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Some skepticism is called for, not the skepticisms of a natural doubter, but the care of a craftsman making sure that the tool fits the job.  A few of his composition rules best fit essays, but if you look at how they affect the result, you can see how the rules that the statements represent apply also to narrative.

And look again at the famous Rule 13.  Each clause, each phrase of the Rule illustrates itself!  It is a brilliant piece of writing, and of rhetoric.

The slather bread business isn't pimarily comedy.  It's character.

Try putting the 'blaze in the fireplace' part first, so you begin with Kha and some 'action' (really desire).  The circumstances of the desire can lead to the weather, and then back to food anv desire.

Sorry I haven't checked in in a bit.  I've been on the road, and I'll spend much of today on it as well.

From over there, it's as big as.  From here, it's a ripple of the past.  Isn't the whole issue here managing that distance?

One of my pushdown stack tasks has gone sour.

I've been relying on a 12v->20v power brick to provide extra run time to my flaptop.  The brick has been losing the ability to keep up with the peak current draw.  I bought a replacement (whose plug is so crappy I'll have to replace it after it's run 100 hrs or so and I know it won't fail on the infant mortality side of the bathtub curve) and opened up the old one with the intent of replacing the no-name electrolytic capacitors (probably the source of the slow failure) with top-end Panasonics, and maybe to increase the output capacitance by 25% to 50%.

But it was put together in a way that made it difficult without special desoldering gear and I destroyed the copper plate-throughs in the holes where two powertab transistors and two powertab-packaged diode pairs were soldered.  The circuit board in that vicinity suffered, too.

Now, how badly do I want to fix this, and how much am I willing to risk catastrophic failure?  Catastropic failure could include overvoltage to the laptop.  What kind of test load do I put on it?  This thing can supply 90 watts.  I'm no spark.

Nyarharrharr.  It's all copied out.  Now I have to flesh it in and make all the bits work.  I'll probably have to diddle the previous chapter as well.

I'm working on the f'schtunkin' photo.  It got me into a problem where I thought I would need a tech to dismantle my laptop to get the cable out.  But the counter guy at Geek Squad recognized that it was a problem with the combo (USB/eSATA) port--you actually had to pull harder than feels safe.  I'll avoid that connector from now on.

One of the woes of vacation--you leave your right arm#########tools behind.  That's ... beyond bummer.

Doesn't sound like the vid chip.  The video would have gone out immediately, and chips don't usually go POP!  It sounds like something in the power supply on the board, which may or may not have taken other things with it.  I'm guessing the pop was a blown electrolytic capacitor.  In any case, you'll probably want a new board.  Even if you replace the blown component, you don't know if something else triggered the failure or if the failure damaged something else.
Let a technician look at it, but unless it's under warrantee, expect to replace it.  Have your software and data transferred.  Whoever does it may need to make a call to Micro$oft to get your Windoze license transferred to the new hardware.  Watch out for unwanted and un-asked-for software installations and upgrades if you let someone like Greek Squad do it.

The Big Page of Sticky Notes has been transferred to a file.  Now I have to fill in the blueprint.  It's still a lot of work.

The head amp.  I've got two new tasks pushing down the pushdown stack.  Sometimes it seems like turtles all the way down.

Meanwhile, I may have a workable sequence for the monster Erevain scene, assuming that the post-its I've been jugging around the big sheet of paper don't get blown away.  (But see the link I posted on the other thread.)

Strictly speaking, narrative, not thoughts ... but ...

In a more limited way, John Dickson Carr in The Secret of Castle Skull.

Don't forget the last story of The Old Man in the Corner by Emmuska, Barroness Orczy.

Or the last of the Drury Lane stories by Ellery Queen under the pseudonym Barnaby Ross.  The thematic clues are devilish.

One of Asimov's Black Widower shorts does this in a different way.

The more recent mysteries of Jane Haddam (Orania Pappazoglou) have us share some thoughts of every suspect, for character and sometimes backstory.