Ooh! What if Yunker is secretly working for/with the necromancer? That would be so cool!

amy wrote:

And Norm, I always liked the idea of having Yunker and Anver in the first book, but it got panned. I'd love to put them back into play. I like the idea of making a side-story that allows Anver/Yunker to be featured earlier. I'll see what I can do.

Perhaps it could be a series of very short stories/parables that Anver tells Yunker that are directly related to Kha's experiences as the book goes on. Of course that breaks with your current storytelling style of independent books.

Please don't spend your vacation reviewing my crap ... er, masterpiece. You already review bombed me, so there's no rush.

Moving on to Acts. FYI, I think it would be great if Yunker had a bigger role throughout Acts. He'd be someone that a younger audience could relate to.

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Thanks. Ponder my navel, I must.

I started by researching dark energy for power production this evening. To achieve the amount of dark energy believed to be in our universe only requires the mass-energy equivalent of 4 hydrogen atoms per cubic meter of space. I was going to drop it as a power source, but I found another article that talks about harnessing dark energy for everyday needs, although not in the author's lifetime. So I've got only a few hundred years before Professor Hinkley is supposed to make his major breakthroughs in astrophysics. I'm trying to think if there's one unifying concept that allows for FTL, flight cocoons for atmospheric-like mechanics in space, a great source of power, and cool weapons.

I'm going to punt this topic over to my thread, so I don't hijack yours.

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Norm d'Plume wrote:

The only thing that I think may be unique in my battles is that I use heavily armored raiders to board enemy ships when hangar bay shields are knocked out.

Hhm. I just remembered that stormtroopers boarded the Tantive IV carrying Princess Leia at the beginning of Star Wars IV. That means there's not a damn thing unique about my space battles. Meh.

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njc wrote:

Okay, I can't speak for NormD.

Mine need serious work. I don't do anything creative yet. Just blast cannons ("novas" and "supernovas") and missiles. The only thing that I think may be unique in my battles is that I use heavily armored raiders to board enemy ships when hangar bay shields are knocked out.

I have something called brilliance cannons (prototypes) in chapter one, but they're all just variations of Star Wars/Star Trek tech. I need something different. I was thinking of something that involves either dark energy and/or dark matter. And maybe something that uses the starlanes to pop out of spacetime, travel to the other ship, and then re-enter spacetime and blow up. Another could be a weapon that sends powerful gravity waves at the enemy.

All need plenty of research.

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Kdot wrote:

Clarinet enacts the screams of man-eating apes.

The Calgary Stampede has an attraction called Man Eating Chicken. Guess what's inside the tent?

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What is a Mar and why does it eat the word 'everyone''?

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Been finding quite a few curses are the same in Latin, give or take a suffix (e.g. stupidus).

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Inline reviews alone are worth the price of admission.

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Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:

That said, hope this is the last manure that the universe are going to throw at you. Hang in there!

Janet, you potty mouth. I typed manure into Google Translate and got shitus. Okay, I'm kidding, but it would funny if it did. I use excrementum instead. I've also begun making up some, including bastardus. Notice how disguising it in Latin makes the original English curse completely unknown. tongue

A very wholesome book.

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njc wrote:

A small (groundhog meat) correction on that Standardese quote: A =type derived by a derived type definition= may be further derived if the derived type is used as parent type in another derived type definition.

Reads like C++.

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Never mind. Found it by clicking on it from within my Reviews page.

Thanks
Dirk

Sol, I'm having trouble with a review I started on Kdot's book, VQF. I'm relatively sure I submitted it. The site says I started a review, but clicking on the word Draft doesn't take me to it, and clicking to leave an inline review takes me to a completely new review. How do I get tp the existing one?

Thanks
Dirk

Kdot wrote:

Per K. Don't clarify. =simplify=. You've got a lot of mobile targets. Keep killing them like Game of Thrones until we're at the edge of our seats swearing at you that if you kill another we'll hate you as we buy the next book

Although I do kill a few secondary characters (Kdot's influence), my dead characters are mostly redshirts. I hate killing my favorite characters, and Caligula just became one of my favs. I had originally planned to kill him by taking a blast meant for Apollo, but that ending doesn't really fit with the new Caligula. Ah, the possibilities...

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I started making up the Roman curses. It's so much easier. Bastard? Bastardus! Thus, Caligula becomes Little Bastardus. As Kdot said, Latin makes everything sounds cool: bacon - porcus flavius. Don't tell him, but I actually looked it up, thinking it might be real. tongue

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Stab them with dirks.

Sorry, I'm just looking for a cameo. :-)

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Kdot probably has more spreadsheets to track your books than I do for my own. My spreadsheet has weird sh*t in it, though. One sheet is a table dedicated to calculating global population decline caused by Dr. Ess. That's how I found out it's virtually impossible to wipe out most of the human race, even with 85% sterility due to the vaccine. It is cool to see the weird population swings across 100 years.

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I've reached the 1/4 mark of The Lord of the Rings. It's impressive how many different ways Tolkien can describe a long journey through endless trees, grass, hills, rivers, and mountains. However, The Fellowship of the Ring is my favorite part of the series, which makes this the good part. Ugh. I need to get back to writing.

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You go girl! (I'm speaking to Lady Kay, of course.)

Shouldn't that be King Satan? Just kidding. Congratulations, Janet.

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Ke wan eats Ke ajo for Ke breakfast.

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Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:

Only thing I took away is that Amy is really looking out for the person who's initial is between J and L in the alphabet (as always, really nice of her!) and has found another hole for her tank to drive through. So, all and all, good? smile

Kay, just let Amy rewrite it for you. That's what I do:

He jumped up and lunged head-first into the line of fire, shooting as he moved. His close-range weapons fire burned through two of the invaders’ boarding suits, causing their chests to explode. “For the Realm!" the ensign howled as he targeted a third.

I think most of the above was all Amy, and I love the last line. Gives me goosebumps.

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amy s wrote:

Oh, the PLOTBUSTER has found another part to sink her teeth into. Kjuice nearly puts the talisman on Ingarth because she ports away from a poisoned meal and might die. She also has telepathy. Why has K-jam, the E-licker failed to mark his own DAUGHTER? Telepaths are owned by their lightbulbs. (Why would K let her walk around without a mark, waiting to be claimed by a random enemy?) (why was Ingarth able to read the K-steer at the poison banquet? A weak telepath couldn't bust through his electrostatic awesomeness. Kwaaaaan was barely able to do that and you are letting a kid get away with this?

Thank goodness I have my handy dandy decoder ring to figure out what you're trying to say...

Actually, it's worse for dual citizens. I had a US green card. Interesting thing about green cards is that the cards expire, but the status does not. Status is for life unless it's taken away or "abandoned" (live outside the US without visiting). I plan to abandon mine in hopes that the IRS will not tax me as if I were still a US resident, which they do by default. And heaven help you if you have more than $2M in assets when you leave the U.S. They'll tax you there, too, even though that money has already been taxed when you earned it. I won't get hit with that, but I still need to itemize all of my assets on the exit return.

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