An example from the Chicago Manual of Style: "Hello, stranger." Not a title, so no caps.
Much obliged, Everyone. ;-)
An example from the Chicago Manual of Style: "Hello, stranger." Not a title, so no caps.
Much obliged, Everyone. ;-)
Kill me now.
I was wondering if anyone would object to capitalizing teacher and boss in direct address as I've never seen those terms (and similar ones) capitalized before. I'm wearing out the E key on my keyboard switching back and forth. :-)
The Dune teaser trailer dropped today and the official trailer comes out tomorrow. I'm dying to see that film (it's the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time), but I'm very hesitant about going (in December). A friend of mine said, where he is, they run at about 25% capacity and people wear masks. I suspect a lot of people lower those masks to eat popcorn, though. Although Canada was very compliant with all the quarantine rules, we've had a number of people take stupid risks since the economy began to reopen, primarily by going to events involving large groups, minimal distancing, and too few masks.
Does anyone still go to the movies?
Thanks, JP. I'm glad to see there is so much agreement on this subject. Caps it is.
Just finished watching The Forest on Netflix, a six-part French miniseries. I wouldn't have watched it if I'd known it involved rape and murder of teenage girls (not shown), but I forced myself to finish it. What a great mystery story. There were so many secrets hidden by townsfolk that kept the viewer guessing who did what to whom. The ending was excellent. And the soundtrack added to the tension throughout. It'll be interesting to see if the police case in my second act can come close to something that well-wrtten. Technically, I'm going for something more like Angels & Demons, so it doesn't need to be as intricate a web as the miniseries.
Thanks, Vern. Since I show emphasis using italics in my book, I think I'm best off with italicized lowercase. As Dagny pointed out, it's not a title.
English grammar? What's that?
Much obliged.
Dirk
Thank you, Dagny. That makes sense.
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Dirk
I'm just editing my chapters, and one of my reviewers suggested that exorcist should lowercase in the following sentence:
“Where is your God now, Exorcist?”
Which is correct? If the person were addressing a priest, the word Father would be capitalized. An exorcist is simply a priest with specialized training and duties. I should add that the person being addressed is not actually a real exorcist. The demon addressing him is using the term derisively, hence the italics.
Thanks
Dirk
Just finished Heretics of Dune. Pretty good overall. Three books to go, then It's off to the Foundation series. Haven't read that in decades, and I'm pretty sure I only read the original trilogy, not the whole series. When I browse suggested books on Kindle, I realize I've already read many of the classic sci-fi novels from my teens. For the most part, I only remember the titles.
Isaac Asimov was once asked what he would do if he was told he only had a year to live. His answer: write faster! :-)
Milano, Marino, Moretti, Michel(Angelo), Maria. Time to update my names bible before I use any more names with an M. And I've lost count of the number of names I have that end in o.
Thanks, Dagny. I'll add it to my list. I like short episodes, as I'm easily bored. You've probably heard of Thirteen Reasons Why. The first season is about thirteen reasons why a teenage girl killed herself. It's intense. I had to watch episodes be of Friends in between. Season four includes some of the best acting I've ever seen. The lead actor, Dylan Minette, plays a teenager in his final year of high school who begins to fall apart mentally because of all the s--t he's gone through in high school.
It's available in Canada. I live in Calgary. I agree about content problems, though. Since I no longer own a TV or have cable, I keep paying for Netflix. I just started a new series called The Forest. French with English subtitles, but the story is good so far. It's a mystery set in a small French town. As often as not, I rent a movie from Google. Just watched Terminator 2 again after many years. The liquid metal Terminator was awesome.
I need a name for the team that Campagna and De Rosa are leading. I threw in a dedicated forensics unit to scrape demons off the pavement. I'm considering the Alpha-Omega unit.
You should post that to Premium. It's really interesting. Older readers like thrillers and religious books. I better write faster before they all die off.
I decided to keep reading until the end of the Dune series timeline, including the final two books written by BH/KA. I recall not particularly liking their two books, but I'm enjoying Heretics of Dune more than I remember. I also liked Chapterhouse on past reads. 3.75 books to go. Also good progress on plotting the investigation of Connor's history by Inspector Campana. I originally thought I would spread it out over many chapters, but I'm now wondering if I should roll most of it into one focused chapter, albeit with a lot of minor scenes as Campana bounces from location to location in her search, something like a Law & Order episode.
And Leto is history. I think I'm going to take a breather from Dune and skip to the Foundation series.
I study the writing technique from these masters, even if the story is boring.
The best description of Jonathan I can give is that it's a train wreck in slow motion.
80% of the way through God Emperor of Dune.
I'm considering rereading the Foundation series after I'm done with Dune. It's been forever since I read those.
I highly recommend the Heechee Saga if you've never read it. I've read it about three times. I think it's five books.
Chapter ten changes are up (Campagna meets Connor). Not enough changes to be worth annoying people for a fresh review. The most important thing is that the Antichrist is at least half human. That's one of the ways the cops will distinguish him from mere demons. If you douse a demon with holy water, he dissolves like the chief exorcist did in chapter eleven. I'm going to include toy water blasters among the weapons, filled with holy water. :-)
Next, a very quick polish of chapters eleven and thirteen, then I need to start plotting new stuff. It occurred to me that I could include another murder in this act, if I want to. Chapter twelve will include Campagna investigating Connor's early life, the first meeting of the task force hunting the Antichrist, and the evaluation of evidence from the historical murders.
Does it matter that the only detectives on the task force are Campagna and De Rosa? The rest are beat cops from the scenes at the basilica and the villa, chosen because they already know about the crucifixion. Mostly constables. Since this is no longer a conventional investigation with lots of clues and sleuthing, I figured the beat cops would be good for chase scenes, no-knock searches, and shootouts.
Hmm. Ray has left the site and closed his account.
Those promotions for the inspectors seemed like a nice touch as I was writing it, but I just realized I now have to write Senior Inspector Campagna, where it used to be just Inspector Campagna. That's going to get tiresome. Also, technically, there is no Senior Inspector in the Vatican, but I don't care.
For those with Netflix, check out a movie called Jonathan. Although I've seen stories about multiple personalities, Jonathan is a sci-fi spin on that. It's about two personalities (Jonathan, an uptight nerd, and John, the rebel) who each get to live 12 hours at a time, then their personalities switch thanks to an implant created by their doctor/adoptive mother. The film shows their structured lives and how they communicate with each other, and then there's this girl, and the threads completely unravel. I've seen it three times. I find it spellbinding.