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Take what Temple says with a grain of salt.Dont get me wrong, the girl has skilz, but she lacks a teaching bug. Take it that you need to work on dialogue and that is all. I usually read my stuff out loud to get the voices right. Then I have the computer read it to me. It lets you hear stilted phrasing and unnatural wordings. It can sometimes be a quick fix

The Fourth Millenia
Two Millennia Later
Lost in the Next Millenia

Give yourself the time to heal

Good one, sister

Yes

What is the order of the Rhiannon series? Do. You want critique on book one?

He needs to finish it so he gets time to write. Priorities

Watch the movie Stigmata. Great allusions and Catholic kinda evil moments

Good deaths

Nailed to the floor with half the body enclosed under the flooring
wrapped in thorns for the entire body with roses blooming and the vines still alive

I caught that Luke wasn’t there. No footprints in the white/red sand

I have a new chapter published in Mantle of Magic. I got everybody to the Pass. Now I need a beer to celebrate. About time that I published something new.

Oh, it is just a guess, but size shouldn't matter with scurvy since Vit C is a water soluble vitamin and whatever you don't metabolize gets peed out. It just matters when your last dose occurred.

They should have pineapples on the island.

You can eat the peels and get vitamin C from there.

The skipper's teeth should have been falling out.

Conjunction Junction, what's your function? And, but, and or are conjunctions. Since there would be a comma if that sentence contained 'and', it is appropriate to apply a comma before 'but'.

I think I knew an answer. I may faint.