801

(136 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Yes, it was mostly the browser in my case. However, spell-checking in the closing comment fields in inline reviews and replies to inline reviews haven't worked in ages, if ever. Not sure why those two fields don't work with the browser's spell-checking even though everything else does. Seabrass put in a maintenance or enhancement request before the crash asking if they could be made to work.

I run Google Chrome.

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Dirk

Dirk B. wrote:

Sol, could you please add me as a moderator of the following existing groups?

Historical Fiction
medieval fantasy/magic
thriller/mystery/suspense
YA/New Adult crossover
Brave – Community of Christian Writers
New Novelists

Also, please add the following members as moderators of the groups listed next to their names:

Bill - Romance
Lynn - Memoirs
Kdot - medieval fantasy/magic

Please do not remove any existing moderators.

Thanks
Dirk

803

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Correct. The ship intersects with hyperspace, but the energy of the shields doesn't. Coming at the ship from hyperspace is like coming at a "fifth" side of the ship where there are no defenses.

There has to be some minimal explanation here for the reader to follow it. This write-up is about 1/3 the length of the one with the dish. And, yes, it takes time and a lot of energy to charge this weapon since it has to open a hole into hyperspace before the energy beam is fired.

804

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I think I finally have an acceptable replacement for mattergy cannons. It's way simpler/shorter than my recent parabolic dish writeup.

Aussie said, “She’s charging her new cannons.”
“Analyze!” St. James said.
“Based on their fluctuating signature, other characteristics, and my knowledge of relevant research, I believe those are hypercannons — weapons able to fire through hyperspace, specifically the fourth spatial dimension.
“Fire at what?”
“Us, Admiral! Although our ship is not technically present in the fourth dimension, we do intersect with it. Just as a point bisects a line, and a line bisects a square, our ship bisects a hypershape surrounding us in 4D space. According to fringe theories, if an energy beam were fired at us through hyperspace and struck our intersection with it, that energy might return to spacetime and strike our hull, having completely bypassed our shields by coming at us from the fourth dimension. We have no defense against that except the hull itself.

805

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

If I want to measure the length of the 4th spatial dimension of a hypercube, is there a name for what I'm measuring? In other words, length, width, height, and ???  I've seen it called both depth and Q online, but those don't seem to be universal terms. And are there terms for the length of other, even higher dimensions?

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Dirk

That's a cool idea.

Now that I think back on it, the group's image may have come from a free images site. I did try an AI generator but can't remember which images came from where. Duh.

Yes and yes

It's called A Dark & Stormy Night. I was able to create that one myself. It's basically a scary tales group (Gothic, vampires, werewolves, demon-possessed rabid nuns, etc.) For most of the other groups listed above, we need to be moderators, so I'm waiting for Sol on that. The group's image is AI generated. I told it to give me a castle on a stormy night. I had to repeat it several times, but I finally got one I liked.

810

(136 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Another item: Sol, have you had a chance to look at the functioning of spellchecking on various important TNBW text fields? I no longer recall which ones had/didn't have spellchecking, but there definitely was more of it before the crash. I especially find myself looking up plenty of words when posting to the forum.

EDIT: Found the problem. My browser (Chrome) is able to spellcheck words in at least some TNBW text fields (e.g., forum posts) but the feature was off. Not sure how that happened. But that seems to be the fix.

EDIT 2: Did a little more testing. Chrome's spellchecking seems to work on ALL major TNBW text fields except the closing comment to an inline review and the closing comment when responding to that review.

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Dirk

811

(136 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, when I get emails sent to me by TNBW, and I click on the link within (e.g., to go to a new message from another member), my security software (Bitdefender) intercepts my attempt to do so, and kicks up an error message like the following (edited for brevity):

https://email2.booksie.com/ls/click?upn=u6w90slL...etc.
Your connection to this web page is not safe due to an unmatching security certificate.
This means that the certificate was issued for a different web address than the one it is being used for, and you run the risk of exposing your data by accessing this page.

I can force my way past it, although I never do so at any other site. I'd prefer not to have to do it here either since there's always a chance the site's been hacked.

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Dirk

Sol, could you please add me as a moderator of the following existing groups?

Historical Fiction
medieval fantasy/magic
thriller/mystery/suspense
YA/New Adult crossover
Brave – Community of Christian Writers
New Novelists

Also, please add the following members as moderators of the groups listed next to their names:

Bill - Romance
Lynn - Memoirs
Kdot - medieval fantasy/magic

Please do not remove any existing moderators.

Thanks
Dirk

I would hold off on removing Raymond's account for a few weeks yet. He's not selling anything. You could consider it an author's bio, and he has published, although not in fiction. I sent him a quickee, so we'll see.

814

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

George FLC wrote:

This is just evolution! Survival of the fittest.

I pity whoever gets caught in this weather with a broken down car. Someone going from a heated garage at home to a heated garage at work, or the reverse, is likely to get very complacant, especially those young enough to reproduce. Which reminds me, I need to order a better blanket for the car. Or a winter-weight down comforter. smile

815

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Kdot wrote:

-55C in Edmonton. Nice.
Btw Jupiter is sitting at -110 right now. You're half way there!

You know it's cold when Alexa switches to Kelvin. LoL

Avg Temp on Jupiter = 163K = -110C
Surface = 125K = -148C
Core = 24K-36K °K = ~24K-36K °C

Looks quite toasty inside Jupiter.

816

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Supposedly, living in a warm climate (NY/NJ) thins the blood somewhat, but after 8 years back in Canada, I'm still waiting for it to thicken. :-)
One cool thing, though, a new medication I'm on makes me warm enough I can keep the thermostat down by 5+ degrees and be totally comfortable. Weird side effect.

817

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Son of a... Winter hit Alberta with a vengeance. I guess mother nature is trying to make up in one day for the nice weather we had through late December. My Accord's heater couldn't keep up, so I was freezing in the car, even with thick gloves on, and only 1/3 of the windows were clear. I finally bit the bullet and ordered the warmest pair of gloves I could find (non-heated). It's frightening when you have pay almost as much for gloves as you do for a parka. I subsequently read a review froom a member of the Canadian Ski Patrol, who considers the Black Diamond Guide gloves to be perfect for what they do. There are even warmer, heated gloves, but they cost as much as my first used VW, so I'm not that desperate yet.

818

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

It can't be torpedoes because it needs to be a weapon that eventually overloads the Hercules's powertron and cripples key systems, including her weapons and her stardrive. Also, it needs to be so dangerous to the firing ship that the Imperium abandons them, otherwise they'd be in the next two battles, which I can't have. It also has to be something the Colonies learn how to protect themselves from as a result of the data returned by St. James (the Colonies deploy a solution on all Colonial ships shortly thereafter to better resist the weapon's effects, rendering it obsolete).

819

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I have another possible approach that doesn't involve an explicit 4th dimension: the Imperials can shoot some form of energy that can travel through shields. That's what I had originally.

Since that's too much like magic, I added that the weapon fires through hyperspace, where there are no shields, and when it encounters the hull of the target ship, the fired energy drops out of hyperspace, having skipped over the 3D shields, and hits the hull in 3D space, where the hull actually exists. Of course, this requires handwavium as to why the energy traveling through hyperspace "knows" the 3D ship is there. One of the mysteries of energy, I guess.

820

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Hmm. Great feedback. I didn't realize how confusing my descriptions were.
1. Yeah, I didn't copy over the description of the dish and it's location. My bad. If you're going to beam something into space, you should pretty much have some sort of external gizmo to actually do the beaming. Previously, it was massive guns. Now it's a big parabolic dish. Normally partially recessed into the forward hull, it extends forward/out when in use, so it can beam in pretty much any direction except backward. Not sure what you mean by streamlined.
2. I used "as you know" to provide information to the reader that St. James would know. If scientists discovered/proved that we are 4 dimensional beings, I would expect an admiral to know that. I'll see if I can write it without the as you know.
3. Not a portal. If I said you were a four dimensional being (but the 4th dimension is not visible to you), I would think you'd have to imagine something rather weird since humans don't think in 4D (eg look up tesseract for an example of such weirdness).
4. Ok
5. The blast doesn't appear inside the ship, nor does it skip the shields. Perhaps this is clearer: imagine (in 3D) that the back of your ship is unshielded and the enemy could hit you from behind. The back of your ship is simply one side (the 4th) of your three dimensional ship. By comparison, the ship's 4th dimension is similar to it having a "fifth" side. That fifth side has no shields, and the Imperium has figured out a way to see it and shoot at it. If you breach the ship's fifth side, it's just as deadly as if you had breached one of the other sides of the ship. Since it's the 4th dimension of the ship, it must exist in hyperspace (anything greater than 3 dimensions is hyper, by definition).

Looks like the new approach may be too complicated to explain easily/quickly. Not good.

Thanks, George.

821

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

This is rather long, but it eliminates the need for bigger guns, which Star Wars has done to death:

“Based on its energy signature, other characteristics, and my knowledge of relevant research, I believe the dish’s purpose is to create an opening into hyperspace. I’ll know more if they actually try to do so.”
“And the reason for such an opening?”
“As you know, all matter in the universe, including our ships, has a fourth spatial dimension. It exists in hyperspace, about which we know very little. Therefore, our shields were never designed to work there, leaving our ships’ fourth dimension unprotected.”
St. James’s eyes widened. She looked at the captain and the colonel. “If they can enter hyperspace, our entire fleet would be wide open to them!”
“Unlikely. The energy required to create an opening between dimensions large enough for a warship can be calculated based on well-established theorems and is far beyond the output of even the largest powertrons.”
Spirits said, “For now.”
St. James asked, “What would happen if they fire conventional weapons — supernova beams or missiles — into hyperspace?”
“Unknown.”
“Speculate.”
“It is unlikely they would have deployed an emitter on the Hercules unless they believed they could fire into hyperspace with some degree of accuracy, effectiveness, and safety.
“So, all they really need is a hole big enough to shoot through.”
“Correct.”
“How long will the hole remain open?”
“3.1415 seconds — the value of π.”
“Do they have enough power to create a five-meter-wide opening each time they want to fire?”
“Barely. They’ll need to exceed their powertron’s safety limits to dangerous levels. She’s already begun to divert power from other systems.”
St. James turned to Spirits. “Captain, evacuate all areas within the ship close to our hull, and reroute the extra power to our critical shields. Have our other ships do the same.”
Aussie said, “Shields will be useless against it, Admiral.”
“The HKs are still out there. And if that dish is not what you think it is, I don’t intend to get caught with my britches down.”

822

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

The Warming/the Albuma winds is now the Basting, a contemptuous term intended to convey the notion that the Earth is cooking people in their own juices (sweat). Requires virtually no explanation, unlike the Albuma winds, whose explanation was too long/tangential.

823

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc wrote:

if you know electronics it's like confusing a steam engine with a diesel engine, or an oil filter with an air filter.

Potayto. Potahto. smile

824

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc, I reread the article more carefully and now I'm not sure what they actually accomplished. Did they simply observe the quantum Hall effect in lower dimensions? The wording in the article is just vague enough and technical enough to be confusing in places (to me in the middle of the night, lol). In hindsight, if they had actually seen something real, it would be all over the news.

Here's the link:
https://bigthink.com/technology-innovat … hysicists/

825

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Slight tweak. I've gone back to hyperspace as the name of my story's extra dimension(s). I'm going to be intentionally vague since I don't want to suggest that my extra dimension is in any way related to the 4th spacial dimension of string theory, where the math says the extra dimensions must all be the itsy bitsy curled up ones. If I call mine hyperspace, then it falls into that classic sci-fi category known as "made up crap". The beauty of space opera.

Interestingly, I came across an article where scientists were able to test indirectly for the existence of a fourth spacial dimension, and two different teams using different tests found evidence that suggests it actually exists. It's not conclusive proof, but a cool result nevertheless.