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Bit of a plot hole in three of my scenes that I'd like to address, although I'm not sure how. Scene 1.1 (the healing of Alessandro's epilepsy) has Alessandro clearly know what happened during the seizure, although epileptics normally don't remember anything. In scene 1.3 he discusses it with Connor at breakfast as having felt the Holy Spirit bathe him in healing energy. Scene 2.1 has Connor kiss Cardinal Nnamani's ring on the cardinal's paralyzed arm, which leads to tingling in the fingers by the end of the scene and a full recovery within a day.

Question is, how come Alessandro felt himself being healed even while unconscious, while Nnamani felt no such rush through his body? The best answer I can come up with is that Connor was pouring healing energy directly into Alessandro's brain (he was holding Alessandro's head at the time), whereas he only held the cardinal's arm and kissed his ring. Seems like an asspull, though, since the entire right side of the cardinal's body is healed within 24 hours, which in theory ought to include his brain. Another possible answer is that the cardinal didn't feel it right away because his right side is paralyzed, including damage to the relevant part of his brain. Both options seem lame.

Or, I can just say screw it and ignore the problem. No reviewers have brought it up, although that could be because they're reading my scenes weeks apart and it doesn't stand out.

Thoughts?
Dirk

That brings my previous novel to mind, John, because it was crap. I only admit this to see how long we can keep a thread about white space going.

Got it: red-winged blackbirds. Not very big, but the bright red markings are reminiscent of fresh blood. Plus, they'll seem like a harmless curiosity at first.

Yeah, they're big in Norse mythology. They also act as psychopomps between the real and spirit worlds. They're considered bad luck in some cultures. I wouldn't want to piss one off.

Almost had a heart attack after rechecking my research about Satan fathering the Antichrist. Folks on my Catholic forum say angels and demons can't reproduce. Fortunately, I eventually (re)stumbled on Genesis 6:1-4. It clearly distinguishes sons of God from men. The former are generally understood to be angels according to the NABRE, the most commonly used Catholic Bible in the US. Also, Wikipedia has an article about sex with demons, although it's not as clear as the Bible verses.

I now know two people in the US who have it, and it's broken out in my mother's care home, even though the total confirmed cases in Canada is just 7300. Alberta Health Services has yet to mandate masks for people working in care homes. Morons.

I need to look for the Andromeda Strain online. I remember I really liked it, although I no longer remember the plot.

Amateurs. I'm always in the doldrums. Add four tax returns (mine and family) and I'll be out of commission for a month.

Mercy sakes alive, looks like we got us a Convoy!
CW McCall

I'm playing loosely with reality, since the Baldacchino actually weighs 90 tons. That thing falling would cause so much noise and destruction, it would resemble a mini-911. The underground burial vaults would collapse, kicking up thick debris. I decided not to use those details for story reasons, so I left out the weight of the structure. I'm still mulling over what else I might tip over that is more realistic than the Baldacchino collapsing.