I sleep 1- 2 hrs a night. I'll drop off long before you.

I sleep 1- 2 hrs a night. I'll drop off long before you.

Hey Sol...
You need the ability to move threads so you can transplant contentious debates rather than having to end them.
o dear
I swear they're going to dig up my grave looking for gold in my teeth. Maybe I should just put them in my will.
Sure fire way to have to fill out post-mortem paperwork in the afterlife
It was a liquid nitrogen river in which one of the villains met a "chilling" demise
William, thank you.
Norm: You should see my prologue. It has K's influence all over it.
njc: (runs screaming from the Prologue)
K: follows the pleasant sound of a screaming reader throwing a book at a wall. Smiles.
Which reason did you mean, that my writing seemed suitable for that age group? I've been told recently that my adult stuff is better
It sounds like you're trying to squeeze the story into a certain demographic rather than just tell the tale. There may be some merit in doing just that, but when you say it that way, I wonder a little.
Warning: K's stories resemble Mickey Spillane's =I the Jury=. Everyone gets killed off.
Not so! I've guaranteed that Firestarter will survive to the end. And by survive, I mean be "animate" but not necessarily having a pulse or sanity. Plenty of people wake up with neither of these until their morning coffee, so it still counts as alive
As for the demographic of who would love it as it is? yep, you have it on the nail. 40 something women (and men for that matter) who love fantasy. It was never specifically written for the MG age group, I was just told that my writing style (and the lack of sex and violence) would make it more suitable for that age group.
Hmm if you're targeting a demographic for this reason alone, it's probably more of a hindrance than a benefit.
I tend to hover in the background and find creative ways to thin people's casts. Chapter one's are easy... have it so your group isn't assembled yet. I got my group together in chapter 14. I think Amy took an entire book to get hers assembled.
-K.
get this onto the page before the sharpness of the experience dulls
Don't make me get out the cattle prod again
'Unholy' is a negated word. I don't have the thesaurus hand, but if you can find an intrinsicly negative word, it might be stronger.
And try dropping the article.
"Dire" is always fun
example:
Dire Angel
Dire Rapture
Add some GRR Martin. Half the cast is dead by chapter 5
That's a longer topic... I'll try to offer something on it later tonight
I think you finally have one I can't pick apart. I mentally toyed with dropping the word unholy, but "Trinity Unleashed" is a book I'd expect to see on a bishop's desk. Thus, I believe you have it best in its current form.
The Spartan example doesn't quite match. Imagine that "The Battle of Thermopylae" was actually "The last battle of Leonitas". Not a big deal - I'd still watch a movie with a title like that. But I'd watch it with certain expectations that might rob the ending of some of its impact.
I concede lots of titles predict their endings (Death of a Salesman? Knight Fall? Empire Strikes Back?). Even Last Unicorn helps guide me to the ending where we find out she's anything but the last.
I recommend migrating away from a title containing "Satan". You might best use a temp title. I have stories I haven't chosen a title for in like 3 decades (403's title for example, for the past 4 years was "Lizzie" and before that it was 10y as "Ultimate Soldier" until I realized she was anything but.).
There is no shame in waiting until after you've written the novel to give it a title. Even then, the publisher may scrap your title, so don't marry it.
This title is better than the previous, but suggests the ending. How's about "Satan's Last"?
A trunk of cash fits in well with his character. You have this guy with a large amount of worthless valuables. And he's trying to extend it in ways that only work in a cash-based society. Clearly, someone with that kind of thinking pattern will always carry a trunk full of money.
Ginger not so easy. Why bring so much clothing on a 3-hr trip? Maybe the trip was part of a longer stay-over and she had nowhere else to store her luggage? I don't recall Maryanne dressing with much variety, but I haven't seen it since it was on the air, and back then they were probably still making Scooby Doo's, so what would I know.
Now, how exactly you get batteries to recharge using little more than coconut water and aloe leaves, that seems more absurd than a trunk of money. Or magic.
Come and knock on our door. We've been waiting for you.
Where the kisses are hers and hers and his,
**** 3's company toooooo! ****
Thank me later
Requiem was better - this one sounds like the title of a gospel book from the eyes of a Harlem school teacher
The word "trinity" sounds too pretty. No matter what you stick to it, it still sounds nice.
Dark Trinity? Must be about a witches coven
Hell's Trinity? I think I saw that on a porno
instead, how's about...
"For Whom the Scripture tolls"
I put eye, because I bet blood is taken
Eye of the Antichrist
Caligo Deus
Caster of Souls / Soul Caster
Rapiemur
I'm far from an expert in Catholicism, but I do believe they teach in rapture like we do (we all have different names for it) which implies "...Christ in the flesh..." is technically implausible.
Question: How have believers reacted to the ideas for the new series so far?
Question: What is the planned release order between this and [G a l a x y T a l e s]?
How's the protagonist/s shaping up?