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Elisheva, consider deferring retrofits until your next whole draft. I tried going back to keep the beginning of my story up to date but found it impossible the further along I got in the book. The way I do it now is to treat all future chapters as if the change had been made. I then add a chapter note that an important continuity change has been made and describe it briefly. For example, Caligula's secret scheme will require changes across numerous early chapters. I've also made changes that I subsequently refined or even punted without having to go back and fix the whole book.

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Janet wrote:

it's me and the American tax system at the moment - I'll tell you about all the fun I'm having, but I'm trying to stop swearing

It could be worse. As far as I can tell, if I want my disability benefits to continue, I have to let the IRS tax me as a resident of the U.S. even though I'm now living in Canada. That means two "resident" tax returns every year until I flatline. It wouldn't be so bad, except you have to declare all of your foreign accounts to each taxing authority every year, with fines that can bankrupt you, even for honest mistakes. So I have to tell Canada about all of my U.S. accounts, and I have to tell the IRS about my Canadian accounts, even though both idiotic organizations get this information electronically from the banks in both countries. Futuo!

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

However, I'm looking at how to revamp the first page of my website. I have had several other bookstores invite me to send them books and they will sell on consignment.

Janet, how did the bookstores find you?

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That's a great idea. Thank you, Elisheva.

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I'm not. Almost by definition, FTL travel requires some kind of technology. I'm just trying to define something very simple that functions the way required by my story. One requirement is that most of my other ship tech (shields, sensors, thrusters, weapons, etc.) function the same way they do in spacetime. It also has to include elapsed time in the starlanes (e.g., 30 - 60 minutes between nearby stars, without relativistic effects). In addition, I want all spacetime objects (e.g., planets, moons, etc.) to be visible from within the starlanes, only ghostly in appearance. The starlanes, then, are relatively cleared paths that minimize the number of objects that have to be circumnavigated.

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njc wrote:

I'm trying to introduce a lot of background stuff so that it doesn't feel like asspull.

In my book, they're called starlanes and dark energizers.

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I've been identifying/sorting all of the paragraphs I need for the chapter. Who lives? Who dies? I have one last thorny impossibility to work out, after which I can actually write. It's an amazing pain in the asinus when there are so many story threads to pull together. After this, I'll be able to coast until the end, about three chapters further out. Doctor's appointment and grocery shopping are in the way tomorrow, but I should have time to solve the aforementioned impossibility. Basically, I need to get a bomber group past 187 warships to drop a few gigatons of death and destruction. It will be glorious! Kdot will be so proud.

Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:
njc wrote:

What, you're the privy councillor?

Nay, 'tis the Groom of the Stool that's a most coveted position.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Groom_of_the_Stool

View yourselves educated as from now. tongue

What a crappy job. Imagine having that role with the 300+ lbs. King Henry VIII. Yikes!

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Kdot wrote:

(Somehow this long rambling speech boils down to me agrees with your starlanes. Then a stardrive is more of a "raft" that keeps the ship's particile energized enough for it to stay in the starlanes where all distances are shorter)

I'm quoting the part of your post that I understood. :-)  If I shorten distances, then scanners ought to work. Ditto for my "sublight" thrusters. I think.

I wonder what technobabble Data would use. And what's a particile?

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Hmm. It occurs to me that I do need something other than "go like a bat out of hell." Without another dimension, I'm still in spacetime. If you recall, God claims in my book that Einstein made up General Relativity as a lark while soused. Nevertheless, any alternate explanation for what we experience in spacetime is still limited by the upper limit of light speed.

So we're, back to the starlanes. I still need a stardrive to shift to the starlanes, where everything in spacetime appears as ghostly images. Besides that, there are no flows. The stardrive simply allows you to go like a bat out of hell, or distances are shorter. I can either force the traveler to circumnavigate massive objects or allow the ships to pass right through the objects, including stars. I'm leaning toward the former (circumnavigating), otherwise you could fly through black holes, too. If the object has substantial mass, you have to go around it. Will ponder what to do about smaller objects (pass through them or deflect/destroy them).

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What is the relevance of propagate vs. travel and travel vs. momentum here?

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Okay. Here's a much simpler FTL alternative.

Give ships the ability to simply point and go like a bat out of hell. No need for higher dimensions or flows. If the computer detects a massive object ahead of you (e.g., asteroid, planet, star), it slows and circumnavidates the object before resuming the previous course and speed. The starlanes, then, are nothing more than largely cleared paths through space to avoid as many obstructions as possible. Ship shields deflect smaller objects like meteorites.

Better?

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Flight cocoons! tongue

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amy s wrote:

Too much like Stargate SG1. (Alien race star lanes). Consider gravity lanes. It is a concept that is still being understood, so you can make stuff up. Imagine that the sun is like a magnet. Travel away from the magnet and the pull is less, so the ship can be pulled into another star's gravity well. By traveling through the tubes, you can negate the gravity attraction of your origin and be pulled into position by the destination.

Some star systems are better hubs because if their relation to black holes. So it might take you one jump to get to a star 5000 light years away, but five jumps to get to Alpha Centauri.

I should write Sci fi but I gotta finish the next chapter first.

The use of gravity in a higher dimension might be useful, although it adds complexity, since I need both flows and gravity. I also haven't defined whether the flows speed up the ships or shorten distances. I prefer the latter. I might just punt the flows and use shortened distances, although I need elapsed time based on distances travelled, otherwise travel is instantaneous, which would break a lot of my story. Roughly 6-8 hours travel from one end of human-settled space to the other.

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Elisheva Free wrote:

Yep. Based on that description, I can definitely picture it.

If any gamers (like myself) read your book, this is an instant reminder of Mass Effect. Of course, in that story, the ancient race was a key point to the entire plot instead of just background, but still. Name a character 'Shephard' and I might just cry... (No, seriously. I cried twice while playing the third game.)

Yup. Checked out Stargate SG-1 and they were built by the Ancients. I'm not surprised that Mass Effect uses it too. It's a staple of sci-fi dating back to Arthur C. Clarke among others. So much for artificial connections. I'll stick with the natural flows.

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Yes, he would have rediscovered it.

I was still thinking about this when I went to bed and realized that if a race if aliens created these all over the galaxy, then there should be vast ruins of their civilization all over the galaxy, including in our solar system. I could change the story to allow for that, and it would add another layer to the story, but that's a big change. And perhaps a distraction from the story I originally set out to tell.

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Okay, now that flight cocoons have been largely discarded, I could use some help with interstellar travel. I created something called the starlanes in chapter one that serves that purpose. As one might expect, it provides FTL travel by way of a higher dimension. Ships use a stardrive (aka the Hinkley drive) to reach the starlanes and travel through them. They then drop back into spacetime  once they get where they're going.

The starlanes are more like Star Trek than they are Star Wars. You can still see stars, planets, and other ships in the starlanes, but there are visible connections (flows) between stars. The flows connect all stars to each other, but the closest stars have the strongest flows, yielding the fastest travel. Imagine tubes interconnecting all the stars, except they're ethereal.

Ships travel within these flows to hop from one star to another. The overall route is then a series of starhops. The closest stars are one hop apart. Travel time can be as little as thirty minutes. To get from one end of colonized space to the other is 13 hops, which takes about a day. Travel from one end of the galaxy to the other is 10,000 hops and takes a year. Although it is possible to travel directly from any star to any other star, it is generally the case that it is faster to star hop your way to distant stars, along the strongest flows.

Flows are hazy with fuzzy boundaries. You can see what's out in spacetime around you (planets, moon's, asteroids, etc.) but things appear ghost-like until you drop back into spacetime.

My original idea was that these flows are natural and omnipresent, connecting interstellar bodies powered by nuclear fusion, hence all the stars connect to each other. Hadn't considered until just now what happens when a star becomes a black hole, but let's roll with it.

This is a lot to take in in a single dose, so I spread things out across several chapters throughout the book. Based on this description, can you envision the starlanes? Basically, it comes down to fuzzy tubes and starhopping.

One variation of this that I'm considering is making them artificial, constructed by some dead race of sentient beings. In this case, the only connections would be between starhopping points, and the number of them would be vast but finite. Even so, there would be something visible that has to be traversed between connected stars. Imagine all the highways feeding into NYC from surrounding areas, where NYC is the star. Newark, NJ is another star. Although I call it starhopping, they are not jump-gates. Perhaps I need a better term than starhopping, huh?

Thoughts?

Thanks
Dirk

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I've made great progress myself. Today I printed my notes for the next chapter. It may not sound like much, but I have an HP printer with a fussy output tray. It took at least 5 seconds to open the thing. After that I took a break to read more of my new physics textbook, watched the "Passion" episode of the Bible series on Netflix (too graphic), watched part of the Dune miniseries while in a deep tub of hot water (it was Heaven, if you'll pardon the pun) reread my Caligula chapter for further tweaks before Amy makes me rewrite it, and am about to read the news, followed by a reread of the first New Testament chapter, since I forgot it all. So basically, I didn't write a damn thing today. Tomorrow I'll read the notes I printed today (7 single spaced pages of drudge!), and then I may actually write something. I'll start small: one sentence. I'll report back after it's written.

Nite all!

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amy s wrote:

Tommy's dream was to merge into his favorite books, transporting between the pages, and living within the backstory. Then a character was clever enough to escape, cursing the real world to certain destruction.

I like this one best so far. What most intrigues me about your story is that there's a character who can live in his books. Plus it covers the threat to the real world, all in two sentences.

njc wrote:

a chamber pot.  Valuable resource, that.

I'm old enough to remember those. And who can forget an indoor outhouse? Vented, but not heated.

njc wrote:

Hmm.  'Hinkley' should be 'Hinkles' or 'Hinklettes'.

Professor R. Hinkley is from Gilligan's Island but with Roy abbreviated. It's intended as an homage. Too similar?

No, Amy's is done. Professor Hinkley, too. You, however, get a recurring role as Caligula's highly inappropriate mother. I can't wait to put her together with Apollo in Mama's bar. Apollo: Um, ugh, er, Lady Kay, I mean, we shouldn't, oh dear Lord, don't stop!

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Congratulations, Janet. Keep it up!

You too? 50 is the new 80.

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Tried it. Closing a thread does not delete it, and you can even re-open it.

Thanks, Janet.
Dirk