Minor tweak: "Dark Tales" will be "A Dark & Stormy Night." I suspect most people who see that group name are likely to check it out, if for no other than reason than curiosity about the title. Naturally, the description for the group will give more detailed info about what the group is for.

Following is the list of finalists for groups to keep following the upcoming redo of the group purge/cleanup:

Basic
Premium
Romance
Historical Fiction
Thriller/Mystery/Suspense

Fantasy/Magic/Sci-fi - currently still called medieval fantasy/magic
Young Adult & New Adult
Spirituality & Religion
Memoirs & Self-discovery
Dark Tales - includes Gothic thrillers, horror, vampire/werewolf stories, etc.
New Authors - this will combine the existing groups New Novelists and New Members
Writing Tips & Site Help


Nobody spoke up for the following, so they won't be kept:

This is Us
You Read Mine, I Read Yours
Literary Fiction


Only the Dark Tales group will be truly new. We can add to the above list down the road as needed. However, since we can only each belong to ten groups, no one will be able to join them all, which means we'll need volunteer moderators to keep a collective eye on the groups as a whole.

Please add to this thread if there are any of the above you would be willing to moderate going forward. I know groups can have more than one moderator, although I don't know if there's an upper limit. Based on past experience, being a moderator really only involves keeping an eye out for problems and welcoming/guiding new group members, who are usually new site members as well. However, it assumes you'll be onsite often enough to serve in that role. Ideally, we should have at least 2 moderators per group.

I'll probably be a moderator for most of them initially, at least until I can finish the post-purge cleanup steps. I don't have the cycles yet to kick that off, and I haven't even approached Sol as to when he might have time to redo the mass purge.

In cases where two or more groups are being "combined", that really just means we'll rename one of the existing ones (to give it its new name) and then delete the other ones.

Thanks and Happy Holidays!
Dirk

753

(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

Grammar is not just a thing right or wrong.  Grammar is a tool of the writer.  In English's magnificently rich grammar there are usually many ways to present a structure of ideas.

Call me Ishmael. smile

That is a great summary, njc.

754

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I'm probably going to end up with either the Sweltering or the Albuma (winds). I lean toward the latter.

755

(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Welcome, Margo. The site is a little quiet right now as we lost quite a few users with the crash/recovery, but they're slowly coming back. There's a Young Adult/New Adult group that might interest you, but it needs more members before it gets any traction. As George suggested, consider joining the medieval fantasy/magic group. It's actually for fantasy, magic, and sci-fi (anything fantastical, really, which covers a lot genres). That group will be renamed in the near future to something more appropriate. Based on the content summary of your book, I think that group would be a good fit. Some of us use the forum there for brainstorming with other writers in the group. See my forum thread there entitled The Archangel Syndrome to see how I use it.

Also, I suggest joining the Writing Tips & Site Help group. You can ask any writing/site questions you like, and there are a few of us lurking there to try to answer your questions. If you want as many eyes as possible on your question/concern or need information in the hurry, feel free to post directly to the Premium forum. No one there bites.

Many of the groups on the site are stale/abandoned, so if you join a group and there's zero activity, chances are it will be going away sometime next year when we purge abandoned groups. For now, check out the thread "Group Cleanup - Feedback Please" in the Premium forum to see what groups are likely to remain (and what they'll be called once we do the cleanup/purge). Feel free to join any of the groups listed there as being ones that we'll keep.

756

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I narrowed it down to:
The Egg Poacher
The Sweltering
The Simmering
The Bitch-In-Heat

Any other forms of cooking I missed in the previous post?

757

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Hmm. The heat of the Glistening. Nah.
Apollo had to protect himself from the Sweltering. That one has promise.
The heat of the Baking. The heat of the Great Baking.
The heat of the Frying.
The heat of the Broiling.
The heat of the Egg Poacher.
The heat of the Boiling.
The Bitch in Heat. smile
The Simmerer - I like that one too.
The Flambe.

758

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Found these online. They're not usable, but they are funny.

Hotter than a Times Square Rolex.
Hotter than a hen laying hard-boiled eggs.
Hotter than a cow giving evaporated milk.
Hotter than Satan's mix tape.
Southern women don't sweat - they glisten.

759

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Thanks, George. None of those tickle my fancy, though. The weird thing is, my Albuma example was initially a throwaway, but it's starting to grow on me. "The Albuma winds" sounds rather majestic.

760

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Thank you for the link. I don't recall which pope started the process, but the Vatican apparently wants every diocese to have an exorcist. One of the things they do is bless buildings, which is considered a form of exorcism, so it's not usually as exciting as little girls throwing up pea soup. smile

761

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

No, the idea is they chose something really hot to express/exaggerate what the heat feels like. Although now that you asked the question the way you did, clearly California Reapers is not good choice. If my readers were confused about the Realm being a republic that one day may be led by a king from one of its member systems, just imagine the head scratching when vegetables begin stalking Apollo. LoL

762

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

New naming contest. Earth in the distant future still suffers from the aftereffects of climate change in the form of stubbornly high temperatures, the result of the planet experiencing the beginnings of a runaway greenhouse effect in the early centuries of the 3rd millenium, which was only halted because Dr. Narky brought civilization to its knees with her faulty vaccine, causing the population to crash from 10B down to 1B. I had been calling this the Warming, but as Jack rightly pointed out, since the planet actually ceased "warming" long ago, it's the wrong term. I had considered calling it the Broiling (with Terrans nicknamed roast beef by other worlds), but that's too in-your-face, hence boring. I want a term (preferably only one or two words, perhaps an acronym) that people coin to describe "hot as hell", say 5-10 degrees hotter than today. Ideally, the term should also have a humorous element to it.

Here's an example: Apollo could feel the heat of the "Albuma" winds blowing, a word derived from the acronym ALBUMA, which means "a lightning bolt up my ass." Censored of course.  :-)

Hotter than Satan eating California Repears at the Big Bang! No idea what the acronym/short form would be. Sefcabb? Nah.
Or maybe just: Apollo could feel the heat of California Reapers stalking him in the Amazon.
Apollo wore heat-dissipating clothing to keep the heat of the California Reapers at bay.
Hot enough to fry a camel! Hefac. Could perhaps use it as a curse word. As Apollo stepped outside, he said, "Hefac!"
Hot enough to fry fish in a river! Heffir? Nope.

Whatever the final word is, I plan to use it a few times without explaining what it is until later, and it therefore should be cool/funny enough to be worth the wait for the reader.

Etc.

Thanks
Dirk

763

(5 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

If you're counting votes, I prefer "Satan", although either is perfectly acceptable. In a YouTube documentary I watched some time ago, the narrator pronounced it Se-tahn rather than Say-ten. I really liked it cause it was cool to hear a different pronounciation. Perhaps you can find a way to slip in Lucifer as a way that God addresses him:

Satan stepped before the Lord.
God said, "Well, if it isn't Lucifer, my prince of darkness."
Satan flinched. He hated the name Lucifer.

or

Lucifer stepped before the Lord.
God said, "Well, if it isn't Satan, my prince of darkness."
Lucifer flinched. He hated the name Satan.

With a brief exchange like the above, you would have introduced three of Satan's names (if you count prince of darkness), which would allow you to have God address him by one of those names, while everyone else uses one of the others. I did that with Connor/Constantino/Lord/Adamo. Different characters will use different names for him in book two, although the narration will always use Connor to minimize confusion.

764

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrVD0bP … Baez-Topic
Wow, Joan Baez can sing! I have some of her best songs in my regular playlist, but only just heard this for the first time a few weeks ago. Been listening to it ever since.

Safe for work.
Dirk

765

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Mmm. No, but thank you.

I'll go with "for the Sovereign Stars" as the mantra and drop the "for" when it's a battle cry. Until I get sick of that too or a reviewer tells me it's crap.

766

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Ah, crap. What would I use for the military mantra? "For the Sovereign Stars" seems rather long for troops to yell as they charge into battle. "For the Stars" seems weird, but "The Sovereign Stars" could work. I suppose "For the Sovereign Stars!" could be the actual mantra, but troops rushing into battle shorten it.

767

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

In my neverending quest for a new name for the Realm that doesn't suck, I chose not to use Colonies since it begs the question: Were they once colonies of the Imperium that broke away? (They weren't.) My latest is the Sovereign Stars. The adjective would be Sovereign (e.g.., Sovereign fleet, Sovereign worlds). The only "quirk" is that the prefix for ship names becomes SSS (e.g., SSS Almighty, a Sovereign destroyer).

I think I can die in peace now.
Dirk

Absolutely. If I remember correctly, Muslims consider Jesus a prophet but nothing more. Although, technically, Connor could try to convince them their beliefs are simply incorrect, that woud be something he'd be unlikely to be able to sell to most Muslims. However, his performance at St. Peter's Basilica would certainly help. Or, if I wanted to go nuts, I could have many non-Christian holy places "collapse" without explanation around the world as acts of God. Ditto for any places non-Catholic Christians revere but Catholics do not. Those are much more convincing events than mere attempts at persuasion. And, after all, these aren't actual acts of God since any reader of book one will know he's the Antichrist.

On second thought, I'll probably do some preliminary research on other religions/spiritual beliefs. With any luck, I can go deep on a couple and then give lip service to the rest. Perhaps Buddhism, Judaism, and the psychic realm. I'll probably do a lot on the last of these since it's an area I've developed a strong interest in recently.

Destroying the Dome would fit with a literal interpretation of Revelation, not a Catholic one. Catholics believe rebuilding the temple is all figurative wording. From Wikipedia:

Catholic and Eastern Orthodox Christians believe that the Eucharist, which they hold to be one in substance with the one self-sacrifice of Christ on the Cross, is a far superior offering when compared with the merely preparatory temple sacrifices, as explained in the Epistle to the Hebrews. They also believe that Christ Himself is the New Temple, as spoken of in the Book of Revelation and that Revelation can best be understood as the Eucharist, heaven on earth. Their church buildings are meant to model Solomon's Temple, with the Tabernacle, containing the Eucharist, being considered the new "Holy of Holies." Therefore, they do not attach any significance to a possible future rebuilding of the Jerusalem Temple.

Although I will borrow some elements from a Protestant belief of a final battle at Armageddon (Satan and his armies will gather there in preparation for war), that's merely for show. Christ and Satan both know that the "battle" will come down to Connor's choice of who (whom?) to kill. I may include a skirmish between the angels and demons, which halts when Christ returns, in preparation for Connor's decision.

Also, I don't plan to incur the wrath of Muslim readers by destroying one of their most holy sites, even in fiction. There will be some effort by Connor in book two to convert them, just as he'll try to convert others, but I'm not likely to go into much detail since it would require studying multiple other religions to figure out how best to squeeze Connor into their existing beliefs. TBD.

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njc wrote:

The Hawaiin islands were, IIRC, originally the Sandwich Islands.  Maybe they should be bought by Subway?

Perhaps Hawaii should build a subway under the volcanoes. smile

772

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

The islands were renamed after someone named Bezos (who could it be?) from the past (and why were they renamed?). I can't imagine. smile Everything else is left up to the imagination of the reader.

773

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

...New Bethlehem’s founding in 2987 CE by members of the Libertarian Church, established on the Bezos Islands, formerly known as Hawaii, in Earth’s Pacific Ocean in 2312

774

(309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Minor change: the Eternal Colonies are now the Independent Colonies, which seems pretty clear that they're (duh) independent (i.e., not colonies of the Earth/Imperium, as one might otherwise assume). "Free" would have worked as well, but Independent sounds loftier IMO.

My story takes place some years past the current day. Remember the pope is a guy named Peter. Although the missile sounds cool from a thriller perspective, all danger in the Holy Land comes from whoever is attacking Connor. Can't imagine who that would be. tongue  A missile, then, would come across as gratuitous in my mind (ie something irrelevant to the overall plot).