Other side of the lagoon was the tng equivalent of the deflector dish. Also they were playing Voyageur w/ 7 of 9 (Read Four-oh-three) and I recall I never watched the final seasons, so I guess I better get on this before paramount goes under
751 2018-03-08 05:55:03
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
752 2018-03-08 05:49:48
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I remember that episode, unfortunately
753 2018-03-07 12:55:51
Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life) (197 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Of course it's confusing - you haven't found you true voice yet.
Recommend: Read the published writers you love and emulate for your first draft. Draw what you can from this site, but don't attempt to do it all.
Second-pass come back and watch yourself emulating. Ask yourself what you were really trying to say. Filter it through the eyes of your reviewers. But come back with the wisdom of the completed story and make it yours. In doing so, you will find your voice.
-K
754 2018-03-07 12:46:40
Re: Collective Nouns - Married couple. (30 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here's some fuel on the fire...
I'm arguing with an editor who says I can't say:
They had newspaper for seating
The editor said it would have to be "newspapers". Me, foolishly thinking that newspaper could be a count noun or a non-count noun looked it up. Most people agree with me. But here
https://www.italki.com/question/273932
you can see answer two, perhaps "They had newsprint for seating" would actually be more correct.
755 2018-03-07 10:57:48
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
shorts works
756 2018-03-06 23:26:33
Re: Maiden and other stuff (52 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
In answer to your question from the review, I'm still planning on editing the last 12 chapters of Into the Mind of God, so I can leave it in decent shape for when or if I come back to it into the future. Depends on how long the new trilogy takes.
Interesting. time to bump them higher up on the dance card
757 2018-03-06 23:24:53
Re: Maiden and other stuff (52 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Speaking of... where's the next chapter?
758 2018-03-05 14:19:52
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Excel might be the better choice. Sort 655535 rows by any number of columns.
759 2018-03-05 04:51:18
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
My last comment got me googling his boss. I got an obituary. The editing house had a rule you weren't allowed to the name of the person working on your manuscript. So this person stayed faceless for a good 18 months of communication (Email wasn't a thing back then - we killed a lot of trees). I will likely never find him, but I've added the search to my list of life quests (Including being allowed into Las Vegas), so you never know
760 2018-03-05 04:40:26
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Amy, how much was the editor? I've seen estimates that run into the thousands, although that's for a very detailed edit.
Ya know... a good editor is worth his weight in gold. But they're so hard to find. It's a kind of relationship - it's a person you're 'dating' because you'll need to trust them with something close to your heart (btw I'm referring to a good substantive editor). In the original VQ, I had one and he was like there's no way this can be one book, and I hated him, and he was right. He billed me 3k and I was so mad but I'd get him again if I could find him.
761 2018-03-04 18:45:38
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Poor Jaylene
762 2018-03-03 03:58:08
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
From here, on the outside, we're all wandering around in a daze
763 2018-03-02 01:18:30
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I sleep 1- 2 hrs a night. I'll drop off long before you.

764 2018-02-27 11:48:35
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hey Sol...
You need the ability to move threads so you can transplant contentious debates rather than having to end them.
765 2018-02-27 01:37:26
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
o dear
766 2018-02-25 22:17:57
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I swear they're going to dig up my grave looking for gold in my teeth. Maybe I should just put them in my will.
Sure fire way to have to fill out post-mortem paperwork in the afterlife
767 2018-02-24 01:23:27
Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life) (197 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It was a liquid nitrogen river in which one of the villains met a "chilling" demise
768 2018-02-23 10:24:52
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
William, thank you.
769 2018-02-23 00:16:54
Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life) (197 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Norm: You should see my prologue. It has K's influence all over it.
njc: (runs screaming from the Prologue)
K: follows the pleasant sound of a screaming reader throwing a book at a wall. Smiles.
770 2018-02-22 01:13:21
Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life) (197 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Which reason did you mean, that my writing seemed suitable for that age group? I've been told recently that my adult stuff is better
It sounds like you're trying to squeeze the story into a certain demographic rather than just tell the tale. There may be some merit in doing just that, but when you say it that way, I wonder a little.
Warning: K's stories resemble Mickey Spillane's =I the Jury=. Everyone gets killed off.
Not so! I've guaranteed that Firestarter will survive to the end. And by survive, I mean be "animate" but not necessarily having a pulse or sanity. Plenty of people wake up with neither of these until their morning coffee, so it still counts as alive
771 2018-02-21 12:46:41
Re: How to Breathe Underwater (trilogy: Lessons in Skills for Life) (197 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
As for the demographic of who would love it as it is? yep, you have it on the nail. 40 something women (and men for that matter) who love fantasy. It was never specifically written for the MG age group, I was just told that my writing style (and the lack of sex and violence) would make it more suitable for that age group.
Hmm if you're targeting a demographic for this reason alone, it's probably more of a hindrance than a benefit.
I tend to hover in the background and find creative ways to thin people's casts. Chapter one's are easy... have it so your group isn't assembled yet. I got my group together in chapter 14. I think Amy took an entire book to get hers assembled.
-K.
772 2018-02-17 18:40:29
Re: Slight case of Cardiac Arrythymia (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
get this onto the page before the sharpness of the experience dulls
773 2018-02-16 21:28:35
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Don't make me get out the cattle prod again
774 2018-02-16 14:34:42
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
'Unholy' is a negated word. I don't have the thesaurus hand, but if you can find an intrinsicly negative word, it might be stronger.
And try dropping the article.
"Dire" is always fun
example:
Dire Angel
Dire Rapture
775 2018-02-16 14:31:32
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Add some GRR Martin. Half the cast is dead by chapter 5