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I was ok with Jar Jar's speech patterns, however I found he brought excessive levity to the story. I mean the story already has tons of comedy (eg the chain of bigger fish eating each other) and here you have a main who can't sell your serious scenes.

He's like WWE Wrestler Doink the Clown who gets occasional matches to lighten the mood in longer events. But imagine you're stuck with this clown in every match. No matter how desperate or dire the match-- or emotional the foe, there's this clown standing there in the background.

The critics LOVED Phantom Menace. Within one day of its release to the norms, Jar Jar was the most hated thing on the planet, momentarily eclipsing Justin beiber.

Then the critics loved Ep2 because Jar jar was muted, but they forgot ep2 was so unmemorable most people need google to tell you the central villain.

It stands to reason that the studio only allows critics to publish favourable reviews (By the way, books do that with Kirkus and similar reviews).

King of the Salves, is it?
Why not Lord of the Lotion or Baron of the Balm?

That's a lot of falling

Good... now you need to get to posting

for RG it's been harder than writing it. At least writing came naturally. And there are so many weird fly-by-night marketing agencies whispering promises in my ears

...and "shimbaddo"

Is Merran doing the confronting? Is she confronting with great fortitude?

I feel your pain about Melody. I have this weird character who's kind of a main but kind of a side. I could delete her and the ending would remain unchanged. I'm usually pretty ruthless with that kind of flotsam. But this character is like *puppy dog eyes* Please don't delete me (or feed me to the slaughter machine (or cut my arms off)).

That sounds like the one I'm in. if so, how long do I have? If not, ignore my rambling