Wow! Nicely done.
2,502 2017-11-05 12:47:13
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I finally continued watching the Exorcist Anthology. The film with the worst rating, Exorcist: The Beginning (11% on rottentomatoes.com), was almost as good as the original film, in my opinion. I actually ended up buying the Kindle book for that movie. It's very well written. That leaves me just one more film in the series, Dominion: Prequel to the Exorcist, which is an alternate story from that of Exorcist: The Beginning.
The Catholic ritual for exorcisms only uses the line "The power of Christ compels you." one time, whereas the movies repeatedly uses "The power of God commands you. The power of Christ commands you." It's too bad that isn't part of the real ritual, since I was going to use those lines myself.
2,503 2017-11-02 17:27:25
Re: Wattpad for publishing stories (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I think it depends on how secure the site is and the agent/publisher. Here, on TNBW, the site is for workshopping, and the copyright of ownership remains clearly that of the author. I don't know how that compares to Wattpad, since I'm not a member. The fact that millions of people can read Wattpad stories is a little like freely distributing it, so some agents/publishers might balk at accepting it since it's already "out there". Nevertheless, the author profiled in the article got a book and movie deal, so some agents/publishers obviously allow it. I suspect the fact that the author had 1.5 billion reads had a lot to do with it being accepted for publication. The publisher wants a piece of the action.
2,504 2017-11-01 03:19:01
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks for the links, njc. I've only briefly reviewed them, but will do so in detail before I start planning the main story elements. I'm leaning toward keeping climate change out of the book and going with the original, simpler premise of the Antichrist trying to seize control of the Church in the present. It would be far easier to write without having to become well-versed in climate science, not to mention having to project the story world forward 30-40 years. Dan Brown tried to include antimatter physics in his Angels & Demons book and got the fundamentals wrong. Studying Catholicism is hard enough.
My initial impression is that wattsupwiththat.com isn't trying to give a balanced view of climate change, but refute it. Some of the links I followed in your first article showed what appeared to be cherry-picking from the papers. I also saw one reference in passing to Breitbart News, which is not a site I would look to for unbiased opinions. I'll see if I can find it again when I read the articles in depth. I prefer "fair and balanced". :-)
Your last article talks about 413 papers that refute some of the arguments made by climate change supporters, but doesn't say how many papers were published reaffirming the general consensus. It's roughly 13,750 (97%). Below is a link claiming the remaining 3% of papers were flawed.
https://qz.com/1069298/the-3-of-scienti … ll-flawed/
2,505 2017-10-31 12:22:29
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks. I'm just getting started. I need lots of details about climate change, including potential solutions, such as capturing co2 emissions and turning them into solids, or injecting them into the earth. Even if we started tomorrow, there is still a danger of a runaway greenhouse effect. What we need is a good old-fashioned mega volcano blasting ash into the sky. I may put one in the book.
2,506 2017-10-31 01:47:46
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Interesting discovery. Apparently no one can accurately estimate the global assets of the Catholic Church, not even the Church itself. Most of the assets/income outside of the Vatican are held by the individual dioceses and religious orders for their own use. They're all separate corporations, most led by bishops. Only a small amount (Peter's Pence) is transferred to the Vatican, which has revenue in the low hundreds of millions, mostly from investment returns and tourism. Many of the assets have never been appraised, because the Church would never sell them (e.g., cathedrals, Vatican artwork from the Middle Ages, etc.). Most are on the books for $1.
One figure puts total Catholic Church spending in the U.S. at $170B annually, but most of that money comes from health insurers who pay Catholic hospitals for covered medical procedures, so it's not exactly charity. University tuition received from students is another big part of that total. The biggest Catholic charity in the U.S. spends about $4B annually. Another interesting number is Church collections. The average weekly donation in the U.S. is $10, although the source wasn't clear if that was per Catholic or per family. That totals at most $36B. That's not even enough for disaster recovery from one major hurricane.
In Germany, church members are actually taxed by the federal government on behalf of the churches, which then get the money. Try that in the U.S. :-)
It's going to be tricky imagining a Catholic Church rich enough to lead much of the world's response to accelerating climate change. I need a Church that grows exponentially 3-4 decades from now as people afraid of the end times return to God, and to the Catholic Church in particular. I was hoping for up to 2B Catholics by the start of the book, which is about 50% more than the current figure. On the up side, 30-40 years is more than enough time to build big companies like Apple, Facebook, or Google. If the Church could build or inherit that kind of wealth, it could make quite a dent and attract more followers.
I could do the story with current numbers, although the Book of Revelation prophecies a worldwide religion, so it would be better if the Church was much larger to justify it becoming the Antichrist's main target.
2,507 2017-10-31 01:12:00
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 27, Imperator Apollo, is up. Mostly cleanup, suggested edits, and a new epigraph. If the epigraph of this chapter reads a little like that of the previous chapter, it's because I swapped some of the wording around. Only 14 chapters left to edit! Woohoo!
Quick, go read!
Dirk
2,508 2017-10-30 04:58:36
Topic: Wattpad for publishing stories (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here's a link to a CNBC article about the site Wattpad that some authors are using to publish stories and get noticed by agents, publishers, and producers.
2,509 2017-10-28 04:01:14
Re: You Only Love Twice is now published! (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Nicely done, Bill. And an impressive resume.
2,510 2017-10-24 18:00:50
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I've simply been responding to the suggestions people are making. I don't plan to write in Italian. I couldn't. Based on this discussion, I will either pretend everyone is speaking Italian (rendered into English), and I'll state that in the description a few times where needed, or I'll pretend almost everyone generally speaks English and throw in a few words or phrases in Italian now and then in their dialogue. The latter is what Dan Brown did, and it worked very well.
Thanks to everyone for their ideas.
Dirk
2,511 2017-10-24 05:13:34
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
No, I need Italian in this case. The Church uses Latin for important written documents, but the common language spoken among the senior cardinals is Italian. Plus, there will be non-Church characters who will also be Italian. So far, all of my major characters speak Italian, although there's nothing that says they can't also speak English.
2,512 2017-10-24 02:50:31
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Don't you need to be fluent in the language to do that? At best, I might be able to hire someone to translate a few dozen words or phrases sprinkled throughout.
2,513 2017-10-23 18:57:05
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Got it. Thanks.
2,514 2017-10-23 14:49:44
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Mariana, *all* of the dialogue in the book is among native Italians. I can't write an English book with purely Italian dialogue. Who would understand it?
2,515 2017-10-23 05:21:19
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, JP. He did the same in Angel & Demons, but got some of it wrong in the original release. His factual errors have their own Wikipedia page, a level of fame I aspire to. :-)
2,516 2017-10-23 04:49:07
Re: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Bill/Janet/njc. Throwing in occasional words or phrases of actual Italian is appealing, although I'll probably end up with errors. Even Dan Brown got some of his Italian wrong in the original release of Angels & Demons. Fortunately, only real Italian speakers will know. More intimidating is getting inside the head of the most senior cardinal (the Secretary of State) and into meetings of the Council of Cardinal Advisers. How do the most senior Catholics on the planet think and conduct themselves?
2,517 2017-10-22 20:14:41
Topic: How to handle foreign language dialogue? (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm currently planning a story set in the Vatican/Rome, where most of the characters speak Italian by default. However, the book is for an English-speaking audience. I was thinking of simply ignoring the language difference and doing all of the dialogue in English, without acknowledging when people are actually speaking Italian. My thought was that most (all?) people in the book will be speaking Italian most of the time, and I don't want lines like this ("Dialogue," he said in Italian.) throughout the book. I suppose I could add a note at the beginning of the book that everyone is really speaking Italian. I should add that there will be Italian place names, which is unavoidable when describing the setting.
Thoughts?
Thanks
Dirk
2,519 2017-10-21 14:18:36
Re: Marketing State of Vengeance - Progress Report (8 replies, posted in Marketing Your Writing)
This is good information, Jake. Thank you.
2,520 2017-10-20 03:00:21
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Check out BookBaby. They're affiliated with this site, I believe.
2,521 2017-10-18 05:05:31
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Awesome about the chapters. I'll get to those later this week.
Nuts about your long-term prognosis. Does your health plan give you access to the best hospitals/docs/treatments? Hopefully, you have more than Jersey City Medical Center. Oy!
Glad your feeling good. :-)
Dirk
2,522 2017-10-18 04:56:37
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
No rush. Yoda voice: rest, you must. It may help to tell you I'm only planning to do light edits at this point. Slap me around a little, grab the points, and go back to sleep. Seabrass's final edits are already included in most of the posted chapters, and I'm about to add K's edits, so it should be in decent shape by the time you see it. I'll take a few hours this week and update all the online chapters. Depending on how far back you're reading, I have some late changes to post.
I totally forgot about Acme (not ACME, since that'll get me sued) and Aussie as I was revising my latest chapters. I'll have to go back and see if I can find more use for them. Did you know that I once forgot to use God in an entire chapter? Had to make a chapter checklist after that, which I keep forgetting to look at. I now have five ghosts in Joseph's head, so it's going to be hard to use them all. There's particular overlap between Joseph's mother and Admiral St. James. I knew that might bite me eventually. I'd retire Admiral St. James, but she's his military advisor, which should come in handy in act IV.
I thought Roman history research was hard. Try coming up to speed on the inner workings of the Catholic Church and the Vatican (for my next book about the Antichrist). Especially with my memory. I need notes just for my notes. I've bought two books just to understand Revelation, plus Catholicism for Dummies. :-) Every time I go deep into Catholic documents (e.g., online encyclopedia, the Catechism, etc.), I need a religious dictionary. There is a large DVD set all about the Catholic Church that I will probably buy, but it's $70 used, so I'm holding off until I get over the guilt of how much I've already spent. Had to buy a Blue-Ray drive and software just to watch the damn Exorcist Anthology, which turned out to be mostly crap. If I had thought to check rottentomatoes.com first, I could have saved myself a bundle. The worst of the five films has an 11% freshness rating. I miss having access to US streaming. Netflix Canada is all we've got, and it's relatively slim pickings.
I'm now officially in act III of IV with my revisions (about 15 chapters to polish). Four months or so to completion, allowing plenty of time for Catholic research. However, after some discussions online, I decided not to publish Into the Mind of God until I return to the story (after my next book), which means probably four or more years from now. I'm hoping the Antichrist book will be more polished and make a better first publication. Marketing will be a time-consuming bitch, so I want to wait until I've done a better book.
G'night.
Dirk
2,523 2017-10-17 03:56:47
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 26, Long Live the Regent, is up. Mostly cleanup and minor edits. The epigraph is new. I also reworked the opening to get to Joseph's anguish right away, as suggested by Seabrass. Joseph now has five passengers in his head. That's probably all for this book, although it will become increasingly difficult for him to remain in control, especially in book two.
Quick, go read!
Dirk
2,524 2017-10-17 01:46:30
Re: Dialogue tags to be avoided (53 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
While it's been pounded into me from day one not to get too fancy, I would use some of the entries on the forbidden list (e.g., snapped, stammered, urged, etc.). If it conveys more information than who exactly is speaking (i.e., it does double duty), I'm all the more likely to use it. The beauty of self-publishing. I do, however, agree with the idea of not using tags when a little action will do nicely (e.g., Mary turned to Joseph. "Did you finish your essay?").
2,525 2017-10-15 21:00:50
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Maybe Sibrasso or Sibrassi instead of Leonardo?
I'd use Charles, but the Italian version is Calogero, which is too different. Or ignore the the correct translation and use Charlo.