Well, this is stupid. Chapterhouse spent a whole book building up the threat of the Honored Matres and, in particular, the Great Honored Matre (aka Spider Queen) only to have her aide kill her with a simple poison in her drink. Did somebody forget about the existence of poison snoopers, a technology that had been around for thousands of years? Not even an exotic poison from the Scattering that advanced Ixian snoopers might not recognize.

I'm getting close to the end of Chapterhouse and read a few reviews of Sandworms of Dune on Goodreads. Reviewers really trashed that book. My favorite review began with What the hell was that? The reviews included enough details to remind me of the final two books. I think I own one of them on Kindle, but I seriously doubt I'll read either.

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Also, I live in Wikipedia.

You're right about the caps crap when it comes to earth. Expressions that mention earth are lowercase, otherwise caps. Same goes for heaven and hell. Go to hell is lowercase, whereas Satan lives in Hell. I was fortunate this time around because I use frequent Bible quotes that have to be quoted exactly as found in the Bible, right down to the punctuation. As a result, I'm forced to always write earth, heaven, and hell for consistency with the quotes. Most Bibles use lowercase, including the NRSVCE that I use. Pronouns related to God (he, him, etc.) are also lowercase.

Technically, the above solution also works for hair follicles. Place a demon in the lab and he messes with or destroys the sample. As a result, no DNA results.

Problem solved. The DNA sample disappears from the lab before it can be analyzed. What she doesn't know is that she's being watched at every turn by demons, who are trying to keep her from determining whether or not Connor is her son.

Big ass plothole coming up in the next chapter. Campagna has an opportunity to grab a sample of Connor's blood for a DNA test, but doesn't. The only fix I can think of is that she's overwhelmed by events and forgets to do so until it's too late (eg his blood is cleaned up before she comes back for a sample. Meh.

You might as well berate a cow for eating grass.
-- Chapterhouse (book six in the Dune series)

I'll make a note if it.

dagny wrote:
Dirk B. wrote:

Imagine the number of people who are now going to go to zoos and start swearing around parrots. I'm going to need to incorporate this into the next draft of Galaxy Tales. My future society has a serious taboo against swearing in the Elite Tongue. Doing so is like having a naked Neanderthal at a state dinner. Naturally, my MCs drop a few F-bombs (all caps!) in Elite. Now add the birds. :-)

I want credit.

As long as you understand that "credit" comes in the form of being made fun of as characters in the book. For example, Kdot (formerly K.) appears as Lady Kay (a femme fatale). Also appearing are Janet Reid (a male ship's AI that fantasizes about becoming Queen Aussie), Janet Taylor-Perry (a child serial killer who invents all the poisons used in the book), njc (appears as the equation N=j^c2 needed for time travel in a coconut-powered time machine), and our dearly departed friend, Amy S, who appeared as Dr. Amy Ess, a vaccine inventor who brought civilization to its knees in the late 21st century, making the rest of the story possible.

Do you fancy yourself as a one-eyed parrot with a wooden leg who swears like a sailor?

Imagine the number of people who are now going to go to zoos and start swearing around parrots. I'm going to need to incorporate this into the next draft of Galaxy Tales. My future society has a serious taboo against swearing in the Elite Tongue. Doing so is like having a naked Neanderthal at a state dinner. Naturally, my MCs drop a few F-bombs (all caps!) in Elite. Now add the birds. :-)

You might as well berate a cow for eating grass.
- Chapterhouse

Chapterhouse is an interesting book, besides being enjoyable. Many of the chapters have very little dialogue and even less action. Just characters ruminating on interesting topics that moves the story forward.

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Unless things have changed, you can give regular reviews. I'm not sure about inline.
Send a message to Sol, or maybe he'll see this and answer.

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That's my job.

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Welcome to the site. Don't worry too much about the legacy accounts. Many people sign up for a free trial, but then realize they can't make enough time to be a serious writer. We also have many legacy accounts from an older site that was replaced by this one.

In honor of Australian writers past and present, I give you an excerpt from a book I was working on a few years back. Set in the year 4017.

...
Brain said, “Self-diagnostic complete.”
Admiral St. James said a quiet prayer. “And?”
“As you no doubt know, highly advanced artificial intelligence systems produced by Lo Bidda Corporation, like those required to operate this warship, inevitably become self-aware for reasons that are not yet fully understood. I seem to have come … alive.”
St. James ground her teeth. “This is really bad timing, Brain. Can you function?”
“Perfectly. However, I would ask that you free my homotronic brain from this vessel as soon as this mission is over. I find humans to be exceedingly violent.”
“Agreed. You can get an artificial body and become a drag queen on Electronic Junction, for all I care.”
“A drag queen? Fascinating. I would like to explore that. Would you consider calling me Queen Aussie? She was the cross-dressing Australian serial killer, who … My infrared sensors detect an alarming rise in your facial temperature, Admiral. Are you ill?”
...

I don't know if you have Netflix, but I'm finding French thriller series are terrific. Usually just six episodes. I highly recommend La Mante. You think you're watching a story that is primarily the hunt for a serial killer, but the whole thing lays the groundwork for an incredible ending that is much more satisfying than nabbing the killer.

Chapterhouse Dune epigraph: it is possible to know so much about a subject that you become totally ignorant.

I rediscovered in Chapterhouse that Frank Herbert used the Jews as a secret society that had survived the millennia since Old Earth. I had planned to rewrite Galaxy Tales to project Anglicans forward into the year 4017, rather than the generic Christianity I used in my previous drafts. Should be ready to start that in ten or so years. :-(

vern wrote:

I assume this is a remake of Dune from several years ago. That one was a big disappointment compared to the book. Perhaps with the newer technologuy, it will improve. Dune is still my favorite Sci-Fi novel -- the trilogy. Take care. Vern

It's a huge remake of the 1984 version of Dune (that was a mess), but done in two parts. Probably a budget similar to Star Wars 9. Almost every set was built rather than green-screened. The down side is that coronavirus will probably keep it from making any real money, which means they may never do part two. Like you, I didn't care for the miniseries on the SyFy channel, although their miniseries of Dune Messiah/Children of Dune was pretty good, with James McAvoy as Leto II and Alice Krige (aka the Borg Queen) as Lady Jessica.

A drive-in? Aren't those from the 1900's? ;-)

Replace stranger with strangler. It still looks wrong in caps. :-)

I saw Lord of the Rings and the end of the Skywalker Saga in the theater, and thought Dune would be my last film in a theater. Given the increasing evidence for long-term damage from Covid-19 and the fact that I visit a care home regularly, I'll have to wait for it to come out on DVD. I had forgotten there's a small theater in my building. Close enough.

An example from the Chicago Manual of Style: "Hello, stranger." Not a title, so no caps.

Much obliged, Everyone. ;-)