All thoughts of Lucy left Rob’s mind as the alarm clock woke him from a deep sleep. He jumped out of bed, grabbed a hot shower, then made a strong pot of coffee. As he sat at the small table, sipping the steaming brew and staring at the money that still lay in the middle, his thoughts turned to her.
Sure, he liked her. She was stunning. Long auburn hair that fell halfway down her back, green eyes that shimmered when she was excited and (he found out last night) flashed angrily when she was mad. She was small, the top of her head only coming to his shoulder. He liked petite women. Something about them turned him on when he towered over them. Maybe it was a male chauvinist thing, or maybe it was just the way he was raised.
He glanced at the clock, got up from the table, and placed the coffee cup on the sink. He really wanted more but refrained. The caffeine made him nervous. It also made him rush the song when he sang. One cup would be enough. He needed to get dressed.
He stared in disappointment at the contents of his closet and dresser drawers. Instead of getting drunk and messing around with Lucy, he should have made a trip downstairs to the laundry. There wasn't much to choose from that was clean.
He had no choice but to wear the clothes he had worn the night before. He picked up the shirt and brought it to his nose, sniffing at the armpits. Not too bad, but the shirt was heavy with the odor of cigarette smoke.
He returned to the kitchen and grabbed the bottle of Febreze that he kept in the cabinet under the sink, then he went back to the bedroom. He gave a healthy dose of Febreze to his jeans and shirt, then sniffed them again. It was better, but they still needed a good wash.
When he was dressed, he grabbed his keys and left the apartment, catching the first bus to downtown Los Angeles.
The offices at Capitol Records were buzzing with activity. Rob wandered down the long hall to the last door, where he had met Larry Brown. With apprehension, he opened the door.
Julie was at her desk, typing on the computer. She turned at the sound of the door. When she saw him, she stood, and this time, there was a smile on her face. "Good morning, Rob," she said. "I'll let Larry know you're here. Have a seat."
What a difference a day makes, he thought. And the prospect of a recording contract. If she was this nice to him already, it must be a good sign.
The inner door opened, and Brown stepped out, his hand extended. "Nice to see you again, Rob. Come on in." He held the door open. Julie was already standing at Brown's desk, a steno pad in her hands.
"Have a seat," he said, then looked at Julie. "Would you make a list of things Rob needs, please Julie, headshots, etc? We have the studio booked for ten o'clock this morning. Can you make sure it's still available for that time? Thanks, sweetheart." After scratching the orders in her steno pad, she turned, closed the door quietly behind her as she left the office.
He was breathless with utter efficiency. This was not the entertainers' end. This was the professional end. The end where the wheels turned, and the money flowed, where a career was made or broken. He couldn't help but be impressed. There was only one thing bothering him, and he had to voice it before this went any further.
"Mr. Brown..."
"Larry."
"Yes, Larry, I just have one question?"
"Sure, Rob, what's on your mind?" He leaned back in his chair and held a match to the cigar he clutched in his hand.
Rob cleared his throat. "Well," he hesitated. "It seems that you're doing all of this planning. I mean, headshots, studio time. You don't even know if I can sing yet."
Brown sat forward in his chair. "Remember Drummond?"
Rob nodded.
"As much as I can't stand the man, if he says you can sing, then you can sing."
"But I thought he brought others here."
"He has."
"What happened to them?"
"They had no drive. Do you have drive, Rob?"
"That's about all I have," he answered sullenly.
"And do you believe that I've been in this business long enough I can tell when a person is hungry?"
Rob stayed silent.
"Well, I have. And you're hungry, Rob. It's all over you."
"I think you're taking a huge chance on me."
Brown studied him quietly until the phone on his desk buzzed. Before he picked it up, he grinned at Rob. "Let me worry about that," he said. "You just worry about not screwing me over."
***
For some reason, the studio was not what Rob envisioned. He had never been in one but had developed preconceived notions as to what to expect. The loud beat of a drum reached Rob's ears as Brown opened the door, ushering Rob inside.
The walls were blacked out. Four studio musicians sat behind separate glass cubicles, each with his own instrument. A keyboard player was tapping out a few notes. A bass player was picking up the rhythm of the keyboard player. In another cubicle, a different musician was tuning up his guitar. The drummer had been hitting his bass drum with his foot.
He followed Brown past the musicians and into the recording booth. "I noticed you didn't bring a guitar. Drummond said you play."
"I play," Rob answered. "I didn't know what to expect, so I didn't bring it."
"No problem, there are plenty around here to choose from." Brown flipped a switch on the soundboard, and loud feedback squealed through the room. "Sorry about that, guys." He said into a microphone. "Guys, this is Rob. We're demoing him today. He has some originals," he stopped and looked at Rob, his eyes questioning. Rob nodded. "that we're going to do. He'll give you the tune." Brown clicked off the microphone. "These guys are the best in the business," he said. "All you have to do is play the tune and sing a few lines. Then they'll work it out. If it's not right, tell them. We pay them very well, so don't take any bullshit."
Rob nodded.
Brown flipped back on the microphone. "We need an acoustic," he said.
Once Rob tuned the acoustic guitar, he sat down with the studio musicians and played one of his original songs. It was a soft ballad. He had chosen this one because it showed off his voice. He was told to bring three songs. The second one was a fast rock song, and the third was an up-tempo.
Once he finished, he set the guitar aside and waited. The guys fiddled with their instruments struck a few keys on the guitar and keyboard, and before Rob knew it, his song came to life. He was amazed. It was as if they had picked the tune right out of his brain. It sounded exactly as it did in his head.
Brown took Rob back into the control booth and had him sit down. "What do you think?"
Rob shook his head. "I can't believe it," he said. "That's how I've always heard it in my head. But I only could play it on the guitar. These guys have my total respect."
"They're good," Brown agreed. "And they're expensive. But worth every dime. Are you ready to sing it?"
"About as ready as I'm going to get," Rob answered.
He was ushered back into the studio and given a pair of headphones. He placed them snugly on his head. He was still nervous, so he took several deep breaths to calm his heart.
Suddenly, Brown's voice came through the headphones. "Do you need to hear the music first?" he asked.
"No, I've got it, I think."
Brown laughed. "Okay, here you go."
The song he spent so many hours on, lost so many hours of sleep over, flowed into his ears. He closed his eyes. He felt like crying. Instead, he let the music fill him, and he started to sing.
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Hey, KL. This chapter clearly is more uplifting. Then too, I'm thinking that 'fore long, problems will get 'tween Mr. B and Rob. B is not one to mess with, I'm pretty sure :-0 That said, I've a feeling Rob's gonna get into a painful situation with him...VERY painful. Rob's journey continues on. He's like me in that the younger, Rob's age version of me had a knack for getting into BIG trouble. Truth is it's really a miracle I'm still alive :-0
I like how you built the outline and developed it. Great work!!!!
CHEERS!!!!
Mike
There might be sometimes remembrance of his mother and play it in a song, lyrics coming forth. It is so hard to do anything with a base somewhere, and he is trying to do something now, and his only light is his mother and Luce is still tenuous.
Hiding in the cellar, hanging on to a thread of life
They need me but I, can't come an ease their strife.
(Chorus) Where will they go if I'm not there, Where will I go if I shut off care.
. I feel you need to bring his songs to reflect his life, maybe have him write a song after leaving Lucy and bravely stumble through it at the recording session because he feels it so deeply. And it is that song that blows the minds of the musicians and Mr. Brown.
mikejackson1127