I like the idea of putting klews in the timeline. Something that won't be noticed until the end.

Point taken. Finding the perfect beginning is one of the roughest tasks of this whole writing business. Maybe I'll just make a timeline and include it in the inside cover of the hardcover jacket, rather than having to rewrite everything again.

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Stitches can be out in 7-10 days. The medievals won't know this. They will gently try to separate the wound and make sure the edges have sealed.

NJC, you wrote about the Old Man? I LOVED this!  Love the candied liver and telling the Old Man not to look while Damnit eats his meal of liver and onions. Excellent! Can you post other ones that you've written?

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I bow to the greater wisdom. You've obviously had a lot of time to think about this.

Something to think about. This isn't based on any fact or quotable source, but everyone seems to agree that there isn't any source you would consider reliable.  It's just opinion.  So take it with a grain of salt.

Forest fires create a ton of CO2. Our ecology has evolved to adapt and regrow after fire wipes out old-generation forests during drought. That's a lot of CO2 gathering in the atmosphere (with or without technology)


That said, there is a lot of change going on that our tiny little planet has never dealt with. We've never had so many people. Never had the industrial waste or constant excess of environmental waste (including CO2). It is realistic to assume that our Earth is dealing with challenges never before encountered.

1) Population: Ex: Before Katrina, the US had never lost a major metropolitan city. (New Orleans and Buloxi) We never had to organize a relief effort of such scope or magnitude. Another example: The flood of refuges from Syria. We had the same thing happen with WW1 and WW2, but there was such a die-off that there wasn't as much strain on the system. Now, when the rest of the EU is at peace, they are finding what it's like to resettle an entire country.

2) Disease.  We've never had such a large amount of people travelling such large distances. It only makes sense that we'll have a killer flu sometime. Sooner or later. It will happen and the system will be overwhelmed.

3) Dissociation from an agricultural base of food production. No one realizes how easy it is to grow food or raise animals (like chickens). People are used to obtaining food from a store. Take away the chain of supply, and people won't have the immediate ability to feed themselves.

4) Here we go...global warming.  Controlling the environment (like terraforming) is a skill that all global civilizations must manage or lose control of their planet. When scientists freak out about a 1 degree warming of the oceans, they don't put it in a perspective that people understand. If you realize that the human race can only comfortably survive (and grow food) at temps that total 40 degrees fairenheit (60-100 degrees), you realize that one degree is a big deal. We've lost 1/40th of our 'comfortable survival window'.  Warmer oceans mean less polar ice caps, bigger weather, and thinner coastlines.  The more energy (temperature) that you pour into a climate, the bigger the storms, hurricaines, etc.

Note that we missed the last ice age. Before that, we had them about every 10 thousand years or so. We've gone 20 thousand since the last ice age. Could this have been caused by bigger fires and bigger populations burning lumber for heat? Unlikely. More likely that it just skipped a cycle. However, we have a cold planet by nature. Missing this last cold snap meant that modern civilization developed with a pretty regular growing season and didn't have to save food for 10-20 years of excessively long winters. It is easy to fall into the assumption that weather here is a constant. Statistically, that isn't something that has happened in the past. Our climate will likely change drastically again. We just don't know which way it will swing.

5) Wiping out the oceans.  This is a biggie. We've always used the oceans as a free toilet for industrial waste. We are denuding our oceans with uncontrolled overfishing. The sea needs to be treated like a farm and fertilized. What we take away needs to be replaced. Alaska has a great breeding program for wild salmon, where they manage the life cycle and re-seed the water with eggs and then the salmon come back to the fishery to breed. It improves the economy. It provides a huge return of nutrition without a lot of cash expenditure.

So, anyway, I think that the argument about the end-of-days isn't very productive. What might be more beneficial is a discussion about replacing resources. The only way that will be done is with a single voice making decisions that benefit the planet and paying the money to repopulate the thinned-out animal and vegetable life. Humans just don't get along with each other very well. (Google Johan Eliasch, rainforest)
(Steps off soap box)

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Janet,

Not too much of a problem. All you have to do is go back in other chapters and have C think about the eagle's nest/ watchtower, remembering how it was a retreat when the childhood got too stressful. Therefore, she wonders once or twice in previous chapters about what the scenery would look like and if there would be the same view as during her childhood. Then, after the hubba-hubba-bang-bang scenes, she escapes to the tower as a place to meditate and think. That way, it isn't contrived.

Boom!  Score one for the tiara! 

(FYI, I would think that these 'abandoned' areas of the fortress are actually quite popular amongst the young people who live there. Servants are sleeping on the floor in the common room. If hormones run high, there will be frequent places where people tryst. The watchtower would be one of them.  C would know about that, I think, having been raised in this keep.)

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Copy that

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Chapter 4 and Chapter 5? Give me the number and the book

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Thank you for listing chapter numbers. Very helpful. Will get to 66 as soon as work gives me a break.

Dirk,

Don't forget Canada's navy. It goes in and out of Bay of Fundi, catches a fish or two and rows back.

Going the 'whole nine yards' might be a lumber term. Nine yards is the length of cut logs to put on railway cars. I'm writing about logs. Kinda appropriate.

Or it's the gunnery belts used in WW2 because they were nine yards long. I'm writing about shooting things. Also appropriate.

Or it's the length of a scotsman…I mean his kilt. That's why a scotsman makes a terrible carpenter, they think that this (distance from thumb to forefinger) is ten inches.

Elisheva, feel free to join into the fray. It's kinda fun, actually.

Next chapter of Dictates is going up.

Norm, all I can hear is the South Park song, "Blame Canada." Though I have to admit, you kick ass in hockey. You have much better television. You have funnier commercials. You have Toronto. The Canadian side is much prettier to view the falls. You can knock a hole in most of your coins. Your health care system is one of the best things going.

But our money is worth more. Everyone comes over from the other side to buy supplies and gas over here. Oh, there might be a few other things but I gotta post first.

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K,

You can't fly with a seatbelt on because you don't have a passport. Where the heck can you fly within Canada? Hmmmm? FYI, I remember EVERYTHING.

Good article, NJC. The math explanation was excellent.

I'm not a dietician, but here's what I found on a quick google. This is the most informative site I found and also included the most details.

http://www.pcrm.org/health/cancer-resou … ancer-risk

It also lists summaries of individual studies that have contributed to the big picture. Short version: yes. Red meat and processed meat increases risk without guaranteeing that the people will definitely get cancer. It would also have to do with the amount of fiber in the diet (scrapes the colon clean and decreases risk of cancer as well as diverticulosis.)

If you want the cliff-notes devoid of facts, read the conclusion at the end. It's a good summary.

Oh, Dirk, love my lab coat!

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Always wanted to rule the geeks with a friggin tiara on my head. I might hide it in my hair when I finally meet with a publisher. Just for confidence boosting, of course.

It has roses! I'm a princess!

Pic is on my public profile page! Tiara! I got a tiara!

I found a tiara at an estate sale!!!! That's it...I claim myself to be queen of the geeks!

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Then I would be called the plot-slayer. Fear me. Ask K 'cuz he knows all too well. I don't let him get away with ANYTHING.

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I shall rip it to bits then. (Puts on gloves...there's gonna be some splash)

Hardly. Not when your 'cornering' involves smoke and mirrors. Any fool can put up a website and fill it full of bad science. You'll have to work harder, otherwise I'm dancing around you. Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee...

Where did you find this two page do-this-because-I-say-so but don't-supply-any-real-data website? It must be true since there is a picture and this hogs wallop says they are backed up by the CDC recommendations. Note that they only quote the vaccine compensation program and not the CDC recommendations. I realize that you're just kicking the hornets nest and wanted to rile me up. That means that you have to read the rest of my post, K.

Paranoia propaganda: Your two page nut job rant says: Do you think that the flu vaccine is safer now?  Did you know that $.75 is mandated to be paid into the National Vaccine Injury Compensation Program , the Federal Vaccine Court every time anyone receives a vaccination?   This must be paid by the manufacturer of the vaccines.

Note that this is a big pile of money and therefore open for scavenging by lawyers. Imagine that.

Here is the website on where to file a claim, what the parameters for compensation are, and meeting minutes from the VICP. http://www.hrsa.gov/vaccinecompensation … cines.html

HRSA statistics and pdf about compensated cases:

Data & Statistics
The United States has the safest, most effective vaccine supply in history. In the majority of cases, vaccines cause no side effects, however they can occur, as with any medication—but most are mild. Very rarely, people experience more serious side effects, like allergic reactions.
In those instances, the National Vaccine Injury Compensation Program (VICP) allows individuals to file a claim for financial compensation.
What does it mean to be awarded compensation?
Being awarded compensation for your claim does not necessarily mean that the vaccine caused the alleged injury. In fact:
What reasons might a claim result in a negotiated settlement?
• Prior to a decision by the U.S. Court of Federal Claims, both parties decide to minimize risk of loss through settlement
• A desire to minimize the time and expense of litigating a case
• The need to resolve a case quickly
How many claims have been awarded compensation?
From 2006 to 2014, over 2.5 billion doses of covered vaccines were distributed in the U.S. according to the CDC. 2,975 claims were adjudicated by the Court for claims filed in this time period and of those 1,876 were compensated. This means for every 1 million doses of vaccine that were distributed, 1 individual was compensated.
Since 1988, over 16,038 claims have been filed with the VICP. Over that 27 year time period, 14,062 claims have been adjudicated, with 4,150 of these determined to be compensable, while 9,912 were dismissed. Total compensation paid over the life of the program is approximately $3.18 billion.
This information reflects the current thinking of the United States Department of Health and Human Services on the topics addressed. This information is not legal advice and does not create or confer any rights for or on any person and does not operate to bind the Department or the public. The ultimate decision about the scope of the statutes authorizing the VICP is within the authority of the United States Court of Federal Claims, which is responsible for resolving claims for compensation under the VICP.
• Over 80 percent of all compensation awarded by the VICP comes as result of a negotiated settlement between the parties in which HHS has not concluded, based upon review of the evidence, that the alleged vaccine(s) caused the alleged injury.

What reasons might a claim result in a negotiated settlement?
• Prior to a decision by the U.S. Court of Federal Claims, both parties decide to minimize risk of loss through settlement
• A desire to minimize the time and expense of litigating a case
• The need to resolve a case quickly
How many claims have been awarded compensation?
From 2006 to 2014, over 2.5 billion doses of covered vaccines were distributed in the U.S. according to the CDC. 2,975 claims were adjudicated by the Court for claims filed in this time period and of those 1,876 were compensated. This means for every 1 million doses of vaccine that were distributed, 1 individual was compensated.
Since 1988, over 16,038 claims have been filed with the VICP. Over that 27 year time period, 14,062 claims have been adjudicated, with 4,150 of these determined to be compensable, while 9,912 were dismissed. Total compensation paid over the life of the program is approximately $3.18 billion.

I'm done with my rant. You're a weenie, K.

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I just figured out another priest spell and it makes so much sense! Get ready for a cool power moment!

I just figured out another priest spell and it makes so much sense! Get ready for a cool power moment!

Zimpec would work. Nice and distinct. No one will confuse it with any other character.

And no, you haven't heard the last of Zimpec. There is at least one other Shadowbook out there. He found that it didn't work to tell anyone what to do. The one time I tried to have him speak directly to Kha and Anver, they joined forces and told the old man to go to hell. However, he's really good at showing the right people what is going on elsewhere in the world. So there is at least one more chance to change the future. We'll see if he makes it a good attempt...

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