I've learned a lot from Larry Brooks, author and screenwriter. Though he covers a lot in his blog, Storyfix, there are also workshops, as well as a personalized consultation service (at different prices, depending on the depth of analysis). He also has published several books on writing a novel.
I liked his approach -- very market-minded, with practical advice regarding putting it all together.
http://storyfix.com/about
351 2017-09-16 16:21:09
Re: The value of online courses (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
352 2017-09-15 03:36:56
Re: Ability to categorize posts within a group? (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wouldn't it require a fixed list of categories (marketing, for one)? And wouldn't the person initiating the thread have to categorize his/her posting?
If it could work, it would be great. Right now I have to remember when I saw a thread so I can go back to that date and find it. Doesn't always work though, if a thread has been going on for some time.
Sounds like a good idea. Make it so. JP
353 2017-09-14 16:12:44
Re: (Site Support) Blocking members, how does it work? (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
OH, MY GOD! How we do go off on tangents! Can you really imagine yourself going back over years of old reviews to alter them? What a waste of time! I've blocked four people in the three years of my membership, one of whom appeared to be a seriously sick individual who talked about kidnappings and torture. Sol fixed that situation. If he says he will fix something, he will.
Admittedly, it's annoying to see that someone you blocked can still rewrite their old reviews (which is what I understood you to mean). If that happens, can't you delete those reviews?
But do you really care? Who wants to waste their time on a Hatfield-McCoy feud? (Apologies, Dill--I'm not well-versed enough in history to refer to an English rivalry.)
354 2017-09-14 00:11:56
Re: (Site Support) Blocking members, how does it work? (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
On your drop-down menu, go to settings. You will see four choices on the left; the second one down is Blocks. Select Blocks. The description says they can't access your stuff. You can still access theirs. They have to block you in order to keep you from reading their work.
To block someone, Use Search to call their name up. You will see the option to block them. If I can do it, anyone can. JP
355 2017-09-11 23:37:31
Re: Good job! (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Ah, I think this topic has spiraled a bit out of control. I'd recommend it just be deleted and people move on. .
I agree. Shut it down. JP
356 2017-09-11 17:19:40
Re: Good job! (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If what I'm reading is so bad I can't find anything positive to say, I don't review it.
Me, too.
357 2017-09-08 20:14:12
Re: What you should know about terrorists (1 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Some of you have recently written books involving terrorists. Did you find other websites you thought were useful?
358 2017-09-08 16:05:36
Topic: What you should know about terrorists (1 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Terrorism is with us all the time now. It's something we don't like to think about, given that it's a relatively new topic in the US. But honey, it's been around forever, from Genghis Khan to Vlad the Impaler to the playground bully. Read the definition and see for yourself, then check out the websites.
Terrorism is defined as political violence in an asymmetrical conflict that is designed to induce terror and psychic fear (sometimes indiscriminate) through the violent victimization and destruction of noncombatant targets (sometimes iconic symbols).
Terrorism - Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terrorism
A short discussion of terrorism http://www.terrorism-research.com/
News articles about terrorist attacks http://www.ndtv.com/topic/information-about-terrorists
359 2017-09-08 15:54:03
Re: Help with foreign languages (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
it might be a hellacious fix with lots of problems introduced mid-flight.
It does sound hellacious. In that case, I'm going with phonetic spellings and translations! JP
360 2017-09-08 10:09:45
Re: Help with foreign languages (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I've wondered about that. too. I'm working on a story set in Thailand.
361 2017-09-06 04:26:39
Re: Moving a Story Forward (40 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
1. what does the writer do to more a story forward?
2. I mean the little things to get a reader to move from one paragraph to the next and to turn a page.
So, what do you do with your writing?
Sherry
I think we've been talking about what a writer does to advance a story (1), when the question intended was really something else.
What Sherry wanted to know was what we do to keep a reader turning the pages all the way to the end (2). While these two can overlap, they aren't necessarily the same thing. How do you get your readers so invested in the story they want to keep reading to the last page? Is it a challenging plot? sympathetic characters? something else?
We've discussed the technique--what about the affect?
jp
362 2017-09-03 22:40:10
Re: What you should know about blood (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I hope this posting will provide some help for you writers who want your work to sound authentic. If you've found a good source for blood information, don't be shy--go ahead and add it to this thread!
Are there any other areas we could cover? We could run a weekly thread on various topics, like firearms, terrorism, kidnapping, etc. to name just three. What are your thoughts? Anything you'd like to discuss? JP
363 2017-09-03 22:34:07
Re: Thriller book/movie quiz (17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
Thanks to all the participants, and congratulations to Randall Krzak for getting the most answers to the quiz.
Damn, Jack! That was one hard quiz. Since I don't often read thrillers, nor many mysteries of late, I withdrew from this group a while back when things were getting too hectic. I just rejoined so I can be ready for your next quiz. But have a heart--we're not all great brains like you.
Glad to be back. JP
364 2017-09-03 16:55:28
Re: Moving a Story Forward (40 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In his blog, Chuck Wendig has some funny things, some off-color things and some useful things to say about writing, including how to keep a story moving forward. http://terribleminds.com/ramble/tag/25things/
365 2017-09-03 16:36:56
Re: Nah, Nah! I've got more points than you do! (34 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm thrilled right now to have just around 150 stored up. I don't know how you do it. It takes me a while to read (and reread) a chapter/ short story, and I have to think about the writer's style and voice. I try not to make suggestions that would compromise either. I do this because I have, once or twice, received reviews that suggested so many changes that, if I had made them, I would have been writing someone else's story, not mine. (I think once I even told the reviewer to go write their own version.)
What I'm trying to say is that I work on my reviews. I don't turn them out fast. And I don't pile up the points.
More power to those who have the stamina to keep going. You must work a lot faster than I do.
366 2017-09-03 14:40:34
Re: Vietnam Era Research (5 replies, posted in Historical Fiction)
Look what I found! A site with links to stories of Vietnam. Don't limit your research to 'official' reports.
There's also a timeline showing our involvement in Indochina, beginning in 1945. Who knew?
http://www.vietnamgear.com/archive/1.aspx
Here's a good one. It's called 'Inconvenient War Stories,'by and about Vietnam vets. http://www.jeffreywolin.com/stories.shtml#
367 2017-09-03 14:20:53
Re: Moving a Story Forward (40 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The best advice, though, is still from Hemingway, who said the best way to write a story (and that would include moving the story on) is to begin at the beginning, go through the middle, and when you're at the end--stop.
You know what really gets to me? following the author all the way to the end of a book, only to find that there is no end. The conflict is not resolved, the characters have not completed an arc. The reader will have to wade through another book, and then possibly others after that, to find out how it all turns out. Steven King promised a trilogy about that blasted tower, and turned it into what--eight books? I quit reading his books. Anne Rice did the same thing. I'm still mad at her.
There should at least be a sub-plot for each book, so the story has a beginning, middle and END when the last page is turned. I feel cheated when I get to the end and find a cliffhanger.
If I enjoyed the story, I'll keep reading, but I really hate finding an announcement at the end that the sequel will be out NEXT YEAR. Don't do that to your readers!
368 2017-09-02 20:52:56
Re: Moving a Story Forward (40 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
what does the writer do to more a story forward?
Sherry
Wouldn’t you know it—I can’t find the source when I need it! I used to have all these notes which I printed out as posters and hung on the walls all over my office/ guest room. I finally took them down when I couldn’t open the closet doors anymore without a paper fight. By then, I had internalized them (mostly), so it didn’t make much difference. But here’s the gist:
Every chapter needs to tell a small story of its own. In the beginning, set your character a goal (problem to solve, for example). Have him/ her work toward that goal and achieve it by the end of the chapter, by which time another goal has come to light for him/her to work toward in following chapter. Pointing out the next goal is the hook that gets the reader to go on.
By having the character take baby steps toward the final resolution, you advance the story, the reader sees the character making progress, and things flow naturally.
It works for me, when I remember to follow the plan. I wish I could remember who wrote that sound advice!
Hope this helps. JP
369 2017-09-02 18:53:20
Re: POP COP QUIZ #32 Psychotic Serial Killers (6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
The answers are in!
370 2017-09-02 18:37:07
Re: Enhancement request: viewing content summaries from the home page? (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I wrote and article and it never showed up on the home page, I had to re-publish it under short stories.
Have the non-fiction categories been eliminated? I wanted to work on something, too. JP
371 2017-09-01 23:33:00
Re: What you should know about blood (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I don't remember--I just stuck with it until I ran out of episodes.
372 2017-09-01 22:23:36
Topic: What you should know about blood (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Even though the TV show "Dexter" got just plain silly at the end, I binge-watched the whole thing not long ago. Partly because of the way Michael C. Hall winks at us in the opening scene to let us in on the secret, but also because he wasn't afraid to get his hands dirty. In other words, we are fascinated with blood.
If you're going to write about blood, blood evidence and bloody murder, you need some basic information.
Check out this website. See the nice lady taking pictures of a blood-spattered wall? http://www.forensicsciencesimplified.or … iples.html
or, if you're feeling very academic about the subject: http://www.bloodspatter.com/
For those who learn better with pictures: https://www.slideshare.net/nitcop/blood-spatter
There's a ton of these. I had no idea blood was so captivating. You might do well to put some in your book.
Would those with real law enforcement experience care to add their thoughts?
373 2017-08-29 22:21:32
Re: Thanks to TNBW - Getting ready to publish (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Beautiful book! It absolutely does what it's supposed to--grabs your attention without too-small lettering or distracting images.Showing the word 'vengeance' in a fiery gold conveys anger. The flames and the almost-invisible code whet our appetite for the story. Super job! JP
374 2017-08-29 22:10:12
Re: Describing facial expressions (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yikes! There's a whole series--are the rest as good? Traveling as I do, it's hard to tote these along. Finding Kindle editions simplifies matters. JP
375 2017-08-29 21:59:55
Topic: Basic Stages for Crime Scene Investigation (2 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
It's been a while since we actually used this group for serious discussion. My brother and his fellow cops always laughed at TV's CSI. At first, it was fun watching those animated depictions of bullets piercing flesh and blood spatter flying through the air to land on walls and people, but it got old fast.
For those interested in the real thing for writing your police procedural, check out this site.
http://www.crime-scene-investigator.net … icide.html