They blow apart a seat and then cover the crack in the hull with the seatback, but it's only partially effective. Technically, you could put a human arm against the crack. It would swell and close the hole, but that's nasty (and excrutiatingly painful). It would have changed the focus of the chapter, which I didn't want.
3,426 2016-07-12 01:27:27
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
3,427 2016-07-11 08:29:18
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
A momentum inhibitor, perhaps? ![]()
Don't forget, the rescue ship (flagship) is about 10 minutes away, even when both are moving toward each other at high speed. The flagship can begin making its turn right away, giving it time to get in position/oriented/moving in the correct direction. I haven't specified the raider's current speed, just that it's at max thrust. I'll need to put a max on the raider's speed, which is easy, since the colission can knock out the thrusters. That means the raider is moving at whatever speed it was going before the collision, and the flagship can, with a bit of handwaving, reach the same speed as the raider, which allows for the tractor beam.
I haven't defined yet why big ships are slower than smaller ships. Momentum may be the key. None of these ships have an upper bound on speed, but the big ships need time to turn or reverse course, so they generally avoid going too fast. In an emergency like this, they would apply whatever thrust is needed to match the speed of the raider.
Does that work?
3,428 2016-07-11 05:54:29
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I should add that the rescue ship calculates the raider's trajectory and then positions itself appropriately for when the raider flies by. The effect would be included in the calculation of their trajectory.
3,429 2016-07-11 05:46:48
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Did you consider the reactive (rocket) movement that will result from the leak?
If I understand the question, it should be a minor effect, since I'm emptying a small ship (holds about 12 people) worth of air over a period of 6-9 minutes (6 minutes to knock em out, 9 minutes to kill em).
3,430 2016-07-11 03:16:38
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I need three explicit times: one for when they lose consciousness, one for when they should be dead, and one that shows how long they should have been dead. I need these to set up an apparent miracle.
The first number depends on the size of the hole, so I chose 6 and made the other numbers around the same order of magnitude, leading to approximately 1/6 of an hour to get them aboard. I'm fine with 1/4 or 1/3 of an hour, too. Admittedly, I did a total asspull on 9 and 11. If you know how long it takes for them to pass out, then you can probably calculate how long before they die, but the equations are over my head. Also, it's probably too short, since they have to repressurize the raider before going in.
For your calculation, if they were to reverse thrusters (assuming they were working) and rely on the splat inhibiter, don't your equations become irrelevant? Is there something fundamental in physics that says I can't slow them down more quickly in spite of having the inertial damper?
3,431 2016-07-11 00:40:15
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It's probably overkill to worry about this, but Kdot mentioned that my characters should have turned into salsa inside the raider they were in when the ship was physically struck by an enemy starfighter. The raider ends up spinning end over end while those inside vomit. They're strapped in so they don't fly out of their seats. Also, there is artificial gravity, although it's largely overwhelmed by the ships crazy spinning. Emergency stabilizers kick in to right the ship. Throughout this, I have an inertial damper (splat inhibiter) in effect inside the ship.
What have I missed? Should I just ignore the splat inhibiter and ignore the inertia?
Thanks
Dirk
3,432 2016-07-09 05:44:11
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I love writing! In revising my latest chapter, I came up with a neat idea for Apollo. The longer I played with it, the more important it became. As a result, it gives me half of book two, assuming I live that long. As important to book two as the Roman Empire is to book one.
An insomniac probably shouldn't get this pumped at bedtime, but what the hell.
Nite.
3,433 2016-07-09 04:27:53
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
~!@#$%^&*() Windoze! I was editing a message here ... aarghh!!!!
For fun, I fed your whole post into Google. No porn this time. Google spat back an error! Wow!
3,434 2016-07-08 14:04:54
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 35 is back up. Please rip it apart for me. Thanks.
3,435 2016-07-06 23:53:08
Re: My space shuttle sprung an air leak - What happens? (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Vern. I don't plan to add the extra detail in the story. I just want to be sure I'm portraying it accurately. From what I've read so far, they will pass out before decompression kills them. That's the correct order of events that I was looking for.
3,436 2016-07-06 19:40:37
Re: My space shuttle sprung an air leak - What happens? (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In my story, my characters are flying in a shuttle that's been hit by another ship, causing the leak. They're racing to reach a flagship before their air runs out. I want to knock them out with them realizing they may not be rescued in time and may never wake up. I can't have their blood/tissues boil/explode while they're unconscious.
Charles, thanks for the links. I read through it quickly and it looks useful. I'll read it in detail later today.
3,437 2016-07-06 04:41:53
Topic: My space shuttle sprung an air leak - What happens? (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Does anyone know what the effects would be on humans in a Star Trek-style shuttle (e.g., no space suits) if it sprung an air leak. The lack of oxygen will eventually knock them out (which is what I want). However, there is also loss of heat and pressure. Loss of heat I understand. Loss of pressure I don't.
What happens to the human body? And which effect(s) come first? If I can rescue the unconscious crew shortly after they pass out, will they suffer any injuries?
Thanks.
Dirk
3,438 2016-07-05 22:49:35
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Took down Ch. 35. needs a better epigraph.
3,439 2016-07-05 14:32:00
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 35, battle chapter two of three, is up.
Not only did I blow my target date by over half a week, but I had to cut the material in half, leaving room for a Joseph chapter.
Thanks.
Dirk
3,440 2016-07-01 02:43:36
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Christian, Anastasia, and Noah were accompanied by a rookie pilot everyone referred to as red for his fondness for wearing "lucky" red shirts.
Excrementum scribit issum.
3,441 2016-06-30 05:54:32
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Yikes! Nine pages and counting, with lots left to tell. I'll probably whack it in two and give half to Apollo and the 2nd half to Joseph. That gives me enough room to breathe. This is the climax of the book.
What do you think of this for Joseph's chapter title: The Lord is My Shield, His Words are My Sword? It's for a chapter where Joseph accompanies a squad of marines to seize the enemy flagship. He's never killed before, but he's armed. I wonder what he does. "Thou shall not kill!" remains the likely alternative.
3,442 2016-06-29 03:30:14
Topic: Should "sir" be capitalized? (1 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
Should "sir" be capitalized in the following case:
"You're out of uniform, cadet!" the admiral said.
"Yes, Sir!"
Replace Sir with Mom or Dad and it clearly should be capitalized. I've seen "son" written both ways (with or without caps). A grammar site I use says to capitalize when the word replaces a name, but not for nicknames (e.g., sonny boy).
In the example above, cadet is lowercase, even though it stands in for a name. Therefore I think Sir should be lowercase as well, for consistency.
What then to do about Son?
Thanks
Dirk
3,443 2016-06-28 04:51:24
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. Only two pages this evening. Life intrudes and I need to reorder what I've written. Nuts.
3,444 2016-06-27 04:16:29
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Four pages!
3,445 2016-06-26 07:22:53
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Or, since it's Joseph's chapter, we could go with:
- the Lord is my strength and my shield
- the Lord is my shield (not a direct Bible quote, but catchier)
- thou shalt not kill
3,446 2016-06-26 06:34:59
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Page one of Release the Hounds! is written. It goes faster from here. I'm thinking about renaming the chapter "Cry 'Havoc' and Let Slip the Dogs of War!" although that quote was also used in Star Trek VI. Preference?
3,447 2016-06-24 07:52:44
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Either way, my U.S. retirement account is going to take a beating. I was going to sell pending this vote, but was lulled into"do nothing" by pollsters and Wall Street analysts.
3,448 2016-06-24 05:47:34
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Where is everyone, tonight? Are you all glued to your TVs watching British voters commit harakiri?
3,449 2016-06-23 14:22:21
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Have you found an accountant or are you navigating this yourself? Oh, you poor thing. I'm sorry this is getting so irritating.
Let yourself fall into your book and write a section where C and M have a rip-roaring fight. Then you get to write the make-up sex :-) You go girl!
I think I mentioned before, but DO NOT forget to file FBAR/FATCA forms by the end of the month.Nasty nasty nasty forms.
3,450 2016-06-22 05:49:21
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Yabba dabba doo! Figured out a way to slip multiple bomber groups past 187 warships into planetary orbit without an asspull! Even gave it a nice religious element. I'm sure I'll blow the date, but I'm targeting to get the chapter up by the end of June.
Off to bed. Soon will I rest, yes, forever sleep. Earned it I have. Twilight is upon me, soon night must fall.
I'm such a geek.