maybe you'll be inspied to try something new! JP
915 2014-11-15 21:53:16
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Hello All! So happy to be here! My novel has characters who are undercover narcotics officers, firemen and EMS. My own profession is in fire/EMS, so if you need any help in that area, I'll be more than happy to oblige. As for my narcs - oh my, the amount of research has been incredible. I can always use help with those two!
Welcome! You are going to be in great demand! I can't believe the research I've been doing for just a small-town cop, including two real cops I've interviewed. I am not ready to attempt anything so high-powered as yours. More power to you. JP
916 2014-11-15 21:44:07
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Welcome! Glad to have you on board. Sounds like you bring a lot to the group. Thanks for the info. In my story, the dog was shot by the owner, so no watching will take place. What kind of writing do you do? mysteries, memoirs, humor?
JP
917 2014-11-15 13:22:44
Re: General Discussion (2 replies, posted in Swap Club)
Hi, Linda--Could you explain how the swap works? Do we just read each other's work? JP
918 2014-11-15 00:17:50
Re: Site Bugs (217 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Another question: I posted the first chapter of a new novel the day before the new site came up. My posting showed up in Premium members. Is there any way it can be moved to "Cop Shop," without my having to pay points again? I never got a chance to get feedback, and now it's languishing. I'd really like to get input from knowledgeable folks, and there are a lot more chapters to go. Thanks. JP
919 2014-11-14 20:42:16
Re: Site Bugs (217 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This is the second time it's happened--I did some major rewrite to one of my chapters, and when I hit save, I got kicked out of the site, to a red-outlined sign-in page. That wouldn't be so bad, but all my work was lost. (I do have back-up.) What happened? Also, I don't see any help for republishing. With chapters split to form more chapters, should I just publish as if it's a new work? Thanks. JP
920 2014-11-14 13:38:35
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Thanks, Amy. Great example of how TNBW works to help/ support writers in need. JP
921 2014-11-14 10:09:02
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
My first thought is that most antibiotics hadn't been developed yet. Here is a Wiki link for what the timeline is for release of these meds (realizing that small-town hospitals probably wouldn't have the newer released ones) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timeline_of_antibiotics
Depending the size of the town, the characters would get oral antibiotics (sulfa or penicillin), the wound would be washed out with tap or sterile water if available, and left open (not sutured) to drain if it got infected. They would bandage it, obviously. Honey is a good bacteriostatic that some docs might have been aware of back then, so that might have been put over the wound. Have the doc comfort the MC with this treatment and just say that 'it works' ('cause it does)
I have a text from 1915 that shows the treatment for all sorts of diseases. That might be a good resource. Give me time though. Its a really big book.
I'm not sure I'm writing this in the right place, but here goes. I knew you'd have something for me. I did mention penicillin, but I had the doc stitch up the tear. I never heard of using honey before--just pour it on the wound? Just think--only sixty-four years ago, and things seem so primitive! Thanks for the information. Just knowing gives me a stronger grip on things. JP
922 2014-11-14 04:43:34
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Here's a question for you, Amy. I have been consulting with a former animal control officer about ths one. I let my hero, Jerry, be bitten by a dog in the first chapter, only to learn that in 1950, there was no testing for rabies. Can you tell me what the standard treatment for dogbite was at the time? JP
923 2014-11-13 16:52:28
Re: Welcome (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)
It only took a few hours, and I feel comfortable (almost) navigating the new site. It looks like we'll have a lot more fun, and we'll be able to do a lot more with this site. Congratulations. JP
924 2014-11-13 07:33:34
Topic: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Welcome to the Cop Shop! If you're a writer of mystery and crime fiction, this is the place for you to ask your questions or share information with another writer who needs help. Or if you're a law enforcement professional, let us pick your brain. Who knows, you might be writing stories of your own after a bit. I like my doughnuts glazed and my coffee black, how about you? JP
P.S. As you join the group, introduce yourself--let us know what you're writing!