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Yes, but what about candy that glows in the dark?

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Gosh ... I just spent most of the ball game on one of my take-no-prisoner reviews on your latest chapter.

When I write of Churchill, I should add that he knew how to modulate between his stately form and a more direct style.  In the Preamble to The Last Lion (Vol. I), Wm. Manchester likens Churchill's style for speeches to an organ performance.  The reference is to the Late Romantic style, especially of Cesar Frank or Camille Saint-Saens.  See (hear) Frank's Chorale Nr. 2 in b-minor.

What to review, after you've recovered from my cluster-bombing?  Hmm.  There's a sequence from Chapters 23 to 43, with a couple of interruptions.  You miss the opening, and I'm changing Momma's name spelling from Mellaen to Melayne (to get more space from her daughter's name).  No reason not to do the first three chapters if you care to get the start.  For a standalone -- 66, 67, 81, 87.  Not all of these are in the main sequence of Book 1.

If you do a sixth of that, I'll owe you bigtime.

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Okay, first version of the critical additions added to the flashback.  I'll do one or two rounds of revision, then I may post it for your delectation###########pinata practice.

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Oh, dear.

janet reid wrote:
KHippolite wrote:

Ah, I think I figured it out... and it may be an across-the-pong thing, but the expression should probably be

"X wasted no time in doing Y"

which is very different from X didn't waste his time doing Y. Maybe it's an idiomatic expression. *shrugs*. Either way, I get the meaning now

The difference is the word 'in'.  With no 'in', Catherine's dress is still up around her admirable front.  With 'in', the dress was set right expeditiously.

See The Lexicon of Intentionally Ambiguous Recommendation, also called LIAR.  (How do you read "I cannot recommend him too highly."  ?)

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I've spent the last several days trying to get a good handle on what Nikkano says as he's nosing around in his scrying basin, before destroying the basin and departing for the Antipodes.  I think I've got my claws in a starting-place.  Another day or two maybe, I can trot out part of it for you.

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Oddly enough, this is one place where I think you're all right.  Yes, another top-level category might make sense, or just highlighting the reply link when there's a draft in there, but I think the effort could be better applied to other issues.

IMO and Your Mileage May Vary, to be sure.

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Did you look in the place where you find IL review replies?

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So problem one is caused by problem two?

If you want performance in a computer system, you must design for it.

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And it's Flu Shot time again.

I expect to get another few hundred words of Erevain done tonight.  Maybe five or six hundred, maybe less.  I't will need a very solid second pass before I can consider dropping it on you.  I'm just expanding my notes as Erevain brings Merran and Jamen to his home.

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I just entered an inline review for Don Chambers's Mysterious Ways.  I was told that I had entered 96 comments.  Now, I'm prolix and sometimes outright logorrheaic, but ninety-six is a lot.  I went back and checked; there were 28 comments.  It's not as though we're paid by the comment, but it would be nice to have an accurate count.

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It was obvious to me, too, way back when, even though I'm outside of those folkways

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Isn't it obvious?  "What do you want me for?" or "What do you want with/of me?"


'Anant' means 'on the subject of'.

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Memphis Trace wrote:
njc wrote:
Memphis Trace wrote:

For years after the 1960s, long after tin cans went out of use, the highest compliment I could pay a pretty woman was "I'd pay 5 quid to listen to her piss in a tin can over the telephone."

Of course, it was said about the part of Appalachia I came from that we spoke the purest Elizabethan English still being spoken in the world. So there was that.
Memphis Trace

So if I said "What would you with me?" you could answer?

Memphis Trace wrote:

With "What would you with me?" I'll venture a quick guess (in context) that it is a potential paramour—overhearing my praise of another pretty woman's skin-deep beauty—demurely asking how much I would pay to listen to her piss in a tin can over the telephone. Ladies of the mountains rarely mention money in matters of the heart.

If my fuzzy memory serves, those are the words of Shakespeare's Julius Caesar to the 'Ides of March' soothsayer.

Anant =Albion's Seed=, I think you'll enjoy the part about the 19th century bowdlerizing your maps.

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Memphis Trace wrote:

For years after the 1960s, long after tin cans went out of use, the highest compliment I could pay a pretty woman was "I'd pay 5 quid to listen to her piss in a tin can over the telephone."

Of course, it was said about the part of Appalachia I came from that we spoke the purest Elizabethan English still being spoken in the world. So there was that.
Memphis Trace

So if I said "What would you with me?" you could answer?

Have you read =Albion's Seed=, by, I think, David Hackett?  It's a study of the cultures and "Folkways" that came from the British Isles at different times in different migrations.

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BUT the software that accepts the review should turn those double-brokets into the appropriate ampersand-codes (character entities).  This is a long-standing bug, going back to the old site.  NOTE: bugs in chararcter interpretation, whether HTML or encodings of Unicode, are a fertile source of security problems..

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Notice though that the expected readership is female, so you can't go too deeply into the male perspective.  Enough to lend a corroborative verisimilitude to ... oh, fiddlesticks!

Yeah, after it happened to me.

amy s wrote:

.... when he says to run the 'tank' down, he means the windshield washer reservoir, rather than the gas tank. This isn't bad advice, but all you need to do is open the reservoir and smell it. The alcohol smell is obvious if the fluid is fresh.

That doesn't tell you about the fluid in the lines.  They take at least as much of the engine heat, and the alcohol can boil off through the jets.  Reinforcing the fluid and running some fresh through is a good idea.

One trick: When you have a thin layer of frost, the big scraper can't follow the window contour well enough.  An old credit card used as a scraper will do a better job.  Just wear gloves because you will get frost on your fingers.

Also, salt and sand are used to melt snow/ice and provide traction.  (One reason that southern cities can't handle serious snowfall is that they try to handle it all with salt, and a heavy snow with freezing rain will overwhelm whatever they put down.  You need SAND, guys!)  Point is, when you go out, you will get your boots messy.  Cars will splash the mess around, so don't wear your white fur coat.

Dorothy Parker once said "She's pure as the driven slush."  You get the picture.

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janet reid wrote:

pft, catastrophic failure. It's all relative. Catastrophic failure losing your laptop is bad, one in the ER I'd presume is infinitely worse (for the person experiencing the consequences of the ER CF). smile

The 'catastrophic' in 'catastrophic failure' isn't about the cost of damage from the failure, but about the nature of the failure.  The popping of a soap bubble is a catastrophe, in this lexicon.  Venice slowly subsiding into the sea is not a catastrophe, only a very expensive disaster, since the process does not have a single 'tipping point' from which it cannot (in theory) be recovered.

See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Catastrophe_theory .

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I'm about three fifths of the way expanding my notes into text in the first Erevain chapter.  I'll probably have to break it for the Nikkano flashback, and even after I get everything expanded, I should do a severe editing pass.  This is a monster, and I need to get as many emotional cues in as I can.  I'll miss a lot, and they won't nearly be enough, but I'd rather let you review something in good shape.

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They would call it canned.  I'm not sure about 'beef'.

Get a separate scraper and snow   brush--they work better.

Keep at least one spare bottle of washer fluid in the car and know where the fill is under the hood.  If you can find a bottle of the concentrate (hard to find) use it to reinforce the stuff that's been sitting in the car all summer and losing alcohol.  Otherwise run the tank down and refill, then run some of it up into the lines.  There are few bummers like having your washer lines frozen.

I suggest a shovel for the trunk.  Not a snow shovel; they're too big for digging close around your car.  Not a spade either.  Look for a true shovel, with sides.  Know that 'mud and snow' radials are not as good as true snow tires.

It doesn't hurt to get your battery load-tested, either.

I decided last year to keep a spare set of wipers in my trunk after one was lost--in the rain--to flying debris.  Left and right are different sizes.  Auto parts stores can be very helpful if you don't catch them when they are very busy.

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Lawyers are never DRT.  It has to be taken before a judge.  And I am that careful sort of guy who won't do any such damage.

I'd pushed the test question down on the stack, too.  Grumble.  I've got paperwork still coming in over Mom's death.