Don't forget to name a character after me. I like Memoroid. Or hemorrhoid. Your call.
2,926 2016-12-08 01:01:09
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
2,927 2016-12-08 00:02:24
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The Irish Ballad by Tom Lehrer.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_jjRNMOopA
2,928 2016-12-07 22:17:11
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I think I've got it. Viruses that take control of the tech in wiseeyes and use it to mislead the wearer about what's going on around them or, better yet, even damage the eyes. Instead of displaying simple text, videos, or augmented reality in front of the iris, infected wiseeyes can blind the wearer by displaying brilliant off-the-charts light instead.
Is there a real-world reason why permanently blinding the wearer wouldn't work?
2,929 2016-12-07 21:28:53
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I like the name (it goes with wisething or wisewatch for the wrist, and wisepad). I'm just worried it's capabilities are going to blow key parts of my story apart. In 2000 years, those things should be really smart, including full integration with Galaxinet, auto-identification of everything in the field of view, display enhancements such as zoom (maybe even night vision), threat detection and targeting, messaging, virtual keyboards, etc. Add a bluetooth headset and you're always on all the time. You become almost a cyborg.
You'll recall I banished genetic engineering because of Dr. Ess (so that humans won't have genetically engineered themselves to perfection by 4017). I also placed a limit on AI intelligence by including the possibility that they become sentient and cause havoc, even turning on their masters. This is true for all of the better droids (usually IQ-C or IQ-D) and ship's AIs (IQ-B). I'm saving IQ-A for something really complex, like large-scale battle coordination. The higher the IQ, the greater the risk.
I need a reason why advanced wiseeyes don't exist or are generally not used.
2,930 2016-12-07 18:24:13
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I prefer writing without the wiseeyes, but reality suggests we'll have them in the distant future, so I'm trying to figure out how to include them without them taking over the original story.
2,931 2016-12-07 05:17:43
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
nairadeceba Romney
2,932 2016-12-07 01:07:03
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Eclectic Clinton
2,933 2016-12-07 00:59:43
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I almost forgot the most important piece of tech in any royal toolkit: the ubiquitous datapad. We'll call them wisepads.
Here's an example scenario regarding wiseeyes and wisepads. Apollo and his chief of staff, General Acrisius, are walking to the study and an aide comes up and hands Apollo a wisepad with a text message from Mama. Apollo reads it, then hands it to Acrisius to read, too. If I try to use wiseeyes, the aide (wearing wiseeyes) would walk up, make some gesture to transfer the message to Apollo's wiseeyes, who subsequently transfers it to Acrisius. But! What does the aide do if he just woke up Apollo and he isn't wearing them? (I assume their removable so they can be easily replaced and/or confiscated for security reasons.) Should the aid carry a wisepad wherever he goes in case the emperor is not online? (I ignore the case where Apollo is always on with the palace AI (mindmeld), since advanced AIs have a habit of coming alive and causing havoc at the worst times.) But, a simple rule in Apollo's inbox to notify his wiseeyes when there's a message from Mama is all it takes to put the aide out of work. And Apollo could use his wiseeyes virtual buttons (I don't like hand gestures, too tiring) to forward the message to Acrisius. But! Watch out for door jams and droids, because you're going to bump into one if you're reading while walking. But! The wiseeyes could potentially be configured to warn him when he's about to crash into something or drop through a manhole. What about wiseears and wisemouths to carry on fully immersive conversations with anyone anywhere? And if everyone is sporting these Acme goodies, then there is no more need for 2D or 3D displays.
My head is spinning....
2,934 2016-12-06 20:05:12
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
WestinghouseRunning
2,935 2016-12-06 16:00:42
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Opinions, please. I'm writing about the 41st century, and the technology consists of 2D and 3D displays, and "wisethings" (smartwatches that Tim Cook could only dream of). However, I don't yet use "wiseeyes" (contacts lenses). I had originally considered using wiseeyes for bringing up information about whatever was appropriate for the scene, but I think it will become a distraction to explain in each scene what the wiseeyes are displaying. And don't even get me started with hand gestures to interact with the wiseeyes. I was considering having the eyeseyes able to accept input by the wearer staring at "buttons" on the wiseeyes display. I also worry about writing myself into a corner, where the wiseeyes make it impossible to fail.
Thoughts?
2,936 2016-12-06 13:27:45
Re: I'm still alive but... (27 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I"m already getting accidents with people being dragged on sleds by 4 wheelers. And...then the vehicle changes direction...and then the rider goes whoopsie...
And there hasn't been a lick of snow in our area.
God, I can't wait for the cold. This global warming is letting people stay outside instead of holing up in their houses to stay warm.
Minus -10°C up here. -20°C overnight. -30°C with wind chill. That's 30° below the freezing point of water! I laugh at 30°. I'll be going out to club some baby seals later today.
2,937 2016-12-06 03:07:32
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'll have a Zombie Celtics Zamboni with meat sauce, a gallon of ice cream, and a diet coke.
2,938 2016-12-05 03:25:31
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Never mind. I can use Rosary, since it's Joseph, and still give a nod to Rosie.
2,939 2016-12-05 03:17:52
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I need a cute name for a robot maid named by young Joseph. So far I've got Miss Rosie (from the Jetsons, except I use it as a last name) and Mammy from Gone With the Wind. I already have the butler, Mr. Uppity, and the cook, Mrs. Butter. Miss Rosie is probably best, except I don't want to deal with cease and desist letters. Are you allowed to name a robot after someone from fiction?
2,940 2016-12-05 00:48:10
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Wow! Thanks for all the work. I decided Shiburasu is fine. No one but us will get the joke, anyway.
2,941 2016-12-04 18:52:56
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Which one sounds closer to sea? Shi or She?
2,942 2016-12-04 06:27:30
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Shiburasu has grown on me. Is there a meaningful difference between Shiburasu and Sheburasu? I'm guessing the latter sounds more like shay, but I don't know what I'm talking about.
2,943 2016-12-03 21:00:15
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks for the half hour. :-) I'll find another place or character to slip him in. It's too bad. I really wanted to make him the shogun.
2,944 2016-12-03 20:52:53
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It's the second exchange with Windsor about becoming a drag queen: I gather you were unimpressed with my last request. Perhaps you are right. Jangaroo is cookoo for cocopuffs.
The last bit needs replacing. Thanks.
2,945 2016-12-03 19:04:11
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Those snippets in chapter two are about five pages each. I really don't think it adds much to split them into four standalone chapters with filler. Granted, chapter two is not elegant, but I need to show that God enters their lives at both different years and at different ages. I prefer combining that into one chapter, preceded by the epigraph from Jorge B. Francis that pulls it all together.
The purpose of the history is of course to show where the future society has come from. The next chapter (attack on the royal family) focuses on Joseph, his life, and his world.
Then, a galactipedia entry about the rise of the Julii, followed by Apollo's first full chapter.
How do I write four full chapters about these two MCs without gong into some detail about who they are and where they came from? It requires those galactipedia entries to come first.
2,946 2016-12-03 18:21:08
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Ponder, I will. Please let me know if you think of a way to make this work. Thanks.
2,947 2016-12-03 16:54:51
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nippon has two p's, albeit split into four morae: Ni-p-po-n.
2,948 2016-12-03 02:57:29
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Janet, do you know of Aussie words for nutty or daffy, or nut (noun)? I'm tweaking chapter one.
Thanks
Dirk
2,949 2016-12-01 03:53:13
Re: Minor tweak for showing new forum posts? (3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Gracias!
2,950 2016-12-01 03:45:20
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Shi"bra"ssu is not possible in Japanese because it contains two consonants welded together B & r
I was afraid of that.