Supposedly, living in a warm climate (NY/NJ) thins the blood somewhat, but after 8 years back in Canada, I'm still waiting for it to thicken. :-)
One cool thing, though, a new medication I'm on makes me warm enough I can keep the thermostat down by 5+ degrees and be totally comfortable. Weird side effect.
826 2024-01-12 22:29:27
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
827 2024-01-12 16:46:20
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Son of a... Winter hit Alberta with a vengeance. I guess mother nature is trying to make up in one day for the nice weather we had through late December. My Accord's heater couldn't keep up, so I was freezing in the car, even with thick gloves on, and only 1/3 of the windows were clear. I finally bit the bullet and ordered the warmest pair of gloves I could find (non-heated). It's frightening when you have pay almost as much for gloves as you do for a parka. I subsequently read a review froom a member of the Canadian Ski Patrol, who considers the Black Diamond Guide gloves to be perfect for what they do. There are even warmer, heated gloves, but they cost as much as my first used VW, so I'm not that desperate yet.
828 2024-01-07 22:56:39
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It can't be torpedoes because it needs to be a weapon that eventually overloads the Hercules's powertron and cripples key systems, including her weapons and her stardrive. Also, it needs to be so dangerous to the firing ship that the Imperium abandons them, otherwise they'd be in the next two battles, which I can't have. It also has to be something the Colonies learn how to protect themselves from as a result of the data returned by St. James (the Colonies deploy a solution on all Colonial ships shortly thereafter to better resist the weapon's effects, rendering it obsolete).
829 2024-01-07 19:54:45
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I have another possible approach that doesn't involve an explicit 4th dimension: the Imperials can shoot some form of energy that can travel through shields. That's what I had originally.
Since that's too much like magic, I added that the weapon fires through hyperspace, where there are no shields, and when it encounters the hull of the target ship, the fired energy drops out of hyperspace, having skipped over the 3D shields, and hits the hull in 3D space, where the hull actually exists. Of course, this requires handwavium as to why the energy traveling through hyperspace "knows" the 3D ship is there. One of the mysteries of energy, I guess.
830 2024-01-07 19:33:38
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. Great feedback. I didn't realize how confusing my descriptions were.
1. Yeah, I didn't copy over the description of the dish and it's location. My bad. If you're going to beam something into space, you should pretty much have some sort of external gizmo to actually do the beaming. Previously, it was massive guns. Now it's a big parabolic dish. Normally partially recessed into the forward hull, it extends forward/out when in use, so it can beam in pretty much any direction except backward. Not sure what you mean by streamlined.
2. I used "as you know" to provide information to the reader that St. James would know. If scientists discovered/proved that we are 4 dimensional beings, I would expect an admiral to know that. I'll see if I can write it without the as you know.
3. Not a portal. If I said you were a four dimensional being (but the 4th dimension is not visible to you), I would think you'd have to imagine something rather weird since humans don't think in 4D (eg look up tesseract for an example of such weirdness).
4. Ok
5. The blast doesn't appear inside the ship, nor does it skip the shields. Perhaps this is clearer: imagine (in 3D) that the back of your ship is unshielded and the enemy could hit you from behind. The back of your ship is simply one side (the 4th) of your three dimensional ship. By comparison, the ship's 4th dimension is similar to it having a "fifth" side. That fifth side has no shields, and the Imperium has figured out a way to see it and shoot at it. If you breach the ship's fifth side, it's just as deadly as if you had breached one of the other sides of the ship. Since it's the 4th dimension of the ship, it must exist in hyperspace (anything greater than 3 dimensions is hyper, by definition).
Looks like the new approach may be too complicated to explain easily/quickly. Not good.
Thanks, George.
831 2024-01-07 02:31:03
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
This is rather long, but it eliminates the need for bigger guns, which Star Wars has done to death:
“Based on its energy signature, other characteristics, and my knowledge of relevant research, I believe the dish’s purpose is to create an opening into hyperspace. I’ll know more if they actually try to do so.”
“And the reason for such an opening?”
“As you know, all matter in the universe, including our ships, has a fourth spatial dimension. It exists in hyperspace, about which we know very little. Therefore, our shields were never designed to work there, leaving our ships’ fourth dimension unprotected.”
St. James’s eyes widened. She looked at the captain and the colonel. “If they can enter hyperspace, our entire fleet would be wide open to them!”
“Unlikely. The energy required to create an opening between dimensions large enough for a warship can be calculated based on well-established theorems and is far beyond the output of even the largest powertrons.”
Spirits said, “For now.”
St. James asked, “What would happen if they fire conventional weapons — supernova beams or missiles — into hyperspace?”
“Unknown.”
“Speculate.”
“It is unlikely they would have deployed an emitter on the Hercules unless they believed they could fire into hyperspace with some degree of accuracy, effectiveness, and safety.
“So, all they really need is a hole big enough to shoot through.”
“Correct.”
“How long will the hole remain open?”
“3.1415 seconds — the value of π.”
“Do they have enough power to create a five-meter-wide opening each time they want to fire?”
“Barely. They’ll need to exceed their powertron’s safety limits to dangerous levels. She’s already begun to divert power from other systems.”
St. James turned to Spirits. “Captain, evacuate all areas within the ship close to our hull, and reroute the extra power to our critical shields. Have our other ships do the same.”
Aussie said, “Shields will be useless against it, Admiral.”
“The HKs are still out there. And if that dish is not what you think it is, I don’t intend to get caught with my britches down.”
832 2024-01-05 12:01:52
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The Warming/the Albuma winds is now the Basting, a contemptuous term intended to convey the notion that the Earth is cooking people in their own juices (sweat). Requires virtually no explanation, unlike the Albuma winds, whose explanation was too long/tangential.
833 2024-01-04 23:55:39
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
if you know electronics it's like confusing a steam engine with a diesel engine, or an oil filter with an air filter.
Potayto. Potahto. ![]()
834 2024-01-04 21:00:10
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
njc, I reread the article more carefully and now I'm not sure what they actually accomplished. Did they simply observe the quantum Hall effect in lower dimensions? The wording in the article is just vague enough and technical enough to be confusing in places (to me in the middle of the night, lol). In hindsight, if they had actually seen something real, it would be all over the news.
Here's the link:
https://bigthink.com/technology-innovat … hysicists/
835 2024-01-04 08:12:08
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Slight tweak. I've gone back to hyperspace as the name of my story's extra dimension(s). I'm going to be intentionally vague since I don't want to suggest that my extra dimension is in any way related to the 4th spacial dimension of string theory, where the math says the extra dimensions must all be the itsy bitsy curled up ones. If I call mine hyperspace, then it falls into that classic sci-fi category known as "made up crap". The beauty of space opera.
Interestingly, I came across an article where scientists were able to test indirectly for the existence of a fourth spacial dimension, and two different teams using different tests found evidence that suggests it actually exists. It's not conclusive proof, but a cool result nevertheless.
836 2024-01-02 14:59:22
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm going to spend a little more on it. I'm almost done revising the first act, including an upcoming battle at the end of this act that causes Apollo to act. Although later battles don't use the 4D cannons (too dangerous), they use similar tactical maneuvers, which are affected by the first battle. Besides, I have most of it in my head. If I stop now, I'll forget the details (shocking, I know), and have to rediscover everything later.
837 2024-01-02 06:39:18
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I punted hyperspace as a term hours ago. I also ignored the fact that the fourth dimension is often considered to be time. I'll just have to be explicit. To simplify the writeup, I've said that all matter in our normal universe has 4 "physical" dimensions, of which we can normally only experience 3. Also, rather than 4D cannons, I've decided to give the Hercules a huge emitter on the hull, which she can use to open a hole into the 4th dimension of space, through which she can then fire a full barrage of supernova blasts at the unshielded portion of the Colonial ships. Where the extraordinary need for power will come into play is in opening the hole.
Just thought of another plot hole, though. If the Hercules wants to dump huge amounts of power into the emitter, all she has to do is install another powertron just for that (admittedly they're huge and they eat atreidite for breakfast). Then there would be no risk of overloading the existing powertron. Crap like this has been happening to me all day. Fix one thing, break another. I'm going to bed. I'll try to figure it out tomorrow.
[Censored!]
838 2024-01-02 01:38:35
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I called it 4D space, short for the fourth dimension (another "physical" dimension, not time). No reference to hyperspace at all. All matter in the universe exists in all four dimensions, including us. You blow something up in one dimension, there's a good chance you'll destroy it across all four dimensions.
I keep running into problems though. Every time I think I've accounted for all obvious plot holes, and I write it up, I find new plot holes.
839 2024-01-01 19:02:55
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
One definition of hyperspace I read usually involves extra dimensions where the laws of physics are different than in our dimensions, allowing ships to go faster than light. It's a concept invented by an SF author in the early 1900s and used by many others, including Asimov in his Foundation novels.
I'm considering calling mine extraspace, but it probably fits the definition of hyperspace too. Specifically, all objects that exist in spacetime also exist in my version of hyperspace, which is merely a fourth "physical" dimension of those objects. If you hit an enemy ship's fourth dimension with an energy beam fired into hyperspace, that foreign energy is expelled from hyperspace at the point of collision between the energy beam and the ship's fourth dimension.
I don't actually mention hyperspace when it comes to the operation of my stardrives. I simply call it teleportation and leave the "how" to the reader's imagination. But I do refer to hyperspace (or extraspace) for how the hypercannons work. The firing ship doesn't itself enter hyperspace, but the cannons are able to fire into it, resulting in an energy beam that bypasses the target ship's shields (which only exist in the first three dimensions) and strikes the hull of the ship.
Dune had a book dedicated to the period/characters who invented their drive mechanism. They went into some details, but I don't recall how much.
840 2023-12-31 22:12:13
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
One thing I don't understand is that hyperspace is usually referred to as a higher dimension. Shouldn't that be dimensions (plural)? You still need three of them. Four if you count time (hypertime?).
841 2023-12-31 17:45:40
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks, njc. Energy kicking back and causing a potential explosion onboard the Hercules (the firing vessel) could be very useful. I had previously used the idea that firing the (mattergy) cannons could overload and damage the Hercules's powertron (power source), but since I now have the ship firing through hyperspace, some kind of unpredictable blowback would serve to render the technology unusable in the long run, regardless of how powerful the powertrons eventually become. That fits well since I don't want this particular tech to remain a part of the story beyond the initial battle.
842 2023-12-31 11:08:57
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'll take another crack at trimming it. And of course it's been done in Star Wars 7, when Starkiller Base blows up the Republic's capital planet from light years away. They fired through hyperspace. Screw it. I'm doing it anyway. My hyperspace cannons work at a much more granular level (ship to ship rather than planet to planet). After the Death Star, the folks at Lucasfilm kept trying to outdo themselves in the books with ever more dangerous weapons.
843 2023-12-31 04:39:00
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Below is the proposed replacement for those idiotic mattergy weapons in the opening battle.
Aussie said, “She’s charging her new cannons.”
“Analyze!” St. James said.
“Based on their energy signature, I believe those are hyperspace weapons, able to fire at a target through a higher dimension. Whatever energy makes it through hyperspace to its target would effectively bypass our shields, which don’t exist there. Development and use of such weapons is strictly prohibited by the Neuer Mond Treaty.”
“Since when has that ever stopped the Imperium? Weaknesses?”
“The beam such a weapon fires is known to spread out very quickly in higher dimensions, obeying the inverse cube law. By the time it hits the target back in spacetime, it has lost considerable energy to space. As a result, such weapons require enormous energy to fire a blast strong enough so that the energy that hits the target still has sufficient punch to penetrate a ship’s hull.
“The Hercules must be bypassing its powertron’s safety limits to concentrate sufficient energy to fire, risking a breach. Many of her other systems are dropping off to compensate.”
844 2023-12-29 09:41:49
Re: Group Cleanup - Mopping Up - See List of Surviving Groups Inside (38 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Minor tweak: "Dark Tales" will be "A Dark & Stormy Night." I suspect most people who see that group name are likely to check it out, if for no other than reason than curiosity about the title. Naturally, the description for the group will give more detailed info about what the group is for.
845 2023-12-29 06:11:10
Re: Group Cleanup - Mopping Up - See List of Surviving Groups Inside (38 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Following is the list of finalists for groups to keep following the upcoming redo of the group purge/cleanup:
Basic
Premium
Romance
Historical Fiction
Thriller/Mystery/Suspense
Fantasy/Magic/Sci-fi - currently still called medieval fantasy/magic
Young Adult & New Adult
Spirituality & Religion
Memoirs & Self-discovery
Dark Tales - includes Gothic thrillers, horror, vampire/werewolf stories, etc.
New Authors - this will combine the existing groups New Novelists and New Members
Writing Tips & Site Help
Nobody spoke up for the following, so they won't be kept:
This is Us
You Read Mine, I Read Yours
Literary Fiction
Only the Dark Tales group will be truly new. We can add to the above list down the road as needed. However, since we can only each belong to ten groups, no one will be able to join them all, which means we'll need volunteer moderators to keep a collective eye on the groups as a whole.
Please add to this thread if there are any of the above you would be willing to moderate going forward. I know groups can have more than one moderator, although I don't know if there's an upper limit. Based on past experience, being a moderator really only involves keeping an eye out for problems and welcoming/guiding new group members, who are usually new site members as well. However, it assumes you'll be onsite often enough to serve in that role. Ideally, we should have at least 2 moderators per group.
I'll probably be a moderator for most of them initially, at least until I can finish the post-purge cleanup steps. I don't have the cycles yet to kick that off, and I haven't even approached Sol as to when he might have time to redo the mass purge.
In cases where two or more groups are being "combined", that really just means we'll rename one of the existing ones (to give it its new name) and then delete the other ones.
Thanks and Happy Holidays!
Dirk
846 2023-12-28 01:25:09
Re: Hello! (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Grammar is not just a thing right or wrong. Grammar is a tool of the writer. In English's magnificently rich grammar there are usually many ways to present a structure of ideas.
Call me Ishmael. ![]()
That is a great summary, njc.
847 2023-12-27 23:48:31
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm probably going to end up with either the Sweltering or the Albuma (winds). I lean toward the latter.
848 2023-12-27 23:26:58
Re: Hello! (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome, Margo. The site is a little quiet right now as we lost quite a few users with the crash/recovery, but they're slowly coming back. There's a Young Adult/New Adult group that might interest you, but it needs more members before it gets any traction. As George suggested, consider joining the medieval fantasy/magic group. It's actually for fantasy, magic, and sci-fi (anything fantastical, really, which covers a lot genres). That group will be renamed in the near future to something more appropriate. Based on the content summary of your book, I think that group would be a good fit. Some of us use the forum there for brainstorming with other writers in the group. See my forum thread there entitled The Archangel Syndrome to see how I use it.
Also, I suggest joining the Writing Tips & Site Help group. You can ask any writing/site questions you like, and there are a few of us lurking there to try to answer your questions. If you want as many eyes as possible on your question/concern or need information in the hurry, feel free to post directly to the Premium forum. No one there bites.
Many of the groups on the site are stale/abandoned, so if you join a group and there's zero activity, chances are it will be going away sometime next year when we purge abandoned groups. For now, check out the thread "Group Cleanup - Feedback Please" in the Premium forum to see what groups are likely to remain (and what they'll be called once we do the cleanup/purge). Feel free to join any of the groups listed there as being ones that we'll keep.
849 2023-12-26 19:17:32
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I narrowed it down to:
The Egg Poacher
The Sweltering
The Simmering
The Bitch-In-Heat
Any other forms of cooking I missed in the previous post?
850 2023-12-26 19:10:27
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. The heat of the Glistening. Nah.
Apollo had to protect himself from the Sweltering. That one has promise.
The heat of the Baking. The heat of the Great Baking.
The heat of the Frying.
The heat of the Broiling.
The heat of the Egg Poacher.
The heat of the Boiling.
The Bitch in Heat. ![]()
The Simmerer - I like that one too.
The Flambe.